Twelve year old
Andi Carter pulled the last button through her overalls before walking over to
the wooden chest. She pried the lid open then searched for the little bag. Where did it go? Andi wonderd. Ah ha!
She reached in
the chest and pulled out a fist-sized drawstring bag. She slowly opened it and
found a crisp one dollar bill. She quickly removed the bill and placed it in
her back pocket before closing the chest and sprawling herself out on the
nearby bed. Andi stared up at the ceiling covered in complex designs. My Aunt Rebecca really is rich. Andi
decided. She rolled over on the bed and stared at the door across the room.
“How long has
Jenny been in there?” Andi muttered under her breath. She stood up and started
to pace back and forth past the trunk. She stormed over to the bathroom door
and slammed her knuckle against the wood. “Hurry up Jenny!” Andi shouted. “The
board meeting will be over soon. And if Aunt Rebecca finds us, well...”
“Would you quit
yodelin’ like a hound dog! You’ll wake Hannah'' Jenny responded through the
hard wood door. “I’ll be out soon enough.” Soon
enough! Jenny’s been in there forever. Andi mentally whined. Andi turned
around to see Levi standing, arms crossed, with his hat on his head.
“Hurry up
already!” Levi hissed. “Aunt Rebecca left the meeting early.” Levi turned,
walked out of the room, and slowly shut the hall door behind him. Andi hurried
across the room and shoved the window open. The chilling winter breeze made
Andi shiver. She heard the bathroom door creak. As if on cue, Jenny strolled
through the door way decked out in bright blue overalls and a dark brown sun
hat.
“Doesn’t it feel
so wonderful to finally wear real clothes again!” Jenny giggled.
“Hurry up you
slowpoke!” Andi taunted. “Aunt Rebecca’s already home.” Andi threw a hurried
glance out the window before returning her gaze to Jenny. “It’s awfully windy.
So please be careful on the landing.”
Andi tried to
sound as patient as possible. Jenny hurried through the window and on to the
skinny tree branch. “Hurry up.” Andi prodded. “I promised Juan Carlos we would
meet him in 5 minutes.”
Jenny scurried
across the branch as if she were a squirrel running from a hawk. Andi watched
Jenny slide down the base of the tree and land feet first on the ground below.
Andi shivered and braced herself for the adventure to come. She hesitantly
crawled through the white painted window frame before crouching down and
grabbing the branch below her feet. Andi held on to the branch with all her
might as she crawled to the center of the tree.
“Hurry up
already would ya?” Jenny shouted impatiently from below.
“Be quiet.” Andi
hissed. “We’ve gotten too far for Aunt Rebecca to find us now.” Andi continued
to mosey her way down the tree. Right foot down, then the left. One branch at a
time, Andi crept down the tree. Once Andi brought herself to the last limb, she
took a deep breath, stood up and grabbed at the tree trunk to slide down. Slap!
Andi’s face slammed into the tough Oak bark. Andi pulled her legs away from the
tree and pushed out with her hands. Whoosh, she flew through the air holding
her breath. She hit the ground with a thud where an impatient Jenny waited.
“Bout time you
got down here.” Jenny complained as she rushed out of the yard. Andi brushed
herself off and ran after Jenny. They raced down the street, zigzagging to
avoid street cars and horse drawn carriages. By the time they reached Trails
End park, both Jenny and Andi were out of breath. Andi rushed past the huge
sign that said “Trails End Park”. Once she reached the sand Andi collapsed out
of breath.
“We made it!”
Andi sighed. Jenny rushed over and plopped down in the sand beside her.
“And not a
moment too soon.” She added. Andi took a deep breath inhaling the salty ocean
air. She glanced out at the ocean and grimaced. Andi didn’t hate many things,
but one thing she did hate was water. She wanted nothing to do with it. She
glanced up on the tall cliff. There sat the cliff house. Jenny followed Andi’s
gaze till she as well found the cliff house. “Is that a castle?” Jenny
inquired.
“No,” Andi
laughed, “That’s a restaurant called the Cliff House.”
“You’ve been
there?!”
“Yeah. 3 years
ago when I came to San Francisco to avoid the outbreak of scarlet fever.” Andi
recalled, “You wouldn’t much like it. Everyone wears their Sunday best. But
they serve the most amazing food.”
