by Zoey and Sara
Photo Prompt #12 It's a Deal
Parker & Jerry’s POV
Parker watched the
movement below, he turned to his friend, Jerry, “Hey Jerry, look down there,”
he said,
“What?” Jerry said, “I
don’t see anything too interesting,” he added.
“Look harder,”
“Oh! I see what you mean,
the people down there, I’m gonna guess they are that rich Carter family.” Jerry
said
“Yep, they are, how about
we kidnap one and get a huge ransom for him?” asked Parker.
“Let’s take two!” Jerry
exclaimed,
“Two? I don’t know about
that,” Parker said, he checked out the land, it was pretty hilly but they
could see the ranch if they looked carefully. “We might be able to get
away with two.” he said
“We could! I say let’s
take them tonight,” Jerry said
“Alrighty.” Parker
agreed. They made their way through the mountains and set a spot near the ranch
but not too close so they could sneak there that evening and kidnap the
Carter’s. “I say we take the young girl and the man working there.” Jerry said,
pointing, little did he know the girl was a Carter and the man was a ranch
hand!
“Sounds like a plan,”
said Parker.
That evening Parker and
Jerry made their way to the ranch, the girl was sitting near the barn while the
man was near her talking.
Andi and Riley’s POV
”Riley, you’ll never
believe what I had to do today. I helped can peaches. And you know how bad I
hate being in the kitchen and not outside helping with the horses,” said Andi.
As Andi voiced her
frustrations to Riley little did she know what was about to happen. Riley
was about to try and cheer Andi up when all of the sudden things went black.
Andi couldn’t tell
who her captor was, She tried to get free but whoever it was had a strong grip.
They were stuffed in the
back of a wagon and they rode off.
Jerry and Parker’s POV
“See, Parker, I told you
we could get away with two.”
“I guess you were right.
We got away with two.” answered Parker,
“Where do we take them?”
asked Jerry,
“Um..” they hadn’t
thought that far ahead.
They rode along and
thought, they were so deep in thought they didn’t notice someone coming, “Hey,
what's in your load?” a man asked, gesturing toward the wagon
“Um it’s..” Jerry’s voice
trailed off, he looked sideways at Parker,
“We have a load of coal,
we are taking it to town.” Parker said boldly.
“Interesting, my name is
Chad Carter, what’s yours?” the man asked.
“Nice to meet you Mr.
Carter, my name is Parker and this is my friend Jerry,” said Parker
“We need to be on our
way,” Jerry said and slapped the reins and the horses took off at an even trot
leaving the man staring after them. “What’s their hurry?” they heard the man
say and he rode the other direction.
“I can’t believe you told
him our real names!” Jerry hissed.
Parker turned pale, “I
forgot.” he said “It was a mistake.”
“If he traces us he’ll
find us, we need to change our names!” Jerry exploded
“Relax! Okay! We can
change our names! To what?”
Chad’s POV
Chad watched Parker and
Jerry go, “Those names sound familiar, Parker, Jerry. Hmmm…” Chad said
thinking, “Well, I better go,” Chad turned Sky to the ranch and loped there.
He arrived at the ranch
and noticed right away his sister, Andi didn’t clean the stalls, “That girl,”
Chad sighed, he spotted Diego coming in, “Hey Diego, have you seen Andi?”
“No señor, no la he visto
a ella ni a Riley en el último tiempo -no sir, i have not seen her or Riley in
the last while-” he answered.
“Okay, thanks,” Chad said
and left, I bet Andi and Riley went for a ride together, she’ll have it when
she comes back, Chad thought and he went inside.
*********
“Mother?” Chad wandered
into the living room, “Where in the world is Andi?” he asked.
“I thought Andrea was
with you, but she must be upstairs” Mother said
“No, I haven’t seen her
all day,” answered Chad “Now that I think about it, Riley has been gone all
afternoon as well,” just as he finished his sentence suddenly there was a sharp
rap on the door. “That must be them now!” he started to walk over and added
“But why would they knock?”
