Part 1:
“You'd better run faster, Cory! I'm going to win!” 12 year old
Andrea Carter shouted as she ran towards her brother Justin's office. She
rounded the corner and ran smack into a man.
“Hey! Watch where you're goin'!” he exclaimed angrily. Behind
her, her good friend Cory Blake skidded to a stop. “You'd better have a good
reason for running so fast in town!” the man said, grabbing Andi's arm.
“Let me go!” Andi said.
“Oh yeah? Why?”
“Because if you don't, Cory is going to make you!”
There was another man standing near the man who had hold of
Andi. He and the other man laughed. “That kid? What can he do?”
Andi felt Cory stiffen up next to her. “Listen mister, you had
better let go, before I call my brother.”
“I don't see anybody around here, gal. Who is your brother
anyway?”
“Justin Carter!”
“Carter, huh,” The man said, suddenly interested. “I've heard of
you Carter's. Your brother's pretty rich, huh?”
“What business of it is yours?” Andi asked. “And if you don't let
me go, I'm going to scream.”
“Let her go, mister,” Cory said, stepping up. “You act big and
brave, boy, but you're all talk.”
The other man grabbed Cory. “Ain't so brave now, eh, kid?” he
growled.
“Justin! Justin! Help!” Andi called, as she saw her brother
walking out of his office.
He saw Andi and hurried over. At the sight of him, the men
dropped Andi and Cory and hurried away.
“Andi, are you okay?” Justin asked. “What happened?”
Andi explained, then said, “I guess it was kind of my fault. It was
just some grumpy men. We're all right though, Justin. Really.”
“Are you sure, honey?”
“Yes, Justin. I'm fine.”
“Well, okay, then. Are you ready to go?”
Andi nodded and followed her brother to the buggy. “Bye Cory,”
she said. Cory waved as they drove off. When they arrived home, Andi changed
quickly from her school clothes into her overalls. Then she ran outside to go
riding. As she was walking towards the barn, her older brother Chad saw her.
Chad, in Andi's opinion, was mean and bossy some of the time. Most of the time.
“Andi, come here!” he snapped. Reluctantly, Andi obeyed. “Andi,
yesterday I told you to muck the stalls,” Chad said. “And you told me you would
do it later. And I go in the stalls this morning and find out, of course, that
you didn’t do them!”
Andi bit her lip. “Sorry, Chad,” she said, trying not to get
upset.
“Well then get to it. Now.”
Andi sighed long and loud, turning to do as her brother asked.
“And no complaining. You don't do near as many chores as you
should be doing, so I suggest you straighten up and do as I asked.”
“Chad, stop always bossing me around!” Andi said, whirling
around. “You're not in charge of me.”
“Actually, I am in charge while Mother and Melinda are away. So
you'd better get quick and muck those stalls.”
“But Justin's here. So he's in charge,” Andi retorted.
“Listen here, little sister,” Chad said, getting impatient. “I
am in charge of the ranch, and you know you would have to do it if Mother was
here.”
“Chad, seriously, leave me alone!”
“Fine. I will. If you go do the stalls.”
“Chad, why are you always so--”
Just then Justin came outside. “What's going on?” he asked.
“Andi claims you're in charge and she doesn't have to muck the
stalls, which she didn’t do yesterday.” Chad said to Justin grumpily.
Justin looked at his sister and raised an eyebrow. “Andi, you
should know when it comes to the ranch, Chad is the head of that. Now please go
and do as he asks, okay honey?”
Andi sighed. “Okay, Justin.” She walked towards the barn.
“Justin, you need to talk to her,” Chad said, watching her go. “Ever
since Mother left, she's begun to ignore her chores again, and she won't listen
to me at all.”
Justin frowned. “Well, I will if you want me to, Chad.”
“I do. You know she listens to you. Talk some sense into that
thick head of hers.”
“Chad!” Justin said sharply. “Calm down. I said I will talk to
her for you.
“Thanks, Justin,” Chad said. He then walked off.
*****
That evening after supper, Justin went upstairs and knocked on
Andi's door. He noticed she had barely said two words to Chad since that
afternoon's argument. “Andi? Can I come in?” Justin asked.
“Sure!” Andi said from inside.
Justin opened the door.
Andi was sitting on her bed. Justin came over and sat on the edge of the bed. “Honey,
I noticed today that you seem to not be doing your chores quite as well since
Mother and Melinda left. You're not doing your chores that you know you need to
be doing.”
Andi looked at her brother. “Did Chad tell you to come and talk
to me?”
Justin gently squeezed Andi's hand. “Whether he did or not
doesn't really matter. You need to start doing what you're asked. I know Chad
can seem bossy sometimes, but you still need to do your chores.”
Andi looked away. “I know, Justin. I'll try.”
