by Sophie T.
“Mitchell
Carter, where in the world do you think you’re going?”
Aunt Rebecca’s high-pitched voice
stopped Mitch in his tracks. All morning long, he had been wanting to avoid Aunt
Rebecca’s critical remarks and clucking tongue. The first day she arrived, it
was Andi who got scolded the most. The next day, it had been Chad, and Mitch
assumed it was his turn. But he really had to get to work on the ranch.
“You stop right there young man!” she
exclaimed, bursting into the living room. “You forgot to push your chair in,
and shouldn’t you wait for the rest of your family to finish eating?”
His feet felt restless to fly outside
where Chad was waiting for him. If he didn’t hurry, he wouldn’t only get “it”
from Aunt Rebecca.
“How rude! You know a gentlemen should
never leave the table without permission” She sighed, and looked far off into
space. “If only I could teach you and Chad to be a gentlemen like Justin. You
really should take after Justin’s example, and find some more meaningful work
than that rough stuff out there. You trample around in the hot sun with the
filthy beasts. Wouldn’t you find it more . . . more . . .” She looked around
the room as if searching for the word, but when she found it she clasped her
wrinkled hands together and continued. “Appropriate to work at a newspaper
office, or become a doctor or a professor?”
Mitch’s jaw muscles twitched, a chuckle
caught in his throat, and almost escaped. Mitch knew Aunt Rebecca was just
jabbering, but he thought about Chad walking stiffly around in whatever
professors wore and a book tucked under his arm.
When Mitch glanced out the window, his heart sank. The boys were already
riding off to meet Chad at a certain part of the ranch where the grass was
mysteriously disappearing. Mitch checked his watch. Seven-thirty-five. Chad
would be mad at him for sure.
Aunt Rebecca took his arm, and led him
back in the dining room. No use trying to catch up with the boys now, best to
go along with Aunt Rebecca. Mitch stood around in the kitchen for ten minutes.
He clenched his fists to keep from crying out. “I need to get to work!” but he knew that would only make her scold
longer.
Finally she stopped.
Jumping at the chance to get free, he
tipped his hat to his sisters and hurried outside. Am I gonna get it! Mitch gulped.
The barn was dark and musty. Mitch’s heart skipped a beat. He wasn’t expecting
to see a shadow of a man looming in the aisle, his back turned. A large man,
even taller than Chad. A few stalls down, his body filled the walkway.
Mitch squinted at his turned back. All
of the cowhands were supposed to be working, even Sid. The only one home was .
. . Mitch could easily tell this giant wasn’t their roly-poly cook. Mitch’s
stomach churned. He quickly sidestepped out of the barn. Something wasn’t
right. Mitch pressed his ear to barn wall, waiting.
He kept an eye on his watch. No matter how late it was, something told
Mitch not to go inside and get Chase. Sure
wish Chad were here right now! What would he do?
Before he could finish his thought, a
gust of wind whooshed by, and out galloped Chase! With the man on him. They
were headed for the meadow, and didn’t even notice Mitch. He scowled, he had
taken Chase!
In no time at all, Mitch was on
Patches, and following him. Mitch kept his distance, and kept out of sight. He
wanted to see what the man was really up to.
Instead of going in the direction of the road, the man headed up toward
the hills, where pine forests and streams scattered around the mountains. He
rode for a while, unconscious that anyone was following him.
Where was he going? The only people
that lived up here was the Hollisters and Loony Lou. Mitch wanted to catch him
as a horse thief, but first he wanted to see where he was headed.
The trees cleared, making it easier for the man to spot him. Mitch
dismounted and tied Patches to a bush. He continued to track the man on foot
and caught his breath as the Hollister cabin came into view. Mitch ducked
behind some shrubbery several yards away, and crouched low. He peeked over the
branches chewed off by sheep.
The sunrise glared from behind the man
on Chase, making it impossible to see him correctly. Another silhouette of a
horse and rider emerged from the stable and joined the first.
Mitch held his breath and listened. He
could faintly hear voices, but they only mixed in with the baaing of sheep. A
sharp nip on his rear end made Mitch yelp and crash forward into the bushes.
Twigs cracked, and stabbed his face. When he fell, his foot had swung out and
hit something soft, and a white ball whizzed out of the corner of his eye.
He looked up. Both men’s heads turned. Oh great! Mitch jumped up brushing
himself off. It was one of those pesky Hollister sheep that bit him. Mitch knew
it was. Mr. Hollister, and the man dismounted, and started toward him.
What
do I do now? He jammed his hands in his pockets. “Howdy! Uh, Mr. Hollister!” He tried cheerily,
tipping his hat. Mr. Hollister was squinting at him, as if trying to comprehend
who he was.
“Wh-?” the other man started.
Mr. Hollister suddenly grinned. “Well
if it isn’t Mister Carter himself!” He taunted. The other man gulped.
“Y-you mean he’s Carter?”
“Not the Carter, the other Carter” Mr. Hollister said lazily.
Mitch’s stomach churned with worry and
confusion. What would Chad do? Well he
wouldn’t be afraid of them that’s for certain.
Mr.
Hollister stepped right up to his face. Mitch smelled tobacco. “The little brother,” He jeered emphasizing
the word little.
“Well the other Carter’s going to find out sooner or later, and by then
I’ll be outa here Hollister. You think you can handle him?” The two men talked
as if he wasn’t there. As if he was just a child.
