By Abigail H. age 14
#7 Attic Surprise
Chapter One
Trouble Again
“Andi, wherever
you are, come down here!” Chad’s bellow shot up the stairs like a gunshot.
Ten-year-old Andrea Carter, Andi, gulped.
“Uh no, Chad blew his top again,” Andi sighed and turned to leave. “Guess
I’d better see what’s wrong.”
As she got to the top of her family’s grand
staircase, Andi peered
around the corner
looking for Luisa, the family’s Mexican housekeeper, who always scolded
Andi, in Spanish, for sliding down the banister.
“Whew,
not in sight,” Andi said.
Without a moment's hesitation she hopped onto the banister
and flew down the stairs.
Like always, she didn’t prepare to stop…….
Thump
Andi jumped up off the foyer floor, and the soft thing she ran into, with surprise. “Uh-oh, it was Chad I ran into,” she thought, groaning.
“Andi that’s
where you are. First you don’t do your chores
and now you slide down the
banister trying to kill me!” Chad said.
“Chad……” Andi started looking
toward the dining room where a yummy smell of flapjacks
was coming from.
“Don’t Chad me til’ you go and do your chores,”
Chad said, not wanting to hear Andi’s excuses. ”Then you will take Taffy
out to the pasture.”
“Why do I have to take Taffy to the pasture?
I was planning a ride today,” Andi huffed.
Chad rolled his eyes wondering why his sister didn’t understand what he was
saying. “You won’t be riding again til’ I see some improvement in your chores
little Sister.”
“Chad Aaron Carter, you can’t tell me what to do. I’m goin’ to tell Mother,” Andi shot at her
older brother.
“Oh good,
she’ll tell me ‘Good job I’ve been wanting Andrea
to clean her room. Now she’ll
have time.” Chad shot back as he turned toward the dining room.
Andi scowled
at Chad’s back as he left.
“Brother’s always have to be right.”
Chapter
Two
Carter Twins?
“What am I supposed
to do?” Andi mumbled as she scanned
the attic full of boxes
and odds and ends.
“Mother and Melinda are sewing, Yuck!
Mitch and Chad are on a rainy
roundup, Justin’s in town in a warm and cozy law office.
And I’m stuck inside because it’s raining.” Andi sighed.
“I wonder
what’s in these
trunks. That’s at least something I
can do.” She walked to the
closest trunk and opened the lid.
“Rats,
a too frilly dress, Yuck!”
Andi pulled
the dress out. It was black satin
with a lot of tucks
and lace, a lovely blue corsage lay pinned on the bodice.
‘Thud’
Andi
jumped at the small sound.
“What was that?”
As
she cautiously dug around in the yards and yards of satin and lace she came
across a box, it was about the size of the family Bible. While made with cedar it had mahogany
stain and an intricately carved A on the lid. Andi opened the box. On the top there was a picture that said,
‘'The Carter twin.1; Andrew Devlyn and Andrea Rose.’
Chapter
Three
Who Is
Andrew?
“Mother, Mother are you in here?”
Andi said as she burst
into the ornate
parlor.
“Andi, you are a ten-year-old young
lady, try to act like one,” Melinda
reprimanded, from the settee. She was always trying to be
this perfect lady, and telling Andi how to do it.
“Melinda,” Mother’s
voice held a hint of danger. Turning
her attention to Andi she spoke,”Yes dear, what is it?”
“I want to know about Andrew.
Who is he? Why does the picture
say ’the Carter twins’? I thought I was the last child,” Andi said
as she burst out crying.
Mother
pulled Andi into her lap.
“You know you were born May Twenty-sixth, 1868, but what you don’t…….”
***********
Millerton California,1868, ten years prior
“Doctor?” James Carter asked.
“Oh, yes James
what is it?” Dr. Weaver
said, turning to a worried
Mr.Carter.
“During the delivery, when you saw the boy you gasped.
What’s wrong?” James
said. “Is Elizabeth asleep?” Dr.Weaver asked.
When
James nodded he continued.
“Your son has a disease called
Down Syndrome. Englishman John Down found
out about it, but it is kind of a new term so I
don’t know much about it. He has a weak heart also. I wouldn’t advise keeping
him.”
