By Emma S. and Emmy J. (ages 14-17)
The midmorning sun beat
down on seven-year old Susie Carter as she scooped up the last of the
marbles. “No fair!!” George Wilson
cried.
Susie rolled her
eyes. Aunt Andi and Pa had told her
several stories about George Wilson’s father, Johnny Wilson. So far, everything was true in his son’s
behavior.
“She won them fair and
square,” Jared, Susie’s cousin, replied, “Stop being a sore loser!” He stood between the two.
“I ain’t a sore
loser! You Carters and Prescotts! Always thinking you’re the boss!!” George
shot back as he rolled his eyes. “Well
I’m gonna learn you some manners!” George said as he raised a fist.
By now
most of the schoolchildren were anticipating the fight. When George’s fist flew, Jared ducked,
forgetting poor Susie behind him.
George’s fist met Susie’s nose, and Susie fell to the ground
sobbing.
Jared flew at George,
fists flailing. His fist met George’s
eye.
“Hey!! Knock it off!” A
familiar voice hollered. Just when Jared turned to see who belonged to the
voice, George’s fist found Jared’s eye.
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Mitch Carter strided
towards the school fight that involved his nephew and niece.
“YOWIE!!” Jared yelled as he fell to the ground. He quickly recovered and flew at George.
Mitch reached them and
tore them apart. “Now, you settle
down! Both of you!” Mitch held the boys
apart. “I think we’re going to have to visit
the teacher, don’t you think?” Mitch
sarcastically said.
Mitch gazed over at
Susie. Recent tears stained her
face. “Susie, honey. Can you go fetch the teacher?”
Susie sniffed, “Sure,
Uncle Mitch,” She took off towards the
school.
A few minutes later
Susie and the teacher, Ms. Foster, walked quickly towards the boys.
“What is the meaning of
this?” Ms. Foster asked angrily.
Jared quickly explained what happened.
“I will have you two
boys come with me. Mr. Carter, please
wait here with Susie. Could you also
take Jared and her home with you?”
“Of course, ma’am,”
Mitch said. With that, the teacher
dragged the boys into the school.
All the school children
knew what was happening. Those two boys
were in for a whipping.
Mitch stood there with
Susie, “Looks like I’m gonna have to take you to the doctor.”
“My nose doesn’t feel
very good, Uncle Mitch.”
“I know, honey. I’m sure Jared will be out in a while,” Mitch
assured.
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Jared walked out of the school and walked towards where Uncle
Mitch and Susie were standing. Sure that
teacher might be small but she can pack in a hard whippin! Jared thought as he rubbed his sore
backside. He reached Uncle Mitch and
said, “I’m ready if you are.”
“Look, I’m gonna have to take Susie to Doc Weaver. Why don’t you go get yourself a horse from
Blake's Livery.” He reached into his back pocket and took out his billfold. “Here this should be enough.”
Jared took the money,
“Thanks, Uncle Mitch. Well, I wouldn’t
mind staying in town.” Jared said innocently.
“No, no. I know what you’re
thinking. You’re putting off telling
your Pa.” Mitch said with a chuckle.
“You know me too well, Uncle Mitch,” Jared said with a sigh. See you later.”
Mitch and Susie waved.
Jared strolled over to the livery. Blake’s
Livery. He walked in and met Mr. Blake. “Jared! How nice to see ya! Why are you out of school young man?”
“Got sent home with a sore backside,” Jared winced.
Mr. Blake nodded, “Ahh. My
son Cory got plenty of those,” he chuckled.
“I need a horse. My uncle
Mitch sent me,” Jared said and handed him the change.
“Alrighty, come with me,” Mr. Blake said as he waved Jared over to
a buckskin gelding. “He should do the
job. Just bring him back on your next
stop in town. I’ll saddle him for you.”
“Yes sir,” Jared
replied. In a few minutes Jared was on
the road home. I’m glad it takes a while
to get home, Jared thought.
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“Well, it looks to me like it's broken,” Dr. Weaver informed them.
He felt around Susie’s nose, “I’m going to put a bandage on it. It should heal relatively quickly.” Mitch
lifted his niece off of the exam table and set her on the floor.
