By Brianna Boiciuc, Age 13
WINNER (Ages 9-13) Winter/Spring Writing Contest 2024
Seven-year-old Joseph looked both ways before crossing the street. It was mostly vacant, but one never knew what may laying waiting in this ghetto of danger and starvation. The young boy peeked down beneath his threadbare, ragged coat to see a pitifully small half loaf of black bread.
I have to be
careful. This all the food Mama and I get for day.
Joseph crossed the
street, his boyish face withdrawn and alert, his eyes wide with fear. There was
no hint of mischief or laughter in him one boy at his age might have. Instead,
his cheeks were sunken and there were bags under his eyes.
After crossing the
street, Joseph opened the door to an apartment and passed door after door until
he stopped at one and knocked.
Joseph's shoulders
slumped, and he reached under his shirt to find the key on a string that was
tied around his neck.
“If I'm not home yet, Joey, let yourself in
and lock the door after you,” his mother had told him that same morning, like she did
every morning.
Joseph's mother had
to work in a factory during the day, so Joseph had to wait in line to get their
rations, which often took hours. The ghetto was overcrowded and there were many
people to receive their rations.
Joseph stepped into
the drafty, cold room and shivered, mostly from the cold but also from
loneliness. He sat down on the single bed and looked around the room. The
furniture consisted of the bed and a table. At dinner, Joseph and Mama pushed
the table up to the bed to use the bed as a bench. Sometimes Joseph wondered
why they even bothered if their dinner was only bread, anyways.
Well, usually.
Sometimes Mama managed to bring something home, like cheese, a bruised apple,
or, Joseph's favorite, white bread. Even if it was crusty, it was much, much
better than the black, sawdust bread they were given as rations. How Mama got
hold of these rare treats, Joseph didn't know. All he knew was how good they
tasted. And how they made the black bread taste so much worse. Day by day,
every day, the bread tasted more and more like sawdust.
Why are we here,
Mama? Joseph had
asked his mama this nearly every day when they first arrived here a year ago.
Mama's answer had
been, We are Jewish, Joseph, and some people don't like us. So we will
go somewhere where we will be safe.
Until Papa comes
home?
Mama would always
hesitate here before continuing. Yes, until Papa comes home.
Now he stopped
asking. He understood now. This was the way it had to be with the Nazis in
power.
“I wish I were a
Nazi,” Joseph said once. “I could bring Papa home. And I would tell the people
to like us.”
Mama gave a little
gasp, and she spoke sharply, “Don't ever say you want to be a Nazi. You don't want
to be a Nazi. Never say that. Never.”
Joseph silently
wondered why Mama had gotten angry, but he nodded obediently.
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Now, Joseph put the
bread on the table. He laid down flat on the bed and thought some more about
the war.
He had been too
young to know what was happening at first. Mama and Papa had been whispering
more than usual, sometimes late into the night. Jewish friends and family
visited more often. After dinner Joseph was sent off to play in his room, and
more whispering was done, from what he saw on trips to the bathroom.
Then Joseph stopped
going to the parks and to the movies. When he asked why, his parents said that
it was better to spend time indoors.
Papa was taken away.
Not long after, Mama
and Joseph moved into the ghetto.
Joseph had not had a
very happy childhood.
He closed his eyes
on tears.
Joseph must've dozed
off, because the next thing he knew, Mama was shaking him awake. She looked
tired, he noticed as he rubbed the sleep from his eyes.
“Come, Joseph, let's
eat,” Mama said softly.
He nodded, and they
blessed the food and divided it.
“Joseph,” Mama said
after the short diner, “let's do something fun.”
Fun? Joseph looked up,
half with interest and half in disbelief. There was nothing fun in
the ghetto.
“Let's memorize a
prayer,” Mama suggested.
A prayer? Joseph shrugged.
“I'll say it
and you repeat after me,” Mama said. “Our Father who Art in heaven, Hallowed be
Thy Name.” She paused as Joseph repeated her, then continued until the whole
prayer was done.
When they finished,
Joseph thought he saw traces of tears, but Mama blinked them away. She looks
sad, Joseph thought to himself.
“Well, memorizing
that prayer will give you something to do while I'm away at work. Do you
remember it, Joseph?”
“I think so.”
“Good. Keep on
repeating that prayer until you know it by heart. Then I will hear you say it
tomorrow night. Alright?”
Joseph nodded.
Mama got up from the
bed and checked the door to make sure it was locked. Then she and Joseph got
into bed. Joseph fell asleep quickly, but Mama laid awake, thinking about that
prayer she had assignment Joseph to memorize.
A tear slipped down
her cheek, then another, and another until the tears were freely streaming down
her face.
What have I done?
By dinner the
following day, Joseph could say the prayer forwards and backwards. He stood
before Mama and said the prayer, which Mama called the Lord's Prayer.
He noticed again how
sad Mama looked. “What's wrong, Mama?” He asked.
Mama slowly licked
her lips before answering, “Tomorrow, I'm not going to work.”
