a 2014 contest entry
Part 1-
Jem sighed as he clattered down the
wooden steps of the sheriff's office in Goldtown. This morning, once again, he
had awakened to find that the fences on the south side of his property had been
torn down. The visit to the sheriffs hadn’t helped much either. Mr. Barnes, his
neighbor, had put in a request for a lawyer and appealed to a higher court.
But Jem couldn’t figure out why.
Ever since his father had died two
years before, Jem who was twenty-five at the time, had taken over the family
ranch. Just six months ago he had bought the 125 acres to the south planning to
expand the ranch. Nothing but trouble had followed. Time and time again
he had ridden around the property only to find fences torn down and cattle
missing. He had finally ridden over to his neighbor to see if he had been
having the same problem. That was when he learned the problem.
Mr. Barnes yelled at him, saying that
Jem had bought his property. Jem talked to him and even showed him the
map that clearly stated whose property it was. But Mr. Barnes wouldn’t listen.
And it had come to this. He would have
to hire a lawyer, not to mention having to travel to San Francisco for the
hearing.
As he walked down the boardwalk, the
familiar pounding and jingling of the stagecoach entered the town and pulled up
to the Wells Fargo office.
Jem crossed the street as the driver
called out. “Hey there, Jem. Done brought your sister back safe and sound.”
Jem grinned as he walked around the
side of the stagecoach. There were only two passengers on the stagecoach.
Stuart Keith, who was the new schoolteacher, and Ellie.
Jem opened the door and reached
out a hand to help Ellie down. “How was your visit?”
Ellie’s eyes sparkled. “Oh, it was
grand! Aunt Rose hasn’t changed much and Nathan’s little one is adorably cute!”
Jem smiled. “I’m glad you had a good
time. It seems hard to believe that it’s been eight years since they moved back
east. “
Ellie nodded. “So how are things going
here?”
“Well, other than the fact that I need to
hire a lawyer, travel to San Francisco for the hearing, and repair the fences
once again, everything is great.”
“That bad?”
Jem nodded. “I just found out this
morning. I have no idea who is a good lawyer!”
Um, excuse me. I might know one.”
Jem turned toward the voice. “Why sure,
Stuart. Any help would be welcome.”
“I just returned from the conference in
Fresno. While I was there, I met a man named Justin Carter. He is a lawyer, and
from our talks I gathered that he is a good Christian as well.”
Jem rubbed his chin thoughtfully. “Carter
. . .why does that sounds familiar? Well, never mind. Thanks for the
information. I’ll look into it.”
***
Jem opened the door for Ellie as they
entered Justin’s office in Fresno, California.
“May I help you?” Asked the clerk.
“Yes, I’m Jem Coulter and I have an
appointment with Mr. Carter.”
“Splendid! Right this way.”
He opened the door to the office. “The
Coulters, sir.”
Justin nodded politely, and pulled out
two chairs for them to sit on. “I’ve been reviewing your case,” he said, as he
resumed his seat behind the desk. “It shouldn't be too hard to win. I’m not
quite sure why your neighbor is doing what he is, but I am confident we have a
solid case.”
Jem nodded “Thank you, sir. You’ve been
more than kind, especially on such short notice. Is there anything else we
should do?”
Justin smiled. “Not really. We just
need to wait for the hearing. . . which will be in about a week, I
believe?”
Jem nodded.
“Meanwhile, enjoy your stay in Fresno.
And how would you like to come and meet my family? Come over for dinner on
Saturday?”
Jem stood, “Sounds wonderful! What do
you think, Ellie?”
Ellie chuckled, “I wholeheartedly
agree!”
***
“He seems like nice enough man.” Ellie
remarked as they stepped out into the lobby.
“He certainly does.” Jem agreed.
They had just exited the building when
suddenly a young girl careened around the corner. Seeing them, she stopped
abruptly. A boy ran up behind her, and not realizing she had stopped, ran into
her, knocking them both to the ground.
Jem chuckled and offered a hand to the
girl to help her stand.
