By Sara M. and Tori Huber
Note: Since fan fiction stories max out at 3,500 words, I was forced to divide this fan story into two parts. This month is the first part. When both parts are published, I will include a link to the second half. Thanks and enjoy!
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PART 1
Andrea
Carter sipped the water from the fountain as she heard her name being called.
“Andi!
Andi!” Cory rounded the corner of the old white school house yelling her name.
Andi
jumped and replied. “Cory Blake. What on earth do you need now? Can’t I ever
catch a break without you yelling?”
Cory
chuckled as he rolled his eyes and said, “Okay, I get it. But don’t you want to
play baseball?”
“Course
I do. What type of dumb question is that?”
Cory
laughed and replied, “Oh whatever. Come on!”
He
started running towards the yard. Andi sighed and followed him over to the
baseball area. She was bored. Every day it was school, lunch, a baseball game,
more school, another baseball game, and back to the ranch and nothing!
I wish we had something
more to do. Even on weekends, it's boring.
She sighed again but still joined in with the game. At least it gave her
something to do.
Just
after they had finished one game the bell rang and everyone hurried inside.
Andi and Cory lagged behind, “Would you want to come and do something this
weekend? Maybe tomorrow?” Andi asked her friend. It was Friday so they would
have the weekend with nothing to do. Andi hoped Cory would agree.
“Sure!
What time?”
“Around
noon? I'll pack lunch…” Saying this, Andi already knew Cory’s reply.
“I’ll
be there!” Cory replied.
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The
next day as promised Cory showed up in the barn. Andi saw him coming from
Taffy’s stall and called out, “Howdy! Perfect weather for riding. Where should
we ride to?”
“I
don’t care… maybe we could just explore a little?” Cory suggested.
“Alright!”
Andi said with excitement. Finally, something to do. She smiled.
She
led Taffy out of her stall and saddled her up. Cory had brought Flash so he
didn’t need to borrow a Circle C horse. They rode out of the barn and passed
the house when they heard a voice call out, “It's starting to get cloudy. A
storm is likely going to come in this afternoon so don’t stay out too long!”
Elizabeth, Andi’s mother, had spotted them.
“Alright!”
Andi hollered back and they rode off, “Where should we go today and explore?”
Andi asked after they were at the edge of the yard.
Cory
replied, “Hmm, let’s go north.”
Andi
nodded, “Sounds good.”
They
slowly loped for a bit. After a while, they reached a patch of trees with a
slow brook running through it. “Let’s stop and give the horses a drink,”
suggested Andi.
Cory
nodded his agreement. They walked their horses through the trees and slid off.
“Should
we eat lunch here?” Cory asked.
Andi
glanced around and shrugged, “Sounds good to me.”
After
giving Taffy and Flash a nice long drink they tied them to a nearby tree and
grabbed the lunches. Cory peered over Andi’s shoulder watching her grab the
sack from the saddle bag. Andi looked at him, rolled her eyes, and chuckled.
“Oh
Cory, what do you want now?”
Cory
blushed and laughed, “Well, what did your mother pack us?”
Andi
glanced in the sack and saw two ham and cheese sandwiches, two apples, and four
cookies. She handed the sack to Cory so he could see what he could eat.
“Oh,
yum!” Cory pulled out both sandwiches and started to give the sack back to
Andi,
“Hey!”
Andi said, “One of those-” she broke off seeing the twinkle in his eye, “Oh,
you’re just teasing me.” she lunged for one of the sandwiches and took a bite.
“Now I’ll just have these two apples.” Andi laughed at Cory’s expression.
“Aw,
sorry, Andi. But I am hungry” Cory said sheepishly.
“Here
you go.” Andi giggled again and handed him one apple and two cookies.
“Thanks.”
They sat on a log and ate their lunch. Once Andi had finished her apple she
gave the core to Taffy, who munched it happily. Cory did the same with Flash.
“Ready
to keep going?” Andi asked a few minutes later.
“Sure,”
Cory agreed. So they mounted their horses and continued South.
Andi
saw something in the distance and wondered what it was but didn’t say anything
to Cory as they rode on. She saw the
thing in the distance move a little and disappear. She faced forward and nudged
Taffy into a faster trot. She wanted to find out what it was, “Andi! Slow down!
What’s the rush?” Cory loped up beside her.
Not
paying attention Andi strained her eyes looking far ahead of them. “Cory,” she
paused, “I saw something. I know I did, but it’s gone now.”
Cory
lifted his eyes to the horizon and saw nothing. Andi didn’t either. “Let’s keep
going but still keep an eye on where I saw that thing.” Andi said as she nudged
Taffy up into a slow trot.
