by Abbi G
Andi Carter was positively thrilled. She was going off into the
mountains with Taffy. Oh! She was also going with Chad. She wasn’t sure how she
felt about that, it was no secret that she and Chad often didn’t see eye to
eye. They were brother and sister however, and they still loved each other.
Mitch had planned to go, but at the last minute he had changed his mind to see
a young lady visiting from the east named, Annalise. Andi found that
interesting, and also slightly concerning. Annalise was far too much of a
“proper” name for her liking. The fact that her brother would choose to visit a
lady over roughing it in the mountains was appalling, but she certainly
wouldn’t let that get her down.
Andi finished securing her last saddle bag,
then turned to assess Chad’s current state. He was fighting to secure another
bag to the back of the pack horse.
“Are you sure you have everything y’all will need, son?” Mother’s
worried eyes held Chad’s gaze.
“Yes, ma’am. Mother, we’ll be fine. There is no need to worry. We
won’t go off too far, and we have plenty of supplies.”
Mother hesitated, then
nodded. “I suppose you’re right, Chad. Have a good time, son. You too,
sweetheart! Stay safe, and stay together!”
“Yes, ma’am! We will to both!” Andi called back, anxious to be on
their way. Finally, they began their trek. The first while was a blast as Andi
was intrigued with everything they crossed. All too soon, dusk settled and Andi
and Chad set up camp for the night by a creek.
“Well, Andi,” Chad began, smiling, “What say we catch some fish
for dinner?”
“Yippee!” Andi shouted, grabbing her pole and running to the creek
bank. Chad joined her seconds later, and the two fished for about an hour
before coming up with a giant string of bass.
“This will make a tasty dinner, Andi!” Chad smiled, smacking his
lips hungrily. He started a fire and began cooking the fish. Fifteen minutes
later, they were eating the delicious meal.
Andi cleaned up, and stretched out
on her bed roll beside Chad. She looked up at the vast sky with stars sprinkled
everywhere. She drifted to sleep thinking of how big the world really
was.
The next morning, Andi and Chad packed up the campsite very
quickly; eager to be on their way. The day progressed rather slowly, and the
siblings remained fairly silent. Chad soon became frustrated at the slow-going,
and that put Andi on edge.
“Why so many trees? Where did the path go?” Chad groused.
“It’s called outside, Chad!” Andi retorted, “There are trees
there. This is called the middle of nowhere, there’s not exactly going to be a
cobblestone street.”
Chad’s jaw clenched, and Andi winced. This was going to be
fun. Finally, the shrubbery grew smaller, and farther apart. The horses picked
up the pace, and with it, the moods rose too. Soon, the siblings rode into an
open clearing. Smiling, Andi dismounted and rushed to the creek. Taffy stood
beside her and took a long drink. Andi smiled as the old adage,
“Never drink downstream from the herd,” flitted through her mind.
“Let’s get movin’,” Chad shouted.
Andi frowned but mounted up
beside Chad. The day was hot and the sun merciless. Andi pulled her hat from
her head and fanned the stale air around her. Sweat trickled into her eye and
she grimaced. She eyed Chad--who didn’t look much better. His shirt was dark
with sweat and he looked done-in.
Eventually, the outline of the small cabin
came into view. Andi smiled in spite of her discomfort. Things were starting to
get brighter. Andi pulled a pack of beef jerky from her saddle bags as her
stomach grumbled loudly. She hesitated. Was it really worth putting the rancid
thing in her mouth? Her stomach rumbled again and she tentatively licked the
jerky. It didn’t seem that bad--she took a bite. Her face screwed as she
chewed, and she launched the bite over Taffy’s side. She needed water! She
lifted the jerky and studied it scrupulously. How could it be so salty?
“What in tarnation?”
Andi jerked as Chad’s bellow shattered the
quiet. She looked up and was looking straight at the cabin. The door was
hanging, and several holes shown in the walls. Chad’s eyes were stormy as he
dismounted and stomped through the doorway.
Andi heard his shouts of dismay
and dismounted quickly. She secured their mounts before following her brother.
The inside of the cabin was in disarray and she gasped. Two of the four chairs
were broken and laying in pieces, several cans of food lay broken on the floor
and mattress lay open on the ground, straw spilling out of the gaping hole. The
bunk beds seemed intact however, and the backdoor was secure.
“Who do you think would’ve done this?” Andi asked
incredulously.
“If I knew, I wouldn’t be here,” Chad snapped.
Andi frowned and
mimicked her brother’s tone.
“Andrea.” His voice was dangerously low.
“You don’t have to take it out on me,” She retorted, hot and
bothered.
“Well, clean it up while I go find some wood to patch these
walls.”
She sighed. She hated cleaning. She scooped the cans and what she could
of the food out the door. She searched the cabin and finally found a needle and
some thread. After stuffing the straw back into the mattress, and sewed it up
with sloppy, uneven stitches. She heaved both mattresses back onto the
bunks and took the crooked broom from the corner to sweep the hay dust, and
wood chips from the floor.
