by Sara M. (Ages 14-17)
“Andrea, come here,
please.” Andi’s Aunt Rebecca called her into her parlor. Andi Carter was in San
Francisco visiting
her sister, Melinda, at Miss Whittaker’s Academy. She walked to the parlor and
straightened up. Prim and proper. Just before she entered. Aunt Rebecca was
sitting on a fluffy couch with a lady that looked about the same age as Andi’s
aunt. Andi had never seen her before.
“Andrea, meet my dear
friend Clara Preston.” She paused and turned to the older lady. “Clara, meet my
niece Andrea Rose Carter.” Aunt Rebecca waved her hand with a flourish towards
Andi.
“A pleasure to meet you,
Mrs. Preston.” Andi curtsied in her light pink flowery dress.
Aunt Rebecca turned with
interest towards Andi.“ Clara has a granddaughter named Annaliese Rose. I’m
sure you know that she has the same middle name as you.”
Andi giggled. “That’s too
funny! Will I get to meet her?”
Aunt Rebecca's face
folded into a rare wrinkly smile and she nodded. “Yes, as a matter of fact. Tomorrow afternoon
at 1 o’clock sharp, Thomas will drive you to the Preston’s home and you will
meet Anneliese. She is thirteen years old. The same age as you and I believe
you two will get along very well.”
Mrs. Preston was nodding
all the while. Andi’s smile disappeared. She was joking when she asked about
meeting this Annaliese but now she really was going to. What would the girl be
like?
“You may return to your
sampler if you please, Andrea.” Aunt Rebecca said dismissing Andi.
Andi left the room and
went upstairs to her room that was next to Melinda’s. She was not looking
forward to tomorrow one bit! What if
Annaliese was rude and snobby? Andi had run into enough of those people in
cities. What if Annaliese didn’t want to
do anything but sit around and knit and sew? Enough what-ifs! Andi scolded
herself. What happens, happens, I’ll find
out tomorrow.
Andrea picked up her
sampler and looked it over. The stitching was crooked. She frowned and threw it
aside again. She flopped on her bed. “I want to go home. I miss Taffy.” she
said aloud. She bolted upright when a knock sounded on her door. What if it was
Aunt Rebecca? She hastened to straighten her bedcover.
Her eyes glanced over the
room and it looked good enough. She opened the door properly and the maid stood
before her. “Hello Miss Carter, your aunt is requesting you come down for
supper.” she said with a slight smile.
“Thank you. I’ll be down
in just a minute.” Andi replied. The maid left and Andi flopped back down on
her bed. It was much too hard being so ladylike! She sighed but got up and walked to her
wardrobe and picked out a fresh dress that was light green with a daisy print.
She slipped it on and hurried downstairs before her aunt came looking for her.
“Hello Andrea. Clara will
be staying for supper with us. Please have a seat,” Aunt Rebecca said as soon
as she saw Andi.
“Yes, Auntie.” Andi sat
down and quickly smoothed her dress.
The plate before Andi was
filled with mashed potatoes and roast beef. It smelled delicious! Andi took a
few bites carefully. As she didn’t want a scolding from her aunt!
After eating a bit Andi
reached for her water. Knowing it was there but not exactly looking at it. Her
fingers hit the glass and knocked the glass of water over.
“Andrea Rose Carter!”
Aunt Rebecca leaped up and screeched. “How could you?”
She called the maid over
and the maid wiped it up.
Aunt Rebecca turned to
Mrs. Preston, “I’m so sorry. Andrea is not usually like this. I’m sure she will
do better at your house with your granddaughter.”
"It's fine.
Annaliese and Andrea shall get along fabulously." Clara said with a wink
at Andi.
"Can-" Andi
broke off. "May I be excused?" she finished embarrassed. She had lost
her appetite.
Aunt Rebecca frowned
slightly but said, “Yes, you may."
Andi hastened out of the
dining room and scurried to her room and closed the door behind her. "I'm
not looking forward to tomorrow," she said aloud.
