by Ellie B.
I want to thank Emma A. for editing the story for me!! Thanks, Emma!!
"Yep," Chad said as he swung onto his horse Sky.
Just then their mischievous cousin Daniel who was visiting their ranch,
rode up and said, "Chad, Mitch, come quickly. Andi and Taffy fell off a
fifty-foot ledge."
"What?!" Mitch and Chad exclaimed at the same time.
"Yeah, and you better hurry; Andi doesn't look too good! Melinda is
with her right now."
Just then Riley Prescott ran up. "What's wrong? I heard a
yell."
"Riley, no time to explain. Go and get the Doctor and Justin. Tell
Justin to send a wire to Madera, to our mother telling her to get on the next
train here as fast as she can. Now; go as fast as you can!" Chad
said.
"Yes, sir," Riley replied, then he jumped on his horse Dakota
and galloped away.
"Daniel, can you lead us to them?" Mitch asked in a stern but
concerned voice.
"Yes, I can," Daniel replied in a determined voice.
Then Chad started yelling out orders to the hands to hitch the wagon up
and fill it with blankets on the bottom. Mitch took a moment to pray. Dear
Lord, And, and Melinda need you right now, Lord, please help them. Please heal
Andi, in Jesus' name I pray, Amen. Mitch immediately felt better. Then he
remembered that their mother, Mrs. Carter, was in Mandera with the ladies from
the missionary society. Oh no, Andi is going to ask for their mother. Just then
Riley, Doctor Weaver, and Justin rode up. "What's going on here?"
Justin demanded.
"Justin… Andi and Taffy fell off a fifty ledge," Mitch
explained grimly.
"Oh no!" Justin exclaimed. “I sent the wire to Mother as soon
as Riley told me to. She should be here in a few hours.”
"Good, because Andi is going to ask for her. Now come on guys let's go," Mitch said in an anxious voice. "Daniel, lead the way."
~~~
"Andi, Melinda, where are you?" Mitch yelled. They had been
looking for Andi and Melinda for an hour and they still couldn't find
them.
"Daniel, are you sure they were around here?" Mitch asked in a
stern voice.
"Ye-" Daniel was about to say when Mitch held his hand up.
"Over here," they heard a faint but distinctive
call.
"Keep calling," Chad yelled.
“Over here,” Melinda kept calling.
Mitch saw Melinda standing over a still form waving her hands and
yelling, “Down here! Hurry!”
Man sometimes, Melinda, can yell louder than Chad, Mitch
thought.
Once they had gotten to the spot where Andi and Melinda were, they jumped
off their horse and ran over to Andi and Melinda. They all gasped at the sight
of what lay before them: Andi lay in a pile of dirt, blood, and rock, with her
back to the sky. Her head was split open with blood flowing freely, her leg and
arm were twisted weirdly, and she was covered in scrapes and bruises.
Justin bent beside Andi but didn't touch her. “We'll get you out of here
in no time,” he promised.
Melinda cried out, “I didn't know what to do. She’s hurt real bad.”
Justin rose, hugged Melinda, and said, “You did just right, honey. You
stayed with her and kept her quiet. There’s nothing more you could have
done.”
“How did this happen?” Chad yelled as he crouched down by Andi. Mitch
knelt by Andi’s side and sent a prayer to heaven. Please God we need you to
heal, Andi. Lord, please let her live!
Melinda burst into tears.
“Chad!” Justin exploded. “That's enough.”
Chad sagged. “I’m sorry sis, I didn't mean to bite your head off. I
just….” His voice dropped to a whisper. “I’m sorry.”
Just then Doc Weaver knelt by Andi and said, “Help me turn her over,
boys, so I can see what we’re up against. I’m sorry, Andrea, but this is going
to hurt. We’ll try to be as gentle as possible.” Mitch saw Andi’s eyes open as
she tried to focus on Doctor Weaver's eyes.
“Where's Mother? I want Mother,” Andi moaned.
“Where is Mother?” Melinda demanded.
“She went to Madera with the ladies from the missionary society,” Mitch
said and immediately regretted it when he saw the look of anguish on Andi’s
face. Why oh why did Mother have to go today of all days? “Justin sent Mother a
wire in town. She should be home by the time we get there. Don’t worry Andi,”
Mitch said in a comforting voice.