“Keep
him? What do you mean Doc.?”
“Well, I have now birthed five Down Syndrome
babies, all of their parents
sent them to an
institution because they didn’t want them, they didn’t want their bloodline
ruined.”
“What is Down Syndrome
Doc.?” James asked, looking over his shoulder
at his wife and twins
sleeping on their four post bed in the center of the large room.
“It
means that he will look different, he will have sort of a mental disorder making
it hard to learn, speak, walk,
and do anything. If you want I can take the boy and you can tell Elizabeth he died.” Dr. Weaver said.
“No,” James
nearly shouted.” I cannot lie to my wife. Is there anything
else we can do”
James asked, this time so quietly the Doctor could barely hear him.
“I don’t know. It’s an awful lot of work……”
“Please Doc. you’ve got to help,”
James pleaded, “no matter what the world
thinks, life is precious, especially to God.”
“Yeah, well there is this new thing called oxygen. For money they send you a big bag of oxygen and a mouthpiece to help the
patient breathe.”
“I’ll take it no matter how much money.
Life is more precious to God than all my money.”
James said.
Chapter
Four
Death Or Victory?
“And so we got the air, after a few months
of doing that we went to see a doctor
in San-Francisco……”
***********
September, 1868.
“Let me put it plainly Mr. and Mrs. Carter, your son is not in good health.
The cold season is
coming. I suggest that you send him to an institution where he will be cared
for until he dies,” The skinny Dr. Ames said, staring at the family through
large wire rimmed glasses and small eyes.
“What if we want to take Andrew home?”
Mr. Carter asked,
looking at Andrew,
his son, lying on the examining table in the bleak
white room. Andrew was a small baby for four months, his hair kept changing
colors, one week it would be blonde, the next week it was black. His eyes
started out blue but they would soon
turn hazel.
“If you take him home he will die if he gets a cold. Your best option is to send him away.
Instead of watching him die helplessly,” the Doctor said as he settled his boney body on a plush
red seat.
James
looked at his family. Justin, wise and sensible, was holding five-year-old
Melinda on his lap. Chad was standing
in the corner watching ten-year-old Mitch carefully. Mitch
was staring at the tools the
Doctor had, and his beautiful wife Elizabeth was holding four-month-old Andrea.
“No, Dr. Ames, that is not my best option. My best option is to take Andrew home and care
for him the best we can.”
Chapter
Five
Praise The LORD!
“And
so we did. Three months
after bringing Andrew
home he got pneumonia…..”
***********
Millerton, 1869, January.
“Doc. Weaver,
how long does he have?”
James Carter asked,
preparing for the worst.
“What do you mean? This boy is in perfect
health. I do not know what you have been
feeding
him but he has years left not days,” Dr. Weaver was dumbfounded. How did this
rancher’s family do it? Just seven months
ago the boy was struggling to survive. And now he was just fine.
As if reading
Dr. Weaver’s thoughts
James said, “God is good, He answered
our prayers.
The Doctors
in San-Francisco told us if Andrew got a cold he would
die….. But….. Praise
God!” “The man upstairs is good,” Dr Weaver said.
“He’s not just the man upstairs He is God The Father, God The Son, and God The Holy Spirit. The three in one,” Father said eager to tell of his Faith in God.
Chapter Six
What’s Wrong?
“That day your Father led Dr. Weaver to Christ. He has become a good follower of Christ
since,”
“What about
Andrew, Mother, what happened next?”
Andi asked with her usual
impatience. “Well life grew into a habit, go to Doctors
monthly, purchase oxygen,
feed you two, do ranch
work, and Father even found a verse for us not to forget
Andrew’s real purpose
in life. Psalms 9:1,
‘I will praise thee O LORD with my whole heart;
I will shew forth all thy marvelous works,” Mother sighed.”But like some stories they don’t have a
happy ending……”
***********
Millerton, November, 1870.
“Mother, Andrew’s
not eating.” Justin said to his Mother on the way home from church on
Sunday.
