a 2014 contest entry
Part 1
Part 1
“Children,” Elizabeth Carter exclaimed one
evening at the supper table. “Look who I received a letter from! You’re Uncle
Benjamin. I haven’t heard from him in years!”
Andi put
down her fork and looked over at her mother. She had thought something had been
on her mother’s mind today.
“What does the letter say mother?” Mitch
wondered.
“Here
Justin, why don’t you read it” Elizabeth said handing the envelope to her
oldest son.
Dear
Elizabeth,
I hope this letter finds you well.
I was wondering if my son Daniel could stay at
your ranch this summer while I am on a business trip. He needs to learn some of
the values of hard work and the fun of living simply. He has had a disagreeable
disposition lately and a lot of pressure from the town boys. A change of
scenery would do him good. I know this is a lot to ask of you and your family
and I appreciate you prayerfully considering this proposition.
Sincerely,
Benjamin Carter
Everyone was quiet for a bit taking in the news. Mother can’t possibly say yes….. Can she? Andi
thought. If Daniel came then she would be obligated to take him everywhere she
and her friends went.
But the look on Elizabeth’s face told her she was
seriously considering it.
“I agree, he
could help me and Mitch out on the range.” Chad said.
Elizabeth considered for a moment. “That’s exactly
how I feel. I couldn’t turn away my own nephew. I’ll send Benjamin a letter
tomorrow, telling him Daniel can come. It would be exciting to have family
visit again.”
The family
conversation turned to other topics but Andi sat silently picking at her roast.
Life was going perfect of late. Now a letter from an uncle she hardly knew had
just changed everything. Resentment built up inside her.
“Why does he
have to come anyway?” She burst out. “He’ll probably just make more trouble for
us.” The last words were barely audible and Andi immediately regretted what she
had just said.
Chad’s eyebrows rose and Andi knew he had caught
her last words.
“Andrea!”
Elizabeth’s voice was stern. “I am surprised that you feel like that. Usually
you’re the quickest to help someone in need.”
Andi
sighed. “I’m sorry mother.”
She stirred
the mashed potatoes around in her plate, why
can’t I ever learn to keep my mouth shut? She sighed and picked up her
fork. Oh well, maybe Daniel wouldn’t be as bad as she suspected. Andi knew she
should give him the benefit of the doubt. Lord,
help me to be kind and loving to my cousin….
***
A few weeks later Andi found herself among the crowd
at the Fresno train station, waiting for Uncle Benjamin and Daniel to arrive.
Suddenly she heard the shrill blast of the train
whistle braking the quiet morning. A black cloud of smoke billowed from the
engine blocking, the bright blue sky.
The train came to a screeching halt. The passengers
began to unboard. Andi smoothed her sweaty hands over her dress, and bit her
lip. Her stomach was tied up in knots. What would her cousin be like?
“Hey Andi!” a familiar voice called out. Andi turned and saw Cory waving for her to
come to the far side of the platform.
Andi slipped away from the rest of the family and pushed her way through
the crowd.
***
13 year old Daniel Carter stepped from the train
and glanced down at his wrinkly suit with distain. What an unpleasant trip,
having to be crammed in with a crowd of unwashed people for five days.
Daniel looked up and glanced around the small town.
This didn’t look like much of anything……. Suddenly someone nearly knocked him
over. He grabbed onto a crate to keep himself from falling.
“Hey, watch
where you’re going!” he said crossly.
“I’m so
sorry!” A voice said from behind him.
Daniel turned and came face to face with a girl who
looked to be roughly around his own age. Her long dark braids were coming
apart, and her face looked hot and flushed. She was probably just another one
of those poor immigrants he had heard about.
“You nearly ruined my new suit!” He exclaimed. “Why
don’t you leave us civilized people alone and go pester someone else!”
The girl’s
checks grew bright red. “Civilized people, huh? I’ll have you know that my
family owns one of the largest ranches around here, and I know lots of poor
folks who are much more polite than
you’ll ever be!” And with that she stormed off.
“Come along Daniel,” his father said, coming with
their luggage in hand. “Let’s go meet the family.”
Suddenly a voice from behind them said. “Benjamin?”
“Elizabeth! How good see you!” Daniel’s father said
to who Daniel guessed must be his aunt. They exchanged a fond hug and then she
turned to Daniel. “Hello Daniel. Did you
have a pleasant trip?”
“I guess,” was his sullen reply.
He saw his father look apologetically at his aunt.
Elizabeth brushed off his rude remark and
continued. “Come, I want you to meet my family.”
Daniel and his father followed her through a maze
of people. She stopped by a young man.
“Benjamin, Daniel, I would like you to meet my
eldest son, Justin.”
“Hello, it’s nice to meet you.” Justin said.