“Come on boys we have to turn her over to see the extent of her
injuries," Doc Weaver commanded.
"Andi, this is going to hurt so be prepared," Doc Weaver said
in a comforting voice. Mitch and his brothers all put their hands gently under
Andi and turned her over. Andi yelled loud enough to be heard at the ranch.
Then Doc Weaver gently touched Andi's shoulder and she let out another
pain-filled yell.
"Hey, be careful, doc," Chad growled.
"Don't hurt her, doc," Mitch added. Doc Weaver just ignored
Mitch and Chad and continued to look Andi over.
"Andrea, tell me what hurts," Doctor Weaver asked.
"Everything," Andi said in a choked voice like she was
struggling for breath. "Everything hurts."
Mitch saw Doc Weaver dig around in his bag. "I need you to take
this," He said, holding up a brown bottle. "It's laudanum; it will
help you with the pain."
"No, before you give it to me please Justin," Andi pleaded in a
voice that was barely audible as she grasped Justin's hand. "Please look
at Taffy before he gives that to me," Andi begged.
"Andi….." Justin began in a nervous voice looking over at
Taffy. “Ok, but you are taking it right after we come back.”
Mitch walked over to Taffy with Chad and Justin. Mitch caught his breath
at what he first saw. Taffy looked just as bad as Andi. She lay on a pile of
boulders, shuddering. Her two front legs were split open with blood flowing. Rocks
were stuck in her once beautiful mane and tail. She had deep cuts on her back
and stomach.
Mitch knew that Taffy would have to be put down. There was no way to get
Taffy out of the gully without hurting her more. How is Andi going to take
this? Mitch thought.
"There is no way she is going to make it,” Chad said in a grim voice
that was barely audible. “She’s just too hurt. How am I going to tell Andi?
It's going to break her heart.”
Mitch turned back and looked at Andi. He could tell that the doctor had
convinced Andi to take the laudanum by the way her eyelids drooped and how she
was trying to keep her eyes open. Mitch and Chad walked back over to
Andi.
“Chad, you are not going to shoot Taffy right? Promise me,” Andi asked in
a sleepy voice.
Mitch knew what he needed to do.
He said as gently as he could, “Don’t worry, Andi, Chad is not going to
shoot Taffy. I promise.” Mitch saw a look of relief in Andi's eyes then her
eyes fluttered shut and he knew she was asleep.
Then he heard Chad yell behind him, "What are you thinking, Mitch?
You can't promise her that! You know she has to be put down." Chad's last
words were in a broken voice.
"I know we have to put her down, Chad. All I did was promise her you
wouldn't put her down. I know that you could never do it. You gave her to
Andi." Mitch said in a quiet tone.
Mitch slowly took his gun from his holster, then said, "Chad, please
go and help Doc get Andi in the wagon. I will take care of Taffy." Chad
crouched down and kissed Taffy's forehead before slowly walking over to help
Daniel and Doc Weaver get Andi into the wagon. Melinda came over to kiss
Taffy's head, then went to sit in the wagon with Andi’s head cradled in her
lap.
Justin did the same to Taffy and put his hand on Mitch's shoulder and
said, "I'm proud of you, Mitch, for taking the load off Chad's
shoulders."
Mitch just nodded. He bent down and put his hand on Taffy's head and
whispered, "Well, Taffy, I want to thank you for being such a good
companion to Andi. And I hope you end up in heaven as it says in Psalm 36:6
Your righteousness is like the mountains of God; your judgments are like the
great deep; man and beast you save, O Lord." Mitch quoted the Bible verse
from his heart. He had clung to that same Bible verse for years when his
beloved pets died, and he believed it with all his heart.
Mitch could feel tears brimming in his eyes. But he knew what he had to do. Mitch sent a silent prayer to heaven. Dear, Lord, I need your help to deal with this. Lord, it is breaking my heart to do this. Please help me, Amen.
*****
On the way back to the ranch Mitch's heart was still pounding from when
he had to put Taffy down. It was the hardest thing he ever had to do. But he
knew that it was the right thing to put Taffy down. She did not deserve to
suffer as she would've.
Just then they rode into the ranch. Their mother rushed out of the ranch
house and made her way to the back of the wagon. She cried out when she saw
what Andi looked like. Mother asked in a broken voice, "What
happened?"