“Good ladies,
would you care for a shoe shine?” Andi turned around. The young blond haired
boy stared back at her. Where did he come
from? He wasn’t there a second ago. Huh, weird.
“I think I’m fine.”
Jenny replied.
Andi stood up to
face the boy. “I think I’m fine too. But thank you.” The young boy looked down
disappointed. He then turned and walked away. Andi turned her attention back to
the sea lions resting on the rocks. Jenny turned her head this way and that
searching for Juan Carlos. Andi asked, “Where is Juan Carlos? He should be here
by now.”
“Are you sure
the meeting date was today?” Jenny questioned.
“I’m confident!”
Andi glanced over at the horizon. Where
is he? He promised he would take us riding.
“There he is!”
Jenny yelped. Andi’s gaze shot toward Juan Carlos. She jumped up and began
running to the young spanish boy.
“Juan Carlos,”
Andi shouted in Spanish. She and Jenny reached the boy. “It’s good to see you Señor.”
“You as well señorita!” Juan Carlos replied in
spanish. “My apologies for being late, Penny and Big Red were not cooperando.”
“Cuales horse can I ride?” Jenny asked
Juan Carlos.
“Penny, señorita.” Jenny ran to the
copper-colored mare and began stroking her side. Juan Carlos handed Big Red’s
reins to Andi. “aquí está, señorita.”
Juan Carlos walked over to his golden Mare.
“The beach is
beautiful today.” Andi commented in spanish as she hopped on to Big Red’s bare
back. “Shall we race?”
“Sí.” Jenny responded.
“¡Por favor!” Jaun Carlos drove his boots
into the side of his horse. He raced down the beach.
“Wait up.” Jenny
shouted in spanish. She turned her attention to Andi. “You ready?”
“Missee not go.”
Andi jerked her head around to see Feng Chee sitting atop his black bay horse
glaring back at her.
“Ahh!” Andi
shouted. She and Jenny slammed their heels into their horses. They raced down
the beach.
Feng Chee jabbed
his horse causing the horse to charge after the girls. “Missee take Lin Mei.
Missee die now. Missee white devil” Feng Chee yelled.
“Juan Carlos!”
Andi screached. They zoomed down the beach avoiding rocks and the freezing
ocean water. Andi glanced back at Feng Chee.
He glared at her
yelling “Missee give me Lin Mei.”
“No! Never!”
Jenny wailed.
Then Andi shot a
worried glance at Jenny. “How did he find us?” Andi asked.
“What do we do?”
Jenny panicked. Andi’s hat flew off hitting the water with a splash. She eyed
the sun hat floating in the water to her left. She shivered as waves struck the
rock to her left. Splashing hundreds of water droplets on Andi’s soaked
overalls.
“Ayudanos,
Juan Carlos!” Andi yelled. Andi watched Juan Carlos race down the beach
oblivious to the catastrophe behind him. Andi turned around to see Feng Chee
maneuvering his pistol from his saddle bag. “Jenny!” Andi yelled in distress.
“Feng Chee is armed!” Andi turned back to the beach in front of her.
“Oh no!” Jenny
looked up at the sky, “a storm’s a coming.”
“Juan Carlos!”
Feng Chee cocked his pistol. “Juan Carlos!” Andi screamed. It was too late.
Feng Chee pulled the trigger. The bullet shot right between the two girls. Juan
Carlos pulled his horse to a stop at the sound. He turned around in time to see
Feng Chee shoot another shot.
“No, no él,” he thought aloud. Juan
Carlos spurred his horse then turned him around and galloped straight at the
coming riders.
*****
Three days
earlier, Andi sat next to the crackling fireplace in Aunt Rebecca’s mansion.
“My it’s chilly outside.”
“Slow down
Andrea. Proper ladies never rush their speech,” Aunt Rebecca scolded. Andi
groaned inside. How long will this take? “Andrea
I must leave for a meeting at the academy.” YES!
Finally our one sided conversation is over. “Now while I am gone there will
be no romping around the yard or climbing trees,” Aunt Rebecca stood up, “and
you are to behave as a proper young lady.”
“Yes ma'am.”
Andi mumbled.
“Very well then,
Thomas has the coach waiting outside. Farewell!” Aunt Rebecca pranced over to
the door which Thomas had opened and stepped out into the beautiful winter
evening. Andi jumped up and raced up the stairs to her bed room. She opened the
door then shut it behind her. Everything
is just perfect!
