by Lizzy D.
Andi Prescott looked
over the crowd at the fourth of July fair. She had lost her husband and two
sons. She, Jenny Elizabeth and Lilly were at the wagon waiting for Riley,
Jared and Eli.
“Mama. I’m hungry.” Lilly said.
Andi looked over at her daughter. “Look and see
if there are any leftovers from lunch.” Andi said.
Lilly rooted around in the picnic basket.
“I only found this apple.” Lilly held up the bruised apple.
“Share it with Jenny Elizabeth.” Andi said looking
out over the crowd.
“I think I see him.” Jenny Elizabeth pointed
. Suddenly a man came over to their wagon. “Come
on down from there, Ana!” The man wrenched Jenny Elizabeth from the wagon.
“I told you not to run off.”
Andi jumped off the wagon. “Let my daughter go!”
She ordered.
The man sneered at her and gripped Jenny
Elizabeth’s arm tighter. “This is my daughter and when we get home, she’ll
get what’s coming to her.”
Andi could see Riley coming out of the corner of
her eye.
“Excuse me sir, I wish you let go of our
daughter.” Riley said. Jared and Eli climbed onto the wagon with Lilly.
“As I told your pretty wife, this is my
daughter.” The commotion had drawn a crowd around them, including the sheriff
and the rest of Andi’s family. Mother came up to Andi and put her arms
around her.
“Sir you must be mistaken. This is Jenny
Elizabeth Prescott. Not your daughter.” Sheriff Tate said.
The man tightened his grip on Jenny
Elizabeth and spit at the sheriff. “This is my daughter!” He hollered.
“Can you prove it?”
The man’s evil grin faded away as the
words came out of Sheriff Tate’s mouth. “Uh,” The man stammered. He let his
grip on Jenny Elizabeth go and stepped back a piece.
Andi hugged Jenny Elizabeth near her and glared
at the man.
“No. I can’t say I can.” The man stood tall. “I
was just a little careless when I was planning. Because I am the son of
Procopio the Red Handed!” With that the man ran into the crowd.
“Jenny Elizabeth, are you alright?” Andi hugged
her daughter.
Riley put his hand on Jenny Elizabeth’s
shoulder and looked over at Sheriff Tate. “Thank you.” He said.
He nodded and walked away.
Jenny Elizabeth hopped in the wagon and Riley and
Andi climbed up to the seat. Then they headed home.
****
Andi woke up with a start. She wondered what woke
her up.
Suddenly a clatter of footsteps rushed in the
room. “Mama! Hurry!”
Andi jumped from the bed and hurriedly got
dressed. She rushed in the kitchen to find only Eli and Riley. “Where are the
girls and where is Jared?” Andi
glanced at each of their faces.
“Andi, Lilly is still sleeping and Jenny
Elizabeth is ... well she’s not here. Jared went over to the Circle C to get
help.”
Jared had successfully kept Eli and Lilly
occupied the whole time.
Andi had sat down for only a minute to drink her
coffee but she just couldn’t keep still.
“Dear Lord, where is my daughter?”
****
Jenny Elizabeth was tired after riding for
hours. When she had gone into the kitchen for water, she had looked out the
window into the face of the man who had nearly cut off her arm.
Juan Rodendo. Her captor had spoken only enough to tell her
to be quiet and his name.
Suddenly
they stopped. Jenny Elizabeth looked around, but couldn’t see anything in the
dark.
“Vamonos Senorita.” Juan said.
Jenny Elizabeth dismounted and hurried over
to Juan. She could barely see the outline of a shack.
“Dentro.”
Jenny Elizabeth went inside the small shack
and felt around and found a chair just as Juan lit a lamp.
“Well Senorita, looks like it’s
you and me till your parents bring the ransom.” Juan laughed an evil laugh and
inside Jenny Elizabeth groaned.
****
Andi glanced at the Bible on the night
stand. She picked it up and opened it to the bookmark. Last night she was
reading in Psalms. She started to read Psalm 4. “Offer the sacrifices of
righteousness, and put your trust in the Lord.” She whispered that verse over
and over until she heard the sound of boots stomping on the floor. She stood up
and went out to the kitchen. There stood her brothers, Chad, Mitch and Justin.
Justin came over to her and hugged her.
“It’s okay.”
“Thank you, Justin.” She said. She sat down
on a kitchen chair and watched her brothers and husband plan out the operation.
“Dear Lord, help them find my daughter.”
****
Jenny Elizabeth woke up and looked around.
She was sleeping on an old cot at the back of the shack.
Juan was sleeping on another cot at the
side of the shack.