Andi and Cory and Taffy . . . best friends! |
“We’-we’re sorry. I didn’t see you.”
she stammered. “This is my brother’s office. My name is Andi, Andi Carter, and
this is Cory.”
“Well, it’s nice to meet you two,”
Ellie said with a smile. “It looks like you are having fun.”
“Yes.” Andi smiled sheepishly. We’re
having a race to Justin’s office.”
Jem smiled. “That reminds me of what
Ellie and I would do when we were younger. Did you say Carter? Are you Justin’s
siblings?”
“Andi is. We’re not brother and sister.”
Cory was quick to explain. “Just good friends.”
The door to the office slammed. “Miss
Andi, are you disturbing your brother’s clients?” Tim asked in an exasperated
voice.
“No, I'm not disturbing anyone. I just
need to see Justin.”
“Justin is working on a very important
case right now and cannot be disturbed,” said Tim.
Jem, sensing this was something not to
get involved in, tipped his hat to Andi then steered Ellie out and onto the
street.
Part 2
Around five o’clock on Saturday,
Justin's buggy rolled around to the front of the hotel. To Ellie's delight,
Andi sat on the front seat. The ride out to the ranch was pleasant. Ellie and
Andi chatted in the back seat, while Justin kept Jem busy by asking him
questions. As they pulled into the yard, Ellie could see two or three people
standing on the veranda.
Andi noticed her glance and quickly
pointed them out. “Chad is the one leaning against the fence post, Mitch is
sitting on the step, Mother is in the rocking chair and Melinda . . . oh, there
she is!” she said, as the door opened and Melinda stepped outside.
When Justin stopped the buggy in front
of the house, Chad took the reins that Justin threw to him and tied them
to the hitching post.
“Welcome, welcome!” Mrs. Carter
exclaimed as she swept gracefully down the steps and extended a hand to Ellie.
Ellie quickly took the offered hand. There was something about the whole
Carter family that made you feel so welcome!
When she turned to introduce Jem, she found
him staring at Chad. “Chad. . . Chad Carter! I've met you before!” he
exclaimed.
“Why. . . Jem Coulter! It’s good to see
you again!” Chad exclaimed as he hurried over and heartily shook his hand.
“Same here!” said Jem.
“You've meet?” Andi asked.
Chad nodded. “A long time ago. I’ll
tell you the story later.”
They visited in the parlor for a while
until Mother announced that dinner was ready.
In the dining room they sat down to a
delicious meal. French bread, roast beef, and potatoes, along with a few other
sides. Ellie thought it smelled wonderful!
After supper, they once again retired
to the parlor. . .all except Andi that is. Ellie noticed her quickly hurry out
the door. She turned to Chad, who was sitting next to her. “Where is Andi
going?”
Chad grinned. “Andi is off to the barn
to say hello to Taffy.”
“Is Taffy her horse?”
“You'd better believe it! She spends
every spare minute with her!”
“Can I go out and see her?”
Chad turned to her “Really? you really
want to go out to the barn?”
Ellie laughed “If you remember
correctly, I did love horses!”
Chad nodded. “It's just that you're so
different now. . . so . . .” He fumbled around for the right word.
Ellie Coulter . . . all grown up! |
“Grown up?” Ellie suggested.
“Well, yes. But if you want to get out
to the barn, I'll go along with you.”
“That sounds wonderful!” Ellie
replied, as they both stood up and left the parlor.
Out in the barn Andi lost no time in telling Ellie all about Taffy. Ellie sat and listened attentively, commenting every so often. Chad and Andi both interrupted each other when Andi told about getting Taffy for her birthday, as they each had their own side of the story. A little while later, the three went inside to the parlor where everyone else was still gathered, talking.
Out in the barn Andi lost no time in telling Ellie all about Taffy. Ellie sat and listened attentively, commenting every so often. Chad and Andi both interrupted each other when Andi told about getting Taffy for her birthday, as they each had their own side of the story. A little while later, the three went inside to the parlor where everyone else was still gathered, talking.
