By Laurel D. age 12
#7 Attic Surprise
Seven-year-old Andrea Rose Carter leapt up the stairs. “Mitch, where are you?” When she got to the attic she saw Mitch intently
looking at a couple of papers. “Whatcha
doin’, Mitch.”
“Nothing.”
“Do you have time to help me with Taffy for a bit?” Andi pleaded. “Sure.”
*
(Ten years later) It was a gloomy rainy day at the Circle C Ranch, and seventeen-year-old Andi Carter was staring
at the ceiling. What should I do? She
pondered. Then she had an idea, she was going to go up to the
attic to see if she could find any of Mitch’s dime novels. She looked around.
Now where are those dime novels?
She opened a big wooden dusty
chest, hoping to find one of Mitch's
novels but all that was in the chest was a hidden handkerchief with two faded papers inside.
One of the papers was half written
about an orphan
named Paul and the
other was a picture of Chad when he was around six years old. She wondered
if it was the papers
that Mitch
was looking at a long time ago. Probably not. Mitch would not be interested in a paper about an orphan who lived in San Francisco, but then again she probably should ask him if he was looking at those papers when he was seventeen. She read the paper about the orphan.
It was actually quite interesting. The paper was about an orphan
who needed a home. The paper had a large square cut out of it about the size of the picture of Chad. She decided to go get
twenty-seven-year-old Mitch.
Mitch was in his room reading a dime novel.
“Mitch. Do you have a few minutes? I found something
in the attic I want to show you.”
“Yeah.”
She bounded
up the attic steps with Mitch at her heels. Upon reaching
the chest, she grabbed the poster
and gave it to Mitch.
“Is this what you were looking at forever ago?”
“I completely forgot about this.
I was trying to solve
a mystery about
ten years ago. I think
I was seventeen then. One time when I was in San Francisco
I saw this advertisement for an orphan that you could
adopt. He looked like Chad but his name was Paul. I thought he might have been a relative, but I didn't
know how close or anything. Uncle
Benjamin and Aunt Lydia had three kids before they had Daniel,
but they all died
when they were young. They had a kid named
Paul Benjamin Carter,
but like I said he died. We never saw him
because we didn't live close. Aunt Lydia had been so heartbroken that she let the people at the hospital deal with the funeral
stuff. The hospital
even put him in the casket. Aunt Lydia and Uncle Benjamin
never even saw him
after the hospital staff said he had passed.
“So you don't think he actually died?”
Mitch shrugged. “It was hard to get any information. I gave up pretty quick.”
***********
Twenty-seven-year-old Paul Benjamin Greer walked along the San Francisco college cobblestone sidewalk, glad to get some fresh air so he could get back to studying
about mental health.
Hopefully he would be
more helpful to his father and his mental health office with more information in his brain. He wandered
over to the little
graveyard beside the campus. After
a while he spotted three
small and beautiful gravestones. Three
children had died all at young ages. They appeared
to be siblings because they all had the last name Carter.
He was about to move on when he noticed
the middle one's name. Paul Benjamin
Carter. Did someone
have the same exact
name as him? Not possible! He knew he was adopted,
which meant he got his new parents
last name. That opened up lots
of possibilities. I've got to find some
answers. My birthday is exactly the same as his. Am I him? Am I a phantom?
Wide eyed with horror, Paul jogged back to the college.
***********
Andi and Mitch came up with a plan.
When Mitch went back to agriculture college
Andi would go back
with him, with the ridiculous excuse of wanting
to see Kate and the kids. Riley
would try to convince
everyone that Andi needed to see her brother longer
than the short
time he got for Christmas break.
So with
wide eyes, and puzzled expressions everyone
said goodbye to Andi and Mitch as
they left for the city
Andi dreaded most.
*
“Paul, I have a client who needs counseling. Would you sit in and give your advice when needed?”
“Yes sir.” He walked into his fathers
office and saw a distraught woman. She needs Jesus. He sat down
next to his father, Dr. Anthony Greer, ready to begin the counseling session.
The lady looked up in surprise. “Chad?”
“I'm sorry, what did you say ma'am?”
“Oh, never mind. I must have been mistaken.” she replied. “So, Mrs. Carter, can you tell us about
your situation?”
“Well, my husband and I have lived in New York for a while. My first three children passed at young ages due to sickness.“
Paul sat wide eyed listening intently.
“Daniel was finally born but he was unruly.
