by Emma A.
A HUGE shout out to ‘H’ who
came up with this wonderful idea and allowed me to use it! Thanks so much!
And also to my editor friends
who have improved this story immensely. Thanks y’all! I couldn’t have done this
without you!
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“Shut
up, you nitwit! Do ya want the people hearin’ ya?”
The
other man opened his mouth to curse when he was stopped by the sound of
clinking harness’ and clipping hoofs.
The
older of the men nodded to two other accomplices in the bush. “Now!” he yelled
and sprang from the bushes. Leveling his gun at the man driving he warned,
“Don’t move, mister, and everything’ll be fine.”
But
the man didn’t heed his words. Pulling a gun from his shirt he pointed and
fired, missing. But the bandit, startled, shot the man and watched him drop to
the ground, blood pouring from his chest.
*****
Twenty-seven-year
old Liberty Flanders galloped into town, not caring what others thought.
“Please,” she gasped. “I need help. My family and I were on our way here when
men robbed us. My family is injured and they need your help!”
Several
people looked up but shrugged. One said in a slow drawl, “Go back to yer
kitchen, girl. We’re busy, can’t ya see?”
Libby
was near tears. “Can’t you understand? My family is bleeding and hurt and
you're standing around doing nothing!”
Libby
slapped her horse’s rump and with tears streaming down her cheeks she burst
into Goodwin’s Mercantile. “Somebody! Please help me!”
One
handsome young man looked up. “What’s happened?”
Taking
a deep breath Libby told what she saw and needed. The young man marched to the
door. One of the men standing around the front desk said, “Don’t do it, Carter.
The pretty girl’s luring you away into something.”
Libby
whirled on the man. “I am not trying to lure anyone away, mister, but trying to
help my family. If you were anybody but
a no-good, low-lying–”
The
young man, the one called Carter, reached out and grabbed her arm. “I wouldn’t
mess with him,” he whispered in her ear. “Brett can get mighty wound up.”
Libby
glanced over her shoulder and saw the man’s face was bright red. He took a step
toward her but decided against it because Carter was standing right next to her
and no one but no one messed with the Carters.
Libby
hiked herself up on Cotton Candy, her horse. “We need a doctor, sir. From what
I saw, we need him badly.”
He disappeared for a moment then came back
with a wagon connected to a brown and black horse along with the town doctor.
After
riding for what seemed like hours they came in sight of the robbed family.
Three
figures lay on the ground while one knelt beside the larger figure, seemingly
the father.
Libby
galloped ahead and flew off of her horse before it stopped. “Laura! Is
Father…?”
Laura
looked up. “No Libby. He’s not dead. But his breathing is shallow. Did you
bring a doctor?”
“Yes.
He’s right behind me.”
They
waited until the wagon came closer and the doctor jumped down. “Can you explain
what happened in full detail, young ladies?”
Libby
was choking back tears at the sight of her father, mother and youngest sister lying
still so Laura explained.
“We
were coming to Fresno because Father had some business here. He had along
with us some money to put in this bank
instead of the one back home because he doesn’t trust that bank. Suddenly from
nowhere came three men and they fell upon us like wolves on a fawn. We were
helpless against them. They took the money and shot Father, Mother and Lana.
I’m so afraid that they might die.” Laura buried her face in her hands, her
shoulders shaking.
Libby’s
head whipped around when her mother groaned. Rushing to her side, Libby gently
shook her mother’s shoulders whispering, “Mother! Mother! Please wake up!
Please.”
Caroline
Flanders woke to find her eldest daughter’s face quite near. “Libby. Your father…is
he… all right?”
Libby
looked over at her father. The doctor was bending over him. Dr. Weaver looked
up. “Tell your mother not to worry; I’m here beside him and doing my all.”
Libby
looked back at her mother to repeat the words but Mother said, “I heard,
darling. The doctor is not sure he shall live. I hear it in his voice.”
Libby
switched subjects, saying softly, “Mother where do you hurt?”
“I was
not shot, but only hit on the head with the butt of a musket. I shall be all
right as shall your sister. She is only hurting because the robbers slapped her
and broke her arm. But she shall live.”
Libby
nodded and moved closer to her sister, Lana. “Can you wake up, little sister?”
Lana
moaned and reached for her arm. “Oooh! It hurts!”
Her
sister grimly said, “Yes. Mother said that your arm is broken.”
“How
is Mother?”
“She
seems to be okay at least from what she said.” Libby leaned down closer to her
sister and whispered, “I don’t know about Father though. The doctor is solely
focused on him and he looks worried. I think a bullet went through his
stomach.”