“Mother,” said Chad, “Don't you think
it would be so much fun to have Jem and Ellie over tomorrow night?” Chad asked,
after Justin had left taking the Coulters back into town.
“What a wonderful idea, Chad. I
wouldn't mind having them over every night!” replied Mother.
***
The next few days went by swiftly.
Andi couldn't remember having so much fun! Ellie was just like Melinda
used to be. She enjoyed fishing, riding, helping train the horses and she
really seemed interested in what Andi had to say.
Also, Andi was starting to suspect that
Ellie meant more to Chad then just a friend. She decided to ask him about it
the day before they were to leave for the court hearing. She found him in the
barn.
“Chad, What do you think of Ellie?”
Chad leaned against the barn stall a
surprised look on his face. Andi could tell she had caught him off guard.
“Ellie, she's.. .she's nice. Why do you
ask?”
Andi shrugged. “Because I think you
like her.”
“And how old are you again?” Chad
joked. ”Oh, I remember, you're thirteen years old and asking me about my
love life! Who made you the expert?”
“No one, I just thought...”
“You thought right,” Chad interrupted. “I'm
just giving you a hard time.”
Andi made a face. “Well, are you going
to ask her to marry you?”
That's my sister all right, blunt.
“I'll have to see. Just don’t tell
anyone yet.”
Andi grinned. “Are you asking me to
keep your secret?”
Chad grinned as well. “I know, I know,
it’s a first. But you’ll keep it?”
“Well. . .”
“Andi!”
Andi laughed, “Of course, I’ll keep it.
I was just giving you a hard time!”
***
Tuesday came and with it came the day
for Jem, Ellie and Justin to leave for the hearing in San Francisco. At the
last minute, Mother decided the rest of the family would come along and pay a
long-overdue visit to Aunt Rebecca.
They boarded the stage coach and, after
talking for a while, rode in silence.
Suddenly, Andi heard hoof beats coming
from the opposite direction. She glanced out the window. “Justin, Chad,
look!” she exclaimed as a shudder went through her. They both glanced out
the window.
“Stage-robbers” Justin announced
grimly.
The stage robbers held up
their guns and screamed to get out with their hands up in the air. Everyone
shook as they obeyed. Andi stuck close to Ellie, who was near Chad. The robbers
never moved the guns away from their faces.
Ellie looked at the robbers, there were
three of them. I hope they just ask for money and leave.
The robbers pointed at Andi. “You,
girl, get over here.”
“Yes, sir.” Andi stood over by them a
very worried look in her face.
Then they pointed at Ellie. ”You also!”
“No! Not both of them!” Chad exclaimed.
“Quiet!” they shouted, as the leader
roughly jerked Ellie away from Chad and pulled her up in front of him onto the
horse. The other one did the same to Andi, then they rode off.
***
Mitch was hastily unharnessing the
horses when Chad turned back to the others. “Chad, here!” he yelled.
Chad turned just in time to catch the
makeshift reins Mitch threw at him.
“There’s four horses here. Chad, Justin
and Jem, you go after the girls while I ride on ahead into Madera and get the
sheriff. Chad, do you have your pistol?”
Chad nodded and patted his side.
“Okay, Justin, you don’t have one. .
.but, Jem, do you?”
Jem nodded. “I always bring one with
me.”
“Great! Justin, maybe you best stay
here with mother and Melinda. I’ll leave the extra horse.”
Justin nodded. “Sounds good. Now
hurry!”
***
The trees were thick and, since that
area was unfamiliar to Chad, the going was slow. Suddenly, Jem pulled up his
horse. ”Shh, listen.”
Chad reined in his horse and strained
his ears. Sure enough, to the left there were fading hoof beats.
“Okay, one of us needs to go around and
come from the other direction, that way they’ll be trapped.”
Jem nodded. “Good idea. Why don’t you
go around? Even though you don’t know it well, you probably could find your way
around better than I.”