He recently was put in jail, being
accused of stealing
goods out of a mercantile in Fresno California. My husband had a brother
who died a while back but his family
ranches out there in Fresno.
They accused Daniel of making his cousin fall in a gully while on her horse. I don't know what really happened, I'm just glad Andrea is alive. But after she got well enough, she accused Daniel of all sorts of nasty things.
Her brothers got the sheriff
to put him in jail.
I'm so depressed. I don't
have any children alive and well. Ohh, Greta, Paul, Ruth. They are all gone and Daniel…”
The woman burst out sobbing.
Is this my real mother? Paul felt like he was going to faint. In a loony bin? Why does she think I’m dead?
Why was I adopted?
Am I really her son? Paul's mind raced with questions.
“What's even worse,” The woman continued. “My husband put me in the loony bin. Also, you are the
only counselor he could decide
upon, and you live all the way across the nation. I don't even get to see my husband.
“Ma’am.” Paul asked. “Where were your children buried?”
“San Francisco. My husband's sister who lives here helped us bury the first and last child, but a nurse at the hospital wanted
to help us with Paul.
He said that he had passed and that he would take care of getting him in
a casket. He also said the disease
Paul had was very contagious and that we shouldn't open the casket which
had a lock on it. I didn't even get to say goodbye to him.”
******
“Where should we start?”
Andi asked Mitch as they got off the train. “How about Aunt Rebecca’s?”
“Sure.”
When they arrived
Aunt Rebecca was delighted and told them she wanted
to stay but had to go to a
women's society project. “Andrea, you should come with me. You need to get involved in these things just like Melinda does.”
Andi shot Mitch a pleading
look, but before he could say anything
Aunt Rebecca had her sent up the stairs for a new dress and summoned the carriage.
“Andrea, you are going to love doing women's society projects and meetings.” Aunt Rebecca said as they were on their way to the meeting. Andi just groaned
to herself. I came here to solve a mystery, not to go to
meetings.
“Today we are going to help people in the loony bin. They are ones who are mentally ill. I think Benjamin’s wife Lydia was in the loony bin recently because of the grief Daniel had caused her.” Aunt Rebecca
mused.
When they got there
they were instructed what to do by a mental health
doctor named Dr. Greer.
“We
are going to have some women come in here and you will then give them the charity baskets we
prepared and let them discuss their problems with you. When they discuss
their problems with you it will take a
load off their shoulders and should improve
their mental health.”
Dr. Greer instructed.
Andi could not wait to get out of there. Just then Chad strutted
in.
“Chad? What in the world are you doing here at a women’s society meeting in San Francisco?”
Andi reddened. This guy was definitely
not Chad he was probably
around 5 '11 not 6' 3 like Chad, and he
looked slightly younger.
“Excuse me ma’am, My name is actually Paul.” Andi gaped “Is your name Paul Benjamin?” “Yesss.”
“Are you adopted?”
“I'll talk to you later, for now I need to help my Father.” “Dr. Greer? You don't look anything like him.”
“That’s because
I am adopted,” he whispered.
During the meeting Andi slipped outside
to speak to Paul.
“First of all, What’s your name?”
“Andi Carter…
I mean Andrea Carter.”
“Are you related to someone named Lydia Carter
by any chance?” Paul questioned. “Yes. She is my Aunt from New York. Just wondering,
how old are you?” She asked. “I
am twenty seven.”
They discussed and figured out how everything happened. Paul got sick when he was four and was sick for almost a year. Then a nurse told his parents that he had passed and gave them an empty casket to bury. Then he was going to secretly sell him to the chinese.
But when the Chinese would not take a sick child, he decided to put him up for adoption.
********
Andi quickly
jumped out of the buggy and ran into the house while Aunt Rebecca
was
following.
“Andrea Rose Carter. You are seventeen years old, that is plenty old enough to act like the
young lady
that you are!” Aunt Rebecca exclaimed.
“Mitch?! Mitch?!
Come quickly!” Andi squealed as if she was a child.
“What is it, sis??” Mitch bellowed through the hall.
Andi ran to the living room and plopped on an overstuffed chair.
“Mitch, I saw Paul and he told me the whole story of how he was adopted,.......
Andi told Mitch everything Paul had told her. Paul was reunited with his biological parents.
Andi and Mitch’s
plan worked perfectly.
Great job!
ReplyDeleteNeat story! Very suspenseful.
ReplyDeleteKeep on writing!
~Sara
Good job little sister!
ReplyDeleteGreat job little sister!
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