Andi
kept looking off to the north where she had seen that thing, she was staring
off in the distance when she saw it again. Only for a split second and it was
gone. Andi didn’t say anything to Cory but rode on.
Andi
paid no attention to the dark clouds forming above them. Or the cold wind
starting to blow around them.
Not
until Cory looked up. “Uh, Andi…..” He started. “Look up.”
Andi
barely heard anything over the wind starting to blow harder and harder as they
got closer to where she saw that ‘thing’. All she could make out from Cory was
‘up’. Andi shivered as she glanced at the dark sky. Andi gasped and yelled back
to him, “We better find shelter, and fast! We don’t have time to get home.”
Cory
nodded and replied, “We can’t risk getting separated, so here. Take this rope.
Tie it around Taffy’s saddle horn and I’ll do the same.” He threw the rope and
Andi caught it. She did as Cory said.
It
was getting windier and Andi knew it would start to pour any second. They had
to get shelter now. No sooner did she think that it started dumping rain out
from the dark clouds. Andi held Taffy’s reins tightly.
Andi
yelled out loud but Cory barely heard her. Knowing they had to get somewhere
dry and out of range of flash floods, Andi tried again, “Cory! We need to get
out of here! If we stay here there could be a flash flood.”
The
rain didn’t cease. Yet continues to pour out more and more rain.
Cory
nodded but didn’t say anything. Andi desperately scanned the area for a cave or
something to keep them dry.
At
last, Cory waved ahead. A small cave stuck out of a big hill.
“There!”
Cory shouted. Andi followed the direction of his hand and pushed Taffy into a
fast walk. They quickly found a patch of trees by the enclosure to dismount and
tie the horses. It would guard them from at least some of the wind and rain.
Andi
quickly hugged her horse and whispered, “I’m so sorry, girl. Stay here. We will
be back after the storm is over.” Andi’s teeth clattered from the cold. Her
heart ached at leaving the horses to soak in all the rain. “Andi!” Cory
started, “C’mon!”
Andi
rushed to catch up with him as she hugged her jacket closer to her. As they
entered into the cave Cory said, “I managed to slide the blanket your mother
packed for our picnic into my jacket so it wouldn’t get wet.”
Andi
gave Cory a small smile, “Oh good idea! Thank y-” A crying noise pierced the
air and broke her off.
“C-Cory….What
was that?”
Cory’s
eyes grew huge with fear as the crying continued. Cory slowly inched towards
the sound. Andi right at his heels. A lump was making the noise. Andi bent down
to get a closer look into the dark back part of the cave. “A basket.” Cory
knelt beside her.
“You’re
right.” Andi shook as she reached to open it.
As
she opened the basket door they gasped. Their jaws dropped open.
PART
3
“A
b-baby?” Andi asked. She was stunned.
Cory just sat there. “I thought that's what it
sounded like, but…” He trailed off. They just stared at the beautiful baby.
Judging by the pink blanket they figured it was a girl. She had a thin layer of
blonde hair over her head and bright green eyes.
“Who
would just dump a precious baby here?” Andi voiced the question they were both
wondering.
Cory
shook his head, “Right before a storm too.”
“And
why?” Andi just stared at the baby. She reached out, picked the basket up, and
set it on her lap. She gently took the baby out of the basket and set her in
Cory’s arms. Without looking to see what he thought of it, she lifted the
basket out and felt it all over to see if there was anything, a note, food,
clothes, anything that might show who the baby’s mother was.
Andi
was just about to give up when she felt a tiny piece of paper in the corner of
the basket. She picked it up and walked to the front of the cave by the light
to read it. She read aloud so Cory could hear.
Her name is Evelyn Rose.
Watch.
After
Andi finished she read it again. Then again. It didn’t make sense. Andi glanced
at little Evelyn. She had settled down, content just sucking on her fingers and
staring at Andi. “Oh, Cory. What are we gonna do? We are far from home, stuck
in a cave, In the middle of a storm, with a little baby that has just been left
here, and who knows how long she's been here.”
Cory
came up beside her holding Evelyn, “I know.
While we are waiting for the storm to pass. Let's make a plan on what to do
after.”
Cory
took the note from her and skimmed it, he frowned, “Whoever wrote this and left
the baby sure doesn’t know how to write very well.” The note was sloppily
written.
Andi
and Cory sat down near the front of the cave with Evelyn, or Ev as Andi had
already nicknamed her, and waited for the storm to pass.
“Cory,”
Andi started, “We should pray. We know God can give us strength and peace
during scary and difficult times. Let’s ask Him for wisdom and strength on what
to do.”
