by Emma A.
Note: this could not be a contest entry because it was her third entry, so she offered it as a fan fiction story instead.
Photo Prompt: The Bend In The Road\Trail-
Twenty
three-year-old Charlotte Faith Prescott laughed aloud as she skipped along the
pathway, which she had named, ‘The Bend In The Road’. Forget-me-nots,
dayflowers, sunflowers, lilacs, ferns and mountain laurels covered the sides of
the road, their colors standing out against the brown dirt.
She
gathered the colorful blossoms into a bundle and tucked them into the crook of
her arm. She breathed in the fresh scent.
Her
white, soft dress flapped in the wind around her as she watched the sunrise.
Lottie’s black hair twisted and caught in her face. She swiped it away with a
smile. Sparkling, teasing blue eyes lit up when she caught sight of her brother
Jared strolling the open field with his sweetheart, Olivia.
An
idea popped into her mind and she quickly put it to use. Sneaking up behind the
couple she caught her brother around the neck and covered his eyes with her
hands.
“Guess
who?” she sang out.
Jared
laughed slightly and answered with a lilt in his deep, manly voice, “There is
only one twenty three-year-old I know who still plays as a child. Maybe it is
my sister Lottie?”
“You
guessed correctly.” Lottie giggled as she released her brother. Olivia’s hand
was tucked into Jared’s and she laughed alongside the Prescott siblings.
Lottie
linked her arm with Olivia who asked sweetly, “How are you doing?”
Lottie
laughed. “Wonderful, thank you. And you?”
“I’m
floating on air.”
Jared
laughed and said, “Maybe because you shall be her sister-in-law very soon?”
Olivia
grinned. It had only been a week since Jared had told the family of his
engagement to her, Olivia Harrison.
Lottie
kissed Olivia’s cheek and skipped away, the blooms still in her arms..
Arriving
at her home, she tossed open the door, a merry whistle on her lips. Mother
turned and smiled, her hands deep in bread dough.
“You
seem happy.”
Lottie
held out her bundle of flowers. Mother gasped her delight at the unexpected
surprise.
She
pointed to a cabinet. Lottie opened it and pulled out a glass vase that
shimmered in the light.
Mother
watched her daughter as she rinsed the flowers and laid them in the vase all
the while a happy smile on her face.
Lottie
rolled up her sleeves and with a fake frown told her mother, “Scoot out of the
way, Mother dear, and I’ll finish these loaves. You wash up for our guests. You
need to be pretty for Father as well. Especially since this is your
anniversary.”
Mother
blushed and pulled her hands out of the dough. “Alright but so long as you
remember to watch the bread as it cooks.”
Lottie
grinned impishly. Mother swatted her and stepped out of the hot room and into
her bedroom.
Lottie
hummed to herself as she finished her work. Depositing the loaves in the oven
she buried upstairs to change her outfit.
She
rummaged through her closet and pulled out one of her mother’s old dresses that
had been handed down to her girls. Slipping it on she spun around in front of
her mirror.
The
dress was made of light pink silk and clung close to her body. No frills or
laces were needed to make the gown elegant.
Lottie
alighted onto the seat before her desk on which was situated the mirror. Lottie
pinched her cheeks and combed her hair. She pulled it up into an elaborate bun.
Her aunt Melinda had taught it to her.
Lottie,
with a final glance at herself flew down the stairs and pulled out the nicely
browned bread. The wonderful aroma filled the air.
She
cut it into slices and placed it on a platter. Arms wrapped around Lottie and a
voice whispered, “What is my little girl doing? Helping her mother out?”
Lottie’s
laughing eyes met her father’s. “Yes.
Mother needs to take a break sometime and the girls can help her out.”
Father
looked around. “I don’t see Lilly, Izzy and Rilla in this kitchen. Where are
they?”
Lottie
flushed. “I didn’t call them. Yet.”
Father
laughed deeply. “That's my girl. Always trying to juggle everyone else’s
troubles.” He sobered and cupped her face in his large, rough hands. “But
sweetheart, sometimes you can ask others for help. You can’t bear the whole
world on your small shoulders.”
