By Rebekah Hanson
Chapter 1
“Cory!
Come over here! I want to take you my favorite place in the woods!” Andrea
Carter’s voice echoed in the pasture of Circle C Ranch.
Cory
immediately dropped the rope he was holding and trotted over to where Andi was
sitting on her horse, Taffy. Cory had been staying at Circle C Ranch for the
summer while his parents visited their sick relatives.
“I
could use a break for a few minutes,” Cory said, wiping the sweat off of his
face He quickly saddled his horse and jumped up.
“C’mon,
I’ll show you the way!” Andi pointed her finger towards the direction of the
woods.
“Are
you sure that Chad won’t miss me?” Cory asked, throwing a questioning glance
toward the barn’s direction.
Chad
was Andi’s older brother, who also ran the ranch. Even though he was the second
oldest, Chad was like the boss on the ranch since Justin was at college She
also had another brother, Mitchell, plus one older sister.
“Of
course not, silly! And besides, you have been working all day! You need a break
once and a while!” Andi said.
They
trotted down the path into the woods for about three minutes and took a right
onto a barely seen path, but big enough for their horses. After a while, they
entered an open spot, covered in light green grass.
Tiny
wild flowers danced in the wind, their colorful heads bobbed like they agreed
with the wind blowing at them, begging for more. One big tree stood tall in the
middle of the small, open, hidden, pasture, resting and watching the secret
place like a strong soft guardian. A creek gurgled nearby, making a comforting
sound.
I’ve always loved it here, Andi thought, when the world around me is crazy and out of control, I go here for-
Her
thoughts were interrupted as Cory slowly slid from his horse. Andi could tell
by his face that he, too, loved her secret spot as much as she did.
“Wow! It looks even better from the last time I was here!” Cory said.
“Wow! It looks even better from the last time I was here!” Cory said.
“Yeah,
I know it is such a beautiful place, huh! Well, I have always kept this to
myself- I didn’t really want to tell anybody in case it no longer became just
my spot!” Andi responded.
“I
don’t blame ya’,” Cory agreed.
They
stood in silence just staring at the beauty of the small pasture. Then, a
piercing cry came from somewhere around them.
“Mwaaaaaaaaaa!”
Andi
froze in surprise.
“W-what
was that?” Andi asked, glancing around her.
“Mwaaaaaaaaa!”
Whatever
it was, it sounded like an animal or child in pain or calling for help.
“Don’t
be a silly head, it’s probably just some kids goofing around and trying to act
like a weird monster or something,” Cory suggested, “It’s probably just the
Hollisters,” He patted his horse affectionately on his nose.
“No,
there are not here, and I don’t think that sound was made by any children- it
sounded like an animal in distress,” Andi said, getting off of her horse.
“Mwoooooooooooo!”
This
time it was obvious that it was not a child. It had to be some sort of animal.
“C’mon,
let’s go try to find it!” Cory said running towards where the sound was. Andi
followed right on his heels.
They
followed the sound and soon found a small calf, covered in mud, calling for its
mother.
“Aww,
it’s so cute!” Andi exclaimed, patting his brown nose. Though it was covered in
mud, he had a golden brown coat. His legs were cut in several places, but other
than that he was fine.
Cory
glanced around, looking for any sign for its mother. “I don’t think his mother
is anywhere around here,” Cory said, “but we should probably leave it here just
in case she comes back,”
Andi
nodded. “Of course. I will come back in the morning to see if it is still
here,”
“Cory!!!” Chad’s voice echoed through the
woods. “Cory Blake!!”
Cory
glanced back from where they were standing in the woods.
“I
better get back to work, it looks like Chad realized that I took a break.
Thanks for bringing me here, Andi,” Cory replied.
“No
problem, come back anytime,” Andi replied.
Andi
took one last look at the calf before patting it on the head and leaving. She
knew that its mother would probably
come back, but……. Andi kind of wanted its mother to not return because then she
could keep the baby calf.
And I could bottle feed it, and train
it and it would only be mine! But the problem is, that it still has a mother.
Well, I will just have to see if she comes back, she thought as she mounted up and distractedly
rode home.
She
soon found her answer.
Chapter 2
It
was later that day and all the family was sitting at the dining room table
enjoying the meal of pork, grits, rolls, beans, and corn. Chad and Mitch were
talking about their day, when Chad mentioned that they had spotted a mother cow
lying dead on the side of a trail.
Andi
looked up from her beans and looked at Chad. “Do you think that she had any
calves? ‘Cause me and Cory found a calf in the woods when we were going to my favorit--
well, we were just in the woods for a break,” her words came out in a rush,
“and we saw a calf and I was wondering if I-,”.
“Andrea!”
Her mother gently reminded, “Don’t speak in a rush, we can’t understand a word
you are saying. Go on!”
Red-faced
Andi looked down at her half-eaten plate shamefully. In all her 11 years, she could
never remember to slow down when she was excited. “Well, me and Cory--” she
started.
“Cory
and I,” her mother corrected.
“Cory
and I were in the woods because he
needed a break from working all day,” she
shot a glare towards Chad’s direction.
“Andrea!
Please!” mother pleaded.
Andi
continued, “We were in the wood when we heard a calf calling for his mother. At
first, we didn’t know what it was, so we didn’t do anything. Cory thought it
was the Hollisters, but I said that they weren’t here. I was glad because they
are such pests!”
“Andrea,”
her mother warned.
“Well,
anyway, we found the calf and he looked all cute and small--”
Chad threw Mitch a look and rolled his eyes,
“--but
then Chad called Cory back to work-again,” she said.
Mother
looked at Chad and said, “You shouldn’t work that child so much, Chad, you know
better!”