She threw the old saddle blanket she had
used off, and stood up. She walked over to the poor excuse for a stove and
found a frying pan and a couple eggs. She started frying them up when Juan woke
up.
“Well, Senorita, you are early this
morning.”
Jenny
Elizabeth poured the eggs onto the two plates she had found and pulled out two
forks. “Breakfast is ready.” She sat down across from Juan and ate her eggs.
After she finished, she stood up and did the dishes. “Juan. I have a question.”
Juan nodded.
“What’s the ransom and when did you give
them the ransom note?”
Juan paled. “I forgot to make one.”
Jenny Elizabeth froze. “Does that mean you
are holding me here for nothing!”
Juan nodded.
“What are you to do?” Jenny Elizabeth
asked.
“Nada”
Now it was Jenny Elizabeth’s turn to pale.
“Nothing? What do you mean nothing?”
Juan went to the door. “I will keep you.
What for? For a housekeeper. And when you are older, my wife.”
****
Andi
paced the floor. Riley and her brothers had split up yesterday. She hadn’t seen
a trace of any of them.
Jared
had successfully kept Eli occupied the whole time.
Andi
had sat down for only a minute to drink her coffee but she just couldn’t keep
still. “Dear Lord, where is my daughter?”
****
Jenny Elizabeth had never been this restless in
her life. “He wants me to be his wife?” She had been whispering that to
herself all day.
Juan had left a minute ago and Jenny Elizabeth
was thinking of a way to escape. Jenny Elizabeth looked out the dirty
window to see nothing but dirt. She opened the door and saw that the sky
was dark enough to escape.
She grabbed a biscuit out of the batch she made
for lunch and wrapped it in her handkerchief. She pushed it back in her
pocket and took a deep breath. She whispered a quick prayer and opened the
door.
She looked out the door for any signs of Juan and
for a sign of trees. She was satisfied with the patch of pines about a few
yards away and bolted out the door. She reached the pines and hid behind
one.
She couldn’t see Juan so she went to another tree
about another yard away. She repeated doing so until she couldn’t see
the shack anymore. She broke away from the pines and looked up to the sky.
She scanned the sky until she found the North
Star. She followed the North Star for a long time. She heard the distant sound
of horse hooves and hid behind the nearest tree.
“Jenny Elizabeth!”
She heard her name being called.
“Papa?” She whispered to herself. She peeked from
behind the tree and recognized Papa. She broke away from the shadow from the
tree and ran forward. “Papa!”
Riley looked over to her and hopped off his
horse.
“Jenny Elizabeth!”
Jenny Elizabeth reached Riley and threw herself
at him. “Papa.” She hugged him tight. “
Oh Jenny Elizabeth.” Jenny Elizabeth let go and
looked into Riley’s face. “Can we go home now Papa?”
“Yes, Yes we can.”
Jenny Elizabeth could sense, as they got on the
horse, that he was so happy he was crying.
Not that Jenny Elizabeth wasn’t.
She probably couldn’t match what Papa was
feeling, but she was very close.
****
Later that week at Sunday dinner, Justin shared
the news that Juan was arrested. Everyone was happy as the news was spilled.
But the news that everyone loved was that Ellie
was expecting again.
As Andi looked around at their happy family, she
knew that she should never worry.
Because God was always in control and that Jenny Elizabeth was not only her and Riley’s daughter, but God’s.
That's a neat story! I liked the last sentance a lot. Nice wrap up. :) - Grace
ReplyDeleteWhat are Andi's kids ages??
ReplyDeleteYeah.
DeleteI never really thought of that! I'd say that Jared is about 15, Jenny Elizabeth is 13, and the twins are about 6 or 7. I should really put the ages in the story!
DeleteGreat story, Lizzy!! Keep writing!
ReplyDeleteGreat story!
ReplyDeleteGreat story Lizzy!
ReplyDeleteI got confused at one part.
When Jenny Elizabeth said "He wants me to be his wife?"
Now of course this isn't a confusing sentence.
But if Jenny Elizabeth if 13.....
Can I have some detail on what she meant? I dunno.
I kind of think that Juan was going to keep her for the rest of her life and was just going to wait a few years before he married her. Does that make sense?
DeleteThanks for reading my story!
Oh No! I just realized that part of my story is gone! That's why it didn't make sense! Sorry. I'll have to contact Mrs.M
DeleteI think that it is meaning that Jenny Elizabeth thinks that the son of Procopio the Red Handed (Juan)wanted her (Jenny Elizabeth) to be his wife.
ReplyDeleteGreat story Lizzy!
Nice story, Lizzy! my fav part was the last sentence
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