Lottie
lowered her eyes and responded quietly, “I’ll try to remember in the future.”
Father
smiled and was about to say more but Mother’s frantic voice called out, “Riley!
I need you quickly, please.”
Father
hurried away to his wife. Lottie bit her lip to keep from laughing. Mother
could be so funny at times. But the stories she told of her childhood were what
the children loved to hear.
Like the time when she was taken captive by Jed
Hatton and then shot in the head. Or when Procopio took Mother, Aunt Lucy and
Cousin Samuel to take revenge on Uncle Justin. Or when she and Father were on
their honeymoon and met Uncle Troy again. Or like when-
A
knock broke into her musing and she hurried to answer the door.
That
night was filled with talk about the approaching war. Lottie had brushed it off
thinking it was nothing.
But a
few months later the nightmare began.
“Mother,
Father, I’ve signed up to join the army. I’ll be leaving in two weeks.”
Olivia’s
eyes were red from crying. She had been married to Jared for only four months.
Lottie
choked back a scream. No! Not my brother!
And to leave with Olivia pregnant too!
Mother
sobbed on Father’s shoulder. Lilly, Izzy and Rilla huddled in a small group,
tears glistening on their cheeks.
Twelve-year-old
Hudson grinned and said to his brother, “Go shoot down those Huns! Kill them
all.”
Mother
looked up and sharply rebuked her son. “War is a sad thing Hudson Bryant
Prescott. God does not delight in it. He hates it and so should you.”
Hudson
ducked his head but Lottie noticed that the light in his eyes did not
disappear.
After
everyone had calmed themselves, Lottie pulled on a light sweater and stepped
outside. She needed to be alone.
After
walking for a while she smacked her forehead with her head and gasped,
“Tonight’s the ball at Fresno’s Ball House! How could I have forgotten?”
She
picked up her skirts and dashed back to the house.
As
soon as she opened the door she realized that her family was already getting
dressed and ready.
She
bolted up the stairs and to her closet. Pulling on a corset she pulled it tight
until she could barely breathe. She seized a dress, she didn’t care which, and
threw it on along with those ridiculous hoops. Squirting on her perfume she
snatched up her dancing shoes, gloves and purse.
Almost
falling down the stairs in her haste she barely made it in time to the buggy
where her family was waiting.
Lottie
was helped up by Hudson, looking dashing in his suit. She situated herself and
breathed a sigh of relief.
Jared
leaned over and whispered, “You dressed in five minutes, little sister. Fastest
I’ve ever seen.”
The
family arrived at the ball which was already crowded with people.
Lottie
pulled up her skirt and groaned when she realized which dress she was wearing.
This
was the navy blue dress she had worn to Cousin Susie’s wedding as the maid of
honor! Made with lots of frills, pomp and laciness she despised it with
everything in her. Especially the puffed sleeves and the small train behind it.
But now she would have to wear it until midnight and it was only five o’clock!
Mother
caught her daughter’s eye sympathetically. She knew how it was to wear a dress
you hated.
After
dinner, she sat by herself in a corner, contemplating on how she was going to
spend the rest of the time alone.
A
young man from across the room looked up and caught sight of a young woman in a
corner. Excusing himself from his friends, he moved across the room until he
was standing beside her.
Lottie
glanced up at his teasing voice, “I’m sure you are enjoying counting the tiles
on this large floor.”
Lotte
blushed. He laughed and asked with a slight bow, “Care to dance?”
Lottie
extended her hand and they whirled away.
She
found out the young man’s name was Gilbert and he lived on Double Creek Ranch.
The
music came to an end and the couples bowed to each other. Gilbert suggested,
“How about we get some food?”
Lottie
agreed and they were soon seated on a spacious window sill, chatting away.
After
many more dances, Father came and announced that they needed to leave. Lottie
said goodbye to Gilbert and invited him to the ranch.
She
stepped into the carriage and Mother, who was sitting beside her, joked in a
low voice, “Your face is glowing so much I can hardly see.”
Lottie
smiled and didn’t respond. Over the next weeks Gilbert came often and Lottie
and he took long walks.
But
Lottie knew it was too good to be true. That fateful day arrived.