"She fell off a cliff, Mother," Melinda explained in a voice
near to tears.
"Let's get her in the house boys." Doc Weaver said. Mitch let
Justin and Chad carry Andi into the house. Then he dismounted.
Diego, their ranch hand, walked up. " Senòr, is there anything I can
do?" he asked.
"Yes, there is. We had to put Taffy… down. So I need a couple of
guys up there to bury her. And I would appreciate it if you would put Chase
away."
"Sì, Senòr." Diego took Chase and made his way to the
barn.
Mitch let out a weary sigh and headed toward the ranch house.
* * * * * *
Lord, please help her be ok, Mitch prayed silently. It had been 1 hour
since the doctor and Mother went up there, and the family downstairs was
starting to feel antsy. Just then they heard footsteps and Doc Weaver appeared
at the doorway. "Your sister is pretty banged up. I don't know if she'll make
it or not. All we can do is pray," Doc Weaver said in an exhausted and
worried voice.
"We have been praying for her, Doctor. Thank you so much for
everything," Melinda said, then got up and poured some coffee, and handed
it to the doc.
Peter, Melinda's fiance, rose, cleared his throat, and said, "Well,
I have to go. Father will be expecting me. Goodbye."
Melinda stood up to walk Peter out.
Mitch went up to his room to try and get some sleep.
****
Mitch heard a whinny and looked up. There in front of him, Taffy stood
staring at him. "Taffy?" Mitch whispered in amazement.
Then Mitch heard a shot. Taffy was covered in blood.
"NOOOOO!" Mitch yelled…
****
Mitch jerked awake and sat up. He was covered in sweat and breathing
heavily. Mitch put his head in his hands and prayed. Dear Lord, please help
me.
Mitch got up, opened his door, and made his way down the hall to Andi's
room. He quietly opened the door to Andi's room and walked in. He saw his mother
sleeping in the chair on one side of the bed, so he made his way to the other
side of the bed and sat in the chair there.
He took Andi's hand and held it. Dear, Lord, Your will be done on earth as it is in heaven. Lord, Andi has her whole life ahead of her. She is just about to graduate. Please let her live, Lord, so she can grow up, get married, and have babies. In Jesus' name, Amen.
******
I wonder why Andi was by the ledge in the first place, Mitch
thought.
It had been 4 days since the accident. He was sitting in a chair by
Andi's bed watching her. He had offered to stay with Andi tonight so their
mother could get some sleep.
Just then Andi woke up screaming and flailing. "Andi, Andi stop. You
are going to hurt yourself. Plus I don't want Mother to kick me out of nurse
duty," Mitch said, giving Andi a teasing grin.
Andi looked up at him with eyes wide with fright and grasped his hand.
"It's ok, Andi, I'm here," Mitch said in a comforting voice. Mitch
saw Andi relax and close her eyes slowly. It broke Mitch's heart to see his
little sister this way.
Lord, please heal her…
Mitch was sitting at the breakfast table when his mother walked in.
"Mother, is something wrong?" Mitch asked anxiously, seeing tears in
his mother's eyes.
"No, Mitchell, nothing is wrong. Your sister just ate her whole
breakfast!" Mother replied.
"That's great Mother!" Mitch exclaimed, getting up and giving
her a big hug.
"I need you to go pick up your aunt and uncle at the train station
this afternoon," Mother said.
"Sure thing!" Mitch replied.
"Well, this is it," Mitch said aloud.
"Quite lovely!" Aunt Lydia exclaimed.
"Yes, you are quite right, my dear," Uncle Benjamin broke
in.
Just then out strolled Daniel. He held out his hands. "Mother,
Father, welcome."
"Daniel, my dear boy!" Lydia exclaimed.
"Yes, Mother, it's me." Mitch noticed that Daniel’s cheeks
flushed at his mother’s tender words.
Mitch gave the buggy over to the ranch hand and made his way into the
ranch house.
"Mother, we're home!" Mitch shouted as he opened up the
door.
"Thank you for fetching them from the station, dear," Mother
said while making her way to the front door. Mitch made his way up the stairs
to Andi's room and knocked on the door.
"Come in," came the answer from inside.
Mitch opened the door and said, "Howdy, little sis!"