Finally, she sat down on one of the unbroken chairs
and heaved a sigh. Her fun trip had turned wrong for the second time. After her
last trip with Mitch, Corey, and Jenny turned bad, she had thought this one
would would go better. There was no Hugh Baker, no robbed bank, but
everything still went wrong.
Andi went to take care of Taffy. Thankfully, the
corral was still in great shape. She unsaddled Taffy, who protested at not
getting her usual rub down. Andi patted her nose.
“I know, girl, but you’ll get it soon.” She walked back into the
cabin right as Chad returned. He was sweating even more, and the stagnant air
in the cabin reeked within a few moments of his arrival. Andi longed for a
breeze to shift the air to relieve her nose, but the breeze didn’t come.
“Get over here.” Chad’s brusque order had her bristling.
“Ever heard of ‘please’?” She snapped.
“Ever heard of giving me a break?” Was his retort.
Andi walked to
his side and helped patch the hole. His stench clogged her nostrils and she
coughed letting go of her side of the wood.
“Andi!” He roared.
“Hey! I’m hot and tired and I really didn’t plan on this, and you
stink!” Andi’s frustration poured out as she yelled at her brother.
“Well I’m sorry that things happened that I can’t control! Maybe
you just want to go home and leave what has to be done and you don’t smell too
good yourself!”
“Maybe I will!” Andi stormed from the cabin and saddled Taffy. Her
promise to stay together long forgotten, she began riding, not really paying
attention to where. She just had to cool off.
*****
Chad finished patching the last hole and sat back on his heels
swiping his dripping shirt sleeve to clear the sweat from his eyes. He should
go after Andi, but he was still frustrated with her for leaving. Instead, he
stood and stumbled to the creek, took off his shirt and waded into the cool
water, immediately dunking his head. It felt heavenly. He closed his eyes and
relaxed his tense muscles. Andi would be fine for a little while.
*****
Andi was just about to turn back around, when she noticed she was
on the edge of a steep incline. Goodness! It was definitely time to go back
before she got hurt. She was hot, bothered, thinking about Chad, and not paying
attention to her surroundings. Caught up in her thoughts, she missed a distinct
rattle, and Taffy reared.
Andi’s error had been she was tired and not gripping
Taffy. She was tossed like a ragdoll, and went over the steep drop. Pain
exploded behind her eyes as her head struck a rock, and stars danced as the
world went black. Her last thought was of Chad. She loved him. She was
sorry.
*****
It was time to go after her. Chad knew it. She had been gone far
too long, and dusk had long since set across the land. He mounted Sky, patting
the tired horses neck.
“Not too long, boy,” He encouraged, “I promise, not too long and
we’ll be home.” He turned the way he’d heard Andi go and gave Sky his head.
They weaved through the brush under the ever-darkening sky. It was taking too
long. Chad gritted his teeth and spurred Sky faster.
Where was Andi? Why hadn’t
he passed her? Why had he even let her go in the first place? His temper was
going to seriously get him in trouble. Justin was going to kill him. Chad’s
mind jumped from thought to thought as he searched for his sister, but his main
thought...I love her! Sky abruptly halted and Chad had to fight to keep his
seat. He was on the edge of a cliff.
“Andi!” He hollered as fear gripped his heart, “Andi! Are you
there?” A cold fist slammed into his gut as he heard a slight groan. “Andi!
Taffy!” Chad whistled shrilly, and heard an answering whinny from behind.
He
spun as Taffy trotted up, covered in dirt and sweat. Andi was in the gully. He
fought his panic as he carefully looped a rope around Sky’s saddle horn and
held tightly as he made his way down. His foot slipped several times.
“Oh! God! Give me strength. Keep Andi alive, God! I need her!” His
foot hit something soft. Andi lay sprawled on her back, eyes closed, face pale,
and blood soaked. Chad choked back the bile rising in his throat.
“Oh, God,” He moaned as he felt for a pulse. She was alive. He had
to get her back to the cabin, fast. He moved to lift her gently into his arms.
Her lips parted and she groaned again. Chad grabbed the rope and begin climbing
up. It was slow progress, and his elbows felt every fall as he kept Andi from
feeling the impact.
Finally, he made it. Lifting her into the saddle in front,
Chad mounted behind her and spurred Sky towards the cabin, leading Taffy. It
was slow going in the dark, and the hour felt like ten. However, they made it.
Chad let the horses loose in the corral and carried Andi to the mattress. He
lit several lanterns and begin to check her over.
The gash on her head had him
choking again. Head wounds bleed a lot, he reminded himself and set to
work cleaning her wounds. He ran to the creek and drew a bucket of water. He
used a rag to gently swipe the mud and blood from her body. He bandaged her
head, and some of the more serious abrasions; however, the bruises would most
likely be the most painful when she woke. He squeezed the rag to drip water on
her cracked and bleeding lips. Finally, her lids fluttered.