“Jenny,” Andi called quietly, “Jenny.” And
just then Jenny shot out from under the bed.
“So what did
Justin say?” asked Jenny dusting the cobwebs off her dress.
“Yes!” Andi
giggled. “Justin agreed to let us go riding!”
“Victory!” Jenny
shouted. “Now we just have to get Juan Carlos to agree.”
“Oh that’ll be
easy.” Andi laughed, “He offered to take me before.” The two girls giggled and
raced out of the room.
*****
“NO!” Juan Carlos turned away from the
two girls. “Señor Hunter has
recovered his memory of what happened the night I hit him. He has declared I
ought to avoid you or else.” Juan Carlos finished his spiel in Spanish and
turned back to cleaning a horse’s stall.
“¿Por favor?” Andi pleaded. “You promised
you would take me.”
“No, señorita,” Juan Carlos turned back
to Andi and Jenny. “I never promised. I mentioned it would be my pleasure but
never promised.”
“This is easy
huh?” Jenny mumbled to Andi.
“Señor Hunter believes you hit him. That
is the only reason I am still permitted to work here.” Juan Carlos stated in
Spanish.
“Juan Carlos,”
Andi pleaded in spanish, ”Just once.
When you don’t have to work.”
“Señor Hunter
will expect me back soon. I ought to find him.”
“Juan Carlos,
please ask him if you can have this weekend off. ¿Por favor?” Juan Carlos turned and rushed out of the barn.
“So easy,” Jenny
commented.
“I need to
hurry, Aunt Rebecca will be back soon,” Andi glanced at Jenny, “and you should
hurry back inside the academy before Miss Whitaker finds out you escaped.”
“I don’t care
about some silly disgrace marks.” Jenny blurted.
“But your mother
does.” Andi strolled out of the barn with Jenny close behind.
“Yeah I guess
you're right. Well I’ll see you tomorrow. And don’t forget we have a French
test.”
“Great,” Andi
mumbled. Jenny dashed over to the kitchen door. The new cook didn’t mind Jenny
and Andi coming in and out of the Academy's back door, which happens to lead
through the kitchen. Jenny slipped inside the Academy leaving Andi all alone in
the chilly winter evening.
After Andi
arrived home, she headed up to her bedroom. She slipped out of her school dress
and into her nightgown. Before she crawled in her bed, Andi knelt down beside her bed and prayed. Dear God, please help Juan Carlos change his
mind. I understand I’m being greedy but I really want to go riding. Oh and also
please keep Lin Mei and Kum Ju. Please help them to learn more about you while
in the mission. Please help Mother not worry about me. Thank you for Jenny and
Levi, Hannah, and Besty. Amen.
Andi stood up,
pulled back the pink covers, and slipped into her soft cozy bed. She laid there
staring up at the textured ceiling. What
happened to Juan Carlos? He seemed like a totally different person tonight. So
I thought my plan would work, but I guess not. I wonder what happened to Feng
Chee. Did he hop on a boat bound for…
Knock, knock,
knock.
Andi rolled over
under the pink covers.
Knock, knock,
knock.
Andi shot up out
of her bed. She walked over to the door. She twisted the knob and the door creaked
open. The hall was empty.
Knock, knock,
knock.
Andi heard the
sound again. “Where is that noise coming from?” Andi wondered aloud.
“Andi,” she
heard a muffled voice whisper. “Andi, over here,” the voice whispered in
spanish again. Andi’s head snapped toward the trunk sitting in front of the
window. She tip-toed over to the trunk. She lifted the lid and searched the
trunk. But all Andi found were clothes and her money pouch. Knock, knock,
knock. Andi dropped the lid of the trunk and stared at the window. Staring back
at her were a pair of dark brown eyes. “Juan Carlos?” Andi wondered aloud.
“Soy yo.” Juan Carlos nodded through the
window.
“Oh my
goodness!” Andi exclaimed. She reached over and shoved open the window. “Juan
Carlos, how did you get up here?” Andi asked in Spanish.
“Well,” Juan
Carlos continued in his native language. “I crawled across the yard. And then
climbed up this tree to your window.”
“What made you
go through all that trouble Señor?”