Chad nodded and they quickly parted
ways.
Part 3
Mitch tore into town. “Sheriff, where
is the sheriff's office?” he yelled.
Several people turned to stare at him. One
man pointed to his left. “Sheriff's office is right here. What's it you be
needin’?”
“Our stagecoach was robbed about five
miles from here and my sister and another passenger were kidnapped.”
The sheriff, hearing the commotion,
came outside. “What’s the problem?” he asked looking around.
Mitch repeated what he had just said.
The sheriff went back into his office, grabbed a gun and recruited some
other men. Then Mitch and the sheriff rode off hastily. When they neared the
place where the robbery and kidnapping occurred, a gun sounded off in the
distance. Mitch slowed his horse down
“That’s them!” he yelled and then
took off in the direction of the gunshot.
The riders slowed as they neared the
trees.
“Let’s spread out,” the sheriff
commanded. “Mitch, you come with me. We’ll go straight in. You others spread
out and follow us slowly.” He turned back to Mitch, “Do you have a firearm?”
When Mitch shook his head, the sheriff
un-holstered his pistol and tossed it to Mitch. Then he took his rifle out of
the saddlebag and placed it on the saddle in front of him.
They rode in slowly. When they
were about fifty feet away, the sheriff motioned for Mitch to dismount from the
horse. Mitch obeyed, then hurriedly tossed the reins around the branch of a
tree.
On their hands and knees, they crept
closer to the clearing. Suddenly, the sheriff stood and raised the rifle. “Everyone
hands up and down on your knees!”
To Mitch’s confusion, he quickly
lowered it and walked into the middle of the clearing. Mitch followed the
sheriff and saw a weeping Ellie in Chad’s arms. Jem was talking with Andi while
keeping a watch over the stagecoach robbers, who were tied to a tree. The
sheriff went over and handcuffed the robbers and got ready to go back into town
as the deputies came into the clearing.
“Thanks for your help sheriff,” said
Jem.
“Not a problem, that’s what I’m for,”
replied the good natured sheriff. “if you ever be needing me again, just give
me a holler.”
***
Two hours later they arrived in San
Francisco. Mitch hurried mother and Melinda off to Aunt Rebecca’s house while
Justin, Jem and Ellie hurried over to the courthouse, accompanied by Chad
and Andi who had come along to watch. The courthouse was this big, but old and
beautiful building at the edge of the town. Inside, Justin went to the
front of the room accompanied by Jem and Ellie, while Chad and Andi took seats
near the door.
“Chad, do you think it would be alright
if I went and watched Justin for a while? Last time I was in a
courthouse. . .well . ..”
Chad grinned. “What? It wasn’t under
the best of circumstances?”
Andi looked down. “That would be an
understatement.”
Chad nodded. ”We got here pretty
early, so it should be alright. Just be quick!”
Andi nodded and hurried down to the
table where Justin was busily laying out the papers for the case.
After asking Justin a few questions,
she went back up to sit with Chad.
About five minutes later the judge
walked up on stage and called the courtroom to order. He then gave a background
story of what the case was all about and then called for Mr. Barnes’ lawyer,
William Finney, to come speak.
Mr. Finney walked up to the stand. “Honorable
Judge Mason, I can give you proof that the land truly belongs to Mr. Barnes--”
The judge broke in. “So you’ve said,
but so far I have seen no proof.”
Mr. Finney took a paper out of his
stack, walked forward and placed it on the judge's desk.
“This map, you will see, clearly marks
the boundary line between Mr. Barnes’ property and Mr. Coulters.”
The judge took the map and studied it. “It
does, quite clearly, in fact.”
Jem gave Justin a startled look. No one
had said anything about a map!
“Is this all you have to say, Mr.
Finney?”
“Yes sir.”
“Thank you. Mr. Carter, would you like
to cross examine Mr. Finney?”
“Yes sir I would, thank you.”
“Mr. Finney, I have never seen this map
before, so how do I know it is for real?”
