by Evelyn M. (Ages 10-13)
This story takes place shortly after Long Ride Home.
"Well,
there goes that.” Andi Carter mumbled to herself with a groan. She watched as a
fancy buggy pulled into the ranch yard. As Taffy stamped and snorted
impatiently, she held tightly to the reins. “I guess we won’t be going for a
ride after all, girl. Aunt Rebecca wasn’t supposed to be here until late this
evening, and it’s barely noon.” Taffy bobbed her head and snorted again as Andi
led the golden palomino back into the barn to untack.
“Aunt Rebecca thinks that a twelve year old
‘young lady’ should be interested in frills, sewing, and Ladies’ Aid meetings,
but I’m not like her and Melinda. I’d rather be out riding with Cory and Rosa
than keeping my skin as white as a ghost and listening to Mother and Melinda
look through a catalog full of dresses and lace and other silly things like
that.” Andi huffed and pulled off Taffy’s saddle and bridle. She led her horse
into the stall and patted the golden nose.
“Wish me luck, Taffy.” Andi strode out of
the barn, staring at the buggy that brought the most dreaded thing in the world
for her- Aunt Rebecca.
She
was suddenly startled out of her thoughts by a loud whinny from the barn. Andi
rushed back to the farthest stall, where the sound had come from. All she saw,
though, was a stunning black horse. His name was Blue Lightning, but everybody
on the ranch called him Blue. He was a new horse that Chad, her brother, had
bought at an auction a few months ago, and he was the envy of all of Fresno,
let alone all of California.
Blue
was a black stallion, highly trained, and tall and strong but gentle enough for
a lady to ride. Andi looked around but saw no one. She comforted Blue by laying
a practiced hand on his velvety nose. She turned to leave, eying her
surroundings with a cautious glance. She shrugged, then stepped out into the
bright sunlight once again.
Turning her thoughts once again to Aunt
Rebecca, Andi remembered her aunt’s last gift with a blush. It had been a
purple and green dress, one that she had not worn since the day Aunt Rebecca
had left. Anyway, at least it had been put to good use. Andi had used that
dress to polish her saddle with, but Mother would be expecting her to wear it
tonight.
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Andi
flopped onto the bed after ripping off the horrid dress. During supper, Aunt
Rebecca had prattled on and on about ladies’ fashion and things, and had not
stopped. Finally, Andi had excused herself and ran upstairs to her room. She
fell asleep, taking comfort in the fact that tomorrow was Sunday, and after
church she would be allowed to go with Cory while Aunt Rebecca caught up with
the old ladies and her mother shopped at the mercantile.
The next morning, she dressed, rushed
downstairs to eat breakfast with her family, and did her chores before Justin,
another one of her brothers, had pulled the wagon in front of the house.
Right
before she got in, though, she heard Chad yell and him and Mitch run out of the
barn. “Blue’s gone!” He yelled. Justin jumped out of the driver’s seat and ran
to see. Soon he came out, his face fallen. “There’s nothing to be done right
now. We’ll be late to church if we don’t start.”
All
the way into town, Aunt Rebecca’s tongue went flippity-flop as she chattered on
and on about things in San Francisco, how uncivilized Fresno was, and all the
dust and mud that lived there. In church, the Reverend was talking about things
that made Andi’s brain fried to think about, and so she went off on her own
little adventure, daydreaming until the long sermon was over with.
After
this came the time when Cory, her best friend, ran up to her to show her his
newest marble or critter that was bound to show up in the teacher’s desk the
next morning. This time it was a huge spider, and he was carrying it around in
a cup that fit nicely into his pocket.
“So,
what do you want to do?” Andi asked Cory when their families were gone.
Cory
looked at her, then snapped his fingers. “I know! My pa has a new horse in the
livery.”
Andi
wrinkled her brow. “When did the horse arrive?” She asked.
Cory
shrugged. “Early this morning, I think,” he told her. “Why?” He was mystified.
He followed her quickly as she made her way to his pa’s livery.
“I
knew it!’’ Andi shouted when she got inside the barn. “I give you: my family’s
horse.”
Cory
held up a hand. “Wait. My pa checks every horse for a brand- this horse doesn’t
have one.”
Andi
gave him a look that said, watch me.
She rubbed her hand over a spot on the black horse’s rump and when she was done
she held up a hand that was black from ink. The thief had covered the Circle C
brand with a blotch of midnight black ink and gave him to the livery to board
for the night.
Suddenly,
they heard a loud crash and ran to the livery door. In the bright sun, they
spotted a man sprinting away. Cory and Andi watched him go with a look of
disappointment. They both knew that they couldn’t do anything to catch him; he
had a large head start.
Andi
turned to Cory. “What now?” she asked. Cory shrugged.