“Now,”
Elizabeth continued. “My next two, Chad and Mitchel are home at the ranch.
They’re extremely busy today.”
“I’m
Melinda.” A pretty, young woman said smiling. “It’s awful nice to meet you
both.”
“And this is my youngest, Andrea.”
Daniel turned around. No it couldn’t be! It was the
girl he had bumped into a few minutes ago!
***
Andi nearly choked. This was her cousin? The rude insolent boy she had nearly knocked
over? But yes, he had the same large brown eyes and sandy blond hair. She stifled a groan and pasted a smile on her
face.
“Hello, it’s nice
to meet you.” Her voice dripped with sarcasm. Daniels face turned a scarlet
shade of red. Good, let him be embarrassed. After all he had insulted her. She wasn’t going to let him forget that for a
long time.
Part 2
Breakfast the next morning was rushed. Chad and
Mitch had a busy day ahead of them and Justin was taking Uncle Benjamin to the
train station as soon as breakfast was over.
Andi saw
horror on Daniel’s face as he watched Chad wolf down a whole biscuit in 1 bite.
She quickly finished her eggs. She’d better get a move on it; there were 13
stalls in the barn calling her name. For once
she was glad to do the hated
chore. At least she would have a few hours by herself without Daniel.
Andi watched as Uncle Benjamin gathered his bags
and walked out to the waiting carriage with Daniel. Suddenly she felt a twinge
of pity as her uncle hugged his son goodbye. She wasn’t sure but she thought
she saw a tear trickle down Daniel’s cheek.
“Andi,” Chad turned to her. “I want you to teach
Daniel how to muck out stalls. That would be a good chore for him to begin
with.”
“But Chad!” Andi wailed. “Cant somebody else teach
him?”
“No we are branding cattle today and I need every
hand I can get. Don’t worry sis I’m sure it won’t be that bad.”
***
Andi stuck her head out of taffy’s stall and
sighed. Manure was spread all around the wheelbarrow. It looked like half of
the manure had missed its target. “Daniel! What did you do?” Andi cried, coming
over to where he sat on an upturned bucket.
“I told you
I quit! I’m not doing this anymore.”
“You have to! Everyone around here is expected to
do his own share of the work!”
“I don’t
care!” and with that Daniel stormed out of the barn. Andi’s eyes
snapped. “You come back here and finish
your job!”
But Daniel paid no heed.
Anger boiled
up in Andi. Chad would get mad if the stalls weren’t cleaned. She surveyed the
remaining 8 stalls. It would probably take her at least an hour to finish them.
What little sympathy she felt for Daniel was long gone.
***
Andi spent
the next hour cleaning out the stalls. It was only than that she realized that
it was nearly 10. Andi, Elizabeth and, Melinda were supposed to go visit the
Fosters later that morning. But since Andi had a late start there was no
possibility that she could get ready in time, which suited her just fine.
Andi knew mother
wouldn’t be too pleased to hear that Daniel had skipped out on her and, she
would in turn tell Chad. She grinned, Daniel was in for it! Andi made her way
to the house stopping to wash at the well. My, how dirty and smelly she was.
“Andrea
Carter!” Melinda exclaimed as she caught sight of Andi in the doorway; water
still dripping down her face.
“Hi
Melinda,” Andi bit back a grin at the look of horror on her sister’s face.
“I thought
you were up in your room getting ready.” Melinda said holding her nose to her
hand.
Before Andi could answer Elizabeth came into the
foyer. “Andrea” She said in a
disappointed voice. “I know you don’t like Virginia very much but, dawdling
around just so you don’t have to go is unacceptable.”
“Mother it’s
not my fault! I had to muck out all the stalls!”
“But, wasn’t
Daniel helping you, Andi?” Melinda questioned. Her lavender dress rustling as
she came down the rest of the stairs.
“No, he left
after only partially doing his first stall.”
Elizabeth pursed her lips and, Andi knew she wasn’t
pleased with her nephew.
“Andrea, I suppose you will have to stay here, we
don’t have time to wait for you.” Elizabeth said pulling on her gloves.
“Yes
mother.” Andi said suppressing a smile. “Have a nice time.”
“We will
dear.” And with that they were gone.
Andi sighed. What luck! She look out the window and
saw Daniel ride away with Mitch. This was even better than she had hoped for!
Now she’d have the afternoon to ride!
***
It was late afternoon before Andi came back. She
cantered Taffy to the barn and slid to a stop.
Angry voices drifted from the barn’s open door. Andi stepped closer to
here. Chad and one of the ranch hands were standing in the hall.
“I’m sick of your lazy attitude, Ralph.” Chad
snapped. “Leaving the fence in the south
pasture partially fixed was the last straw.”
“Sorry
boss,” Ralph drawled.
