By Caitlyn B.
Andi reached over for
Taffy’s brush and began brushing Taffy, “Ya know Taffy, we had a swell ride
yesterday.” Andi leaned on Taffy and whispered, “Hey Taffy, let’s go for a
ride.”
“What about school?”
Chad said as he leaned on the barn door and shook his head.
“Oh! Hey Chad, didn’t
know you were there.” Andi ran inside.
“Andrea!” her mother
yelled. Elizabeth Carter frowned and said, “Andrea Carter, you know better,
come and eat your breakfast!”
Breakfast? The only breakfast I need is a
mouthful of fresh country air, thought Andi.
“Sorry Mother, I need to go!” Andi went to her room, closed her door, got her
dress and pinafore on and slid down the banister railing.
Andi had been itching
to ride. She saddled Taffy and galloped far and fast.
“Hey! Wait up!” Cory’s shirt and pants were
rumbled and dark with sweat as usual. Streaming sweat beaded down his forehead,
“Mind if I ride along with you?”
“Yeah sure,” Andi
responded.
“Great!” said Cory
and ran into his barn. A minute later he came with his horse. “Come on, Andi!”
“Hey, have you heard
the news?” asked Cory.
“No, what news?” said
Andi.
“Well, word has it
that there’s a criminal on the loose, hangin’ around here, probably hidin’
out.”
“I don’t believe
that, people like to make up stuff. By the way, have you seen Sadie lately?”
asked Andi.
“No, maybe she’ll be
at school today,” said Chad.
Andi raced to
class. Mr. Folester took out the ruler, “two strokes for being late!”
Andi’s hand stung while she sat at her desk.
“Mr. Blake, rise and
pass to the front, six strokes of the switch!”
Cory went to his desk and scribbled out,
“Sorry Andi didn’t mean to hold you up.”
Andi turned around
and smiled. Cory smiled back.
“Romans 3:23,” Mr.
Folester began, “For ALL have sinned and has fallen short of the glory of
God.”
After school Andi rode
Taffy toward her special spot. “Sadie!” Andi exclaimed,
“Well it took you
long enough” Sadie muttered, “Andi, you better get outta…”
Sadie’s voice got cut
off. The next thing Andi knew was she was trapped. Andi began to kick and
holler, “Let me go! Let me go!”
Sadie and Andi both
screamed, “Chad! Mother! Justin!”
Andi blinked back
tears and suddenly a tall young man with a red shirt and brown pants stood
before them. “Quit talkin’ I can’t think with you young–un’s hollerin’!
“My brother Chad is
gonna love to get his hands on you when he figures out what you done. Why are
you kidnapping us?”
The man snickered,
“Because I have a picture in the sheriff’s office and you two just might be the
kinda bargain they’ll take in return for my freedom…that is if you cooperate
and don’t gimme any funny business.”
“We’ll show you funny
business,” Andi replied noticing Chad creeping up slowly behind the criminal.
“Gotcha!” Chad
exclaimed as he roped and hogtied that deadbeat troublemaker down to the
ground.
Sadie, Andi, and Chad
rode the crook down to the sheriff’s office.
“Well what do we have
here?” asked Sheriff Tate.
Chad replied, “Well
Sheriff, I guess we got ourselves a nice hefty reward comin’ our way.”
“A reward indeed,”
said the sheriff.
“Let’s go home; I’m
sure Mother has a nice supper waiting for us.”
“Yes, Chad,” Andi
responded with relief, “let’s go home, today has been a long ride.”
um in this book everyone to be aware Mr.Foster is Mr. Folester this is a Mr.Fosters twin brother knowing the same things and are almost exactly the same except there eyes Mr.Fosters eye's in real life i think brown and in here they are light blue
ReplyDeletea fact of my story Mr. Folester is a new person in this book and this is book one so next contest its part two.
i made the Mr. Folester accident so i changed it to a brother :)
DeleteI like it, Caitlynn! :-)
ReplyDelete~Hannah
thanks! Hannah
ReplyDeleteThis is nice, Caitlyn!
ReplyDeletethanks Lilly!
ReplyDeleteDratted dust! Names got mixxed up!
ReplyDeleteGood job caitlyn! I do think it seemed a little rushed and back and forth.... I couldn’t really tell what was happening
ReplyDeleteBut good job! (Oh and please don’t take that the wrong way!)
~Tori
The story was around two years ago and there's soo many things I could have done different xD
Deletebut oh well, thank you haha,
I spelt mixed wrong ._. ahhhhhg lol
You can always send an updated version if you want 😉
DeleteI'm sorry, meant 3 years ._. my brain isn't working rn lol
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