Father sighed.“We’ll go to San-Francisco to get him checked out. We’ll drop by Grandfather and Grandmother Carter’s on
the way home to see if they can stay with you at the ranch.”
Chapter
Seven.
Goodbye.
“Hey Mother, what’s wrong? Why are you crying?” A new voice broke in.
“Well Justin I was just telling
Andrea about Andrew…..
And I can't go on, I’m sorry.”
Mother said as she left the room.
Justin sat down next to Andi.“Where did Mother leave
off?” he asked. “They picked up Grandfather and
Grandmother,” Andi replied.
“As we were waiting for them to leave…….”
***********
Millerton California, 1870. Justin's point
of view
“Come on little Buddy,
make a little smile,” I said as I made another face at Andrew,
who was sitting on Melinda’s lap.
***********
“Well Justin
we’d better get the chores
done before it gets dark.Tonight's going to be long,”
Chad said as we watched Father and Mother ride off in the buggy.
A few days later on November
sixth, it was a Tuesday,
I was riding home after a long day on the range, singing Hymns. There was no
one except God and Ford, my mount.
At
the house I stabled Ford, and looked toward the family’s Spanish, white stucco
house, with red tile roof, I noticed the parlor lamp was still running.
Grandfather and Grandmother usually retire earlier. I made my way to the parlor
and peeked in, Melinda was sitting in an overstuffed chair with a book covering
her face, and Grandfather and Grandmother were sitting
on the settee.
Grandfather motions me to sit and clears his throat.“We received
a telegram earlier
today.”
He paused,
took a breath and looked
straight at me. I knew then something was terribly
wrong.Then he said it, My worst nightmare ever. “Andrew passed away this morning.”
He said something more but I wasn’t listening. My brother just died and I’m not crying?
What is wrong with me?
The next few days passed in a blur of kids making pictures, and Father made the casket,it was cedar with a mahogany
stain.
Uncle
Benjamin did the funeral and afterwards the family came to say their last
goodbyes. My siblings put in their pictures, Mother put in a little quilt she made to cover his tiny little body.
Father put in his Bible.
“He did more Gospel sharing
than I ever will.” He said.
I stood up and said, “To God be the glory, great things He has done.”
That was enough for me, I started to cry. Uncle
Benjamin, Father’s twin brother, who was
standing next to me put a hand on my shoulder in comfort.
Chapter
Eight
Why Didn’t
Anyone Tell Me?
“That was the first
time I remember crying,” Justin
remarked as he shook his head and turned to Melinda, thinking Andi
needed time to sort things out.
Andi just sat there
staring at the floral carpet
as Justin and Melinda shared
memories of a world Andi didn’t know about until now.
“Memories I can’t share,”
Andi mumbled under
her breath as she left the parlor
and headed to her bedroom.
Andi spent the rest of the day in her bedroom
just thinking about Andrew,her twin all of a
sudden.
“Would he like horses?
What would he be like? What would he be called? Would I not be
called Andi?”
At supper Mother
asked, “Andrea what’s
wrong you seem put off.”
Andi
blew up. All the feelings
she had cooped up inside,
just spilled out.
“Wouldn’t you seem put off if you found out you had a twin brother you didn’t know about.
Are there
any more siblings
I don’t know about? Maybe
an older sister
that left to marry
someone?”
Andi pushed herself away from the table and stomped out of the room.
Chad looked around the table.
“If only she knew.”
Special thanks to God for giving my family two wonderful years with Timothy Devlyn Hadley, my brother. And
thanks to my brother for editing my story!
Hope you enjoyed reading
Amazing job!
ReplyDeleteOh wow, is this a true story? I am so sorry!
Thank you so much for the compliment! Yes it is sadly a true story. My little brother was born with down syndrome and a heart defect, but I had to put it in the time period of Andi so I didn't know how to put it in so I scratched that. I had to do a lot of research to figure out how to put it in the right time period 😥 Did you write a story?
ReplyDeleteAbigail Joy Hadley.
It's SO good, but also sad! Great job!
ReplyDelete~Sarah G.
Thank you for the compliment!! So glad you enjoyed my story!
ReplyDeleteAbigail joy H.
Beautifully sad story. God had a plan though!
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