Justin smiled. “I know you will. Good night, honey.” He squeezed
her hand again and then left.
“I know I need to do what Justin told me,” she said to herself, “But
Chad just makes me so mad sometimes!” She rolled over in bed and quickly fell
asleep.
A few hours later she woke with a start. She sat up and looked
around. She heard another noise. Then she got out of bed and went to her door,
opening it. She saw nothing as she looked down the hallway. All was quiet now.
She shrugged and climbed back into her own bed. Then, from outside, she heard
the noise again.
Peeking out of her window, Andi saw several dark forms moving
towards the barn. Andi dressed quickly, then snuck downstairs to check it out.
When she reached the barn, she began slowing down, trying to be quiet.
“Okay, so here's the plan, boys,” Andi heard a gruff voice say. “We
need to get her to--” his voice trailed off. “Shh, I hear something outside,”
he whispered to his men.
The three men walked slowly to the barn door. When the man saw
Andi walking towards the barn, he had an idea. A second later, his two men ran
out, past Andi, mounted their horses and rode away.
Startled, Andi ran into the barn. “Taffy?” She said. “You okay,
girl?” As she rounded the corner of the stalls, she saw a dark shape loom
before her. The figure swung something at her. Next thing she knew, Andi was
knocked out on the floor.
Part 2
Andi woke up with a throbbing pain in her head. She felt herself
bouncing up and down, but she couldn't see anything. She reached up to find out
why, and realized she couldn't move her hands, either. A minute later, the
horses stopped and Andi felt herself being pulled off the horse. She was
carried inside, and the blindfold fell off as she was tossed down onto the
floor.
She looked around and saw that she was in a small shack, but she
didn't know where it was. She also saw her captors, three big, muscular men. “Let
me go!” She cried, attempting to free herself.
The men laughed. “We'll girl, you ain't so brave now. Without
your big brother nearby to save you,” one man said.
“Wait a second,” Andi said. “I'd recognize you anywhere! Troy!”
He tipped his hat at her. “Yep, that's me. Good to see you
again, little sister.”
One of the other men smiled. “Can you even guess how much we'll
get for her?” he asked Troy. “Good thing I saw her yesterday and thought up
this idea!”
“Let's just get started on that note right away,” Troy said.
“You had better let me go!” Andi said. “My brothers will never
pay you anything!”
“I think they will, if they realize that if they don't, they'll
never see you again,” Troy said, grinning wickedly.
“Why you little--my brothers will so get you for this!”
“Sure they will,” Troy said sarcastically. “Roger, can't you
shut her up? I can't think straight with her talking.”
The man named Roger pulled Andi to her feet and dragged her
across the main room into a small, room in the back of the cabin. Although it
had just been getting light when they arrived, the room was dark with no
windows in it. “Now stay quiet, girl,” he said. “Or I'll have to make you.”
Andi fumed, but she stayed quiet. The door shut behind her. She
was left alone in the dark.
***
Meanwhile, back at the ranch, the brothers had discovered Andi
was not in the house. They went outside to look for her. “Where could she have
gone” Justin wondered aloud. “I’ll bet she ran off again,” Chad said in
disgust. “She was mad at me yesterday.”
Justin shook his head. “She wouldn’t do that. I’m sure she
remembers what happened last time.”
“Let’s check in the barn,” Mitch said. “And see if Taffy’s
there. I sent Sid and few of the men out looking for her.”
As they neared the barn, they saw fresh footprints and hoof
prints in the dirt.
“What’s this?” Justin asked. “It could’ve just been the men
getting their horses,” Chad said.
“Look, here’s some smaller prints. These look like Andi’s boot
prints,” Mitch said.
“And these hoof prints lead down the road, off the ranch,”
Justin said.
“I suppose we should follow them,” Chad said.
“You and Mitch go,” Justin said. “I’ll stay here and see if she
comes back.”
Chad shrugged. “Okay.” He and Mitch traipsed off to get their
horses saddled. They then mounted up and rode off in the direction of the
prints.
The tracks soon led off into the grass and ended. Chad and Mitch
were stuck, so they went back home, hoping Andi had returned. Bad news awaited
them. Andi had not come back. None of the men had seen Andi since the night
before, and couldn’t find her.
“If we can’t find her soon, we’ll have to send a wire and tell
Mother,” Mitch said. “Come on, Chad, we’d better keep searching.”
“Taffy’s still in her stall, though,” Justin said. “She wouldn’t
have left on her own without her.”
“Yeah,” Mitch agreed. “Well, we’ll keep looking.” He and Chad
left once again, determined to find their sister. But by the time night had
fallen, they had still not found her.