“Thanks, Doc. Well Susie,
we better head home,” Mitch said to his niece.
How am I going to explain this to
Chad? He’s gonna explode. Mitch
thought as he walked out of the office, with Susie clutching his hand.
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Jared turned into the
dirt lane that led to his house. When he
reached the house, his stomach was getting queasy. What
will Pa say when he hears that I got into a fight? Jared shivered at the
thought. He took the horse into the barn
and started untacking him. Just as he
undid the girth, he heard footsteps behind him.
“Jared! Why are you home so early? And why on earth do you have one of Blake’s
horses?” Riley Prescott asked.
“Well,” began Jared,
staring at the horse, trying to hide his face from his father, “It’s kinda a
long story. I’m sure you don’t have time
for it.”
“I’m sure I do have
time for this long story,” Riley said as he spun Jared around to face him. Jared didn’t meet Riley’s eyes, “Jared Riley
Prescott! Who on earth gave you that shiner?”
“Uh, George Wilson,”
Jared replied.
“Hmm, we’re gonna have
to talk about this thing, young man. Put
that horse away and come inside,” Riley said as he turned on his heel and
walked out of the barn.
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Andi kneaded the piece
of dough. She was making bread for supper.
The front door opened and Riley walked in, “Riley, do you need a
drink? I made lemonade fresh this
morning.”
“No thanks. Our son is in a heap of trouble! He got sent home from school with a sore
backside.”
“NO! Our Jared?”
“Yep, our Jared,”
Just then the front door slammed. Jared walked
in, “I put the horse away, Pa.”
“You have a lot of
explaining to do, young man,” Riley said.
“George started it!!”
Jared exclaimed.
“That gives you no excuse! Prescotts do not get in scuffles!”
“But he hit Susie!”
“I don't want to hear
it! Now march yourself right out to the
barn. I’ll be out there in a minute.”
Andi chimed in, ”Wait a
minute! George Wilson hit Susie??”
Jared sighed. “George
was aiming for me and he hit Susie instead. But I was just defending Susie, so
why do I have to be punished?”
“Because you fought
back, instead of turning the other cheek!” Riley reasoned.
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Susie clutched her
uncle’s waist as they rode home, “I hope Jared doesn’t get into too much
trouble with Uncle Riley.”
“I’m sure he’ll have a
double sore backside,” Mitch said with a chuckle.
“But Jared was
defending me. That George Wilson! He’s a dirty, smelly, Skunk!!” Susie said
with triumph.
Susie felt Chase stop
and Mitch turned around in the saddle, “Susie Carter! Do you think your mother would like to hear
you talking like that?”
“No sir,” Susie said
bashfully. When they reached the Circle
C, Mitch dismounted and reached for Susie.
He lifted her down.
“I’ll put up
Chase. You go find your Pa,” Uncle Mitch
said.
“OK,” Susie replied and
hurried over to the barn and just as she turned the corner. . .
“OOF!” Susie ran right
into her father causing her to fall on her backside.
“Whoa, girl!! Slow down!” Chad told Susie as he lifted her
from the ground, “Hey, why are you home so early from school? It’s barely noon time. I hope there was no trouble at school, young
lady. Hey, what happened to your nose?”
Chad asked as he touched her bandaged nose with his calloused fingers.
Susie winced, “Well,
maybe . . . . Uncle Mitch should explain it to you.”
“If you say so,” Chad
told Susie. Just then Mitch was leading
Chase into the barn.
“Hey Chad, I have some
explaining to do. I’ll put Chase away
and then I’ll tell you all about it.
Take Susie in the house. I can
explain it to you at the dining room table.
You might want to be seated rather than standing up. You also might want Ellie and Mother in the
conversation.”
“Whatever. Come along, Susie,” Chad told Susie as he led
her towards the house.
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“He did WHAT??” Chad
flew out of his chair. Chad fumed with
anger. “How dare he lay a hand on Susie!!”
Ellie laid a hand on
Chad’s arm. “Calm down,” Ellie whispered.
“I will not calm
down!! That little squirt punched my
daughter!” Chad hollered.
“Oh Daddy, George
accidentally punched me. Not on
purpose!” Susie said, always trying to be the peacemaker.