As
they were out on a walk, Gilbert took her hands and slowly said, “I’ve decided
to join the navy.”
Lottie
stood stock-still. No word came from her throat. She only stared at him.
Then
she looked away and in a low voice said, “Then fight well. End this war and
save lives. May God bring you home again.”
Two
days later Lottie stood at the train station, enfolded in Gilbert’s warm
embrace. He whispered into her ear, “Promise you’ll wait for me until I come
home?”
Lottie
choked back a sob and said, “I promise.”
He
released her and jumped onto the train, his eyes locked on hers. Lottie waved
her handkerchief and when the train disappeared from sight, she turned around
and went home.
Lottie
knocked on the door. After waiting for a few moments and hearing no reply she
pushed open the rickety door. Her eyes adjusted to the dim light and she saw
the woman lying on a pallet, eyes closed.
Lottie
bent down next to her and gently shook her. No movement. Lottie looked closely
and saw something she had not noticed before. The woman was not breathing.
Lottie
jumped back, heart hammering, breath coming in quick gasps. She leaned against
a wall and prayed, Oh God help me!
A cry
came from the corner of the room. Lottie peered into that corner and realized
the woman’s baby was alive.
Creeping
over to that corner she pushed back a blanket and what she saw pulled at her
heart.
The
baby wasn't dressed in anything. He was thin and screaming at the top of his
lungs. Arms flailing and legs pumping, he stared up at this stranger leaning
over him.
Lottie
picked him up and cooed until he had quieted. She took a deep breath then said
aloud, “I’m going to Uncle Justin and I’m going to adopt a war-baby.”
Lottie
wrapped the baby in a soft blanket she found and marched determinedly through
the streets of Fresno.
Whispers
floated through the higher end of town when they saw ‘Miss Charlotte Prescott
carrying a dirty infant right to the law office!’
The
bell above the door jingled and she said to the long time receptionist Tim, “I
need to speak with Mr. Carter.”
Time
sighed and responded, “He is busy at the moment. Sit down for a minute and he’ll
be done shortly.”
Lottie
tossed her mane of hair and burst into her uncle’s office.
Justin
Carter looked up in surprise then chuckled. “Your mother did the exact same
thing, young lady. Now who is this that you have with you?”
“Uncle
Justin, I want to adopt this baby. His parents died and as far as I know he has
no relations.”
Uncle
Justin stared at her then said slowly, “Have you asked your parents?” His voice
shook a little.
“No,
but… but I will adopt this baby with or without their permission!” She tilted
her chin as if daring him to go against her.
Uncle
Justin smiled slightly and said, “You have your mother’s stubbornness. And I
will help you as much as I can.” He filed through some papers and pushed a
couple towards her. “Fill these out, honey, and go home. I’ll do the rest.”
Lottie
obeyed and trooped out, guardian of the new Jim Prescott.
When
she arrived at home her parents were surprised but they allowed her to adopt
the baby with their full permission.
A
couple months later and Jim was her baby.
Another
baby was added to the family. Olivia had a baby and she named her Faith. The
little girl was to grow up four years without ever seeing her father.
The war was still continuing. Lottie received
many letters from Gilbert describing the horrible conditions of war. Two of
Lottie’s friends died in the battle.
The
years rolled on and Lottie turned twenty seven. Then the wonderful news came
that the war had ended.
People
filled the streets and many celebrations were made. Lottie wept when she heard
the news.
Soldiers
rolled in slowly, families reunited and loved ones came home. The Prescott’s
were waiting at the station when Jared’s train rolled in. Lottie looked down at
her little boy, Jim. He smiled up at her.
Jared
clasped Olivia in his arms and kissed her. He then knelt down beside Faith who
was hiding behind her mother. Olivia whispered, “This is your daddy.”
Faith
had heard stories and seen pictures of her father. She rushed forward and threw
her arms around his neck. “You’re home to stay with Mama and me!”
Lottie
wiped tears away as she hugged her brother and welcomed him back. Now if only Gilbert would come home.
Jared
squeezed her and whispered, “I have a surprise for you.”
Lottie
replied, “Just having you back is good for me.”