Andi questioned as they continued their Spanish conversation.
“I’m very
sorry,” Juan Carlos continued, “for the way I treated you and Jenny tonight.
After you left, I found Señor Hunter
and asked him if he would let me ride on the beach.”
“¿Y qué te dijo?” Andi giggled.
“He allowed me
to borrow Penny, Big Red, and Copper with me, 3 o’clock this Saturday!” Juan
Carlos replied in spanish.
Thank
you God! Andi prayed.
“Andrea?” Aunt
Rebecca’s shrill voice filled the hall.
“You better
hurry,” Andi prompted in Spanish, “I expect to see you Saturday.”
“Tú también, señorita.” Andi hurried to
shut the window as Juan Carlos scurried down the tree. Andi snuck over to her
bed and slipped under the covers just as Aunt Rebecca opened the wooden door.
*****
The rain started
to pour as the horses galloped down the rocky beach. Feng Chee cocked his
pistol. Pow. The bullet whizzed straight past Jenny and Andi. “It’s all right,
calm down girl.” Andi coaxed her horse. God
please keep up safe. She prayed.
BOOM. Lightning
struck again, sending Andi’s horse dashing even faster down the beach. Pow.
Another bullet sped past Andi. Big Red bucked his front legs terrified by the
bullet. “Woah, calm down girl.” Andi managed to coax the mare back into a solid
gallop.
“Señorita!” Juan Carlos shouted. Pow.
Another bullet whizzed past the girls.
“Feng Chee
doesn’t have such good aim.” Jenny commented.
“Missee wrong.”
Feng Chee shouted from behind. “Feng Chee sharp shooter.” Feng Chee cocked his
pistol, and aimed it right at Jenny. Pow. The bullet flew through the air and,
just as Feng Chee hoped, and struck Jenny directly in the back. Jenny flew off
her horse crying out in pain.
“Jenny!” Andi
screamed. Jenny’s horse stopped confused by the loss of her rider. Jenny landed
on the sand crying out in pain. “Woah,” Andi attempted to pull her horse to a
stop. Instead of stopping, Big Red kicked his front hooves sky high, sending
Andi flying through the air. Splash! Andi hit the freezing water. She paddled
frantically but it was no use. The outgoing tide swept her farther and farther
away from the shore and Jenny.
*****
“Andrea Carter!” Aunt Rebecca scolded. She
flung open the door to Andi’s room. “Andrea?’ She called. Young Besty ran down
the hall before flinging herself at her aunt. “Good heavens child!” Aunt
Rebecca scolded.
“Andi’s at the
beach,” Besty confessed.
“Besty!” Levi
growled. “You promised Andi not to tell!”
“Sorry,” Besty
crawled out of the hall.
“The beach?”
Levi stomped toward Aunt Rebecca.
“Yes Auntie.”
“You are to
address me as Aunt, and nothing else.”
“Yes Aunt. She
and Jenny are riding with a friend.”
“Riding, as in
horse back riding, on the beach?” asked Aunt Rebecca bewildered.
“Yes Aunt. She
left an hour ago.”
“I have a
feeling she didn’t even put on her riding clothes,” Aunt Rebecca pivoted and
hurried down the long hall.
“She put on some
riding clothes,” Levi yodeled down the hall.
“Just not the ones you gave her,” he mumbled to himself. Levi rushed
into Andi’s room. He slid across the floor to the large trunk. He stood up and
shoved the window open. He rushed out onto the tree branch. Levi then jumped to
the grassy lawn below.
“Thomas!” Aunt
Rebecca’s shrill voice shreaked. “Fetch the horse and buggy. We’re headed to
the beach.”
*****
Splash! Another
wave slammed into Andi’s freezing face. She gasped for air, while paddling
frantically yet worthlessly, attempting to keep her body above the
surface. Andi struggled to yelp
“H-h-help.” Another wave filled her mouth with salty water. The sky above was
filled with lightning as thunder rolled. Great,
Andi thought. This is just the place
I want to be during a storm. I need to get out. But how?
*****
Clip clop, clip
clop. The horses' hoofs clopped in rhythm pulling Aunt Rebecca closer to Land’s
End. “Oh Andrea,” Aunt Rebecca mumbled
to herself, “what have you gotten
yourself into now?”
