by Madison Melton (ages 14-17)
CHAPTER 1
Memory Creek Ranch, California,
1800’s
"Alright, Jared, say 'Mama.’'"
Andi Prescott
bounced her son on her knees as she tried to teach him to talk.
The front
door slammed, and Riley yelled, "I'm home and hungry!"
Andi laughed,
"Supper's on the table." She scooped Jared up and walked into the
dining room. Riley said the blessing and they started eating. "How are the
new hands?" Andi asked.
"They're
pretty green," Riley admitted. "But I think they'll straighten
out."
Andi fed
Jared another spoonful of applesauce and nodded, "I hope so."
Riley smiled
at Jared, "Howdy son, learn any words today?"
Jared giggled
and bounced in his highchair when he heard his name.
"Not
yet" Andi managed a weak smile.
Riley glanced
at her, "Well, I'm sure he'll learn soon."
Andi nodded
her head and pasted on a fake grin, but inside she wasn't so sure. She’d heard
of children that couldn't talk and she was worried that Jared would be one of
those children. She shrugged and listened to what Riley was saying.
"I was
thinking," said Riley, "Tomorrow is Sunday and we're going to your
Mother's for supper. Why don't we tie Shasta to the back of the buggy so we can
go riding after supper?"
Andi perked
up, "I'd love that!" At that moment, Jared started whimpering.
"I guess
he's tired," said Andi. "I'll go put him to bed."
Andi tucked
Jared in and stood over his bed watching him. After he fell asleep, she knelt
beside his cradle. "Lord, please help him learn to talk." She felt a
hand on her shoulder, and she looked up. Riley was standing above her. He knelt
beside her and they both prayed side by side.
CHAPTER 2
Andi flipped
another pancake onto a plate and poured some water into the pan to cool it
down. She picked up the plates of pancakes and brought them to the table.
Riley settled
Jared in his highchair and was just sitting down. "Good morning!" she
sang.
Riley looked
up from where he was making faces with Jared, "Mornin'"
Andi put the
pancakes on the table and sat down. After Riley said the blessing, they started
eating. They hurried because they had a two-hour ride to town. The ride went by
in a happy blur, and they were soon at church.
"I’ll
bring the horses to the livery. Then I’ll meet you inside, okay?” asked Riley.
“Alright,
just make sure you’re not late” she warned.
“Don’t worry.
I won’t."
Andi waved
him off and hurried over towards the church.
“Andi! Over
here.”
Andi whirled
around and saw Chad and Ellie coming toward her. “Howdy, you two!” she called
back.
“Where’s
Riley?” asked Chad.
“He’s taking
the horse to the livery. He’ll be right back.”
“I hope so.
Mrs. and Mr. Evans will have their tongues wagging if he doesn’t. They haven't
had any good gossip recently." Said Chad.
“Chad!”
exclaimed Ellie, slapping his arm.
“What?”
Ellie rolled
her eyes and pointed behind them. They all looked where she pointed. Andi
gasped and bit back a laugh. Mr. and Mrs. Evans were right behind them; they
had heard everything. Chad's face grew red and his mouth hung open. He looked like
a fish just yanked out of a stream.
“Well!” Mrs.
Evans huffed.
“Good day,
sir!” exclaimed Mr. Evans.
Andi couldn’t
keep her laughter in any longer. She laughed out loud and Ellie joined in.
“What’s so
funny?” asked Riley coming up behind them.
“Nothing.
I’ll tell you later. Just stay clear of Mr. and Mrs. Evans.” Andi said as she
tickled Jared.
“Don’t I
always?” he said with a smile.
Andi grinned,
“Yes, you do” she said as they hurried up the church steps.
CHAPTER 3
“That was a
wonderful sermon,” commented Mother.
“I think so
too,” responded Ellie.
Chad shook
his head “I was too busy ignoring Mr. and Mrs. Evan's glares to listen."
“Mother,
where’s Justin and Lucy?” Asked Andi
"Sammy
has a fever so they're staying home.” explained Mother.
"Poor
Sammy." Andi sighed “He hates being indoors.”
“You mean,
'poor Justin and Lucy',” corrected Chad. “They're taking care of a sick
five-and-a-half-year-old and a three-year-old. With Lucy expecting, it must be
crazy.”
Andi nodded.
It was hard enough taking care of Jared when he was healthy.
After waving
goodbye, they stopped at the Mercantile to pick up some horse feed. As soon as
they were done, they made their way toward the Circle C Ranch.
Melinda
greeted them at the door and scooped Jared out from Andi's arms. "You're
getting big!" she exclaimed. Jared smiled, showing off his dimples. In a
few minutes they were in the parlor. The men were soon in a deep conversation
about ranch life, while the ladies talked about the newest dress patterns. Andi
paid more attention to the ranch talk.
