A Mystery Fan (Thanks to Sadie S.'s eagle eye, the mystery fan has now been identified as FAITH). It was posted three years ago. So much for Mrs. M's memory. LOL
Katherine
Swanson stepped off the train into Fresno’s depot. This is certainly a big change from Millerton, she thought.
Shifting Hannah higher in her arms, Katherine canvassed the lively town before
her.
”Mama?”
Betsy tugged at her mother’s sleeve, reeling in her runaway
thoughts.
Katherine
smiled at the girl. “Come on, sweetheart. You’re going to get to meet your
Grandpa and Grandma and aunts and uncles.” If
they’ll even be willing to see us, she added to herself.
After
leaving their bags with the stationmaster, Katherine and the children made
their way down the bustling street. “Levi, will you please take your sister’s
hand.”
”Aw,
Mama. Do I have to?” The nine-year-old grumbled.
Katherine
sighed. She wasn’t a stranger to her son’s rebellious behavior. “Levi, don’t
argue with me.”
Upon
spotting two elderly men spinning yarns on the corner, Katherine decided to ask
them for directions.
”Excuse
me? Could you tell me of a livery stable where one might rent a horse and
buggy?”
”Sure
thing.” One of the silver-haired gentlemen pointed down the street. “Go one
block down and take a left onto Inyo. Then go three more blocks to K street. It’ll
be across the street and to your right. Blake’s Livery; you can’t miss it.”
”Thank
very much, sir.”
”You’re
welcome, ma’am.”
***
Katherine
brought the buckskin to a halt in front of the large, two-story, Spanish-styled
ranch house.
”This
is where you lived?” Betsy asked in obvious awe.
”Yes,
dear.” Katherine smiled. “For fifteen years.” The best years of my life . . .
A
handful of ranch hands were doing various jobs around the dusty yard, while the
majority of the working men were bringing in alfalfa from the fields. Her
brothers were probably around here somewhere.
Will I even recognize them?
Kate wondered. Will they know me? A
person could change a lot in ten years.
A
young man with a wide-brimmed felt hat approached her. “Can I help you, ma’am?”
He removed his hat and swiped his sleeve across his face, before replacing the
hat and looking her in the face for the first time.
Kate
watched her brother’s face as he realized who she was. ”Hello Chad,” she
said quietly, bracing herself for what may come. She had no idea what kind of
welcome she and her children would receive from the family she’d abandoned ten
years prior.
Clearing
stunned, Chad stepped aside, allowing her to alight from the buggy. After her
feet hit the ground and she turned to face him, he seemed to find his
voice.
“What
do you want?” he asked coldly.
Kate
winced. You deserve anything you get,
she reminded herself. He didn’t have to
speak to you at all. “Chad, I . . . I know how you must feel, and I--”
“Do
you?” Chad interrupted. “Do you really?”
Kate
didn’t answer for a moment. “I’ll go back to town and be on a train by tonight.”
She didn’t bother to tell him that the little money she had wouldn’t get her
and the children as far as Madera. “But I’d like to see Mother and Father first.”
“Father’s
dead.”
“What?” Kate was shocked. Dead! No, he
couldn’t be. “When?”
“About
three years after you ran off.”
Kate
sobbed. Her face hidden by her hands, she turned away from her brother.
“Look
what you did now!”
Chad
whirled around and took notice of the three children in the buggy.
“Levi,
be polite,” Katherine warned.
Levi
ignored her. Glaring at Chad, he jumped to the ground next to his mother. He
slipped an arm around her waist. “It’s okay, Mama. Don’t cry.”
***
Mitch’s POV ***
Mitch,
like Chad, had seen the shiny buggy roll into the yard. When Chad didn’t return
right away, he sauntered over to find out who had come to call. Seeing the
young woman with her back turned and apparently upset, he asked, “What’s going
on?”
“None
of your business,” Levi blurted out.
Mitch’s
eyebrows rose at the boy’s outburst. He glanced at Chad, but Chad just
shrugged.
***
Katherine’s POV ***
Kate
turned to see who had walked up. She gasped, stunned by the young man before
her who had only been a boy of twelve when she left. “Mitch?”
His
expression took on a look of shock, joy, and . . . love? “Kate!”