He opened the door to
find a piece of paper under a rock. He had a slight idea why. He picked it up
and unfolded it, his face turned ashened and he dashed inside, “MOTHER!”
his yell could be heard all out though the house,
“Chad?” Mother entered
the room.
“The knock on the door
wasn’t Andi and Riley, it was someone that put this rock on our steps.” Chad explained.
“Well, what does it say?”
Mother asked.
“If you want to ever see
your precious brother and sister again you will have $4000 cash. Pay up quick
or else.” Chad read aloud.? Andrea is in her room so it can’t be her.” Mother
said.
“Is she, Mother? Check.”
Chad said, Mother hurried upstairs.
Chad reread the note, he
couldn't believe this, was it Mitch who was kidnapped? He was very confused. He
heard Mother coming down the steps and turned to her, one look at her face told
the answer.
“Andrea’s gone.”
Elizabeth’s voice confirmed his fears.
“Oh no,” Chad sighed, “It
must be Andi and who else? Not Justin, he’s in town. Mitch maybe?”
“It could be,” Mother
agreed, “the note said brother and sister.” she added.
Chad nodded.
Suddenly the door opened
and Mitch stepped in.
“What's with the somber
faces?” he asked with a smile
“You don’t know?” Chad
was disbelieving, if it was Mitch where was Andi?
“What?” Mitch lost his
smile
“Andrea is missing.”
Mother’s voice was low
Mitch broke in before she
could finish, “I’m sure she will be back soon,” he said.
Mother didn’t answer but
held out the note, Chad watched Mitch as he read it. “Call a family meeting.
I’ll tell Justin in town.” Mitch raced outside.
As soon as Mitch went out
the door Chad started thinking that maybe they had mistaken one of the ranch
hands as a Carter. Little did he know he was right.
Mitch’s POV
Mitch went straight to
the barn and tacked up Chase, “What’s the hurry?” the foreman voice came behind
him,
“No time Sid!” Mitch
kicked Chase into a gallop and they were off to town. He reached Justin and
Lucy’s house and banged the door. Lucy opened it, “Where’s Justin?” Mitch asked
“He’s in his office, why,
what's the matter?” Lucy noticed his upset face.
Mitch didn’t answer but
remounted Chase and left.
As Mitch made his way
over to Justin’s office he started thinking.
What brother could they
be talking about? It definitely wasn’t Chad and of course it isn’t me. So who
could they be talking about?
He reached Justin’s
office and barged in.
Justin’s clerk Tim looked
at him in shock. Tim didn’t like when Justin’s siblings barged in without an
appointment.
“It’s an emergency Tim,
Andi’s missing.” Mitch said.
He opened the door to
Justin’s office and found his brother looking at stacks of papers.
Justin’s POV
His brother Mitch came
barging through his office door.
”What’s wrong?” he asked
Mitch.
He couldn’t imagine what
could be wrong. His brothers normally weren’t the ones barging in his office.
It was usually Andi.
Mitch’s POV
“Chad found a rock laying
on the step that said if we wanted to see Andi and our brother again that we
would have a ransom.”
“I still can’t figure out
what they meant when they said brother.”
Justin’s POV
“What brother are they
talking about?”
“You said Chad was the
one who found the rock right?”
Mitch answered and said
yes.
Hmm, I wonder what they
were talking about when they said brother.
He turned back to Mitch
and said “Let’s go!”
When they arrived at the
ranch they handed their horses over to the ranch hands and rushed inside.
As soon as they sat down
at the table everyone started talking at once. By the end of the conversation
they had come to the conclusion that it was Riley that they were talking about.
Chad’s POV (Before Mitch and Justin returned)
He watched Mitch go and
turned to Mother, “Mother, round up the family in the house. I’ll be back.”
He turned and went
outside, it can’t be Justin, was the only thing on his mind. He saw Sid
standing at the edge of the barn watching the driveway. He spotted Chad and
hurried over, “Chad, what is going on?” he asked
Chad shook, he was
flustered by everything going on, he sank to the ground, “Chad?” Sid placed a
gentle hand on his shoulder.