“He made you get a
broken nose and gave Jared a nice shiner.
I’m not letting this one go,” Chad said as he snatched up his Stetson,
“Mitch take care of things while I’m in town.
It could be awhile.”
“Chad, I’ll come with you.
I don’t want you to get yourself hauled to jail,” Mitch said.
“NO! I’ll do this by
myself,” Chad exclaimed.
Ellie stood up from her
chair, “Please Chad, don’t act in haste.”
Chad clamped his Stetson on his head and walked out of the house.
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Chad mounted Sky,
Ellie’s words and Mother’s warning look hung in his mind. “Don’t act in haste.”
He brushed her words away into the back of his mind as he trotted down the lane
that led to the main road. When he got there, a near-coming figure on a horse trotted
down the road towards town. The figure waved.
“Hey, Andi!” Chad
hollered.
“Hey, Chad!” Andi said,
a look of determination on her face.
“What
are you doing here?” Chad questioned.
“Going to talk to Johnny Wilson!”
“Why didn’t Riley come with you?”
Andi rolled her eyes, “Chad, I’m grown up now. Besides, Riley had to deal with Jared. He didn’t want me to go to town anyway,” Andi
smiled sheepishly.
“Aww, Andi. Don’t punish the boy. He was just defending Susie.”
“It was Riley’s decision
not mine,”
“Well, I guess we can
go to town together.”
“Sure, let’s get
going,” Andi said as she urged Shasta forward.
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The brother and sister pair trotted into town. They passed a few buildings and then saw
Johnny Wilson heading out of the bank. “Let’s get this thing over with and
quickly. OK, Chad?” Andi said.
I just want to let him
know that I don’t take too kindly to his son punching my daughter,” Chad’s face
flashed with anger.
“Well, no time like the
present, right?”
“Guess so,” Chad
said. He and Andi rode up to the
hitching post. Where they both dismounted.
“Hey, Johnny!
Johnny turned around at
his name.
“What do you want,
Chad?” he asked as he strode towards Andi and Chad.
“I’m wondering why my little girl came home with a broken
nose and implying your son,” Chad clenched his teeth, “punched her!”
Johnny smirked, “Oh,
Chad! Let it go! I
heard it was an accident. Your little
girl is just a plain old fibber!”
Apparently, that was
the wrong thing to say, because Chad
launched his fist at Johnny. Chad’s
punch sent Johnny sprawling onto the wooden sidewalk.
Andi gasped. “Oh,
Chad! I don’t like this,” Andi whispered.
Chad held up his hand
to silence her. Johnny quickly recovered
and flew at Chad. Out of the corner of
Andi’s eye, she saw someone angrily striding towards them. Sheriff Tate.
“Uh-oh!” Andi muttered.
When Sheriff Tate
reached them, he tore them apart and growled, “What in blue blazes is going on
here?”
Johnny quickly answered
out of breath, “This man assaulted me.”
Chad’s face flashed
with anger, “His son punched my daughter.
He brushed it off and called Susie a liar. I wasn’t even going to think about fighting
but that comment sent me off!”
“Sounds like a day or
two in jail would do you two good,” Russ replied.
Chad groaned, What have I gotten myself into now?
“Sheriff, are you sure
they need to spend time in jail?” Andi inquired.
“Yes, ma’am. Now Andi, how about you go back to the ranch
and tell Ellie. . . about…her husband’s behavior,” Russ said.
Andi nodded and turned
to mount Shasta. How am I gonna explain this to Ellie?
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“He WHAT?!?” began
Ellie, “He got himself thrown in jail?!”
“Yep. I saw the whole thing. Johnny got Chad going when he told him Susie
was a liar,” Andi said.
Ellie groaned, “Well, I
guess I’ll go get Susie and go visit him. He doesn’t deserve to be visited
though.”
“Oh Ellie. I’m sure he could have done things
differently but he did it out of his love for Susie.”
“Yeah, I guess you're
right. Well, it’s almost four o’clock,
we best hit the road.”
“Ellie, dear,”
Elizabeth began as she walked into the dining room, “Why don’t I have Luisa and
Nila pack you a supper? Maybe
sandwiches?”