Cory
nodded, “Good idea, Andi. Want me to?”
Andi
nodded and Cory began, “Dear Yeshua, please help us. Please protect us and Ev
from this storm. Please keep us safe. Please help us decide on how to help her
find her mom. Please give us strength and wisdom during this time. In Yeshua’s
name, we pray. Amen.”
Andi
immediately felt peace wash over her. God
is so awesome, Andi thought. They sat in silence. Thankfully it was much
warmer inside the cave than out. They still kept little Ev wrapped in her
blanket though. The hour slowly went by. The baby stayed pretty happy. Only
fussing a few times.
Andi
and Cory took turns gently bouncing the baby around and making her giggle. “She
sure has the cutest little laugh,” Andi said. Little Ev broke out in a
toothless smile as if she understood what her new friend had said.
Andi
smiled down at the baby but still wondered why someone had left this happy,
smiley baby. She glanced out the cave’s end and was delighted to see the rain
had started slowing down a bit. Andi stood, cradling the baby gently.
Cory
stood as well. “Looks like it's starting to let up,” Cory stated.
After
a few minutes, the rain finally turned into a heavy fog. Andi glanced behind
her in the darkness of the cave and spotted something lying on the ground.
PART
4
Andi
hurried over and found a faded pink handkerchief, “Cory, look at this.” Walking
back to the entrance of the cave she held it out.
“Where
did you find this?”
“In
the back of the cave,” Andi said.
“Look,
there is the initials R. L. W. on it. Think that might be Ev’s mom?” Cory
wondered.
“You’re
right.” Andi was surprised but happy. Another clue! “It could be,” she added.
“Should I hold Evelyn as we ride or do you want to hold her?”
“You
can,” Cory said. “I’ll hold her while you mount.”
They
walked out to the horses. They were patiently waiting for them. Cory quickly
grabbed the tack he had stashed by a tree. They had an extra blanket so they
had thrown that over them. He took it off and the saddles were surprisingly
mostly dry!
Cory
threw the saddles on and tightened the girths.
“Thanks,
Cory,” Andi said.
Andi
handed the baby to Cory, quickly mounted Taffy, and took the baby back.
Adjusting the reins she settled Evelyn in front of her and moved Taffy into a
slow walk.
Andi
kept a close eye around them. Just in case Evelyn’s mother came for her. Wait a minute, where are we? Andi looked
around. Not recognizing where they were. Nothing was familiar at all. “Cory.”
Andi said in a low tone, “Do you think we’re on the correct way home?”
They
had started to ride North when they started. “I don’t know, I don’t normally
ride out this far.” Cory looked around as well, “As far as I know I have never
been up this way. Or down this way.” he added. When they searched for shelter
they went blindly through the storm in the unknown.
Andi
kicked Taffy into a slow trot and they went on, she still did not recognize
anything. Cory trotted behind.
They
rode over a hill and saw no ranch. No nothing! Andi’s fear was real now. They
were lost.
“Cory…”
she began slowly, “We are lost,” she
said.
Cory
sighed, “I thought maybe so. Now what?”
“Let’s
ride north and see what we find.” Andi kicked Taffy into a fast trot, holding
Ev carefully, and they rode on.
What
seemed like miles they rode, Andi didn’t know. “We can’t go any further,” Andi
said, halting Taffy. “It will be dark soon and if we keep moving it's going to
be hard for the search party to find us.” Andi knew she and Cory were being
looked for as they had already been out for a few hours and it had stormed.
Andi glanced up at the sky worriedly. A few scattered clouds were starting to
form back together and turn a dark gray.
“Looks
like another storm is coming in,” Cory groaned. “Where do we go this time?”
Andi
glanced around, there were some bushes and small trees, but that was it. The
wind was blowing northwest and Andi hoped it wouldn't hit them. “Let's keep
riding and maybe we’ll just get the edge of it and not the worst.” Andi made
Taffy leap into a slow lope, gripping little Ev.
Cory
rode right behind her. They loped over miles of land but Andi still wasn’t sure
they were going in the right direction. The clouds slowly separated and turned
back into a light gray. Just a few fluffy white ones began to reform.
They
slowed their horses into a trot and
halted by a brook. Ev started to squirm.
“We
better let the horses drink and Ev is getting restless,” Andi said.
Cory
nodded and dismounted. He tied Flash to a tree, loose enough so he could drink.
Cory walked over to Andi and took the baby from her arms. Andi dismounted and
walked Taffy to the tree and did the same as Cory did with Flash.
“Here,”
Cory handed Evelyn back to Andi. She laughed and took the baby that had started
to whine. “I guess babies aren’t for you.” she laughed again as she hushed Ev.