“Well sorry won’t cut it this time. I hate to do
this but, I’m afraid, you’re fired.”
“What, you can’t do that!” his eyes blazed.
“I’m sorry
Ralph, but I need dependable workers around.”
“You’d
better watch out Carter, I wouldn’t want something bad to happen to such a nice family.”
Chad closed the distance between them. His fists
were clenched at his side and his eyes were chips of blue ice. “Don’t you ever threaten me again!” his
voice shook with rage. “Now get off of
my land….Now!”
Ralph slowly slinked away, but not before saying, “I’ll
get you for this Carter, if it’s the last thing I do.” He brushed passed Andi;
the look he gave her was pure hatred.
“Chad….do you think he...” Andi said slowly leading
Taffy in the barn.
“Don’t worry sis he won’t do anything… I hope.”
***
Chad had not been too pleased to hear about Daniel
not helping Andi. He had a few things to say to Daniel that night. He had told
Daniel firmly but kindly that you don’t leave unless a job is complete. Needless to say Andi would not have liked to
be Daniel that particular moment. She had suffered Chad’s displeasure before, thank
you very much.
As Andi was getting ready for supper Elizabeth came
into her room looking solemn.
“Andrea I have something to tell you.” She drew out
a yellowish piece of paper and handed it to Andi. It read:
Aunt Rebekah broke her leg STOP children sick STOP
mother come if you can STOP Kate.
“I’m going Andi.” Elizabeth said when Andi had
finished reading the telegram. “Tomorrow morning.”
***
The house just wasn’t the same without mother. She
had only been gone for 5 days but, Andi already missed her dreadfully.
As Andi slowly descended the stairs the front door
burst open and Mitch staggered in, Chad leaning heavily on his arm. His face
was deathly pale. Without a second glance Andi gasped and raced towards the
kitchen.
“Melinda come quick, Chad’s hurt!”
“What?” Melinda dropped the spatula she was holding
and dashed after Andi.
“Good
heavens” she said softly once they reached Chad’s side. “What happened?” She
asked rushing over to where Chad lay sprawled across the settee.
A nasty cut on his forehead oozed blood and Andi
gasped when Mitch lifted up his shirt revealing a large black and blue
spot.
“Chad was wrestling an ornery calf when it kicked
him in the side.” Mitch paused. “I’m pretty sure that a rib or two is cracked
or broken.”
“Good grief Chad! You could be seriously hurt!” Melinda exclaimed.
“It’s not life threatening, sis, don’t worry about
me.” Chad chuckled then grimaced in pain.
It was only
then that Andi saw Daniel sitting forlornly in a corner. Their eyes met and for
an instant Andi thought she saw a flicked of kindness in his hazel eyes. When
Doctor Weaver came he confirmed Mitch’s theory. Chad had two broken ribs.
Needless to say he wouldn’t be going anywhere for the next few weeks.
***
The next
days flew by. Chad complained and grumbled about everything. Justin stayed home
to help with the branding.
Andi’s dislike for Daniel grew with each passing
day. He ruined everything she did and all he ever talked about was Boston. How
wonderful it was with its ice cream parlors, candy stores, and theaters. How
horrid Fresno was it, how hard Chad made him work in the blistering heat and on
and on it went until Andi thought she might scream!
***
Andi awoke to the sound of shrill whinnies coming
from the barn. She sat up. Taffy! Without a second thought Andi grabbed her
boots and snuck out of her room. Once outside she quickly slipped on her boots,
her white night gown fluttering in the cool night air. Out of the corner of her
eye she caught a glimpse of a man running away from the barn.
That’s odd she thought. Maybe I should get Mitch? No I’d better
not…..it’s probably just a ranch hand checking on the horses. Suddenly a
hand clamped over her mouth. Andi froze in fear.
“Sh, it’s only me.” Daniel whispered.
Andi slapped his hand away from her face. “Daniel
Carter, what are you doing out here?!” Andi said in an exasperated whisper.
“I could ask you the same question!” Daniel stopped
and sniffed the air. “Do you smell that?” he asked.
“Yeah it smells like.............smoke!” Andi ran
to the barn and flung the doors open. She stared in horror. The entire back
wall was consumed in flames.
“Daniel” She cried. “Get Mitch!”
“Where are you going?” He grabbed a hold of her
night gown.
“To save the
horses!” She cried, jerking out of his grip and dashed into the burning barn.
***
“Good girl, Star,” Andi crooned grabbing ahold of
the skittish horse’s halter and leading her out of the stall. She coughed, the
air was getting thicker. Where is
everyone? Andi thought with panic, smoke stinging her eyes.
“Andi” a voice yelled from behind. “Get out of
here! Mitch and the ranch hands can save the horses!”