The three brothers sat inside, talking about what they should do
next, when they heard the sound of hoof beats outside. Suddenly, something was
thrown at a window, shattering it. Chad ran to the door and flung it open, but
the rider was already gone. He went back inside where Justin had picked up a
rock with a piece of paper tied around it.
“What is it, Justin?” Mitch asked.
Justin unfolded the note and read it. His face turned white. “It
says they have Andi, and they’re keeping her until we pay them.”
“What?” Chad demanded, “Who’s ‘they’?”
“I don’t know,” Justin replied. “It gives directions on how much
money and where to leave it. It also says they’ll be watching us when we go
give the money, and if we try to play any tricks on them, we’ll never see her
again.”
“Great. Just great,” said Chad.
“So what do we do?” Mitch asked.
“I guess we’ll just have to do as they ask,” Justin replied. “But
they asked for quite a bit.”
“Justin!” Chad stared at his brother. “You’re not serious! We
are not giving those dirty, low-down men anything. We’ll get Andi back some
other way.”
“I don’t know that we should risk it,” Mitch said.
“Like we’d pay that much!” Chad said. “This is ridiculous. And,
Mitch, we can easily outsmart them. I say we get word to the sheriff, get a
posse together, and we can follow whoever brings the bag of ‘money.’ Afterwards
we can nab the guy who takes it and make him tell us where she is.”
“It won’t be as simple as that, Chad,” Justin said. “For one, I’m
sure they will have someone watching whoever leaves the money, or the sheriff’s
office to make sure nobody goes in to tell him. Second of all, there will
probably more than one person watching the other collect the money, just in
case something like that does happen.”
“A few men won’t stop us, Justin,” Chad said.
Mitch shrugged. “I suppose it’s worth a shot. We can send
somebody with a note for Sheriff Tate.”
Justin sighed. “Well, I don’t know. I guess we could, but you
know, if it doesn’t work, Andi could end up...” His voice trailed off.
“Alright,” Chad said. “I'll send one of the men into town to
tell the sheriff. Which one of us should take the money?”
“I suppose I will,” Justin volunteered.
“Okay. Mitch and I can follow close behind you and the sheriff a
little ways behind. We’ll hide after you set the bag down and watch closely.”
With a nod of his head, Chad was out the door.
“Well, wherever Andi is, I sure hope she's doing okay,” Mitch
said.
****
Andi was still locked in the back room. To her relief, she had
been untied. She wanted to get back to the ranch so badly. She wanted to throw
her arms around Chad and tell him she was sorry. But she couldn't. Not until
her family gave their good money to buy her back. She heard the men say they
wanted the money quick, and if it wasn't delivered by tonight, she would never
see her family again.
She choked back a sob. She wanted so much to see her brothers
again. Why did trouble always seem to follow her around? She heard a door open.
“You and Roger go on to the spot. Stay there ‘til tonight, when
they’re supposed to bring the money. Make sure those sneaky Carters don't play
any tricks on us,” Andi heard Troy say.
There was a mumbled reply, and the door was shut.
For the rest of the day
Andi worried about what would happen. Would her brothers bring the money? Would
they try and trick the men? Would her brother in-law let her go? Finally,
exhausted, Andi fell into a fitful sleep.
She was woken a bit later by Troy. “C'mon, girl. Let's get
going.”
“What?” Andi asked.
“I'm taking you with us. We'll see if your brothers were smart
enough to give us the money,” Troy said. He yanked Andi up and tied her hands
and blindfolded her again. He then threw her over the horse and climbed on
behind her.
They rode a ways and stopped behind a few large bushes. “You see
that tree over there?” Troy said, yanking the blindfold off.
Andi didn’t answer.
“Well, that's where your brother is supposed to leave the money.”
He then fell silent. They waited as night fell. Then, they heard hoof beats
approaching. Andi gasped when she saw Justin ride up with a large bag.
Troy clapped a hand over her mouth.
Part 3
“Hush up!” he instructed in a whisper. Justin left the bag under
the tree, remounted his horse, and rode off.
“Well now, let's wait a few minutes, to make sure he's gone, and
see if he did as we asked.” Andi's outlaw brother in-law got up, and grasping
Andi firmly by the arm, made his way over to the tree.
Then they heard a thud from nearby. One of his men rode up a
minute later. “Boss! Back here! This guy was hiding back here, watching. Jim
hit him over the head and knocked him out.”
“You two take him then,
and bring him back to the hideout. I’ll be along in a bit.”
The two men dragged a still form out from behind the bushes. Andi
opened her mouth to cry out, “Justin!” but Troy quickly shut her up.
After the men dragged Justin off, Troy called to another man. “You
know what,” he said. “Take her and bring her back, too. She's been enough
trouble already. I can't risk her blowing our cover.”