Lana
gasped. “Let me up Libby! You know I’m training to be a nurse. Surely Father
could use my help now!”
Libby
gently pushed her sister down. “Yes I know but first you need to take care of
that arm of yours. I’ll go get a wrap for you.”
Libby
stood up and bumped into Carter. “I have the wrap.” Handing it to Libby he
said, “I don't know if I’ve introduced myself. I’m Mitch Carter. My brother
knows your father.”
“Yes,
yes he does.” Libby couldn’t help looking at him. He was so handsome and his blue eyes seemed to truly see her. His muscular
chest and arms showed that he worked hard alongside his ranch hands. His blond
hair had escaped from underneath his Stetson and blew against his forehead with
the wind.
Libby
reluctantly pulled her gaze from Mitch and knelt down beside her sister. Her
smooth, long fingers wrapped the plaster around her sister’s arm and made sure
she was comfortable.
Libby glanced around and saw Mitch standing
by her father, talking in low tones to the doctor.
She had long-ago told herself she was
destined to be an old maid. Nobody had wanted her. But now seeing Mitch an
unwelcome thought wormed itself until it was pounding on her head. He’s mine. And nobody else is going to get
him.
~a few days later~
“How
are you doing, my daughter?” The voice came from among the blankets.
“I’m
doing fine, Father. How about yourself?” Libby pulled back the curtains to let
in the morning sun.
“I’m
happy to be alive,” Father said, watching his daughter’s movements. Something
about her seemed determined and on a mission.
Libby
had been so overjoyed when the news came that during the night her father had
awoken. And she had been excited about one other thing– the Carter’s had
offered their house until the Flanders were all recovered. Libby had received
Melinda’s old room and Laura and Lana got Andi’s room. Mr. and Mrs. Flanders
received the guest bedroom.
But
what her father saw in her was that she was determined not to let her feelings
show before Mitch. But she couldn’t help thinking dreamily about what her name
would sound like if she was ‘Liberty Carter.’ And immediately after she would
think such a thought she would hastily scold herself, blushing.
Libby
bent over Father, rearranging bed coverings and fluffing his pillow. As she
turned to go Father grabbed her wrist and whispered, “Are they treating you
well?”
Libby
nodded. “Yes. I’ve been treated like a queen since we’ve arrived here.”
Father
lay back down satisfied. When Libby was away from the room he turned to his
wife and said, “I’m positive Libby has her eyes on Mitchell Carter.”
Caroline
Flanders merely smiled and continued on with her knitting.
*******
A few
days later, Libby was in the barn taking care of Cotton Candy when she heard a
soft meow.
Looking
up she saw bits of hay falling from the loft. Hand over hand she climbed up the
ladder until she was peeking over the edge of the loft.
A
mother kitten had just given birth to six little kittens and was now licking
them clean. Three were spotted, one was pure white and the other two were black
and gray.
Libby
gave an exclamation of joy and slowly went closer. She sat at a safe distance
from the little animals and forgot how long she was there. But a clap of
thunder and a brilliant flash of lighting drew her back to the time.
Swiftly
climbing down from the loft she ran to the barn door and looked out. Already the
yard was a mess and the rain was falling so swiftly that she could see nothing
but a white sheet of water.
“Looks
like we’re both going to be stuck here awhile.”
Libby
spun around, heart racing. The barn was so dark she couldn’t see a thing. Then
the man struck a match and lit a lantern. Libby noticed with relief it was only
Mitch. “Oh, it's only you.”
“Yep.
And I didn’t bring anything to shield myself from the rain. Looks like there's
hail mixed in with it too. Chad isn’t going to like that. He thinks everything
of his precious cows. ”
Libby
heaved at the barn door, slamming it shut. Mitch led the way over to some
crates and flipped them over for seats.
After
a few minutes of silence, Libby was scolding herself. Think of something, Liberty! Make conversation! Has the cat gotten your
tongue or what? Opening her mouth she said softly, “Thank you for receiving
my family when we needed help.”
Mitch
leaned forward and placed his elbows on his knees. His blue eyes caught her
dark brown ones and he smiled. No other words were needed.
Libby
was inwardly smacking herself once again. Think
of something! Mitch wouldn’t want to have a girl who’s not interesting!
Clearing
her throat she blurted, “Are all your siblings married and have kids?” Libby’s
eyes widened. Oh great. Now he knows
you’re thinking of marriage.
Mitch
nodded. “Justin has Lucy and they have Sammy and Gracie. Chad and Ellie have
Susie and Thomas. Kate and Troy have three kids; Levi, Betsy and Hannah.
Melinda and Peter have only one—William. Andi and Riley have Jared, Lilly and
Lottie. And I’m not married.”
