Dangerous Decision: the reckless race between Andi and Cory
“You talk too much,” Cory, sitting
astride my competition, complained. “Let's go already.”
“Please, Jack,” my rider appealed to
the young man on the ground, “It's mighty hot.”
Yes, that it is. I'm already
sweating under this saddle and the race has not even begun. I glance over at
Flash, “Are you ready to be left in my dust?” I neighed.
“Not a chance. My rider and I are
gonna beat you by a mile!”
“We'll see about that!” I challenged
as the young man that my rider called 'Jack' droped his arm to side side and
shouted, “Go!”
My rider dug her heels into my
sides and I lunged forward with a thrust of my mighty haunches. Without looking
over, I could feel Flash right next to me. Suddenly an old farmer rattled by my
side driving an old buckboard. I put on a surge of power now that Flash had
swerve to avoid the buckboard.
But then, just as quick as Flash had
fallen behind, I could hear him gaining on me. I kept my pace until my Flash
had caught up to me. For a moment we raced neck and neck, eye to eye. Flash's
presence taunted me. I snorted my displeasure at him and begged my rider to let
me lengthen my stride. It seemed as though Flash was the only one who realized
my fury at having his be this close to me. He used this to his advantage, “Hey,
Taffy.
Catch
me if you can!”
And with that he was suddenly ahead
of me. I surged forward with renewed strength. As I passed Flash and his rider
I gave a taunting flick of my tail in his face.
I raced on toward the man holding a
bandanna. I slowed only long enough for my rider to grasp the bandanna and then
I was off again at top speed.
Now
Flash was right on my side again. I just knew that I needed to muster up more
strength. I could hear his rider urging him faster. But I was so tired.
However, as my rider pleaded with me to go faster, I knew that I could not fail
her. I pulled ahead in no time. I could feel the change of her position as she
turned around to look at Flash and his rider.
All of a sudden Flash's rider
shouted a warning and it came just in time. My rider pulled me to a complete
halt a few inches from a man who now lay on the ground. I stared down into his
face and sniffed. I hope I didn't hurt him!
that is soooooooooooooooooo good!!!! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!! you did such a great job!!! i think you should write more !!! you are amazing!!!
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Thank you so much! Your compliment means a lot. :-)
Deletecan u uh write taffy's point of view of the long ride home
ReplyDeleteHey, great idea. I think a "fan" should write it. That would be fun!
DeleteGreat story!
ReplyDeleteGreat story!!!!!!!!!!!
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