*****
“Oh,” Jenny
groaned in pain. “Help, help.” She sighed and rolled over. Her back and chest
ached. “Oh,” She groaned again.
“Señorita Jenny!” Juan Carlos leapt off
copper and dashed to Jenny’s side. “Señorita,
what happened?”
“F-f-f eng
Chee,” Jenny stumbled in her broken Spanish. “S-shot m-m-me.”
“Ese hombre horrible.” Juan Carlos
muttered under his breath. “Here,” He continued in Spanish. “Lay back against
this rock.” Juan Carlos struggled to rest Jenny up against the nearby rock. “Señorita Andi?” Juan Carlos called.
There was no answer.
“She, she, she,
fell into el océano.” Jenny stumbled.
Juan Carlos let
out a muffled gasp. “Vamos, vamos, find
her.”
“Descansa aquí,” Juan Carlos replied.
“I’ll go find her.”
“Espere,” Jenny warned, “Feng Chee
disappeared.”
“Si,” Juan Carlos flung himself on
Copper’s back and the horse galloped down the beach. “Señorita Andi,” Juan Carlos shouted. He searched the water. But all
he found was rocks, and seals.
Crash! Andi
watched as the lightning filled the sky. Splash. A wave crashed into Andi’s
face, filling her mouth with freezing salty water. “H-h-help!” she wailed. But
there was no answer. “I need to swim to shore,” she thought to herself. But how? I’ve never learned to swim.
“Andi!” she
heard a voice shout. Andi turned toward the shore. “Andi!” The voice yodeled
again.
“Levi!” Andi
spotted her cousin waving frantically from the shore, “Help!” she shouted.
“Hold on!” Levi
yanked off his shoes and threw himself into the freezing wake.
*****
“Woah,” Thomas
yanked back on the reins pulling the horse to an abrupt stop.
“Thank you
Thomas,” Aunt Rebecca stepped out of the carriage and on to the squishy sand.
She hurried past the “Land's End” sign and raced down the beach.
*****
Levi kicked his
arms and legs with all his might. Struggling to reach Andi. Now Andi, Swim NOW. Andi propelled
herself away from the rock and towards Levi. Slowly the two became closer
together.
*****
The waves struck
the rocks with such force soaking Jenny in freezing water. “I’m so tired,” she
muttered to herself. She laid her head down and fell asleep.
“Andi!” Juan
Carlos sped down the beach frantically searching for his lost Amiga. “Andi!” he shouted again. Copper
raced down the beach oblivious to the thunder and lightning above.
*****
Feng Chee slowly
closed the door to the wooden shack. “American missee dead?” the deep Chinese
voice asked.
“Soon,” came
Feng Chee’s reply.
“Why not dead?”
the voice spoke again.
“White Devils
strong.”
“White Devils
die.”
“White devil
sinking in ocean.”
“Other White
Devil?”
“Missee shot.”
“Good,” the
voice replied, “next task, find the slaves.”
“Len Mei, Kum
Ju, gone.”
“No, still in
town. Go!” The voice harshened.
“No Len Mei.”
“YES!” The voice
yelled. “GO!” Feng Chee turned and exited the hut.
*****
Splash! As Levi
gasped for air, the wave crashed sending a spew of salty water into his mouth.
He and Andi were merely feet apart. “Andi!” He shouted. Levi kicked his legs.
Bringing him closer to Andi. Andi swam harder, paddling with all her might. As
they came closer, Levi reached out his hand. Crash! The thunder rolled. Splash!
The waves crashed frantically. The two came closer. Boom! Lightning struck.
They inched closer. Bang! A gunshot rang in the distance. Levi stretched out
and barely clasp Andi’s shivering hand.
*****
Feng Chee
hustled down the dark alley. The gun shot had made the perfect diversion. He
hurried through Chinatown’s dark and eerie streets. “Where mission home?” Feng
Chee wondered aloud. He turned left before creeping down another alley that
ended leading out to the mission home.
*****
Boom! Thunder
rolled over head. “Hold my shoulders,” Levi instructed.
Andi grasped the
boy's shoulders as he started to swim. Levi slowly made his way through the
sloshing waves and penetrating rocks. As the shore came closer and closer in
sight, the waves became stronger and the rocks closer.