Judge Mason broke in, “Mr. Carter, you
may come and look at the map.”
Justin walked over. The map indeed looked
as real as could be. “This is very interesting, thank you. I have no further
questions.” Justin sat back down at the table upon finishing his cross
examination and collected his papers for his coming speech.
Judge Mason looked at Justin. “Mr.
Carter, would you like to give your speech now?”
“Yes, your honor.” Justin went up and
took the stand.
“I am in fact very startled by this
map, I was never shown it until just now. I believe that because this map was
not at the land office and because Mr. Coulter legally, and in his and the
office’s best knowledge paid for this land, the land should remain in his
possession. Judge, would you like to see a copy of the legal document that says
clearly that Mr. Coulter paid for the land?”
“Yes, that would be helpful.”
Justin went and handed the copy of it
to Judge Mason, who took it, then said. “Would
you like to continue speaking, Mr. Carter?”
“Yes, just a second longer if you will.”
“Certainly,” Judge Mason replied.
“I would like to close with the reason
that the land should remain in Mr. Coulter’s possession. And that reason is
that Mr. Coulter legally paid for this land, thank you.”
“Mr. Finney, would you like to cross
examine Mr. Carter?” asked the Judge.
“No sir, thank you.” replied Mr.
Finney.
Judge Mason arose. “I now call for a
recess, court will rejoin in fifteen minutes.”
During the break Justin decided to go
visit with his family, because he didn’t feel like sitting at the table
worrying about something he couldn’t change. He whispered a quick prayer. “God,
please let this case turn out in favor for Jem.”
Court was rejoined at the hour and
everyone was in their places, with the exception of Ellie, who was tired and
had remained home.
“I have come to a conclusion, “ stated
the Judge. “the map that I was shown during this court session is liable. My
decision, that I believe will be fair to both parties, is this. Mr. Coulter
will have the one hundred and twenty five acres to the north of his already
owned land. Mr. Barnes, on the other hand, will have his original one hundred
twenty-five acres returned to him. I apologize for any inconvenience this has
caused, and will be sure that the land office is notified, since they are
legally liable for this incident.”
Mr. Barnes walked over to Jem. “I’m really
sorry for all the trouble, I just didn’t know how else I could get anyone to
listen to an old man like me!”
“Oh, it’s alright. Personally, I would
rather not have had to go to court, but that’s behind us now!” he turned
to the Carters. ‘Besides, this gave us the opportunity to re-unite with old
friends. And,” he gave Chad a meaning look, “maybe find some new family!”
***
The stay in San Francisco was pleasant.
One day, the morning before the Coulters were to leave, Chad turned to Ellie, “would
you like to go on a walk?” At Jem's look he said, “Not far, just around the
town.”
Ellie nodded. “That would be pleasant.”
While she went to get her shawl, Andi
went to Chad. “What are you planning?”
Chad gave her an innocent look. “Me?
Why nothing!”
Andi gave him a knowing grin and walked
into the parlor as Ellie descended down the staircase.
***
“Well, Chad. We’ve had a nice walk. And
I’ve really had a great time getting to know your family!”
“It’s been nice to get to know you a
little bit better too.” Chad agreed. Suddenly, Chad pulled her to the side
underneath the branches of a weeping willow tree. “Ellie Coulter, today I've
realized just how much you mean to me. After almost losing you . .” Chad's
voice broke. “It would have been too much to bear. So, since I can't stand to
be parted from you, will you marry me?”
Ellie blushed as she replied. “Of
course, Chad. Yes, I will marry you!”
***
They hurried home to tell the family
the news. Everyone was overjoyed and happy for them. Just then the dinner bell
rang and everyone hurried into the dining room. After the meal, Andi pulled
Chad aside.
“You think you'll be able to handle
Ellie?” She grinned, “She can be an awful lot like me!”
Chad smiled, “I think I'll be able to
handle her. But it’s a mystery to me that, out of all the girls I've had around
in my life, only my sister Melinda is the perfect lady!”
The End
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