“No Daniel!” A burning beam crashed down beside
Andi. Star, wild with fear, reared, nicking Daniel in the side of his head. He
crumpled to the ground.
Letting go
of the halter Andi dashed over to him, her heart pounding with fear. Dark red
blood ran down Daniel’s face. “Daniel” her voice cracked. She shook him once,
twice, no response. “Oh Lord don’t let
him be dead!” Andi grabbed his arms and
tried dragging him but he was too heavy.
“Andi what
happened?” came Chad’s voice.
She turned. Chads face was pale; he held his hand
to his side. “Chad its Daniel, he’s been hurt!”
Chad groaned and nearly passed out when he tried to
lift Daniel up but with Andi’s help they managed to hoist him up between the
two of them. Sweet drenched Andi’s face and her legs shook. The barn was
consumed in flames, all around them beams were falling and Andi could hear
Justin shouting orders to the ranch hands.
Then they
were outside, Andi sank to her knees, and breathed in the clean fresh air.
“Andi?” shock filed Melinda’s voice as she rushed
over to them. She let out a gasp when she saw Daniel. “Oh Lord!”
“I have to go get the Doctor.” Chad said weekly
leaning against the water trough.
“You can’t!”
Melinda argued. “You’re in no condition to walk least much ride.”
“I can do it.” Andi said.
“But in the
middle of the night?” Melinda wondered. “You’re only 13!”
“Andi’s right.” Chad said quietly. “She’s the only
one who can go.”
Without a moment to spare, Andi dashed for the
coral where the horses were. She grabbed a bridle from a pile of tack, no time
for a saddle.
She caught taffy and swung up on her back. “Come on
Taffy lets go.”
***
“Doctor Weaver” Andi pounded on the door. Oh God please let him be here! Finally
she saw a light, then the door opened.
“Why Andrea.” The doctor said in surprise. “What’s
wrong?”
“It’s my cousin, he’s hurt real bad.”
Without
another word doctor Weaver grabbed his bag.
Once he was gone Andi slowly picked up Taffy’s reins
and started the long ride home. Exhaustion nearly overcame her several times
but at last she arrived at the ranch.
Andi gasped at the smoldering embers of what was
once their barn. She put Taffy in the corral.
“Hey sis” Mitch said in a tired voice coming up
behind her.
“Hey Mitch.” she looked at her brothers soot
covered face.
As they entered the house Andi caught a glimpse of
herself in the mirror. Her once clean nightgown was now a dull gray.
Melinda came out of the parlor, looking tired and
worn.
“How’s Daniel?”
“He has a slight concussion, Mitch and a broken
collar bone but he’s going to be fine!”
“Thank you Lord!” Mitch murmured.
***
Pale streaks of light filtered into Andi’s room.
She fell wearily onto the bed. Her eyes drifted shut….. Suddenly she sat up.
“Oh my goodness!”
Andi bounded out of bed and flew downstairs into
the parlor where the rest of the family was sitting.
“Why Andi I thought you went up to bed.” Justin
said.
“I know who set the barn on fire!” Andi blurted
out.
“What?” Chad exclaimed.
“Well….last night I heard the horses whinnying. I
went out to check on them and, that’s when I saw him…….Ralph Evens.”
“Honey, are you sure?” Justin asked. “That’s a
serious accusation.”
“Yes, I’m sure it was him!” Andi declared.
“It’s true” Daniel said weakly from the settee. “I
saw him too.”
“Chad’s eyes blazed. “Why that low down----wait till
I get my hands on him!”
“Chad.”
Justin said quietly.
Andi slowly made her way over to the settee.
“I’m glad you’re alright Daniel,” Andi bit her
lower lip. “I’m sorry for not being nice to you.”
Daniel cracked a smile. “Well I wasn’t exactly easy
to be nice to.”
“Truce?”
Andi stuck out her hand.
“Truce.”
***
The next
month flew by. Mother came home and, the boys started building a new barn.
Sheriff Tate had caught and arrested Ralph Evens in the next town; Andi figured
Ralph wouldn’t be bothering them for a long while. Daniel and Andi got along
much better. And Andi did have to admit that she would miss her cousin when he
left. Looking back Andi couldn’t believe
how selfish she had been; no wonder Daniel hadn’t liked her!
“Ready?” She asked looking over at Daniel. Dressed
in worn overalls and a faded shirt he looked nothing like the same boy who had
come to the Carters 2 months ago.
His brown eyes twinkled as he gripped the reins of
his sorrel gelding and replied. “Ready.”
“On your mark, get set, GO!”
They took off like a shot! The wind blew in Andi’s
face. She dug her heals into her sturdy palomino’s side. “Come on Taffy let’s
fly.”
The End
Good story. I'm glad Daniel and Andi finally decided to get along.
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