by Micaiah C.
Chapter 1:
“Hi
mother!” she said, “Father said I could go with him today! I’m going to rope a
golden horse!”
Elizabeth
laughed, “Go along before they leave without you."
Andi
ran out the door, “Father!”
Elizabeth
laughed again and went back to her kneading.
**A few hours later**
Time to sweep the floor, thought Elizabeth as she went to get the carpet sweeper. She heard a commotion outside, and went to look out the window.
Mitch galloped into the yard on Chase, with Andrea sitting in front of him. She ran outside. She could tell something was wrong. As she got closer, she saw tears running down Andrea’s face. “What’s wrong?” she asked alarmed.
Andrea
ran into her arms. “Oh mother!”
Elizabeth
looked up at Mitch, “What happened Mitch?” She asked.
“I
think we should go into the house and sit down.” He replied.
“What
is it?” she asked again, “Where’s your father?”
“He’s,
he’s…”
“Tell
me, Mitch!”
“He
had an accident.”
“How
bad is he?” she asked, “Bring him back to the house.”
“It’s
not what you think.” Replied Mitch, “He’s--”
“He’s
not waking up mother!” exclaimed Andrea.
“What
does she mean?” asked Elizabeth.
“He’s
dead, mother. I’m sorry!”
“No, no…” Elizabeth’s face paled. She stood there shocked. She half heard Mitch call for the ranch hands to help her inside. Mitch took her arm and helped her inside.
**A few days later**
James’s sister, Rebecca didn’t help any, “Now Elizabeth, you must move in with me now. I know you must miss James, so it’s better if you get away.” She clucked her tongue.
“Now, Aunt Rebecca,” said Justin as he walked in the room, “I don’t think we’re going to move. I believe mother just needs rest.”
“Justin, let go of my arm. He was my brother, and it is my duty to look after
his family…”
It
faded as Justin brought Rebecca out of the room.
Why? Elizabeth wondered, why did this have to happen? He will never get to give Andrea a horse, or her locket on her 10th Birthday. He will never be able to reconcile with Katherine. Will Katherine never know? Would she even care if she did?
These thoughts and many others swirled around inside her head. She would hardly eat or sleep. Everyone was worried, but she didn’t care. Nothing mattered anymore. But wait, something did matter! What about Andrea, Melinda, her sons. They needed her! Help me LORD!
Andrea came over to where she sat, and put her arms around her mother and let out a sob, “Oh mother! I want father!”
“I know Andrea.” She said, gathering her on her lap, “I want your father too!” she began to weep, and kept thinking angry thoughts.
The
minister came over to them, “Now Elizabeth,” he said, “If your family ever
needs anything just ask.”
“Thank
you.” She said through her tears, “We will.”
Just
then Rebecca walked over, “Oh Elizabeth,” she started, “I pity you! Let me take
Melinda, and Andre---“
“I
don’t want your pity!” Elizabeth cut her off, “I don’t want anyone’s pity!”
“Well,
I never!” exclaimed Rebecca, as Chad came over.
“I think we should let mother be alone for a minute before they lower the casket.” He said, “That means you too Andi.”
Andi
sighed, and got up, “Okay Chad.”
Elizabeth was alone, she lifted her eyes, “Oh LORD! Help me be strong for my children! They need me!” she cried, “Give me peace!”
**A few minutes later**
“In my distress I cried unto the
Lord, and he answered me.”
Psalm 120:1
Behind
the hymn, ‘It Is Well’ by Horatio G Spafford:
The hymn ‘It Is Well’ was written by Horatio G Spafford, a wealthy Lawyer. He wrote it during many tragic events in his life. First, his properties burned down in the Great Chicago Fire, which ruined him financially. A little later, all four of his daughters, Annie age 12, Maggie age 7, Bessie age 4, and an 18-month old baby were killed in a shipwreck. In all this tragedy, he was still able to praise God and write these moving words we know so well. They came to him as he was passing over were his daughters met their death.
The
music was composed by Philip Bliss. The song was completed in 1876.
I really like the story! It was good!
ReplyDeleteGood job! It was so sad, yet so inspiring at the same time. 🥹☺️
ReplyDeleteThank you both! I loved writing it, but some of it was hard to write, since it was so sad. Thank you both again for the support!!
Delete~Micaiah
You should definitely write more. I agree, writing sad scenes or stories is very hard.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Deletethat was so good! I love how you write!
ReplyDeleteThat song has helped me through some hard stuff too when I lost my sister. Seeing it in this story almost brought me to tears. It is such a true song!
Oh wow! Thank you so much for sharing that! It means a lot to me!
Delete~Micaiah
❤️
DeleteI actually wrote a story ab ‘It is Well’ too for the most recent writing contest! It’s entitled “The Best Quincenera” if you want to check it out😜
ReplyDeleteI read it! It was super cool!
Delete~Micaiah
https://ranchfanfiction.blogspot.com/p/the-best-quinceanera-ever.html
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