“But, Mama—” Joseph
said, his expression confused.
“Hush, Joseph. Let
me finish. Tomorrow, a lady is going to come here, and you are going to leave
the ghetto with her,” Mama said, her eyes searching Joseph's eyes, as if
looking for assurance that she was doing the right thing.
“No, Mama, let me
stay here! I need to get our rations, and, and....I can't leave you, Mama!
Please, let me stay!” Joseph pleaded.
Mama's face looked
just as frightened, worried, and scared as Joseph's must have.
“Joseph, you have no
idea how much I want you to stay with me. More so, I want to leave the ghetto
with you! But the Nazis will miss me at work and wonder where I am. I can't
leave, but Joseph, you can.”
Joseph began to
protest again but Mama cut him off. “Things are going on here, Joseph. Bad
things. I want you safe. Please, Joseph, do what I say.”
Joseph's eyes filled with tears, and he launched himself at his mama,
hugging her tighter than he ever had before. “Mama,” he sobbed.
“Shh, Joseph. It's
okay.”
Tears streamed down
from pairs of eyes. Joseph's sobs eventually quieted down to hiccups, then to
an even rhyme of breathing. He was sleep.
Mama laid herself
and Joseph on the bed and held her son for the last time.
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“Joseph, wake up.”
Joseph opened one
eye and saw Mama. He opened his other eye and yawned.
“Joseph, the lady I
talked about last night is coming soon,” Mama said, her voice wobbly.
“Mama, I don't want
to go,” Joseph protested once again.
Mama didn't answer,
she only hugged Joseph close. Finally, she said, “Recite the Lord's Prayer to
me.”
“Why, Mama?”
“If anyone should
stop you once you are out of the ghetto, they might think you are a Jewish
escapee. They might ask you to recite the Lord's Prayer, since it is a
Christian prayer and a Jewish boy shouldn't know it.”
Joseph told Mama the
Lord's Prayer.
When he finished,
there was a tear in Mama's eyes. “Perfect,” she whispered.
Just then, there was
a knock at the door. Mama got up and answered it.
“Come in,” Joseph
heard Mama say.
A young women
stepped in, holding a large laundry basket in her arms. She spotted Joseph and
gave him a small but kind smile. She came and knelt down in front of Joseph,
setting down her basket.
“Hello. I'm Irena
Sendler. You may call me Miss Sendler. I'm going to help you escape the camp.
You have to do what I tell you to do, alright?”
Joseph nodded.
Miss Sendler pulled
out sheets from the basket. “You are going to hide in the basket and I will
carry you out of the ghetto. Once we are out of the ghetto, I will go somewhere
safe and you will get out of the basket. You are no longer Joseph, the Polish Jew.
Your name is now Adolf. I am bringing you to family in the countryside. Do you
know the Lord's Prayer?”
Joseph nodded again.
“Good. If someone
stops you and asks you to recite the Lord's Prayer, do it. Now, we need to get
you dressed. Anyone who looks at you will know that you are from the ghetto.”
Miss Sendler picked
up a shirt, pants, and a coat and put them on Joseph. “Much better. Say goodbye
and into the basket you go.”
Joseph turned away
from Miss Sendler and faced Mama, his eyes already welling up with tears. He
ran and hugged Mama fiercely.
Mama hugged him
back, then crouched. “Joseph, once you get out of the ghetto, you are Adolf.
But once the war is over, you are to be once again Joseph. Then you will be
Jewish again. Never forget that. And also remember—” Mama's voice cracked, and
she paused a moment, then continued, “Remember that I love you, and that I'm
sending you away because of my love for you. Remember, Joseph. Never forget.”
“I will, Mama. I
won't forget,” Joseph promised.
He hugged her once
again. They remained there for a minute, then Mama slowly pulled away. “Goodbye,
my sweet little boy,” Mama said, stroking his hair.
“Goodbye, Mama,”
Joseph said. He reached out and stroked her hair.
Smiling sadly, her
heart breaking, Mama lifted her son into the basket and covered him with the
sheets.
“Goodbye, Joseph!”
Mama cried out, the tears flowing down her cheeks.
“Bye, Mama!” Joseph
said through the sheets.
“I love you, Joseph!”
“I love you, Mama!”
Mama's eyes met Miss
Sendler's, and she nodded. “Go. Bring my baby boy to safety. And thank you. You
are very brave.”
“So are you. We need
courageous people in war,” Miss Sendler said quietly.
Mama nodded her
agreement.
Irena picked up her
basket and moved toward the door.
“Bye, Joseph!” Mama
said one final time.
“Bye, Mama!”
The door shut.
Joseph was gone.
Mama sat on the bed
and cried.
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Joseph quietly lay
curled up in the laundry basket as Miss Sendler carried him through the ghetto,
toward the entrance.
Once they arrived at
the gate, the guard asked them a few questions then let Miss Sendler go.
A few streets later,
the basket was set down and the sheets lifted up and away. “Adolf, you can come
out now. Remember your new name.”
Joseph – or Adolf –
nodded solemnly.
