By Hope S., age 14
#7 Attic Surprise
It was a gloomy, rainy, winter
day. Fourteen-year-old Andrea Carter climbed the stairs to the attic of her
family’s house. The rickety staircase creaked and groaned under her weight. As
she pushed open the door, it squeaked. It doesn’t look like anyone’s been up
here in ages! She sneezed, making dust fly. Great! Oh, well, at least I
get to explore! And neither Chad nor Mother can find extra chores for me to do.
“Ok, where should I start?
Hmm… that trunk looks old…”
But try as she might, Andi
couldn’t get it open! Oh well, I guess we’ll look in this one over here.
This trunk didn’t appear to be as old, but the lid popped off without a
problem. Her gaze was immediately drawn to a journal with the name ELIZABETH JOHNSON
etched into the leather. She took it out and opened it revealing the most
beautiful drawings. I didn’t know Mother could draw this well. As she
reached to put it back, an envelope fell to the floor. Opening it and reading
the contents made Andi gasp. She stuffed it in the pocket of her split skirt
and raced down the stairs. It couldn’t be true!
***
“How was exploring the attic
today, Andrea?” Mother asked that night at dinner.
“Oh, it was fine. I found a
journal containing all your old drawings. They were quite lovely! Aside from
that, it was pretty dull.” Andi responded without mentioning the envelope.
Justin chuckled, “You didn’t
want to play dress up with all those old clothes up there?”
Chad grinned, “I would’ve
liked to have seen you in one of those fancy, frilly dresses!”
Andi glared at him, “May I be
excused, Mother?”
“Of course, darling,” Mother
consented.
Andi hurried out to the barn
and into the loft, pulling the envelope from her pocket. I really should say
something to Mother.
“Hey, Andi, is everything all
right? You were awfully quiet at dinner,” Mitch observed as he climbed over to
the hay bale Andi was sitting on.
Andi gasped, “Umm... Of
course!”
“What do you have there?”
Mitch questioned pointing to the envelope.
“Oh, nothing. I’m all right,
really.”
“If you say so, see you
later.”
Andi waited until he was gone
before pulling out the piece of paper once more. The words seemed to scream at
her,
Child Adopted: Baby Boy
Name Now: Mitchell James
Carter
Parents: Aaron and Mabel
Johnson
(Died in shipwreck)
Adopted Parents: James and
Elizabeth Carter
Date Born: April 30th,
1858
Date Adopted: May 5th,
1858
This meant only one thing,
Mitch was adopted!
***
Andi tossed and turned in bed
that night, knowing that she should tell Mother what she’d discovered, but what
if Mitch didn’t know? Would it hurt him?
The next morning dawned bright
and early, and Andi felt as if she hadn’t gotten a wink of sleep.
“Breakfast, Andrea! Hurry up,
or we’ll be late for church!” Mother called up the stairs.
Andi hurriedly put on her
Sunday dress and tied a ribbon around her hair, before racing down the stairs.
“You look exhausted, honey,
are you feeling ill?” Justin asked worriedly.
“No, I just couldn’t sleep
last night, that’s all.”
The ride to town seemed very
short to Andi, considering she had dozed off not fifteen minutes after they had
left the ranch.
Melinda shook her awake,
giggling, “Wake up, sleepyhead!”
Andi groaned hoping to stay
awake in church.
There was no such luck. Andi began
to nod off during the sermon, but Mother elbowed her, which would have sent her
flying out to the aisle had Chad not grabbed her.
“The sermon was lovely today;
wouldn’t you agree dear?” Mother commented.
“Umm… Sure! Can we talk later,
Mother?” Andi inquired.
“Of course, sweetheart!”
Mother agreed as they pulled into the yard.
“I’m going to see Taffy!”
She dashed out to the barn and
into Taffy’s stall before opening the letter again.
“What is that, Andi?” asked a
voice from behind her, startling her.
Andi dropped the papers,
“Mitch! Umm… nothing!”
“I know it’s an adoption
certificate, Andi. I saw that much. Whose is it?”
“N—Nobody’s. I—I just found
it.”
“Then why don’t you want me to
see?” Mitch inquired, grabbing the papers on the floor.
Andi winced, “I’m going to
take Taffy for a ride now, if—you don’t mind, of course.”
“Where did you get these?”
Mitch asked his face troubled.
“The attic…”
“You need to give these to Mother.” Mitch said
as he handed her the papers. “I’m going for a ride.”
“But Mitch!”
“Andi, please do as I say.”
“Would you like to go for a
ride, boy?” Mitch asked as he approached Chase’s stall.
***
“Where did you get these,
Andrea?” Mother demanded.
“The attic, I wasn’t snooping!