“Andi?” Chad’s voice was tight with emotion, and a lump rose in
her throat. “Andi?”
“Ch-Chad?” Her voice was barely audible, but it was the sweetest
sound Chad had ever heard.
“Yes! I’m here, Andi! Don’t worry, you’ll be fine.” Her eyes were
dull with pain and Chad layed a clean, wet cloth across her forehead. “Sleep,
little sister, nothing’s going to hurt you when I’m here.” And she did.
Chad
stayed by her side all night, making sure her bleeding had subsided and waking
her occasionally to make sure the head trauma hadn’t caused any worse internal
injuries. The morning came and Chad could barely keep his eyes open.
Andi
smiled softly at him. “Sleep, big brother. I’m fine.”
Chad stretched out on the floor
beside her and fell into an exhausted slumber. When he woke that evening,
Andi’s eyes were wide and alert. Chad smiled at her and silently thanked
God.
“Well, little sister, we give it one more night and if you’re
still looking good, we can head home.”
“Let’s do it right now,” Andi pleaded. Chad shook his head.
“Nope. Not right now we need to give it a little bit.”
Andi
resigned herself to her fate and settled back, trying to cover a wince--that
Chad noticed.
He raised an eyebrow and nodded knowingly. “You’ll be sore for
awhile. You got bruises everywhere.” Chad scraped together some beans and jerky
for a meager meal.
Andi’s face screwed up. “Eww.”
“Mix it together and it won’t be as bad for you,” Chad smirked.
Andi choked half the mixture down. Finally, Chad grabbed a bucket and went to
refill the water. Andi tried to sit up, but groaned and clutched her head.
Something was wrong. She lay still, fighting the urge to panic as the pain
radiated through her skull. She flopped back down, blinking back tears as Chad
entered the cabin again.
“Are you okay?” The concern was evident in his taut
features.
“My head hurts,” She whispered. Chad walked to her side and laid a
hand on her forehead.
“You’re burning up!” Chad immediately rang out a rag and placed it
over her forehead. He sat down, and prayed. Eventually, Andi fell into a
troubled sleep, moaning and thrashing. Chad shook her shoulder gently, but couldn’t
wake her. He tried again and again, but Andi was unresponsive. Finally, he
rolled her onto her stomach, and removed the bandage from her gashed head.
His
stomach turned. The skin around the wound was puffy and bright red. There were
hints of puss oozing from open spots along the gash. Chad washed the wound, the
skin was hot to the touch and very swollen.
An hour later, Andi fell silent.
Still unable to wake her, Chad knew what he had to do. Her head was infected,
and if he didn’t want that infection to spread any further, he had to drain in.
Steeling himself against what was to come, Chad found a knife. He took time
making a fire and bringing a pot of water to a boil. He let the knife rest in
the boiling water for a few moments before patting it dry on a clean cloth.
That was as sterile as he could make this procedure. He moved to Andi’s side,
and lifted the knife.
“God give me strength to save her!” He made one clean slice at the
base of her wound and a stream of puss shot from the opening. Chad turned away,
his stomach roiling. He found another cloth and laid it over the small pillow,
then turned Andi’s head to drain over the cloth. Chad left the wound uncovered,
and sat down to wait.
The night passed uneventfully. Come morning, Chad
groggily stood to feel Andi’s wound. It wasn’t hot. A good amount of puss lay
on the rag and he tossed it out the door. That was one rag he wasn’t keeping.
Chad moved to shake Andi’s shoulder and her eyes fluttered open. Looking into
the depths of her blue irises, Chad cried. He cried out everything he’d been
holding in, the panic, the guilt, and most of all, the thankfulness.
“Chad? I had an awesome dream. God sent an angel to help me and He
healed me.” Chad smiled through his tears.
“I’m sure he did, Andi, I’m sure he did.” God had led his hands to
save his baby sister so he could see her radiant smile once again. Andi’s brow
furrowed.
“Chad, I’m sorry we fought. None of this would’ve happened if I
hadn’t left. I just got angry.”
“It happens, Andi, but lesson learned, right? And, Andi, I love
you, and love conquers all.” Andi yawned and grinned up at him.
“I love you too, big brother.”
*****
One week later, Andi was officially headache free and Doc had
cleared her of any injuries worse than a few yellowing bruises. Andi sat around
the dinner table watching her family and listening to the laughter. She picked
up a biscuit and took a bite, closing her eyes in bliss. If she never saw beef
jerky again in her life, that would not be long enough.
“Well, honey,” Justin began, “What was the most important lesson
you learned through this?” Andi thought for a moment, then shot Chad a sly
smirk.
“I learned that love conquers all.”
“Wise words, sis,” Mitch grinned, now will you pass the biscuits?”
Andi did so, then settled back to observe each member of her family. She was
surrounded with love and caring. She was blessed.
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