Crash! Lightning
struck as Levi carefully maneuvered his way through the dangerous water. To
Andi, the shore still seemed forever away.
Levi brought his
head up from the water, gasping for air. He splashed his head back under the
water and pushed on through the final stretch of water.
Splash! The
water struck the rocks as Levi stood up - his waist still below the water. He
assisted Andi, limping onto the wet sandy beach. Once the two arrived, Andi
collapsed into the sand. “Help!” Levi yelled. “Help!” Levi searched around
frantically. “Aunt Rebecca, Help!” He ran a few feet and yelled again.
Aunt Rebecca
shifted her glance at the mention of her name. She spotted Levi and started
running. The rain was pouring by the time Aunt Rebecca reached them. Aunt
Rebecca fell on her knees beside Andi, “Oh good heavens child.”
“She fell in the
ocean,” Levi stated.
“She needs a
doctor, Levi,” Aunt Rebecca commanded, “find Thomas and command him to help get
Andi to Dr. Wilcox.”
“Yes ma'am!”
Levi dashed down the beach.
“Talk to me
Andrea,” Aunt Rebecca shook Andi’s shoulders. Andi groaned and rolled over.
“Talk to me child,” Aunt Rebecca pleaded.
“Jenny,” Andi
groaned. “Jenny got shot.”
Aunt Rebecca
gasped, “Where is she?”
“In, in the
sand,” Andi closed her eyes.
“Stay awake,”
Aunt Rebecca shook Andi again.
“Go find Jenny,”
Andi groaned.
Aunt Rebecca
stood and started pacing the beach searching for Jenny. “Where is that child?”
She eyed a rock in the distance. “Is that? No, it couldn’t be.” She picked up
her skirt and ran with all her might toward the rock. She fell on the wet sand
beside Jenny. Jenny lay there motionless. “Oh Lord, help her,” Aunt Rebecca
prayed. She raced back to Andi and lifted her up. Struggling to carry Andi she
dashed down the beach. When they arrived at the rock, Aunt Rebecca laid Andi
down in the sand beside Jenny.
*****
Levi hurried
down the beach soaked to the bone and shivering. He fell face first in the sand
exhausted. Determined to save his cousin he pushed himself onto his feet and
forced his legs to keep running. When he arrived at the “Trails End” sign he
skidded to a stop beside Aunt Rebecca’s carriage. “Thomas!” He panted out of
breath. “Auntie says to help get the children to Dr. Wilcox.”
Thomas jumped out of the carriage. “Yes sir.” Thomas
unbridled one of the horses before jumping up and riding down the gloomy
beach.
Levi climbed in
the carriage and collapsed against one of the walls. He watched the beach out
the front of the carriage. He discovered a small speck riding down the
beach. “Señorita Andi?” he heard the rider shout. Levi bolted out of the
carriage and started waving frantically. The rider seemed to notice and turned
his horse toward Levi. When the rider arrived Levi identified him to be Juan
Carlos, one of Andi’s friends from school. “Señor
Carter.” Juan Carlos greeted in spanish. “Help, Señorita Andi’s gone missing.”
“No,” Levi assured the boy in Spanish.
“She’s safe.”
“Feng Chee,”
Juan Carlos muttered to himself. “Bad man got away.” He attempted to pronounce
in English.
“Where did he
escape to?” Levi questioned in Spanish.
“I do not know.
Chinatown maybe. But I do not know.”
“That’s a place
to start.” Levi quickly unbridled the other buggy horse and hopped on his back.
“To chinatown!” The two galloped through the dreary city searching for the
‘sharp shooter’ Feng Chee. “Should we
check his home?” Levi asked in Spanish.
“I doubt he
would be there,” Juan Carlos replied in his native language.
“¿donde entonces?” Levi asked.
“The mission
home,” Juan Carlos replied. The two turned their horses and galloped at full
speed down the Chinatown street. They made another turn and galloped with the
mission home in sight.
Feng Chee snuck
across the street to the mission home. “Len Mei mine now,” he chuckled to
himself.
“Not so fast!” a
voice stated from behind him.
Feng Chee turned
to see two sets of eyes glaring back at him. “White Devils!” Feng Chee shot
away from the mission home swerving this way and that, attempting to lose his
persistent followers. Feng Chee contemplated what to do. “The shack,” he
decided. He made a sudden turn and raced toward the small shack at the end of
the street.