Soon Luisa
announced that dinner was ready, and they all trooped into the dining room.
After a
delicious supper of mashed potatoes, green beans, and steak, Andi and Riley
slipped out and went for a much-needed ride. Not knowing that it would change
their lives forever.
CHAPTER 4
Once Shasta and Dakota
were saddled, they were off. When the ranch house disappeared from sight, Andi
challenged Riley to a race.
"I don't
know, Andi, you haven't been riding for a while and if you ride too much,
you're gonna feel awful sore." Riley warned.
Andi shrugged
off his warning, "It'll be worth it."
Riley rolled
his eyes, "Just don't blame me tomorrow."
Andi frowned
"I won't. Now let's go!"
"Alright.
On your mark, get set, go!"
Andi and
Shasta took off like a shot with Riley and Dakota following. Laughter bubbled
up inside her, it felt wonderful to have the wind blowing through her hair and
the excitement rushing through her again. But her excitement was short lived.
Suddenly without warning Shasta whinnied and reared. Fear pierced her heart,
she held onto the saddle horn, but she could feel herself slipping down
Shasta’s back. “Riley!” she cried.
“Hold on!”
called Riley “it’s a snake.”
Andi glanced
down, it was just a harmless King snake, but Shasta didn’t know that. He
bolted. Andi felt like she was being pulled off Shasta’s back. He came to a
halt and Andi found herself flying through the air, then everything went black.
CHAPTER 5
“Andi? Are
you alright?”
Andi groaned
“How are you
feeling, dear?”
“Terrible”
Andi opened her eyes to see who she was talking to. She couldn’t see anything,
just darkness. “Why is it so dark?”
"It’s
late morning”
Andi frowned,
"No, it's dark."
She felt a
hand on her shoulder and Riley's voice said, "It's going to be alright."
His words sounded confident, but his voice betrayed him.
Andi sat up;
a shooting pain ripped through her head causing her to fall back on the bed.
When her head hit the pillow, more pain exploded, "Ah!"
“Lay still
dear,” said Mother.
“How long
have I been in here?” she gasped.
“All
yesterday afternoon and this morning” replied Chad.
Andi wondered
who else was here looking at her. If only she could do the same.
"This is
Doctor Weaver. How do you feel?”
“Everything
hurts and I feel weak.”
“Can you help
her, Doctor?" asked Riley.
“I’m not
sure, Mr. Prescott, I’m not an eye specialist and I think I would do more harm
than good. Now there is an eye specialist that I know, he has been able to help
blind people in the past but, there have been a few cases where he couldn't do
anything.”
“Where does
he live?" asked Mitch.
"He
lives in New York," replied Doctor Weaver. "I know it's a long way
but there’s no one else I trust."
"We can
go by train," suggested Riley.
"I think
that would be best," agreed the Doctor.
Andi lay
listening to them make plans. They would leave on Wednesday and arrive Monday
night. They would spend the night at a hotel and see the specialist in the
morning. Doctor Weaver would wire his friend when he got back to town and let
him know they were coming. By the time all the plans were made, Andi had fallen
back to sleep.
CHAPTER 6
Andi spent
her days in bed cuddling with Jared, listening to others, and praying. It was
difficult to hear people and not be able to see them. She and Riley were
inseparable; he was by her side every minute of every day waiting for her to
ask for something and to keep her optimistic. But even with all his efforts
Andi felt miserable.
According to
Riley, it was a beautiful spring morning. A morning that she couldn't see but,
she could smell it and unfortunately, she was allergic to it and every time she
sneezed her head would explode with pain. Wednesday soon came and Riley and
Andi said their goodbyes and boarded the train that was bound for New York.
They had the last car and were unfortunately whipped around on sharp turns. The
train sounded louder than previous rides. Over the noise, she could barely hear
Riley talking about the view or the lady up front with the funny hat. Andi
finally tuned him out and let the clicking of the train lull her to sleep.
***
Andi woke
with a start. Who screamed? "Riley-"
As soon as
she spoke Riley clamped his hand over her mouth, "Don't make any noise,
we're being held up!"
Andi's heart
skipped a beat, this can't be happening again! She and Riley
had already been held up once and it was not a happy event. She quickly slipped
her ring off and dropped it in her boot while Riley whispered what was
happening. The bandits were in the front trying to disconnect their car from
the rest of the train. Andi and Riley braced themselves and prayed for
protection as the car was disconnected.
CHAPTER 7
The jolt
threw Andi from her seat and she would have hit her head if Riley hadn't had
his arm around her. The car slowed to a halt, "Alright! everyone
out!" called one of the bandits.