But no matter what Andi
could do nothing but run away and she knew better than to do that, much better!
Tomorrow would come and it did.
It was nearly noon and
already Andi was fretting about what to wear and what to do when she got to
Mrs. Preston's house. Just before they were about to leave Andi finally decided
on a blue dress. She straightened it the best she could and walked downstairs.
“Thomas is waiting for you, dear.” Aunt Rebecca said as
she sent Andi off. “Do you have your gloves?”
“Yes, Auntie,” Andi replied holding her gloves up as
proof.
“Good. Now have a nice time!” Aunt Rebecca waved her
off.
Andi waved back as Thomas drove down the street. Andi
wasn’t sure she’d have a good time, but for better or worse. She was on her
way.
About twenty minutes later they arrived at the Preston’s’
home. A young lady was sitting on a chair on the fancy house porch knitting a
potholder. Oh no, Andi thought, this is going to be so boring. I hope we
aren’t doing needlework the whole time. She groaned inwardly.
Andi was so consumed in her thoughts that while stepping
down from the carriage she fell and if it wasn’t for Thomas Andi would have fallen
on the street right in front of the girl. Whom Andi assumed was Annaliese.
“Thanks, Thomas.” Andi’s cheeks flushed red.
“You're welcome, Miss.” Thomas replied, “I’ll be back within a few hours to
pick you up.”
Andi waved as he left. She reached in her dress pocket to
put her gloves on but groaned, I left my
gloves in the carriage! Annaliese is really going to think I am a sloppy young
lady. Which I am, I suppose. She sighed and walked up the porch steps.
“Hello. Are you Annaliese Rose Preston?” Andi asked, Just
as a proper lady would.
“Yes, I am. And you are?” Annaliese asked.
“I’m Andi - I mean Andrea Rose Carter. My aunt pointed out
we have the same middle name.” Andi winced at her words. She couldn’t have
sounded any worse!
“We do.” Annaliese agreed. ”Would you like to come inside
for some tea and cookies?”
“Sure,” Andi said but she was thinking of proper introductions. Each time she met
someone new it was always the same thing they did. Tea and cookies. She
followed Annaliese inside anyway.
“Do you like sugar in your tea?” Annaliese asked as she
poured the tea carefully.
“No thank you,” Andi said. She picked up her cup and saw
Annaliese’s eyes widen. Oh no! I’m not
holding the cup right! Quickly setting it down and Andi picked it up the
proper way. Being a lady is hard! Andi
thought.
“How old are you?” Annaliese asked.
“I’m thirteen. How old are you?” Even though Andi already
knew Annaliese’s age it was the right thing to ask.
“Thirteen as well.” Annaliese said.
The conversation was awkward and Andi couldn’t wait to
leave, till she noticed only fifteen minutes had passed! Another hour here at least. She sighed. Annaliese’s voice broke
through her thoughts, “Do you want to come up to my room, Andrea?” she asked.
“Sure.” Andi nodded.
They walked up the stairs to Annaliese’s room and
Annaliese went in first. “You’ll just have to excuse the stuff everywhere.” she
said blushing.
Andi was shocked. Annaliese was definitely a horse girl!
Everything in her room had something to do with horses–
horse blankets, horse ropes hanging around her room, everything!
“You have a horse.” Andi stated. Starting to feel a bit
more comfortable.
“I do. Her name is Sugar and she is a palomino horse.”
Annaliese said.
“A palomino! I have one too! Her name is Taffy.” Andi said
excitedly.
Annaliese’s mouth dropped, “Do you really?”
Andi nodded. Her grin spreading across her face. Annaliese
was definitely different from what she had originally thought her to be!
“Where do you live?” Andi asked. If she had a horse and
was horse crazy why did she live in the city?
Annaliese blushed as she replied, “I just came out to the
city to visit my grandmother. I don’t love the city but I love my grandmother
so I came to visit her. I’m up near Glenwood California. Ever heard of it?