“Come now, Adolf.”
Miss Sendler took Adolf's hand and led him out the ally.
They walked a street
together, then took a turn, bumping into a plump lady.
“Irena, what a
surprise to see you!” the lady said. Her words were nice, but, Adolf thought,
her voice wasn't.
“And who is this?”
The lady looked down her long nose at Adolf, who just barely resisted the urge
to hide behind Miss Sendler.
“Mrs. Pert, this is
Adolf. I am bringing him to the countryside for his parents, who are busy
helping the Nazis win the war. Say hello, Adolf,” Miss Sendler said. She
squeezed Adolf's hand as if to give him courage.
“Hello, Mrs. Pert,”
Adolf said just above a mumble.
“And I suppose you
know the Lord's Prayer as a good child should?” Mrs. Pert said, her eyebrows
raised.
Miss Sendler nodded,
her face calm. “Of course. Adolf?”
Adolf looked up at
Miss Sendler, his mind suddenly going blank. He blinked in frustration as he
tried to remember. He pictured Mama's face that night when she had first
repeated the prayer to him, and he remembered it.
“Our Father Who art
in heaven, hallowed be Thy Name. Your—”
“Yes, yes I see, you
know the prayer,” Mrs. Pert said. She looked a bit disappointed. “Very good.
Farewell.” She sniffed and walked past them.
Miss Sendler looked
down at Adolf. “Well done. We are a few streets from my house.”
“Do I really have
family in the countryside?”
Miss Sendler's eyes
darted around the street for any listeners before answering. “You have friends
in the countryside who will take care of you until the war's over.”
“Will Mama know
where I am?”
Miss Sendler
hesitated a moment, then said, “Yes, of course.”
Adolf nodded,
satisfied, and continued walking with Miss Sendler.
That night, Adolf
had a bath, something he never had since before the ghetto. Miss Sendler and
her mother, Mrs. Sendler, were both calm and friendly. Better than those things
was the food. And to Adolf's delight, there was real, white bread, with no sign
of black, sawdust filled stuff he used to eat.
Miss Sendler brought
him to the countryside, where a middle-aged couple took him in. They were kind
but not Adolf's parents, who he yearned for.
Every so often,
Adolf would ask where his parents are and if they were coming to get him, and
the couple would assure him that his parents are safe and would come for him
soon.
Of course, they
couldn't have known.
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Three years after
Adolf escaped the ghetto, the war was over. Adolf was now ten years old, and he
realized he could now be called Joseph again. He did what his mother requested
of him and remembered his Jewish heritage.
The couple who took
him in searched for his parents. After months of waiting, they received word
that his mother had been caught during a random street round-up the Nazis often
conducted in the ghetto. She had been caught the day after Joseph escaped the
ghetto. She, along with the others caught in the round-up, were taken to the
gas chambers.
The couple also
found out that Joseph's father had survived the Nazi camp he was taken to and
was now in a refugee camp.
When Joseph saw his
father on the train as he stood in the train station, his eyes filled with
tears and he ran to meet him. Even after four years, his father recognized his
son at once and ran to hug him. They met in the middle of the train car,
blocking the passengers’ way but caring not bit for them, only for each other.
When father and son finally broke apart, the tears ran down both of their cheeks, their joy and sorrow couldn't be put into words, so they remained silent.
Wow!! What a great story! Great job!
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Wow that was AMAZING, Brianna! GREAT JOB! It was so sad and sweet at the same time🥺
ReplyDeleteGood story, Brianna! You show some real potential as a writer. You made me care about Joseph and his mother.
ReplyDeleteOh wow... that was amazing Brianna!! YOU DID AMAZING!!!! So sad and yet so sweet 🥲
ReplyDeleteWonderful! I could really feel the emotion in this story. It was very descriptive. You should be an author some day Brianna!
ReplyDeleteGreat job Brianna! I love how you incorporated a real person from history into your story and how emotional it was!
ReplyDelete-Stephanie :)
Awesome job Brianna! You really made it feel like it was real!
ReplyDeleteAwesome! Great! Amazing and so much more!
ReplyDeleteWell written story. Good job Brianna!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written! Very descriptive and engaging! Looking forward to more !
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone! 😊
ReplyDelete~Brianna Boiciuc
Good Job Brianna!
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This is a beautiful story! It's very well written and full of emotion and suspense. I love that it's based on real events that changed so many lives. Good job Brianna... you're an amazing writer! Keep up the good work. Auntie Ionela
ReplyDeleteThank you! It means a lot!
ReplyDelete~Brianna Boiciuc
Well Written, Brianna!
ReplyDeleteThx!
ReplyDelete~Brianna Boiciuc
Good job!
ReplyDeleteI love the story of Irena Sendler!!
Thx, Micaiah! Me too!
ReplyDelete~Brianna Boiciuc
This is well-written! I could really feel Joseph's emotions and that of his mother's as well. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
ReplyDeleteAmazing job!! It was so good! You have so much potential!! ~Hannah
ReplyDeleteAww, thx! :)
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