“What do we do
when we catch him?” Levi asked Juan Carlos.
“Steal his gun I
guess,” Juan Carlos replied in Spanish. Feng Chee slid to a stop in front of
the shack, swung open the door and stepped inside. The door slammed behind him.
“Great!” Levi
complained in Spanish, “now he’s inside that shack.”
“Why are you esperando?” Juan Carlos asked.
“I’m not going
in there,” Levi replied confidently. Juan Carlos hopped off his horse and strutted
toward the shack. “Fine,” Levi grumbled. He slipped off the horse and joined
Juan Carlos. Juan Carlos walked up to the shack and slammed his boot into the
door causing it to swing open. “What do we do now?” Levi whispered.
Juan Carlos
slowly stepped through the doorway. Click. Feng Chee cocked his pistol. Juan
Carlos glanced down and noticed the shack was stuffed with random objects. He
slowly reached down and picked up a medal bar lying next to him. Juan Carlos
slowly advanced forward keeping the bar in his grasp. He continued shuffling
until Feng Chee was in sight. Feng Chee lifted his pistol, the barrel pointed
at Juan Carlos. Before Feng Chee could pull the trigger, Juan Carlos had
knocked both the pistol and Feng Chee to the ground with his metal weapon.
“White Devil
die.”
“I don’t think
so,” Levi entered, also armed with a metal bar. Feng Chee shrunk at the sight.
Juan Carlos quickly reached down and grasped Feng Chee’s pistol. He pointed the
gun at Feng Chee.
“What you do to
Len Mei?“ Juan Carlos attempted to speak in English.
“No, not touch
Len Mei. Len Mei fine.”
“How come I
don’t believe you?”
“You should
gentlemen.” Both boys' eyes shot towards the voice.
“Who is that?”
Levi whispered in Spanish.
“You know me
don’t you Juan Carlos,” the woman taunted. Click. She held the pistol pointed
at the awestruck pair. “Drop you weapons,” the voice harshened. Juan Carlos and
Levi dropped their weapons. They crashed on the floor with a clank.
Feng Chee stared
in disbelief. “You the voice?”
“Yes Feng Chee,”
the woman stared at Feng Chee. “I am your leader.”
“De ninguna manera,” Juan Carlos
breathed.
“Surprised to
see me Juan Carlos?” the woman taunted.
“But how can
this be?” Juan Carlos muttered in Spanish.
“Who is she?”
Levi whispered.
“Huh,” the woman
started. “I thought your Aunt would have told you about me. Well, she wasn’t
the most fond of me.” The woman clicked her tongue. “Never fear,” the woman
stepped out of the shadow revealing her face, “I am Miss Whitaker.” At those
words, both Juan Carlos and Levi almost fainted.
*****
Thomas quickly rushed down the street towards the doctor’s
office. “My Miss Carter, you are quite heavy.” He quickly rounded the corner
and kept running, attempting to balance Andi and continue running at the same
time.
“Aren't you glad
Aunt Rebecca wasn’t around to hear you say that?”
Thomas kept
running. “She insisted on staying in the
doctor's office with that friend of yours after they escaped the gloom of the
beach riding the buggy horse.” Thomas puffed. “Aunt has worried herself sick
about Jenny.” Thomas came to a large wooden door, noticing Aunt Rebecca’s buggy
horse parked to its right.
When he kicked
the door, a nurse in all white quickly escorted them in. Thomas set Andi down
and collapsed in a chair out of breath. “Follow me,” the nurse instructed. Andi
followed after the nurse, who led her into the room where Jenny was laying.
Along one wall, sat Aunt Rebecca and in the middle was the table on which Jenny
laid, beside Jenny was Dr. Wilcox.
“Doctor,” Andi
asked, “will Jenny be okay?”
Dr. Wilcox
turned to Andi with a giant smile covering his face, “Your friend is going to
be just fine.” The doctor turned back to Jenny. “Thankfully the bullet only
grazed the skin and didn’t do much damage. After a few weeks of rest and
relaxation your friend will be back to normal.”
Thank
you God! Andi prayed.
“Now for you
young lady,” The doctor turned back to Andi. “I heard you had quite the swim.”