“Oh that would be
great, Mother,” Ellie replied. She also
called Elizabeth Carter, “Mother”
because Elizabeth was like a mother to Ellie.
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What is El gonna think? Who knows? Chad thought as he lay
on the hard cot, staring at the ceiling.
These sure aren’t comfy. Well why would they be? There for prisoners! HA! I
guess I’m a prisoner for a day or two.
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Ellie dismounted and
lifted her daughter off the horse and tied Pal to the hitching post, before
digging in the saddlebag for their supper.
“Mama?” Susie asked.
“Yes?”
“I thought the jail was
for bad guys but Papa is in there. I just don’t get it!”
Ellie chuckled, “Well
your father will be a bad guy for a couple of days.”
“Oh. Poor Papa,” Susie said sympathetically.
“Well let’s get in
there and give him some company,” Ellie said as she reached for Susie’s hand,
and they walked into the sheriff’s office.
“Good evening,
Sheriff. We’re here to see Chad,” Ellie
said with a smile.
“Sure, go right in
there. Take as long as you want,”
Sheriff said with a wink as he unlocked Chad’s cell.
Ellie and Susie entered
the cell.
“Hey, Papa!” Susie said
as she ran into Chad’s open arms.
Chad gave Ellie a hug.
“Hey, Suse, Ellie. I’m surprised you actually came,” He
chuckled.
“Well, you’re lucky
your sister loves you cause I wasn’t even gonna visit you,” Ellie said with a
smile.
“Wow, what a wife you
are,” Chad joked.
“What a husband you
are! Being put in jail,” Ellie joked
too, “Well, we brought dinner here so we could eat together.”
“Thanks El.”
Ellie smiled, and
handed Chad a sandwich and an apple.
“Suse, why don’t you go
get yourself a candy,” Ellie said to their daughter as she handed her the
change.
“Thanks, Mama!” Susie said as she ran out of the office.
“That girl,” Chad said
as he shook his head, “She sure is full of energy. I’m sorry I got you into this mess.”
“Well I think there is
someone else you need to apologize to,” Ellie glanced over at Johnny in the
other cell.
Chad changed his voice
to a hoarse whisper, “No, Ellie. I can
apologize to you but not to that man!”
“Chad, you were the one who started this whole situation.”
Just then Susie ran into the office with a candy stick in her
mouth, gasping for breath, “Ma-ma, what’s for supper?”
“Sandwiches.”
“Susie, how’s your nose doing?” Chad asked.
“It feels the same. Oh
Papa! I’m sorry I got you roped into all
of this.”
“Oh Suse. It’s not your
fault,” Chad sympathized.
After they finished
their supper, the door opened and Justin walked into the jail. “Chad, what have
you gotten yourself into now?” Justin exclaimed, “I can’t bail you out, you
know. Am I going to be bailing you out of trouble now that Andi’s gone?”
“How did you know that
I was in jail?” Chad questioned.
Justin laughed, “Well,
believe it or not, Tim saw Russ hauling you and Johnny into the jail.”
Chad groaned, “Great!
You don’t need to bail me out.”
“I wasn’t even thinking
about that! You need to learn a lesson to think before you act. Besides, I can
see the headline now… CHAD CARTER CRIES FOR HIS BROTHER’S HELP!” Justin
chuckled.
“Knock it off,” Chad
complained, and turned to Ellie, “you best head home before it gets dark.”
“You’re probably
right,” Ellie replied, glancing down at Susie who had laid down her head on
Chad’s lap.
Chad gently roused
Susie, “It’s time for you to go home with Mama.”
Susie yawned, “I want
to stay here with you, Papa!”
Chad smiled, “Mama will
need your help over the weekend though.”
“Well, I’d better get
home to Lucy before she starts to worry,” Justin said as he headed out the
door.
“Good night,” Chad said
as he gave Ellie and Susie a hug.
Ellie gave him a
teasing smile as she stood in the doorway, “Don’t get into any more trouble,
dear husband.”
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A loud bang jerked Chad
awake on a fine Sunday morning.
“Time to get up, boys!”
Sheriff Tate called. Chad got up out of
his cot and walked to the door of his cell.