“Is
there any sign of my brothers?” Andi asked a few minutes later after the horses
had drank from the brook.
“Not
that I can see,” Cory said, his eyes skimming the landscape. “I do hear
something.”
Andi
strained her ears, it sounded like hoofbeats coming from behind them. Fast.
PART
5
“Cory.
My brothers would not run their horses that fast through this brush.” Andi said
in a low voice. “Get on Flash and let’s go.”
Cory
looked startled but he ran and untied Taffy and Flash and mounted. Andi took
the baby and threw herself up on the saddle holding Ev. There wasn’t time for
Cory to hand the baby to her!
Taffy
seemed to sense Andi wanted to go and started loping as soon as Andi was
settled. Thoughts were racing through Andi’s head, I don’t think the person who wrote the note was Ev's mother. There's
just something off about it. They heard the hoofbeats speed up behind them,
and Andi knew they were being followed. The horse and rider were hidden by
brush and Cory and Andi couldn't see them, still riding Cory yelled behind
them, “Who are you and why are you following us?”
In
a voice which was clearly a man trying to sound like a woman answered, “You
have my baby! Halt and come back. She is my daughter! I didn’t want to leave
her but I had to.”
Andi
violently shook her head at Cory, he understood her message. Don’t say another word.
They
dashed on. With the horse and rider still in pursuit.
Andi
motioned with her hand to Cory. Come
here, she mouthed. Cory nodded and rode alongside Taffy when they reached a
clearing where they could ride side by side for a minute, “Cory. We can’t get
away. You have to take the baby and ride east and I’ll continue south to get
that person off your trail. I’ll meet up again soon. Now go!” Andi placed Ev in
Cory’s arms and they split up.
Andi
knew Cory would want her to take the baby and get away while he led the man and
horse away but Andi already knew how she would do it. She saw Cory riding east
and he was out of sight, Andi kept Taffy going but slowed her down just a
little so she could tell if the man was following Cory or her, she was just
reaching the edge of the small clearing when he burst into it. “Hey, you!
Halt!” he shouted, whipping his horse after her.
Andi
shouted, “Go, Taffy!” Taffy leaped into a fast gallop and ran. Even Andi, a
skilled rider, bounced up and down. She heard the other horse running after
her.
Andi
knew she was going too fast for this brush but she had little choice. A loud boom! broke the air. Andi’s face paled
and she shook. She suddenly heard a pistol shot. Andi’s worst fear was
happening. The man had a gun and was aiming for her!
Thankfully
there were a lot of trees and brush around in the woods and Andi knew the man
wouldn't be able to see that there was only one horse and not two. The last
thing she wanted was the man to go after Cory and Evelyn.
Andi
was suddenly in a clearing, she quickly slowed Taffy and hid in the brush in
the west side of the clearing, she knew the man would assume she had gone
straight instead of turning a sharp left.
The
man entered the clearing at a gallop and without even looking around he entered
the south side and was instantly out of sight. Andi trembled next to Taffy,
“That was much too close, girl.” she whispered to her horse.
After
waiting for a few minutes she remounted Taffy again and returned the way she
had come. Andi went zig-zagging since she didn’t want the man to follow her
right to Cory again. How am I going to
find Cory? Andi wondered, I’ll just
ride northeast and hopefully, I’ll find him. After deciding that she rode
northeast, after riding for about ten minutes and searching for her friends,
she heard hoofbeats off somewhere east.
She
halted Taffy quickly and listened carefully. Her face broke into a grin when
she heard Cory trying to hush Ev, “Hush, Evelyn. We need to find Andi. Yeah,
yeah, I know. You like her better.”
Andi
rode forward to Cory, “Cory….Cory!” she called.
“Andi!”
Cory’s relief was obvious as his face fell into a wide grin. “Here, take Ev.”
He lifted her over and plopped her into Andi’s arms.
Andi
stared at Cory and jokingly said, “Gee, nice to see you too.”
Cory
blushed and replied, “I’m glad you’re okay.”
Andi
laughed again and said gladly, “I think I got that man off our track but let’s
keep moving quick so he can’t find us.” Andi hurriedly explained the events
that had happened since they separated.
“I
was really worried, Andi. Next time I’ll do the leading away.” Cory said
seriously.
“I’m
sorry, Cory. I couldn’t just let you do it. Anyway, as Mother always says,
all's well that ends well!” Andi said.
I love it! great job girls!
ReplyDeleteThank you Emma!!
DeleteNeat story! I'm eager to read the ending!
ReplyDeleteThank you Carissa!!
DeleteWow, what a great story!
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