*****
“What are you
going to do with us?” Levi questioned. He and Juan Carlos were tied back to
back in the middle of the shack. Miss Whitaker glanced over at the pathetic
seeming children.
“That is for me
to know and for you to find out. Feng Chee if you please,” she motioned to the
door. Feng Chee hurriedly exited the premises smiling evilly.
“Why did you try
to kill us?” Juan Carlos asked in Spanish.
“After you and
your little friends spoiled my plan…”
“What plan?”
Levi questioned.
“Be patient
Levi,” The woman scolded. “Young gentlemen never interrupt. After you and your
little friends spoiled my plan…”
“Could you just
tell us the plan?” Levi interrupted.
Miss Whitaker
stood and glared down at Levi. “The plan to accumulate some cash.”
“How?” Juan
Carlos wondered.
“Slaves,” came
the answer. “The academy was not filling my bank account as full as I hoped.
Your friends were on their way to China. FOREVER! But then they escaped from
Feng Chee’s grip and escaped with the other slave girls.”
“Man she’s a
good actor,” Levi muttered under his breath.
“I can’t afford
having any witnesses. When Feng Chee returns, you two will both get what you
deserve.”
“You’re loco,” Juan Carlos uttered.
“No, no Juan
Carlos, I’m not.”
“Yes you are,”
Levi yelled.
“Oh you little
rascals. I hoped I wouldn’t have to do this. I hoped you would be quiet on your
own. But I must fetch the gags.” The woman turned, then walked until she was
swallowed up by the shadows.
“What do we do
now?” Levi questioned.
“Nothing.” Juan
Carlos replied.
“Ah ha!” They
heard the woman giggle, “here they are.”
Both boys’ eyes
were fixed on the woman as she emerged out of the shadows, two bandanas in her
hands. “Nobody move!” they heard a voice from outside shout. “We are the
police. You are surrounded.”
The woman
screeched and disappeared back into the shadows. Crack! The door fell off the
hinges. Three police officers emerged fully armed. “Over here!” Levi shouted.
One of the officers quickly pulled out a knife and cut the hostages free. Levi
and Juan Carlos hopped up and dashed out of the building. A squad of officers
awaited them. “How did you find us?” Levi asked one of the older officers.
“He brought us,”
the officer pointed. Both boys gazed down the man's finger to find Feng Chee
standing timidly smiling at them.
“Feng Chee?”
“Yes son,” the
police officer continued. “He turned himself in, and brought us here saying we
would find an awful woman.” Just as the officer finished they heard Miss
Whitaker screech and a deep voice proclaiming, “You're under arrest.”
Levi strutted to
where Feng Chee stood. “Why did you lead them here?” He asked.
“Because,” Feng
Chee responded, “White devil who take my job, not need to live.”
Levi turned and
struggled to hold back his laughter. “Officer,” Levi requested. “Would you mind
escorting us to Dr. Wilcox’s office?”
“It would be my
pleasure,” came the reply.
*****
Levi and Juan
Carlos hurried in the room to find Jenny sitting and talking to a smiling Andi.
“She’s safe!” Juan Carlos rejoiced in Spanish.
Levi and Juan
Carlos dashed beside the bed. “Hi boys.” Jenny greeted. “Where did you go?”
“All I can say
is justice has been done!” Levi replied.
Thank
you God! Andi prayed. You saved Jenny and I, you kept Juan Carlos safe. Thank you! You
brought justice to Feng Chee, and brought Levi and Juan Carlos back safe. Thank
you God! Andi turned her attention back to Jenny.
“Oh I’m so glad
you're all safe!” Aunt Rebecca pulled out a handkerchief and wiped her tear
filled eyes. Knock, knock. All the heads turned to see Dr. Wilcox stroll in the
quite crowded room.
“I’m glad to
join the happy reunion,” he smiled. Dr. Wilcox maneuvered himself beside the
bed then glanced down at Jenny. “You are one lucky girl,” the doctor commented.
“No sir,” Jenny
corrected, “not lucky, blessed.”
The End
Amazing story!!!!
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Super creative. Keep writing! 😊
ReplyDelete-Claire
So good!
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ReplyDeleteAmazing story - love the continuation of the Spanish and how all of their personalities stay the same from the book. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteGreat story - a fun twist with Mrs Whitaker being undercover - you did a great job keeping the character's personas from the book
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