Jared
shook his head. “I’m sure you’re wanting someone else as well.” He stepped to
the side. Lottie gasped and her hands flew to her mouth and tears pricked her
eyes as Gilbert leapt off the train.
She
threw herself into his arms as he kissed the woman of his dreams. He held her
at arms length and whispered, “I’ve come home Lottie. Home to you. Now we can finally get married.”
A
month went by and then a wedding took place at the Bend In The Road among the
fragrant flowers. Gilbert Ford and Charlotte Prescott were joined in marriage.
They made their home on a plot near Memory Creek, with Jim as their son.
“These things I have spoken unto you, that in me ye might have peace. In the world ye shall have tribulation: but be of good cheer; I have overcome the world.” John 16:33
Good story, Emma! You are a super good writer! Keep up the good work!! :) :)
ReplyDeleteNice job! Sounds like a redo of Rilla of Ingleside! Even some of the same namesπ
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness! You’ve read the story too!! Confession— I did take off of Rilla of Ingleside and turn it into a Andi story from Lottie’s point of view. I LOVE the Anne of Green Gables series so much!
DeleteWorks for me. You will soon realize that I do the same thing. Stay tuned for an upcoming "Peek Behind the Curtain"
DeleteOoh! So excited!! Can’t wait to see it!!!
DeleteOk I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS STORY!!!!! YOUR SUCH A GREAT WRITER!!!!! Keep on writing!! ππππ
ReplyDeleteOk I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS STORY!!! YOUR SUCH A GREAT WRITER!!!! keep on writing!!! ππ
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
DeleteWOW! I LOVE this i could not wright a story like this if I wanted to!
ReplyDeleteAww thanks! Anyone can write something. I’d be willing to teach you for free if your parents say yes. Just an idea if you would like to expand your writing skills. (And I my teaching skills. Lol! π€£)
DeleteThis sounds a lot like the story of Anne Shirley's daughter, Rilla! The baby also has the same nameπ
ReplyDeleteAs I was reading the story, i thought that maybe Gilbert would think Lottie got married and Jim was her kid.
ReplyDeleteTrue but I would think she would explain to him! Especially before the wedding!!! lol!!
DeleteWhat a great story! Way to go, it has everything. Appealing characters, good setting and plot, laughter and tears. Congratulations.
ReplyDeleteThank you Miss Reece. To have you read my story makes me so happy that an author like you would check others work and comment on it! It made my day to see that you read it!
DeleteWHOA, you are extremely talented! Keep up the good work!!! π
ReplyDeleteThat was AMAZING!! You are super talented!! Keep up the good work!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Raelene for your sweet comment!!!
DeleteGreat job Emma
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! I had so much fun writing it!!!
DeleteI was reading through the comments, and anonymous brought up a good point about our fan fiction (and contest stories, for that matter). Anyone who reads these comments or wanting to write for the contest, especially, take heed. It's okay to love an idea and want to use such an idea for your own story, but be super careful that you are not "crossing the line" into copying an author's work. How can you do this?
DeleteTo be on the safe side, always make sure your characters have different names, and that they encounter a number of different experiences (plot events) that go beyond the core idea that you like. Make sure your story takes a different "bend in the road" (no pun intended, LOL).
For example, the war baby could have been a girl (since there were lots of war babies out there), and somebody could have died instead of it all turning out happily ever after like the Rilla story. You must write your version of a "fun idea" you saw on TV or read about in a book in such a way that doesn't make your readers suddenly think, "Hey, I'm sure I've read that plot/storyline/characters before." (Like Anonymous commented about the story's familiarity with the Rilla story. You don't readers ever thinking this!).
Do your best to make sure your idea is not a replica of the story you love. I hope that makes sense. If you have questions, just ask away!
Thanks Mrs. M! I will use this information for sure!
ReplyDeleteI just recently read Rilla of Ingleside and honestly, I think I like this story even better. I love the Anne of Green Gables a lot and this story will definitely have to be added to my list of favorites as well.
ReplyDeleteOH... MY... WORD!!! You just made my day!!! You are so sweet to have said this!! Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU!!!
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