"Howdy, yourself Mitch!" Andi replied in a cheerful voice.
"When do you think Mother will let me out here so I can go see Taffy? I am
tired of sitting in here waiting to get up. I know that Taffy is probably worse
off than me, so I want to help her get better."
Mitch's heart sank; he was afraid Andi would ask that. Visions of Taffy
laying on the ground in front of him made him shudder. "Andi, you know
Mother will not let you yet. You are covered in bandages from head to
foot!" Mitch replied.
"Fine, tell me how bad she is. Mother will not tell me. She gets a
sad look on her face every time I ask her. But I know she is in the barn
because you promised you would not shoot her."
"Andi…I gotta go." With that, Mitch rushed out of the
room. Mitch ran down the stairs and into the barn. "Mitch, where are you
going?" Chad asked from behind him.
"I'm just going out," Mitch said in an irritated voice and
started saddling his horse Flash.
Once he got on the range he dropped off Chase and bent his head.
"Dear God, this is ripping my heart apart! I can't take this. Andi thinks
that Taffy is just sitting in the barn waiting for her. Will she ever forgive
me? Please, Lord, help me…”
Mitch saw Andi take a deep breath and glance at Daniel. Is that fear in
her eyes? Mitch thought with a frown on his face.
"Well, let's eat, shall we?" Benjamin said from the other end
of the table.
Halfway through the meal, Andi cleared her throat and said, "Mother,
since I am well enough, may I go and see Taffy?"
Mitch froze his fork halfway between his mouth and plate. Oh no.
"No, Andrea,” Mother answered. “You may not. You have to get better
before you do anything."
"I have waited for long enough, Mother. Why can I not go see
her?! That is the only thing that has kept me going when the days got too
rough! I want to see her."
"That is enough Andrea," Mother said in a stern voice.
"Why will you not tell me what is wrong with her?! Mitch,
Chad, Justin, tell me!" Andi said in a voice that even surprised
Mitch.
Mitch could see the amusement in Daniel's eyes and felt like punching
him.
Andi pushed away from the table in her wheelchair and shouted, "I am
going out to see Taffy!"
"That's going to b-" Daniel started saying but stopped when his
father commanded, "Be quiet for once boy."
"What is wrong with you all! Tell me. I can handle it," Andi
shouted.
"Andrea, you cannot go out to the barn to see Taffy because she is
not there," Mother said in a quiet voice.
"Y-you don't mean–?"
"Yes, I am afraid I do, sweetheart. There was no way the boys
were going to be able to get Taffy out of the ravine in her condition."
Andi glared at each one of her brothers and her gaze finally landed
on Mitch. "Mitch, you promised me that you wouldn't shoot her."
"I said that Chad would not shoot her. I knew he couldn't do it. He
trained her from a filly." Mitch thought he might die then and
there.
Andi stared at her brothers and said, "I am never going to speak to
any of you ever again! You gave up on Taffy! Why didn't you just give up on me
too!" Tears rushed to her eyes.
Mitch could feel the hurt spreading through him.
"Andrea, I think you need to go upstairs to your bedroom,"
Mother said in a stern voice.
"I agree, Mother," Justin said and made his way toward where
Andi was sitting.
"I won't go!" Andi yelled.
"You can go gracefully like the 16-year-old lady you are or you can
go like a 6-year-old. It's your choice," Justin said as he scooped up
Andi.
"Wait!" Andi yelled. "Aunt Lydia and Uncle Benjamin, you
should be ashamed of your pig of a son."
Aunt Lydia gasped and her face turned white.
"He is the one who has been stealing from town. I caught him up in
the loft a few weeks ago and he threatened that if I told, he would set our
barn on fire! And, what’s more, he is the one who killed Taffy. We were looking
for him because he had disappeared, and when I looked over the edge of the
cliff, he jumped out and startled Taffy!"
Mitch was filled with rage. How dare he do such a thing to Andi? Mitch
leapt up, grabbed Daniel by the shirt collar, and landed a punch that knocked
his cousin unconscious.
Mitch was going crazy over Andi not talking to him. He and Andi had
always had a special relationship and right now it was broken. Andi made it
perfectly clear that she did not want a relationship with any of her brothers.
Mitch felt like his whole world was falling apart and that there was nothing he
could do about it. Well, I better get up or Chad will make sure I do, Mitch
thought.