Mitch took a deep breath, and with a
stern loud voice said. “Excuse me sir, but is that my horse over there?” He
pointed toward Chase.
The man looked at him coldly. “What if
it is?”
What did that man think he was doing? Mitch
cleared his throat. “And I would like to ask you exactly what are you doing with it?”
Mr. Hollister grabbed Mitch by the
shoulders. “Don’t tell a soul” he growled between clenched teeth.
“What do you think you’r edo’in?” The other man exclaimed. “He’s
Carter’s brother! We gotta keep em’ here Hollister, the plan’s all messed up,
now that he’s here.”
“It’ll still work” Mr. Hollister replied, still scowling at Mitch. His
hairy hands clamped around Mitch’s arm.
“What’s the matter with you, Hollister? Wha-what’s going on?” Mitch
exclaimed, and tried to pull away.
The man caught his other arm. “You’ll
find out” He grinned, beads of sweat glistened on his face. Mr. Hollister
dragged him to the stable.
The sound of hoof beats kept Mitch from answering. Mitch turned just to
see Andi riding up on Taffy. She had a cheery smile on her face, and a fishing
pole rested across Taffy’s back. Her smile vanished.
“Andi!! What are you doing--”
They shoved him inside before he could
finish. Standing by the window was the oldest Hollister boy Tom, with a rifle
under his arm.
“Sit down and be comfortable. Tom’s here to make sure you mind your P’s
and Q’s” Mr. Hollister spat a wad of tobacco onto the floor and left.
What is all this? Mitch wondered in bewilderment. While Tom was staring
lazily out the window, Mitch snuck up behind him and, with one swift move, had
the rifle.
“Hey! Give that back!” Tom lunged for it. Mitch held it high.
“First, you tell me what’s going on here.”
“Then will you give it?” Mitch
secretly put the gun on safety and pointed it at Tom. He would never really
shoot a boy.
Tom gulped. “Pa kinda wan’s some of
your land again, and has been sending some sheep out there to claim it. Says,
you don’t give him enough.”
“Is that why the grass was disappearing? And the tore up fence?”
Tom shrugged.
“And Pa is paying Mr. Jed Hatton to help us.”
Mitch snorted. “And what can your father pay?” Jed Hatton. Jed Hatton. Mitch turned the word over in his mind. Ah
yes! It had been in the newspaper Justin was reading aloud at breakfast. The
headlines read, Escaped Convict out of
Oakland jail.
“Gimme my gun.”
“Uh-uh, you stay right where you are boy, and don’t make a sound.” Mitch
grabbed a lasso from the wall and tied Tom up. No one could stop him now. He
dashed out of the stable to find all of the Circle C hands were tied up, along
with Chad, who appeared to be giving Mr. Hollister’s a series of dirty looks.
His mouth was gagged, and Mitch knew he really wanted to talk. He wanted to
yell and shout at Mr. Hollister for claiming his land.
Mr. Hollister saw him, and immediately
pointed a pistol at Chad’s head.
Mitch swallowed hard, he didn’t know
Mr. Hollister would go that far.
Jed pointed pistols at the cowhands. “Stay
right where you are Carter. Now desperate times call for desperate measures,
and my family really needs that land. I’m asking you Mitch because I know your
brother’s too stubborn. Now if you don’t gimme that land, yer brother’s gonna
have a hole in his head that you can see through.”
“Mr. Hollister you’re disobeying the law!” Mitch shouted. Mitch saw
something moving through the trees which distracted him from Mr. Hollister. It
was a carriage moving along the road. Mitch hoped they would see them, and fish
them out of this predicament.
“What’ll it be?” Mitch ignored him, and watched as the rider got out and
peered through the trees. Mitch crossed his fingers.
It was Aunt Rebecca. Who was probably
going to town. She peered through the trees, and gasped.
Mitch looked around trying to find
something to tell her to go get help, but she seemed to realize what was wrong,
and got back in the carriage, and rode away.
“See that carriage Mr. Hollister? That person will go back and get
Justin, and the law on you. So I would advise you to drop your weapon’s and scurry
on outa here, and if you shoot Chad, you’ll be in a lot worse trouble” Mitch
wanted to smile. Mr. Hollister hesitated, then let go of Chad’s arm.
“He’s right Jed, we don’t want no more trouble” Jed nodded, and ran for
his horse.
“I’m outa here!” Mr. Hollister mounted his horse, and they rode away.
Chad looked at him and grunted.
Mitch smiled, and motioned to Andi. “Ladies
first, then I’ll untie you.”
Chad did the best he could to yell at
him with his mouth gagged. For once Chad couldn’t speak, and Mitch and Andi
were kind of enjoying it.
Chad and the boys were untied and had ridden home. Now the whole family
was relaxing on the porch.
“Whew! You did it little brother!” Chad slapped him on the back.
“No, all the thanks goes to Aunt Rebecca, if she hadn’t made me late I
wouldn’t have seen Jed. We were stuck, and she went to get help.”
Chad and Mitch looked at each other,
then at Aunt Rebecca. She looked up from her embroidery and smiled.
This is a awesome story!!! I loved it!!
ReplyDeleteKeep writing Sophie!! :D
-Sara M
that is awesome!!! I loved it!! you portrayed each character so well!! good job!! keep writing!!!
ReplyDeleteThis was awesome, Sophie, great job!
ReplyDeleteFun!
ReplyDelete~Micaiah
Thanks everyone!
ReplyDelete-Sophie
Nice job! ~ Lily
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