Libby
thought she caught a glance when he mentioned he wasn’t married. After another
moment of silence she gave a small laugh and said, “You definitely are an
uncle. How many is that? Like eleven
nieces and nephews? And plenty of sisters-in-law and brothers-in-law.”
Mitch
chuckled. “Yep. And how about you? Are your sisters married?”
Libby
tucked her knees underneath her dress and rested her chin on them. “Lana is
courting someone and Laura is engaged. So I’m the only one who doesn’t have
anyone. I get plenty of teasing about it from my family but I don’t mind. I
think I’ve decided that I’ll be a schoolteacher until I’m an old maid. My town
doesn’t need anyone now so I’ll probably have to travel somewhere to get a
job.”
Mitch
nodded slowly then offered, “Our town needs a schoolteacher.”
Libby
looked up eagerly. “Really?”
“Yeah.
Virginia Foster is marrying Jack Goodwin this spring and the job will be open
again. Are you thinking of taking it?”
Libby
sighed. “I’ll have to talk to my parents about it but if it’s left up to
me—I’ll take it.”
Mitch
laughed.
They
continued talking until the rain and hail lessened and then they made a run for
it, hiding under a horse blanket.
Reaching
the house they were both laughing. Libby hair was plastered to her neck and
forehead and her wet dress clung close to her body.
Pulling
off her wet boots she emptied them of the water and wrung out her sopping
stockings.
Mitch
ran a hand through his sandy hair. It stood up in all directions and Libby
laughed aloud. In revenge, Mitch ruffled her hair and Libby gave a slight
shriek. Dancing out of his reach, she dashed up the stairs and turned around to
watch him at the bottom. He looked up and teased, “Don’t flood the house,
wringing out that hair of yours.”
Libby
gave a parting laugh and tripped to her room. Peeling off her soggy clothes she
slid on a clean, fresh muslin dress. Going to town on her hair with a towel
helped immensely.
Her
dark, curly, waist length hair was so wild she pulled it into a sloppy braid
and flung over her back. Sitting down on the bed, she thought back to when she
was a young girl. She had always wanted to be very ‘city like’ and had worn the
most ridiculous outfits and floppy, big hats. But now she had realized that
Jesus was humble and she wanted to be like Jesus so out the window went all the
clothes–literally.
Libby
looked up when a knock on her door brought her back to the present. “Come in.”
Elizabeth
Carter stepped in and said with a smile, “Supper almost ready. Since you’ve
been wanting to learn how to bake an apple pie I thought I’d teach you today.”
Libby
leapt up. “Oh thank you!”
Elizabeth
laughed. They went down to the kitchen and Libby put on an apron. They made
enough to have two pies.
Thirty
minutes later and the pies were finished. When Libby pulled out the crisp apple
pies she smiled and looked over at Elizabeth. “You did amazing, Liberty. I
couldn’t have done better myself.”
Balancing
them on her hands she set one down on the counter. But before she could place
the other down, two little girls ran into the room knocking into Libby. The
apple pie flew into the air and landed on the ground with a splat!
Libby
and the little girls started slipping as the juices and apple slices spread. Then,
in a blink of an eye, they were all on the floor.
Libby
moaned when she saw her pie ruined. Elizabeth helped the little girls up first
and admonished them. “Lilly. Lottie. You girls know better than to run in the
house. Look at what you’ve done to Miss Flanders pie.”
A
young woman appeared at the door, gasping for breath. “I’m so sorry, Mother.”
She winced when she saw the pie on the floor. “One minute I had them under
control and the next they disappeared. They wanted to see you, I reckon.”
The
girl named Lottie shrieked, “Grandma!” And her twin echoed her.
Libby
remained on the ground trying to keep from laughing. The situation was funny.
But
then Mitch had to appear. He took one look at Libby and burst into laughter.
“What happened to you?”
“Mitch!
Leave her alone,” Elizabeth scolded her son.
Libby
scowled at him and stuck out a hand. “Help me up, will you.”
Mitch
grabbed hold and pulled her to her feet. “I’m guessing you met my nieces.”
Libby
winked at them when he wasn’t looking. “Oh yes. They’re very polite girls. Why,
I could hardly hear them come in, they were so quiet.”
Another
round of laughter followed.
Then
the young woman looked closely at Libby. “Have…have we met before?”
Elizabeth
quickly introduced them. “Andrea, this is Liberty Flanders. Her poor family was
robbed and injured and are staying here until recovered.”
Andi
hiked Lottie up on her hip and came forward. “It’s nice to meet you again,
Libby. I remember the last time we met. It… well wasn’t in pleasant
circumstances.”