“I assume you two boys
learned your lesson?” Russ asked as Chad and Johnny glared at one another.
“Yes sir,” they both
muttered.
Russ walked them out to
the boardwalk, just as the church bells began to ring, “Well boys, I will hope
to see you in church.”
Mitch rounded the
corner as the sheriff walked away, “So big brother,” Mitch greeted, “how was
your stay in the Fresno jail?”
“The longest two days
of my life. All I could think about was
Ellie, Susie, and you running the
ranch,” Chad’s voice came to a hoarse whisper, “Did you know that no one came
to visit me yesterday and Racheal and George came to see Johnny!”
Mitch tried to conceal
his amused smile, “Well we were busy getting Reverend Cain settled.”
Chad raised an eyebrow,
“Reverend Cain?”
“Yes. The visiting reverend from back east. Reverend Harris is visiting family back in
Seattle so Reverend Cain is filling in for him.”
“Do I have time to
change?” Chad questioned, “If I go to church like this, I’ll never hear the end
of it from Mrs. Evans!”
Mitch held out Chad’s
Sunday best, “You better hurry. You can
change at Justin’s.” And with that, Chad
was off.
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“Good morning
congregation!” Reverend Cain loudly boomed as he stood at the pulpit. A murmur of good morning’s echoed through the
building. “My name is Reverend Cain, and you can call me. . . Reverend
Cain. I am a preacher from back
east. Reverend Harris is a dear friend
of mine. We went to seminary together. I was traveling to your lovely town of Fresno
when I thought to myself, “Boy, it is HOT this time of year!! Even in the late
spring!”
The congregation nodded
in agreement.
“Anyway, I thought of
this joke. The blind man said to the
deaf dog “I see, I see!”
The crowd was silent,
except Chad. He, however, howled with
laughter!
Reverend Cain chuckled
and pointed at Chad, “It does the soul good to see a man with a sense of humor
in my congregation!” He cleared his throat and said, “Now folks, turn in the
good book to Matthew 18. Beginning at
verse 21.” He went on about the parable of the unforgiving servant.
He read through the
passage, ”Now, one of God’s greatest gifts is the gift of forgiveness. Jesus says in the book of Luke, “Forgive and
you will be forgiven”.
These words hit Chad
hard. Come invitation time, Chad was
contrite. He made his way up to the
altar to ask God for forgiveness. Johnny
snickered at the sight. Rachel elbowed
him. . hard, which made him fall to the floor with a grunt. He scrambled back to his seat, glaring at his
wife.
After the service
ended, Chad made his way over to Johnny.
“I’m. . . I’m sorry, Johnny. I
shouldn’t have lit into you like I did.
I know better and. . . and will you please forgive me?”
Johnny
contemplated for a few moments. “I
suppose I can if you can. And I
apologize for my son’s behavior. He will
be facing the consequences of his actions when we arrive home!”
Chad and Johnny shook
hands, as their wives and children looked on.
Andi smiled, Finally!
This was the beginning
of a very bumpy friendship. Johnny
changed for the better, but his son, George, never did. As the saying goes, Like Father, Like Son, Andi hoped George would soon change his
character for the better!
Great story Emma's!!! :D
ReplyDeleteI loved the way they made up at the end!! :D
Y'all did great on this, Emmy and Emma!!!
ReplyDeleteI loved how you ended the story! :D
Great story I really like it :)
ReplyDeleteGreat story I really like it :)
ReplyDeleteThat was an amazing story. I really enjoyed it!
ReplyDelete-Makenna C
Good job
ReplyDeleteI absolutely LOVE this!! Y'all did such a great job!!
ReplyDeleteThank you everybody!! It was fun writing it with my friends!
ReplyDeleteYou got that right! We had so much fun together coming up with ideas (even if we did get a little crazy). I'm sure your brother is glad we're finally done with it though ;)
DeleteEmma S.
I LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The Reverend sounds like someone I know! ;)
ReplyDeleteAmazingly done, my friends! It sounds like y'all had TONS of fun writing this!
ReplyDeleteLove this story girls! Great job!!
ReplyDeleteOops, forgot to sign my name. LOL
ReplyDelete~Micaiah
Thank you so much!!
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