Chad
answered, “Yes, Mother,”
Andi’s
words suddenly got quicker, “And I was wondering if the dead cow lying on the
trail was its mother, that I could take care of it, bottle feed it, raise it,
and train it, and-and-milk it, it would teach me good responsibility! Please,
Mother?”
Melinda,
who had not said a word all throughout dinner, leaned over the table to Mitch,
and whispered, “She does need to work
on her responsibility, and she even knows it!”
Mother
looked at Melinda and gave her a firm but kind look. Melinda immediately sat
back in her chair.
Mother
looked at Andi. “Taking care of a little calf may not be what you have in
mind,” her mother said.
“I
know! Just let me please try it for the week, and if you don’t think I can
handle it, which I can, you can give it to Chad or Mitch! It’s not like I have
any schoolwork, for it is the summer, and my chores I promise that I will do
them all!” she promised.
Mother
gave a worried look to Andi as she wiped her mouth with a napkin. “What do you
think, Chad?”
“Remember
when you got the black lamb from the fair?” He asked, “You couldn’t even keep
track of that, let alone a calf!”
Andi’s
face turned bright red. “I was, like, six then, Chad! I’m eleven years old now!
I can do it!”
“Mitch?”
“I
think that Andi can do it if she has a little help from me,” he said, “not a
lot, just about how to train it, you can really mess up the cow’s way it obeys
if you train it wrong,”
Andi
looked at him, debating whether or not she could trust him. He looked pretty
serious.
“Ok.
Fine, deal!” Andi announced, putting out her hand.
“Deal,”
Mitch said, giving a firm handshake.
Andi
tried not to wince. “May I be excused?”
“Are
you full?” Her mother asked.
Andi
nodded. Then a thought struck her. “Since you said that I could have the calf,
can I go get it settled in the barn?” she asked.
Mother
gave Mitch a questioning look, but when he nodded she said, “I don’t see why
not,”
Screeeee! Andi scooted back her chair so fast
that it made a scratching noise on the floor. Giving an apologetic look towards
her family she hurried out of the dining room and out to the hallway.
“Don’t
forget your coat!” her mother quietly shouted after her.
Andi
grabbed her coat from the hall closet and quickly pulled it on as she ran
towards the barn. It was dark out, the moon shining like a huge light bulb. She
swiftly tacked up Taffy and led her to her favorite place.
Hoooo! Hooooo!
An
owl sounded in the distance. Andi shivered. She urged Taffy along the path and
assured herself that the sound was only an owl. It is creepier than hearing the mysterious chirping of the crickets
when I last went camping, Andi thought, at
least it is hot enough that they don’t sing!
“Mooooooooo!”
Andi’s
heart jumped. Taffy’s ears perked up and she snorted nervously.
“It’s
ok, Taffy,” Andi whispered, “it’s only….. Carmen”
Carmen, Carmen, I like the sound of
that. Thought Andi.
She silently slid from her horse and reached in the saddle bag for a flash
light. There was none. Oh, bother. Why
didn’t I remember a light? This just got a whole lot harder……… and creepier.
“Here,
Carmen…..calf!” Andi said softly.
There
was an eerie silence after she spoke. Andi tiptoed softly towards the direction
the calf had been that morning. She stopped for a second to listen for the
calf’s call.
The
silence weighed on her chest like a heavy blanket as she waited in the dark,
only the moon to guide her. Then, she heard the calf’s call. She rushed towards
the sound and found it standing in the bushes. She tied a rope loosely around
his neck and led it back towards her horse. Then she heard a snap. She turned
towards the sound as her heart raced.
“BOOO!!”
the figure yelled. At the same time, a stick flew through the air.
As
the stick hit her square on her forehead, she screamed and fainted.
The
figure doubled over in laughter.
Chapter 3
Two
days later, Andi plopped herself down to Carmen’s height to feed him a bottle
of milk. She sighed as the little calf slurped noisily on the bottle. She still
didn’t get why Chad had scared her so badly two nights ago.
She
hadn’t done anything to hurt him. She sighed again as she felt the scar on her
forehead. Not only had Chad made her scream, he had hit her on the head too.
For
Chad’s punishment, Andi had insisted on a challenge instead of Chad being
grounded: in one-and-a-half weeks, Andi would show how much Carmen had learned
to obey. If Chad didn’t think that he behaved well, Andi would have to clean
stalls for a week, and give Carmen away. If Carmen obeyed really well, then
Chad would have to clean all the stalls for two
weeks and Andi could keep Carmen.
The
bet was on.
Throughout
the one-and-a-half weeks, Andi worked with Carmen every chance she got.
Finally, the big day was here. Andi was nervous because Carmen usually behaved, but he had his days.
Andi hoped that today was one of his good
days.
****
Andi
smiled as she walked past the barn where Chad was whining about how bad the bet
was as he mucked out stalls. Andi had won the bet and got to keep Carmen. She finally felt like her big brother had
started to respect her and the responsibility she had.
Thanks to me, Chad has to do my chores,
too! Then she
stopped herself. No, it was thanks to
mother.
Mother still wanted Chad to get a
punishment for hurling the stick at Andi and scaring her. Now, he had to do all of Andi’s chores- for a week. Andi somehow felt very happy-not just
smug that Chad lost, happy because she had proven that she was capable of
training a calf.
Good stuff! I like the calf name! :-)
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I don't think I'd be as nice as Andi. I'd probably be really happy I'd shown my big brother what's what. This story made me laugh, good job!
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ReplyDeleteThis was such a great story! It made me laugh! Great job!
ReplyDeleteSuch a good story. :D Very well written. :)
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This is a good story!
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