“Sid,” Chad couldn't
finish but held the note out
Sid’s POV
Sid’s face grew hard,
“It’s Andi and Riley, isn’t it?” he asked.
Chad was puzzled so Sid
hurried to explain. “Riley has been missing all afternoon, I asked the other
ranch hands and they said he was seen chatting with Andi last. Maybe they got
kidnapped and not a brother of yours.”
“I don’t care!” Chad was
upset, too upset just to sit and wait for Mitch's return. He leaped to his
feet. “Riley is almost as good as a brother! I can’t let him and Andi get taken
away. I can’t!”
Sid frowned, “Relax,
Chad, it’s in God’s hands.”
Chad sighed and answered,
“I guess so,” he turned to go inside but Sid stopped him.
“I last saw Andi and
Riley near the barn, about two hours ago, if they were taken then they aren’t
far.” Sid said.
Andi and Riley’s POV
They still don’t know who
had taken them, But they were going to find out soon.
Two men pulled the bags
they had stuffed on their heads off.
One of the men looked
about 30 and the other man looked like he was younger and probably about
20.
“What do you want with
us?” Andi asked.
“We just want a little
ransom,” the older man said.
The younger man jabbed
him in the side.
“Don’t tell them that.”
“Well, why not?”
“You have a point.“ The
younger man agreed.
“Who are you? And what do
you mean a ransom?” Riley asked.
”My name is Parker,” the
younger man said.
“My name is Jerry,” the
older man said.
“And we knew a Carter
brother and sister could bring in a good amount of money.” Parker said.
Andi was puzzled. What
did they mean by a Carter brother and sister? And how much did they ask for
them?
”Where did you bring us?”
Andi asked.
Jerry frowned, “I can’t
answer that.”
“Fine, where are we?”
Andi asked
“I can’t answer that
either.” Jerry said
Riley leaned over and
whispered, “What’s going on? Why did they say Carter brother and sister, I’m
not a Carter!”
“Riley,” Andi warned and
Riley kept quiet.
Riley looked around, he
had to find out where they were! He spotted something he had seen before, it
was a hidden trail he and Dakota had explored, “Andi?” he whispered so the
kidnappers couldn't hear. Her eyes widened as she saw the trail but she didn’t
know why Riley was pointing it out.
“What? Do you know where
we are?” Andi whispered.
“Me and Dakota have come
down this trail before! I know how to get us back home.” Riley said
excitedly.
“We can talk about
it after they're asleep.” Andi said.
Parker and Jerry soon
fell asleep. Andi and Riley sat as close together as they could and talked
about what their plan to escape was going to be.
Chad’s POV
As he reread the paper
tied to the rock, he noticed scratched on the rock there was P & J.
All of the sudden Chad
exclaimed, “I met 2 men earlier today named Parker and Jerry, and the initials
on this rock are P & J, Parker and Jerry! And I saw the direction they
went!”
“That’s awesome! We
should head that way right now!” Mitch said.
“Let’s go!” Chad
answered.
They ran outside to tack
their horses up.
Andi and Riley’s POV
“How can we sneak off
without them waking up?” Andi asked.
“The best thing we can do
is go as soon as we can.” Riley answered.
Andi and Riley got up and
started walking down the trail, staying to the side of the road to where they
could get of the road if someone started coming.
They saw someone on
horseback galloping towards them. They were about to step off into the woods
when Andi realized who it was.
“It’s Chad, Riley!” Andi
exclaimed.
They mounted behind Chad
and took off.
Back at the Circle C
“That’s Chad!” Justin
exclaimed.
Chad, Andi and Riley came
into the house.
“I’m so glad you are safe
Andrea!” Mother exclaimed.
“How in the world did the
people who kidnapped you mistake Riley as a Carter?” Mitch asked.
Andi and Riley said at
the same time, “That is a whole other story for another day!”
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