“Mitch!”
She wasn’t sure what he would do, but she didn’t have to wonder for long.
Mitch
pulled his sister into a tight hug, the sister who had been missing for the past
ten years of his life. “I can’t believe it!” He picked her up and twirled her
around before returning her to the ground next to Levi.
Pulling
away, Mitch noted her tear-streaked face. “What’s wrong?” he asked with genuine
concern.
Kate
wiped her eyes as she answered. “Chad just told me . . . about Father.”
“You
didn’t know?” Mitch implored gently.
“No.”
Kate whispered.
Didn’t
they realize that had she known, she would have returned home sooner? She
glanced passed Mitch to her dark-haired brother. She hadn’t been sure how her
parents and siblings would react, but Chad’s response was more like what she
expected. He stood next to the buggy’s horse, arms crossed, staring across the
yard at nothing in particular.
The
long-lost siblings hugged again. “Oh, Mitch, I’ve missed you!” Kate studied him
head to toe. “Look at you. All grown up, and rather handsome I might add,” she
teased.
Mitch
laughed. “Just wait until Mother sees you!”
***
Mitch’s POV ***
Mitch
glanced over his shoulder. Nope, Chad hadn’t budged. She’s your sister! He wanted to shout at him, but he didn’t. Looking
from Chad back to Kate, Mitch’s gaze fell on the dark-haired boy standing next
to her.
Kate
must’ve caught him watching the boy, for she said, “This is Levi, my oldest.”
Then motioning over her shoulder, she continued, “and this is Betsy and Hannah.”
Mitch
smiled at the girls and held out his hand to Levi. “Nice to meet you, young
man.”
Levi
looked at the offered hand and then back to his uncle. By the glare on the boy’s
face, well, if looks could kill, Mitch would already be dead.
Mitch
ignored it and turned back to Kate. He motioned to the other side of the buggy.
“Come on. Mother is in the house.”
Katherine
lifted Hannah from the buggy. “Come on, girls.”
Mitch
held out his hand to help Betsy down, but the young girl shrank back, eyeing
him suspiciously.
“It’s
okay, sweetie,” Katherine assured her daughter.
Betsy
allowed Mitch to help her down but immediately ran behind her mother’s skirts.
Katherine
gave Mitch an apologetic smile. “She’s not used to being able to trust people.”
A child who can’t trust anyone? What
kind of life have they lived? Mitch wondered.
*** Elizabeth’s POV***
The
kitchen door swung open. Elizabeth was standing over the cook stove adding
sugar to a pot of apple-mush.
Chad
stuck his head into the hot room. “Mother.” His tone was uncharacteristically
quiet.
”Yes,
Chad.” He isn’t acting right and he’s
awfully quiet. “Is something wrong?”
”You
need to come with me.”
”Was
there an accident?” she asked, setting aside what she had been doing.
”No.
There’s someone here who wants to see you.”
Chad
didn’t offer any more information as she followed him to the parlor.
When
they reached the parlor doorway, Chad stopped. Elizabeth looked past him and
saw Mitch talking to a young woman with three children. The woman said
something, and then Mitch hugged her.
When
Mitch saw Chad and Elizabeth standing there, he turned the young woman towards them.
Kate
wiped her eyes and smiled. “Mother.”
Elizabeth
stepped backward and covered her mouth in surprise at the sight of her missing
daughter. “Katherine?”
She
nodded. “I’m home.”
Elizabeth
ran forward and hugged her. “Oh, Katherine! It’s a miracle!”
Upon
pulling away, Katherine introduced the three children. “Mother, this is Levi.
He’s nine. And this is Elizabeth, we call her Betsy. She’s six.”
Elizabeth
smiled down at her namesake.
“And
last, but not least, this is Hannah. She’s three,” Kate finished.
“Hello,
children.” Elizabeth greeted. She didn’t receive an answer.
“This
is your grandmother,” Kate told them.
Elizabeth
turned around to find Chad and Mitch watching from behind them. “Mitchell,
Melinda is in the kitchen. Would you fetch her please?”
***
Melinda’s POV ***
Melinda
looked up from where she sat at the table peeling apples.