Where do you live?”
“I have.” Andi said. Her brothers were up that way selling
cattle once. “I live near Fresno California.”
“Fresno California!” Annaliese was excited, “I’ve been
there! We were visiting some friends who had just moved there.” she added.
“It was a tiny town and it has been growing,” Andi said
thinking of her hometown.
“Do you have any nicknames?” Andi asked.
“I do. It’s Ann.”
“Mine’s Andi.” Andi grinned. “Spelled with an I.’
“I bet your aunt doesn’t like that.” Ann giggled.
“Nope. She thinks it's too boyish. But it's my name and I
like it.” Andi laughed too. “How were you so ladylike when we were downstairs?”
“Oh! I am so not ladylike. Being that ladylike takes all
my attention and I can hardly do anything else. When I saw you nearly fall out
of the carriage it took all my self-control not to say anything because I do
the same all the time!” Ann broke out into a full laugh. So did Andi!
“How long are you staying here?” Andi asked a few minutes
later.
“I don’t know yet, I can stay as long as I want really.
You?”
“About a week.” Andi said and quickly changed the subject
to horses. “How many horses do you have?”
“I personally own two, Sugar and her foal, Cookie. My
whole family has sixteen horses.” Annaliese answered. “How many do you all
have?”
“I don’t know how many we have all together. I have one,
Taffy, and each of my family members has one. There are also the random foals
we have every year and the ranch hand’s horses.” Andi said, trying to add all
the Circle C Ranch horses together.
“Do you have a name for your place?” Ann asked curiously.
“Yes, it’s Circle C Ranch. Does yours?” Andi said.
“Circle C Ranch! Let me think about that a minute.” Ann
paused. “One of my uncles worked there!” Ann said after pondering a bit.
“Oh really? That's interesting.” Andi said.
“We do have a name for our place. It's not really fancy or
anything but the name is Preston’s Place since we are kind of a ranch and since
we do a lot that is not ranching we
picked that name, you know?” Ann said.
“Yes! I see.” Andi said. She liked the way Annaliese
talked.
“What shall we do now?” Ann asked after a bit of just
hanging out in Ann’s room.
“I don’t know. What do you want to do?” Andi asked.
Ann’s face brightened, “We can go outside and find
something to do! We can go down to someplace to ride.” she suggested.
“Sure!” Andi said, “I just hope we don’t have to ride
saddleside.” Andi’s face turned red. What if Anneliese always rode saddleside?
Ann noticed. “Don’t worry. I never ride saddleside. I did
once and fell off!”
“Really? Same.” Andi said in surprise. She and Ann sure
had a lot in common!
“Yep!” Ann grinned, “Let me tell my grandmother where we
are going,” she added as they walked downstairs.
“Hey Grandmother?”
“Yes, Ann?” Mrs Preston came out of the parlor from where
she was knitting.
“We are going to head for the stables and ride but not
saddleside.” Ann smiled at her grandmother.
“Thanks for letting me know. Have fun and be safe!” Mrs
Preston said.
“We will!” Ann called. Grabbing Andi’s hand she pulled her
outside.
“Let’s go!” she took off at a fast walk down the street.
“Where are we going?” Andi caught up to her new friend.
“To ride.” Ann answered.
“I know. But where at?”
“Oh! Just down this street a little.” Ann said. “There!”
she pointed ahead.
Andi looked down the street and saw a building saying,
‘Larry’s Riding Stables.’
“I ride here all the time when I am in town,” Ann said as
they walked into the stables.
“Hello, Miss Annaliese. Horses for two today?” Larry, the
owner of the stables asked Ann, seeing Andi behind her.
“Yep! Thanks Larry.” Ann and Andi walked back and a boy
was saddling up two horses with normal saddles! Perfect! Andi thought.
Ann and Andi mounted the horses and rode about in the
area; Andi had a great time! Riding without a sidesaddle in the city was awesome!