“I
guess we should take the horse back to your family.” He told her. “I doubt that
the thief will come back, now that he got caught.” Andi agreed, and they walked
back to Blue’s stall.
Chad,
Mitch, and Justin were all in a circle, talking to the other men about the
horse thief that had stolen their horse. Andi heard the name Elijah Simon. When
they saw Andi and Cory leading Blue, they ran over.
“He
was in the livery, and the thief ran away when we figured it out.” Andi told
Justin.
He
took her by both shoulders. “ What did he look like?”
“Well,
he was young, and he was wearing a dark blue shirt and a hat. That’s all I can
remember about him.” Andi told her brother. Cory’s description matched hers,
and they left to go tie Blue to the back of the Carters’ buggy.
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When
the Carters got home that day, Andi rode to her special spot to fish. She
hummed a hymn that the congregation had sung that morning, and let Taffy graze.
After she had dropped her line into the creek, she listened to the chirping of
the birds and the splashing of the water. The nature sounds were suddenly
interrupted by a voice above her.
“Levántate,
agradable y firme, y vuélvete hacia el árbol.”
She
obeyed, standing slowly, and watched as a young man dropped from the tree. He
was holding a pistol, and she shrank back at the sight. Please, God, not this! Not again! Andi thought pleadingly.
“Me
llamo Elijah Simon.” He introduced himself. “And you are?” He asked in
English.
“Andrea
Carter.” She said, her mind reeling. This was the horse thief her brothers had
been talking about. She noticed that he was still wearing the blue shirt and
hat. She still stared at the gun as she thought about this. She was terrified
of it, not only because it was fatal but also because of her accident two
months before when Jed Hatton had shot her. Elijah noticed. He understood and
holstered his gun.
He
motioned to the stump. “Sit.” He ordered, also taking a seat across from her.
“Why
do you do it?” Andi asked suddenly. Eli, as he had told her to call him, tried
to act surprised. “We both know who you are, but why do you steal?”
Eli stood from the stump. “I had to find my
family. They were taken two years ago, and I was left. So, I stole a neighbor’s
horse to go after them. When one horse wore out, I would sell it and steal
another. When I finally caught up to my family, I set them free. After stealing
horses for nearly a year while following them, though, I couldn’t just stop. I
kept stealing, and my family left me eventually. Now I find that I don’t know
anything better than to find a horse and take it.”
Andi
was awestruck. That was not the answer she was expecting. She knew that was how
it started, stealing a little bit, then a little more and more until you can’t
stop. She also knew, though, that she couldn’t turn him in. The only person
that could was himself.
The
two continued to talk until nearly sunset, and then she knew she had to leave.
“My brothers will come looking for me before long.”
Eli
nodded solemnly.
“I
will come back tomorrow morning with a horse. If you turn yourself in, then I
will know you did the right thing. If not, then the horse is yours to keep.”
Andi said. She turned and mounted Taffy, waving as she rode away.
When she arrived at the house, she was met by
Mother and Aunt Rebecca. “Andrea, we were worried sick about you!” Aunt Rebecca
said. She was ushered inside where she was served a still-warm dinner, and
given a mug of hot cocoa.
“Mother,
where are the boys?” Andi asked. She wondered why she was not being scolded.
“They
went back into town to round up a posse, and they left shortly after you did. They
went to look for that horse thief.” She replied.
Sunrise
came early the next morning, and Andi was up long before. By the time the
rooster crowed, Taffy was saddled with Patches tied beside her. Andi had
grabbed a loaf of bread from the kitchen, along with a leftover slice of apple
pie. She filled a canteen with fresh water from the pump and set off. Eli was
still soundly asleep when she arrived, so she left the supplies and Patches
beside him. She was back home before anyone missed her, but later that
afternoon Diego came over.
“Senora,
Patches is missing.” He told her.
“I
know.” She responded, bracing for a scolding.
“Well,
when will he be back, Senora? Senor Chad will not be happy.”
Andi
tilted her head. “I lent Patches to a friend, but I do not know when, or even
if, he will be back.”
“Andrea!”
Mother called. Andi ran to the porch where she was standing, and Mother looked
at her curiously. “Would you go into town for me?”
Andi
nearly jumped for joy. Mother never let her go into town alone! “Only, of
course, if Rosa goes with you.”
Andi’s
face fell, but she nodded. After getting Mother’s list, she ran to find Rosa.
Then they saddled the horses and left.
In
town, Sheriff Tate asked her to come into his office. He eyed her curiously.
“The young man that turned himself in this morning left a horse for you. I told
him I would let you know, but he wouldn’t tell me whose the horse was or why he
had him.’’
Andi grinned. Thank you, Lord!
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