Mitch
sprinted into the kitchen. “Melinda. Come on, you gotta see this!”
“What
is it?”
Mitch
pulled her to her feet and nearly dragged her down the hall. “We’ve got
company.”
“Since
when does that excite you so much?”
“Normally
it wouldn’t, but this company is family.”
“Aunt
Rebecca is here?” Melinda gasped, looking down at her applesauce-splattered
apron.
“Nope.”
Mitch was enjoying keeping her guessing. “This relative hasn’t been here for
ten years.”
They
were now just outside the parlor.
Melinda’s
brow furrowed. “Ten years?” She gasped. “You don’t mean---”
Mitch
grinned and pushed Melinda into the room in front of him.
Katherine
looked up when they entered. “Melinda!”
Melinda
hurried toward her. Kate stood to embrace her sister. The sisters hugged. Kate
introduced her to the three kids and then Mother spoke up. “Melinda, dear,
would you please take the children to the kitchen for milk and cookies?”
Melinda
read between the lines. Mother wanted to talk to Kate alone. “I’d love to,
Mother.” Melinda scooped up Hannah and motioned for Betsy and Levi to follow
her.
Mother
looked up at Chad. who stood in the doorway. “Chad, would you please go find
Andrea? She went riding with Cory and Rosa.”
“Yes,
ma’am.” Glad for an excuse to leave the house, Chad nearly ran through the
foyer and out the door, letting it slam behind him.
And everyone knows what happens next! ;)
We sure do, but Mrs. M copied and
pasted it below anyway. It just didn’t seem like it should end without Andi’s
POV. She has just seen the rented buggy in the yard and is sure it’s Aunt
Rebecca come for an unwelcome visit:
The sudden bang of a door slamming saved Andi from
having to reply to Cory’s sensible suggestion. She shaded her eyes and looked
across the yard. Her twenty-seven-year old brother Chad was striding
purposefully toward the barn.
“Chad!” she hollered. It would be best to find out
what Aunt Rebecca wanted beforehand, rather than stumble into the house
unawares.
Chad turned. He gave Rosa and Cory a friendly nod
then hurried over to Andi. “I’m glad you’re back. Saves me the trouble of fetching
you home, especially when I’ve got too much else to do.” He jerked his thumb
toward the house. “You’d best go inside. Mother wants to talk to you.”
Andi froze. “Is it Aunt Rebecca? Has she come to
drag me back to San Francisco with her?”
Chad’s face was pale under his dark tan. “No,
little sister. It’s not Aunt Rebecca. It’s worse.”
Oh wow! This is really awesome! If the "mystery fan" is reading this please say so 'cause this is just soooo great!
ReplyDeleteMrs. M, I found this story posted on the fan-fiction site already, and the writer is "Faith" it says. Here is the link: http://ranchfanfiction.blogspot.com/p/kates-pov-from-family-secret.html
ReplyDeleteHope that helps. And this is a fantastic, awesome, story, Faith. :)
-Sadie S.
Sadie, you are AWESOME! I think you have "editor" in your future. You just have an eye for trivial detail. I will fix the author's name but leave the story in it's new home. :-)
DeleteAw, thank you so much! I'm glad I could help! :)
Delete-Sadie S.
Great POV change Faith!mloved every word
ReplyDelete~Leah
Great handling of viewpoint! Good for you.
ReplyDeleteColleen
I am glad we know who wrote it! Great job Faith!
ReplyDeleteLove your story, Faith! When I read this a while back, I showed it to my brother, who enjoyed it very much, as did I. It is very, very, very AWESOME! You are such an amazing writer!
ReplyDelete~Ellen
Wow! This was impressive. You did a good job keeping everybody "in character", just like Mrs. M said.
ReplyDeleteEmily
I loved this! This is a great story! Great job, Faith!
ReplyDeleteI re-read this story after almost a year, and I love it SO much. It was written beautifully. Now that I'm better at writing than I was many months ago, I was able to enjoy and appreciate this story even more. Truly wonderful, Faith. You did a wonderful job with everything in your story, especially with keeping everyone in character.
ReplyDelete~Grace Hammond
This is amazing, Faith :) I want to read more of your work :)
ReplyDeleteAmazing
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