Riley stood
up and helped Andi to her feet. As they made their way out, Andi could hear the
bandits arguing about something. As soon as they were out, they were told to
form and line and put their money, jewels, and other valuables in a sack.
When it came
to them, Riley pleaded with them “Please, my wife is blind. We’re on our way to
an eye specialist and we need this money to see if they can restore her eyesight."
“No
exceptions, Mr. now put the money in the sack, or else."
Andi felt
Riley stiffen. “Riley, just give him the money."
“Smart lady,”
commented the bandit.
Riley sighed
and plopped the roll of bills into the sack and the bandit moved on. Andi squeezed
his hand and tried to calm the anger burning inside her. God, why are
you letting all this happen?
"Alright,"
called one of the bandits "Everyone back in the car.”
"What
are they doing?" she whispered.
"I don't
know," replied Riley "But we better do what they say." He helped
her back inside.
"Everyone
take a seat and get ready for a fun ride!" called one of the bandits from
outside.
Andi clutched
Riley's arm, They’re going to push the train down the
mountain!
CHAPTER 8
Andi felt the
car gain speed as Riley dragged her to the front of the car and onto the
landing. Lord, please don't let us smash into an oncoming train!
"Jump,
Andi!" cried Riley.
Andi pushed
back, "No! Let the others go first."
Riley sighed
and moved them out of the way.
Soon it was
their turn again. Andi couldn't move, it felt like her legs were nailed down.
Riley had no choice but to push her out before him. Andi screamed as she fell.
She hit the ground with a thud. The air temporarily knocked out of her; she lay
on her back thankful to be alive. As soon as she caught her breath she sat up
and listened for Riley or one of the other passengers. Nothing. After shouting
for about an hour she lost her voice. She could hear crickets chirping and knew
that night was coming on quickly. She knew how to survive in the wild with her
sight, but she wasn't sure she could do it while blind.
After a quick
prayer, Andi decided to wait for Riley. She lay down and waited, trying hard
not to fall asleep, but sleep and Andi soon found each other.
****
Andi woke
with the sun shining on her face. She listened for Riley but only heard normal
morning sounds. I guess I should find the train tracks and follow them
but first I'm going to eat some food. She reached into the bag
Riley had given her and pulled out an apple. As she ate, she prayed for her and
Riley. She stood up and took a step then gasped. Did I step on a rock? Then
she remembered, “My ring!” She pulled off her boot and fumbled
around inside before she found it. She slipped it on and sighed, At
least I saved my ring this time.
After a few
minutes of searching for the tracks, she (literally) stumbled onto them. As she
followed the tracks she wondered where Riley was and if he was safe, and how in
the world she was going to find her way back without her sight. Night soon came
and she had to find a place to sleep. I can't sleep on the tracks or
I'll be run over. Andi soon found a flat piece of earth and fell
asleep.
*****
Toot, Toot!
Andi jerked awake as a train zoomed past her. Her hair smacked her face and the
sound was deafening. Even after the train had gone her heart still thumped
wildly, That's one way to wake up. If I had slept any closer to
the track I would have been killed! Thank you, God!
She crawled
on her knees until she felt the cold steel of the track. She climbed on top and
thought, the train went this way, so I'll follow. I just need to keep
an ear out.
CHAPTER 9
Andi sat down
and sighed. I'm so tired! She felt behind her before laying
down. I don't want to lay on a cactus! She thought. I'll
rest for a moment and then I'll go on.
Andi's nap
turned out to be longer than she planned, and she woke up the next morning.
Andi opened her eyes and sat up; her head pounded. Well, I 'd better
get back on the road. Lord, please keep me safe! Trust in the Lord with
all your heart and lean not on your own understanding; In all your ways
acknowledge Him, and He shall direct your paths. Relief washed
over her. Alright God, I trust you.
****
Andi sat down
and sighed. She'd been walking for over an hour and her feet throbbed. She
pulled off her boots, rubbed her feet, and sighed. A tiny voice inside spoke
up, you need to get going. Andi sighed, "I know, I
know." She grabbed her boots and slipped them back on. "Back on
track!" She stood on her knees and crawled over to where she thought the
tracks were. After a while she felt around, hoping to feel the cold metal of
the tracks, but she didn't. Andi's heartbeat faster. Did I lose the
track? No, no, no! Lord, that was my one chance of finding help! She
quickened her pace and ignored the pain in her feet. She turned around and
hurried back to where she thought she started but, on the way, she tripped,
sending her headfirst over the edge of a cliff.
CHAPTER 10
Andi fumbled
around trying to get a grip on something. Her hand scraped against a rock and
she pulled herself up.
She rolled on
her back and lay panting. After she caught her breath she crawled away from the
cliff feeling along the ground so she wouldn't fall again.
"God,
please help me," she begged.
Suddenly,
Andi heard a sound like someone shaking Jared's baby rattle.