They just happened to fall out of your old journal. I’m sorry, Mother!”
Mother sighed, “I would
appreciate it if you kept this between us for the time being. I’d like to be
the one to inform Mitch.”
“Yeah, about that… Mitch may
have seen me looking at them. He already knows. I’m so sorry!”
“it’s not your fault, dear. I
should have told him a long time ago. Where is he now?”
“I don’t know, he just told me
to tell you and then rode away on Chase.”
“Oh, dear. Gather the rest of
the family in the parlor, I think it’s about time they knew about this.”
***
“So, you’re telling me—us that
Mitch was adopted when your brother and his wife died, but you never told us?”
Chad inquired.
“Yes, your father and I went
on a four-month trip. Aaron’s wife was ill, and expecting, so we were tending
to their needs. Of course, after she had the baby—Mitch, they went to a doctor who
was quite a distance away, so they asked us to keep an eye on him. When we returned
to the ranch, we learned that their boat had been in an accident, and that no
one had survived. Everyone assumed I’d had Mitch while we were gone because we
were gone for so long. Your father and I decided to adopt him, without telling
anyone. It was primarily my decision, but your father agreed. Mitch is and
always will be a part of this family. He’s just as much of a brother to you all
as Chad or Justin. I’m sorry for not telling any of you.”
“I’m sure we all agree Mitch isn’t any
different than us,” Justin commented.
Everyone nodded in agreement.
“I just hope Mitch comes home
soon,” Mother expressed worriedly.
At that moment, the sound of
footsteps grew closer, then faded away.
“Mitchell?” Mother called out.
“Yes?” Mitch asked as he stepped into the
room.
“Please, sit down. I’ll
explain everything.”
“Why didn’t you tell me? Why
didn’t YOU tell me, Justin?”
“Mitch! Justin knew nothing of
this matter! Please!”
Mitch shook his head, “I’m
going to my room. No need to hold dinner for me.”
“Mitch!” Mother sobbed.
***
Mitch sat angrily on his bed
wondering why he hadn’t been told by anyone.
I had the right to know!
A knock at the door interrupted
his thoughts.
“Mitch? Can I come in?” a
voice sounded.
He sat up slowly and walked
over to the door to unlock it before returning to his bed. Chad opened the door
cautiously.
“Look, I understand that
Mother should have told you sooner, and she agrees. But she’s sorry, Mitch.
Just because you were adopted doesn’t mean we love you any less. In fact, it
actually makes you even more special to the family. I’m not sure where we’d be
if it hadn’t been for you. You’ve helped me through so many difficult times,
and I know you’ve done the same for so many others. I couldn’t have started
running this ranch if you hadn’t been there, Mitch, and still couldn’t. We all
love you, Mitch and nothing will ever change that!”
“It’s just not fair.” Mitch exclaimed. “I had
to learn from Andi that I was adopted. Don’t get me wrong; I adore this family.
But a small part of me wonders what would have been different had I known.”
“I know. But to be honest, I
don’t think anything would have been different, because you are a part of this
family just like me, Justin, Andi, or Melinda. Nobody loves you any less
because of it.” Chad stated, “Now will you come down for dinner?”
Mitch sighed, “I think I’ll
stay here for now. I’m not very hungry.”
Chad shrugged, “Suit
yourself.”
“Chad?”
“Yeah?”
“Thanks!”
“Anytime, little brother.”
***
(Next day)
“Hey, Mitch, I’m headed out to
catch that wild bull that escaped from the Triple L. Join me when your done
mending that fence, will you?” Chad announced.
“Of course,” Mitch replied.
Chad rode out to the hills for
quite a while, before stumbling across the bull. I should wait for Mitch,
but then we might lose our chance.
He raised his lasso above his
head and aimed for the bull. The bull snorted and sidestepped, the rope just
barely missing him. His nostrils flared. Sky reared, catching Chad off guard,
and throwing him. The bull began to charge toward Chad before being stopped by
something. What in the world? Chad thought.
He turned ever so slowly to
see Mitch sitting on Chase having lassoed the bull.
Chad let out a deep breath,
“Thanks, Mitch. You saved my life!”
“Anytime, Chad. If I hadn’t, I
would’ve lost you, and I couldn’t let that happen. We are family, and family
looks out for each other. I realize that I’m glad I was adopted into this
family. Everyone in it is important to me. I would want no other, and I can’t
imagine having a different one.”
***
That night at dinner, Mitch
looked around the room, “Everyone, I want to say that I’m sorry for how I acted
yesterday. I’m glad you adopted me, Mother. I truly would want no other
family!”
Good Job, Hope!!!
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Amazing job! :D
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Awesome job! Keep writing! 👍
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