"Mitch, Chad, I would like permission to try and get Andi on a horse and to take her on a ride today," Riley said.
Mitch and Chad looked at each other for a moment. Maybe it will help her
forgive us, Mitch thought hopefully.
"Yes, you may take her on a ride but you have to get her home before
3 o'clock. We are having a birthday party for her. Understand?" Chad
said.
"Yes, sir," Riley replied.
"Taffy's old stall needs to be used. If Andi is not going to use it
then a different horse needs to move in," Sid told Chad and Mitch.
"You will leave Taffy's stall alone! Is that clear?" Chad said
in a stern voice.
Just then, Mitch saw Andi walk by. He gave Andi the most apologetic look
he could and turned to Sid. "Sid, we will deal with this. You just hurt my
sister's feelings, and they are already fragile! Do you understand?" Mitch
said.
Sid lowered his head and said, "I’m sorry, Mitch."
—------—
"Mother, where shall I put the cake?" Mitch asked,
balancing the three-tiered cake.
"On the table next to the punch, dear," Mother responded.
Chad stormed into the room. "Has anyone seen Riley or Andi? I told
them to be back before three and it is now three twenty!" Chad boomed in
an irritated voice.
Mitch could see that Chad was mad, but he could also see that he was
worried. Mitch started to get concerned too.
What if Andi had fallen and hurt herself? What if they got lost? What if-
Mitch couldn't think of the what-ifs.
Just then Mitch and Chad heard hoofbeats outside and immediately ran out
the door. "Where in tarnation have you been?" Chad shouted at
Riley.
"I told yo-" Chad was saying but got interrupted by Andi.
"Chad, don't get mad at him," she said in a quiet voice. Chad looked
at Andi in surprise.
"Are you speaking to me?" he asked in shock.
"Yes, Chad, I am. I realized how selfish I was to block you guys
out. You did the right thing, Mitch, in putting Taffy down."
Mitch stood back tears brimming in his eyes. He could not believe it.
Andi was finally talking to them!
Chad pulled Andi off Shasta and gave her a big hug. Then Andi looked at
Mitch with tears in her eyes and limped over to him. "Mitch, I am so sorry
for being so selfish. Will you please forgive me?"
"Yes, Andi, I forgive you, and I am sorry too." With that Andi
and Mitch hugged each other and made their way inside.
"Love is patient, love is kind, it does not envy, it does not boast,
it is not proud, it does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not
easily angered, it keeps no records of wrongs."
-1 Corinthians 13:4-5
Such a sweet sad story! Great job!
ReplyDelete~Micaiah
Thank you so much for much!
DeleteIt means a lot to me hearing you guys liked my story!❤️
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Delete-Micaiah
I love this story! Brought tears to my eyes, such a good message!
ReplyDeleteAwwww....thank you sooo much!!!❤️
DeleteI'm glad it was a good message!❤️
Good job! Keep writing!
ReplyDeleteThanks! I'll try.😀
DeleteLOVE THIS SO MUCH ELLIE! You did a great job!
ReplyDeleteThanks you so much!!
DeleteAlso, thanks for editing it!!❤️
ofc!!❤️
DeleteLove the story! so cool that we wrote about the same thing Ellie! In your story when Mitch runs away from Andi's room you said he when to ride his horse Flash but Mitch's horse is named Chase, isn't it? Just observing.
ReplyDeleteOh no!! I didn't mean to mess that up🤦🏼♀️.
DeleteThanks for telling me!
Yeah, that is cool!!
I'll fix it. No worries!
DeleteThank you!!❤️
DeleteGreat job! Its cool that we wrote about the same thing!
ReplyDeleteWow, very detailed, I love all the drama!
ReplyDeleteThanks! I was hoping it was going to be detailed enough!
DeleteYeah, I loveeee drama!! So I tend to write my stories a bit more dramatic!
I could feel the tears coming when Mitch had to put Taffy down. Good job on the story.
ReplyDeleteThank you! And if y'all have any ways I could make the story better please don't hesitate to say so. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteI love how you put the verse at the end!!!!
ReplyDeleteIt's one of my favorites!!
Abigail H.💖
Love the brother-sister relationship here. Mitch and Andi are really close!
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