After their ride Andi had a sudden thought. “Ann, would
you like to come by Circle C Ranch sometime?”
she asked, “I know my family will be fine with it.”
“Yes! I would love to! When?” Ann was super excited. As
was Andi!
Andi grinned. “Three days? I am going back to the ranch
then, you can come along and my brother is coming back to San Francisco in a
week from today…” she let it hang. “So it would work great!”
“It will! Let’s hurry back and ask my grandmother!” Ann
picked up her skirt and ran down the street. Andi laughed and did the same.
“Wait for me, Ann!” she called. Never before was she running down a city street
the way she was before!
Three days later Andi and Ann were nearing Fresno
California. Ann’s grandmother and parents were perfectly fine with Ann coming
to see Andi’s family’s ranch since Aunt Rebecca knew Clara very well. “All
aboard for Fresno California!” the constructor called from the front of the
train. It pulled into the Fresno station and stopped. Andi grabbed her small
bag and Ann did the same. “This is so exciting!” Ann whispered.
Andi just nodded. She was so glad she had met Anneliese!
She saw her brothers out of the window searching for them.
“That’s my brothers.” Andi pointed out.
“Let’s meet them!” Ann exclaimed. She bounded in front of
Andi and off the train with Andi right behind her.
“Hello, Mitch, Justin.” Ann curtsied
in front of them. “Nice to
meet you. I am Anneliese.” she said.
“Nice to meet you, likewise.” Justin said, “Shall we head
for home?” he asked.
“Yes!” Ann said, “I can’t wait to see your ranch! Andi
said there are a lot of horses and horses are my favorite animals!”
Justin and Mitch looked slightly confused but didn’t say
anything.
Before long they arrived at Circle C Ranch. Andi jumped down
from the wagon, and Ann did the same. “Let’s take our bags inside and come back
out. Is that alright?” Andi asked.
“Of course!” Ann said. Her excitement was building and
Andi couldn’t help but smile. She was ever so glad she had met Ann! They put
their bags inside and came back out.
“Want to head for the barn?” Andi asked.
“Sure!” Ann said and they took off at a run having a great
time! Taffy was in her stall and nickered once seeing Andi.
“This is Taffy,” Andi said, rubbing her horse's nose and
giving her a little sugar she had snitched from the house.
“She is adorable.” Ann came over and petted her.
“Want to ride?” Andi asked.
“Sure!” Ann said.
“Great! Pick a horse to take. I think you could ride any
of these.” Andi checked out all the horses in the barn, “How ‘bout Pal?” she
suggested.
“Sounds fine with me.” Ann said. Andi unlatched Pal’s
stall and led him over to the saddles and hoisted one on Pal’s back. “He’s all
set.” she said after tightening the clinch.
Andi got Taffy out and did the same. She turned around to
see Ann already up on Pal and waiting. “Let’s go!” Ann said.
Andi mounted Taffy and they rode out of the barn. Skirts
and all! Andi saw all her family up on the porch watching them. Chad looked the
most shocked. He had never seen a so-called ‘city girl’ ride a horse like Ann!
Andi laughed at Chad’s expression and Ann saw him. She
kicked Pal and he trotted right up to the edge of the porch. “Hey Mister, want
to ride with us?” she asked mischievously.
“N -No,” Chad was awfully surprised. “I’m fine,” he added.
“Alrighty. But you're missing out!” Ann kicked Pal into a
lope and Andi did the same with Taffy and off they rode off.
Andi laughed, feeling the breeze in her hair. It was a wonderful evening, riding Taffy with a new friend, into the glorious California sunset!
Sara, you did amazing on this!! I loved it!
ReplyDeleteGreat story, sara!!!!!!!!
ReplyDelete- Emma M.
Nice job! 😀
ReplyDeleteNice job! BTY, i love the title!
ReplyDeleteLove this!
ReplyDelete-Micaiah