The man nodded and grabbed Andi. He tossed her onto the back of
a horse, and they rode off, arriving soon at the hideout. Andi saw a wagon
driving up to the cabin also, but she was quickly pushed inside and untied,
then thrown into the back room once again.
A minute later the door opened again, and Justin was pushed into
the room. He was still unconscious. Andi crawled over to him. “Justin!” she
cried. “Justin, please wake up.” she begged her brother, gently shaking him.
Justin's eyes slowly opened. He groaned and looked up. “Andi! he
exclaimed, sitting up.
Andi threw her arms around her brother. “Justin! Are you okay?”
“I think so,” he said, rubbing his head. “What happened?”
Andi explained everything. “I'm sorry, Justin,” she finished.
“It's not your fault, honey,” Justin said, pulling her close and
hugging her again.
“But now what will we do?” Andi asked, looking worriedly into
her brother’s eyes.
“I'm sure Chad and Mitch and the sheriff will find us. Don't
worry about it. We'll be okay, honey,” Justin said. “For now, you just try and
get some sleep. I still feel a bit dizzy.”
Andi sighed and leaned her head against Justin's chest. With her
big brother there with her, she quickly fell asleep. Only a couple of hours
later, Andi was jolted awake as she heard yelling coming from outside. Andi
slid off Justin's lap. “What’s happening?” she asked.
Then they heard a yell. “Get your hands up! We’re coming in!?”
Andi gasped. It was Chad’s voice she heard.
The door to the room burst open, and Troy came in, shutting the
door behind him. “Great. Figures your nosy brother would come and butt in,” he
muttered to himself. He whirled on Andi and Justin. “And you two stay quiet!
You give away my hiding spot and, well . . .” He pulled his gun out of the
holster.
Andi shrank back behind Justin. She heard the door to the cabin
burst open, and someone came up to the door. The handle rattled, and Andi heard
a thud as the door was kicked by someone.
“I know you’re in there!” a voice said. “Come out before I have
to make you!”
Troy remained silent.
The door rattled again, and it suddenly came open. Troy stuck
the barrel of his gun out of the door. “Drop your guns!” he yelled at Chad. “And
you, stop what you’re doing,” he said to Mitch, who was busy trying to tie the
other men up. “I’ve got your brother and sister in here, and they’ll pay if you
don’t.”
With no choice, Chad and Mitch did as they were told. “Now get
over there,” Troy said, jerking his head towards the wall. He was still standing
in the doorway.
Andi suddenly had an idea. A risky idea. She got up, ignoring
Justin’s shaking of the head. She snuck up behind Troy and dived at him. She
hit him in the back of the legs, causing his knees to buckle, and he fell over,
pinning Andi to the ground.
After that, several things happened at once. Troy shouted. His
companions jumped forward. Chad reached for his gun. The sheriff and several deputies
busted into the room.
“Nobody move!” the sheriff roared.
Everyone froze. The deputies quickly started handcuffing all the
bad guys, and Chad and Mitch rushed over to Andi. Chad yanked Troy off of his
sister and pulled Andi to her feet. “You okay, little sister?” he asked.
Andi flung herself at Chad. “Chad! I’m so glad you’re here! I’m
so sorry about the other day. It was wrong of me.”
Chad laughed as he untangled Andi’s arms from around his neck.
“I forgive you,” he said. “I’m just glad you’re okay. Let’s go check on Justin,
now.”
They walked over to where Mitch was helping Justin stand. “Are
you okay?” Mitch asked Justin.
“Yeah, I’ll be fine,” Justin replied. “Just a little dizzy from
getting hit in the head earlier.”
The four siblings went outside and saw Troy and his companions
being loaded into a wagon. The sheriff motioned to the horses that stood
nearby. “You guys can ride on back home. I’ll check in with y’all tomorrow.”
As they climbed on the horses, Andi asked, “How did you find us,
anyway?”
“Well, the sheriff was delayed a bit, and so were we. We started
off a bit later than Justin, and by the time we got there, he had already been
discovered. We saw a man riding off and figured he had something to do with it.
We followed them and made it to the cabin. We didn’t know there were more men
than we could handle, but the sheriff showed up just in time. And now he can
put them where they properly belong--in jail.”
The next day as Andi led Taffy out of the stables to go riding,
Justin rode in from town.
“Well?” Mitch asked.
“They're in jail,” Justin said. “Troy was finally captured, thanks
to Andi.”
“But I didn't much to help,” Andi said.
“Andi, if it hadn’t been for you knocking Troy over, it most
likely wouldn’t have ended well,” Chad said.
Andi grinned. “I'm just so glad to be back, I would do anything
for y'all.”
“Good! Then how about starting on mucking the stalls?” Chad said
with a smile playing on his lips.
Andi groaned, and they all laughed.
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