She closed
her eyes, Please, not a rattlesnake!
It rattled
its tail. it sounded like it was coming closer! It was too much for Andi and
she collapsed. The last thing she remembered was a sharp pain in her wrist.
When she woke
up, she tried to remember what had caused her to pass out. Then her wrist
started throbbing, bringing back dark memories. She gasped and clutched her
wrist, she felt two small holes with liquid oozing out. Andi's heart quickened,
had the snake bit her? And if it did what would she do? She remembered hearing
stories from Cory about people dying from snake bites, would that happen to
her? She rubbed her wrist one more time and shook her head. "No! It won't.
But I need help."
She picked
herself up and walked as fast as she dared away from the cliff in search of
help.
As Andi
walked, tears flowed freely, I can't die! I have a husband and my
little boy! I can't leave them! Andi took in a deep breath and tried
to stop crying but she couldn't. Finally, she sat down and cried herself to
sleep and prayed she'd live to wake up.
****
Andi
groaned, the ground is so soft. Am I in heaven? She lifted her
hands and felt along the ground. This feels like.... A bed?
"Doctor,
she's coming to!"
Andi opened
her eyes. Nothing. She sighed, "Where am I?"
"You're
safe, don't worry."
Andi's heart
skipped a beat, no it can't be! Can it?
"Your
voice sounds familiar."
The speaker
chuckled, "I would hope so. It would be a shame to have my own wife forget
my voice."
CHAPTER 11
"Riley!
I can't believe it's you!"
Riley
chuckled, "Well it is, you've been out for a long time. I'm glad you're
alright."
Andi smiled,
"Me to-" She suddenly remembered. "I may not be alright."
"What do
you mean?"
Andi took a
deep breath and let it out slowly, "I may have ran into a snake."
Riley sucked
in his breath, "What kind of snake?"
Andi gave him
a faint smile, "I couldn't see it, but I could hear it."
You
mean...."
She nodded,
"A rattlesnake."
"I'll
get the doctor."
*****
Andi sighed,
"Well, that's a relief!"
The doctor
had looked at her wrist and said she had been bit, but it was a dry bite.
Meaning that the snake didn't inject any venom.
Riley
squeezed her hand, "It sure is! I can't believe it didn't release any
poison."
Andi
shuddered
"Sorry,
I know it's scary to think about."
Andi changed
the subject, "How did you find me?
"I
flagged down another train and some of the men helped me look for you. We
searched for you for three days, we found you a little ways away from a cliff.
I'm glad you didn't fall over it.
Andi smiled,
"Who said I didn't?"
Riley gasped,
"What?"
"I have
a lot to tell you."
CHAPTER 12
"You can
open your eyes, now."
Andi sighed,
that had been a long operation! Riley and Andi had continued to New York and
had arrived the day before yesterday. The operation started yesterday
afternoon and ended an hour ago. Riley sent for the rest of Andi's family when
she was missing, and they were all packed into Andi's small room including the
Doctor and the nurses.
For once Andi
felt at peace with herself and with God. She knew that whatever the outcome, He
would stand with her and help her through it and so would her family. She took
a deep breath and slowly opened her eyes. Darkness.
She smiled
faintly "I can't-" she stopped. At the edge of the darkness there
were lighter patches of dark. Her head throbbed, she closed her eyes again and
reopened them, once again there were different patches of darkness, but now
they were shrinking into swirling colors. "Riley I-" she stopped.
She felt his
hand on her shoulder "What is it?"
"I..."
Tears spilled from her eyes before she could stop them.
"Andi"
said Riley as he knelt beside her "What's wrong?"
Andi turned
to face him and flung her arms around him "Riley, I can see you!"
Riley held
her close and whispered, "Thank God!"
A small
throng gathered around Riley and Andi, there were whispers of thanks and
squeals from babies.
As soon as
she was released, she asked "Where's Jared?"
Mother smiled
"Melinda's outside with him trying to calm him, I'll go get them."
Andi nodded
her thanks and sat back on the bed suddenly exhausted. Riley sat down next to
her and said, "I really missed you."
Andi nodded
her head and opened her mouth to respond but was interrupted by a babbling
sound that came from the door. Andi looked up, there was Melinda holding her
now three-year-old son sucking his thumb as always.
Andi sat
there in shock, he's so big! I wonder if he remembers me.
When Andi
didn't move, Riley brought Jared to her. Andi held out her arms and took him.
"Hello Honey" she whispered "Do you remember me?"
Jared gazed
into her eyes for a long time, "Mama!"
Andi's eyes
filled with happy tears as she hugged her baby as if she'd never let him go.
She held Jared at arms-length and whispered, "It's a miracle!"
Sweet story! I love the ending scene. ❤
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