by Luca B.
Mitch Carter and his brother looked
up from there work to see a young man riding towards them, “What do you think
that boy wants now?” Mitch asked Chad.
“I don't know and I don't care!” Chad
said. “I'm sick of his ways! When his parents come in a couple weeks I'm
sending him home with them!”
Mitch agreed, there cousin Daniel was
a lazy city slickers with no ranch skills at all. Even Mitch's younger sister
Andi could rope better than Daniel. Mitch chuckled, well Andi could lasso
anything better than some of the ranch hands.
When Daniel reached them he was out
of breath, “Andrea she,” he paused. “She had an ancient!”
“What?” Chad said in shock. “Are you
sure?”
“Yes I'm sure, she looks half dead.”
Mitch was confused, Daniel looked
serious about this but on the other hand could he be trusted? Chad had
apparently made up his mind the Daniel was telling the truth so he said to their
foreman Sid, “You take care of things here, we will go into town and find
Justin and the doctor.” Then he looked at Mitch, “Let's go.”
As they rode Mitch asked the nagging
question, “How do you know Daniel is telling the truth?”
Chad didn't answer for a moment then
said, “I guess I just have a feeling that well, that Andi really is hurt.”
“Ok.” Mitch wasn't sure but he had a
feeling too, a feeling that everything was about to change.
***
When they got to town Mitch went to
Justin's office and Chad got the doctor and sent a wire for there mother
who was away. As they rode in the direction Daniel had said, Mitch
spoke, “Do you think it is something Daniel did?”
“If he even touched our sister I'll-”
Chad began but was cut off.
“We'll see.” Justin said calmly.
After a while they heard yelling, “We're
down here! Hurry!” It was Melinda.
Ones there got to the girls Justin
was ahead he arrived a minute before Mitch, Chad and Dr. Weaver. Mitch was
shocked, Andi looked awful she was covered in dirt and blood.
“How did this happened!” Chad
shouted. Melinda began to sob. Mitch crouched down by Andi's side.
“Chad, that's enough.” Justin said.
'I'm sorry sis I didn't mean to bite
your head off I'm... I'm sorry.”
The Doctor went to Andi's other side
by Justin, he spoke to her, “I'm sorry Andrea but this is going to hurt we'll
be as gentle as possible.”
“Where's Mother? I want Mother.” Andi
said just above a whisper.
“Where's is Mother?” Melinda asked, “Why
didn't she come?”
Mitch explained that there mother was
away.
(The rest of the scene is in the Last Ride from
Andi's POV. Andi asks about Taffy twice then she gets medicine to make her
sleep. Mitch says that Chad with not shoot Taffy and Andi falls asleep)
“What do you mean?” Chad yelled at
Mitch, “You know as well a I do that Taffy has to be put down! Why would you
promise that we won't!”
Mitch stood from where he crouched
beside Andi, “I promised that YOU should not shoot Taffy, I'll have to do it.”
He turned to get his pistol.
Chad looked like he was about to
protest but Justin put his hand on his shoulder and shook his head.
***
Mitch pointed his gun at the head of
his sister's horse. “Goodbye Taffy. Thanks for being such a great horse for
Andi.” Mitch took a deep breath and pulled the trigger.
***
A couple weeks later
Mitch walked into his sister's
bedroom to find his mother siting at Andi's bedside sobbing. Mitch hurried over
to her, “what's wrong? Is she...” Mitch didn't finish his sentence Andi had
been hanging between live and death for weeks.
“No she isn't.” Mother said. “But
Mitch, what if God does decide to take her, what is he takes my baby girl?”
Mitch didn't answer for a moment then
said, “God has a plan and we might not understand but we can trust he's in
control.”
“Yes, but sometimes it's just hard.”
“I know.”
Mother left the room and left Mitch
with Andi, as he looked at his sister his mother's words echoed in his mind,
'What if God decides to take her, what if he takes my baby girl?' What
if? What if? Life just wouldn't be the same without Andi.
***
(A week later, the family is having
dinner and Daniel's parents are there and Andi asks about Taffy and they tell
her that Taffy had to be shot. Andi is very upset and says that she will never
speak to her brothers again. After that Andi tells her uncle that all about
that Daniel had made her fall into the draw.)
“Justin please take your sister
upstairs,” Mother asked.
“Yes Mother.” Justin said in a low
voice.
“I won't go.” Andi said.
Justin replied but Mitch wasn't
paying attention, he was going through a mental seesaw, how could so much
happen in one family dinner? Should he had tried to save Taffy? Or was it right
to put her out of her misery? Would Andi ever forgive him?
Just then Justin's calm but firm
voice broke the silence. Justin looked straight at uncle Benjamin. He said that
Andi was right that Daniel was a cheat and that he and his parents should leave
to go back east. Everyone agreed. There uncle confronted Daniel and asked if he
had really made Andi have her accident. Daniel did not defend himself.
Andi spoke, “You know to stolen
things in town? Daniel stole them! He hid them in the barn, I found them!”
Daniel stood from his chair and yell,
“I'm sorry I want for help! I should have left you to die!”
Mitch was in shock. Anger against
Daniel for everything he had done make him stand and punch Daniel to the floor.
Shaking his hand from the blow, Mitch spoke triumphantly, “Daniel is not returning
to New York, he's going to jail.”
But then his heart sank as he
remembered that their family was still broken.
***
Mitch looked over at his sister from
where he stood across the yard, it had been weeks since the incident at the
dinner table. Andi had kept her word and not said a thing to him or the other
brothers.
“Mitch?”
He turned at his name to see who had
spoken.
“Hey,” Chad said. “ What are you
doing?”
“Just thinking.”
“About Andi?”
“Yes,” Mitch sighed. “Look at her
slumped in her chair reading that adventure book Justin gave her, normally she
would be the one having the adventures riding alone the rang with Taf-” he
looked away.
“Mitch, you did what you had to, Deep
down Andi knows that.” Chad said.
“But maybe I should have tried harder to sav-”
“Look at me Mitch Carter! This is not
your fault. Do you hear me? It was Daniel and he's in prison for his crimes.
Andi just needs time to heal and prayer.”
“Your right. do think we should pray
for her now?” Mitch asked.
“That's a great idea. I'll start.
Dear Lord...
***
After they had prayed Mitch felt
better. He looked back to Andi, she was engaged in conversation with the new
wrangler, Riley Prescott. Maybe he will bring some life back into her,
Mitch thought. He hoped that someday with God's help (and maybe a bit of
Riley's) Andi would learn to forgive and mend.
Thanks for posting my story, mrs M!
ReplyDeleteI apologize for the terrible formatting. It came in on email and that doesn't format very well. I'll give it another try when I have some time so it looks better.
DeleteI fixed it. I think it looks much better now. 🐎
DeleteAwesome story Luca!!! :D Keep writing!!
ReplyDeleteThis is awesome!
ReplyDeleteI love it!!!
ReplyDeletegreat story Luca! loved reading it! great job!
ReplyDeleteThis is really good Luca! I loved it!
ReplyDeleteThank you all! It means the world to me! Especially because this is only my second circle c story I've written.
ReplyDeleteYou did a nice job, and now I've formatted it so it looks like all of the others, with indents and spacing. :-)
DeleteAwesome story!!
ReplyDelete-Micaiah
Really good job. I like Matches point of view .He's one of my favorite characters!
ReplyDeleteAbigail H q
Sorry, MITCH . Automatic correct😄
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