Libby
smiled. “No, it wasn’t. But at least we got rid of that rat, Jeffrey Sullivan.”
Andi
nodded solemnly. “And saved my sister from certain doom.” Then she brightened.
“At least you and I agree—he’s a rat.”
*******************
At
supper that night, the candles illuminated the relaxed faces of the Carters and
their guests. Libby slipped from the table and entered the kitchen. She
carefully grabbed the pie, looked around for little girls and carried it to the
table.
Setting
it down in the center of the table she prayed that Mitch wouldn’t bring up the
failure she had earlier. Thankfully he didn’t, though at times he would
suddenly chuckle and look her way.
Libby
would raise her eyebrows at him and shake her head, pleading silently with him
not to bring it up.
After dinner the family dispersed to do their
own things until bedtime.
Libby slipped away to stand on the front
porch and watch the stars, a thing which she had done since she was a little
girl.
She leaned against the railing and gasped
when a shooting star flashed across the sky.
A hand clapped down on her shoulder and
pulled her towards him. Libby gave a shriek then felt sorry for doing so
because Mitch then said, “Gotcha.”
Libby batted away his hand and rebuked him.
“You scared me, Mitch Carter! Hasn’t your mother taught you to be kind and
considerate around women?”
Mitch laughed. “She taught us alright. But
you looked like you needed some excitement and I gave it to you.”
Libby gave an exasperated sigh and turned
back to her sky gazing. Then out of the blue, Mitch said softly, “Libby, I’ve
talked to your father about this and he gave his permission. I was wondering…
well” — then very quickly—“would you be willing to enter into a courtship with
me?”
Libby nearly fainted. He was finally asking
her! Her heart was pounding and she had to control herself not to fling herself
into his strong arms and cry with delight.
Instead, she turned to him and whispered,
“Mitch, there is nothing else I’d rather do than have you court me.”
Mitch reached out and pulled her into a
tight, warm embrace. For the first time in all her life Libby felt safe, secure
and at peace. All at the same time. She smiled into the darkness. I have received what my heart desires.
*A year later*
“Mitchell
James Carter, you are going to hear from me if you do not appear in five
minutes.” Liberty Flanders tapped her foot and looked for the hundredth time at
the clock.
Mrs.
Hearter clicked her tongue and said mildly, “Child, calm down. When my husband
was late picking me up for buggy drives, I always found something to do to keep
me busy until he came. Now I suggest that you do the same. If you want to do
something there’s a fine stack of dishes in the kitchen needing to be washed.”
Libby
knelt beside the older woman. “You’re such a dear Mrs. Hearter. I’m going to
wait outside if you don’t mind.”
The
good woman smiled and excused her.
Libby
stepped out into the cool fall evening and heard the bells from the church
ringing. Mesmerized by the sound she stood still, facing the sound..
A
couple months before she had taken the school teachers job but told them,
blushing, it might be temporary. No one had pressed any further, knowing that
Mitch Carter had his eye on her.
So far
she enjoyed it. There was a few rough times but overall the students loved
their teacher and she loved them.
A tap
on her shoulder made her whirl around. Mitch held out his hand and apologized.
“I had to stop to get something.”
Libby
graciously let it slip by but warned with a smile, “Please don’t let it happen
again.”
Mitch
nodded and grabbed her hand, helping her into the buggy. He climbed up next to
her and slapped the reins. The horses jumped forward, slamming Libby back
against her seat.
After
an hour or so of driving, Mitch laid down the reins and grasped Libby’s small,
cool hand. “Liberty Flanders, we’ve been courting for a little over a year. I
want to take this a step further.” Mitch swallowed and leaned closer. “Will you
be my wife?”
Tears
came to Libby’s eyes and she choked. Throwing herself into his arms she gasped,
“Yes! Oh Mitch! Yes!” She couldn’t speak any more because of the lump in her
throat.
Mitch
cupped her face in his hand and whispered, “I love you, Libby.”
“I
love you too, Mitch.”
The
full moon fell on their faces. Mitch leaned down and kissed the girl he loved
more than anything or anyone in the world.
Then
something cool slipped over Libby’s finger and she glanced down. A diamond gold
ring was on her finger and she gasped at its beauty. Mitch smiled and said, “A
beautiful ring to match my beautiful girl.”
Loved it!!! I like how you got Mitch and all the rest into character !!
ReplyDeleteAbigail H.
This is very well-written! The conversations between Libbey and Mitch are just the right length—not too short nor too long. I enjoyed reading this. Great job!
ReplyDeleteWow! You did such a wonderful job!! Libby and Mitch are perfect for each other!! I love how she loved him at first sight so to say!~Hannah S.
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