by Elizah B.
Twelve-year-old Andi Carter jumped out of bed and pulled the curtains apart revealing a bright sunny morning. She had waited all week for Saturday to arrive.
“Yes! A great day to ride to my
special spot!” She exclaimed happily. Quickly brushing and plaiting her long
dark hair into two braids, she dressed in a comfortable shirt and her favorite
pair of overalls, then pulled on her boots.
She rushed out the door and
stopped at the top of the stairs. The shiny, wooden banister looked so
welcoming. She was about to slide down when Luisa, their fiery little
housekeeper appeared. “Ni lo intentes señorita.”
Disappointed, Andi plodded down
the stairs. Oh well, I won’t let this ruin my day, she thought as she
entered the dining room. “Good morning!” She said cheerfully.
“Good morning, Andrea.” Elizabeth
answered. The others greeted her, then went back to talking. Andi poured maple
syrup on her pancakes and started eating.
“What's the hurry, sis?” Mitch asked.
“Well, I was planning on riding
to my special spot today,” Andi told him. “That seems nice,” said Elizabeth,
smiling.
“Just as soon as you don't forget
to do your chores,” added Chad.
“I won’t,” Andi promised
wholeheartedly. “May I go now?”
“Yes, you may,” Elizabeth answered.
Andi grabbed her hat and ran
outdoors and into the barn. Taffy, her golden palomino, greeted her with the snort
and then went back to eating her soft alfalfa. Andi rushed through her chores.
Afterwards, she packed a lunch which included a cold chicken sandwich, two
apples, and half a dozen sugar cookies. She got her fishing equipment and soon she
and Taffy were on their way. They rode to the special spot and Andi tied her to
a willow tree nearby where she greedily munched on grass. Andi sighed happily.
She leaned against a tree, fishing pole in hand. Then she dozed off.
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Taffy’s loud whinnies woke Andi
like a bucket of cold water. “What is it, girl?” she asked. She looked around
her. Suddenly something caught her eye. A magnificent looking horse, about 15
hands high stood only a few feet away.
Andi gasped. Where did this
horse come from? She wondered. “Hey, boy,” she said gently, not wanting to
spook him. She took an apple from her gunnysack and offered it to the horse. He
took a few steps forward. “It almost seems like he's used to this.” she said
thoughtfully. He came close enough to get the apple and ate it in one huge bite.
Cautiously, Andi patted his neck. The horse just stood there looking at her.
“You sure are one mysterious horse,” Andi told
him. “Hey that's what I’ll call you. Mystery.” The name fit him. He was a
cloudy gray covered with snowy white dots. “You act like you've been around
people before, but where did you come from?” Andi fed him the other apple and a
few sugar cookies. After eating what was left of her lunch Andi decided to go
back home, for it was almost suppertime. She knew she couldn't possibly take Mystery
home, for certain reasons that had to do with the ranch boss, big brother Chad.
“I'll come back tomorrow after
church, that is, if mother lets me.”
Mystery shook his mane as if understanding. Andi
mounted Taffy, who by now was annoyed at all the attention Mystery was getting
and started at an easy pace. They reached the ranch not long after, where she
unsaddled Taffy and led her to her stall. She then hurried into the house,
climbed up the stairs and entered her room. She changed into a simple dress and
went back down to the dining room. She was right on time.
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After dinner, in which she didn't tell anyone about Mystery, she went to
bed and lay there thinking. I wonder
if Mystery has an owner, is the owner looking for him? Then she
slept.
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The next morning, Andi sat as
still as possible while Reverend Harris preached on about the sins in lying,
which made Andi feel kind of guilty since she had not told her family about Mystery.
When the Reverend finally dismissed them, Andi
hurried outside and was about to ask her mother about riding today when Mrs.
Evans came over to Elizabeth and pulled her away. Probably to tell her about
the latest gossip. Andi slumped. Nobody could get away from Mrs. Evans when she
was talking. Andi ran over to Chad who had brought the wagon along with the
family buggy.
“Oh, please Chad, will you give
me a ride home?!” she pleaded.
“I guess I can, but tell Mother
or Melinda, or they’ll start looking for you,” Chad answered.
“OK, I'll tell Melinda,” she said.
“Melinda,” she asked as soon as she found her
sister. “Will you please tell Mother I'm going home with Chad and Mitch?”
“Alright,” Melinda agreed.
**********
Soon after Andi rode to her
special spot. Mystery was nowhere to be seen. “Mystery,” she called as she
dismounted Taffy, “where are you boy?” She heard a whinny coming from a place
not far away. She ran into the woods. “There you are,” she said when she saw
him. Mystery only whinnied louder. Andi ran over to him and gasped. Unconscious,
next to him, lay a girl about her age. Please God don't let her be dead,
Andi thought. Andi shook her. The girl
moaned.
“C’mon wake up.” Andi urged. The girl’s
eyes opened slowly.
“Who are you?” The girl asked.
“I'm Andi Carter and this is my
ranch, what's your name?”
“I'm
Samantha Eddleton and I didn't mean to trespass; I was only looking for my
horse Relámpago.”
“Is that him?” Andi asked
pointing to Mystery.
“Yes, I was so excited when I saw
him, I slipped and fell.” Samantha answered.
“Why were you looking for him,
did he escape?” Andi asked curiously.
“Well,” Samantha said as she sat
up, “my family and I are always on the move, and we were taking a shortcut
through the hills, when suddenly, Relámpago just took off.”
“Do you know where your family is
now?” Andi asked her.
“Yep, Pa said that when I found
him -the horse I mean, that I should go back the way I came and meet them by
the road.”
“You
think you can ride- I mean, since you bumped your head and all?” Andi asked.
“Sure, it wasn't that bad a fall.”
A new idea popped into Andi’s
mind. “Hey, how about you come down to the ranch with me? Your family will
probably pass by.”
“Sounds good to me.” Samantha
said as she mounted Relámpago. They went over to where Taffy was, and Andi
mounted her.
“Wanna race over to that oak?” Andi
asked hopefully.
“I’d never put down an offer like
that,” Samantha said with a mischievous grin.
“Ready?” Andi said. Samantha
nodded.
“Go!” Andi shouted. The girls
took off.
When they reached the oak, they
were gasping for breath. “It- was- a tie!” Andi said.
They trotted over to the ranch
and saw a wagon in front of the house. “Hey that's my Pa’s wagon!” Samantha
exclaimed. Both girls ran over bringing their horses along. A man and a woman
were talking to Elizabeth. They turned around when they heard the girls.
“Samantha, there you are!” Her
mother exclaimed.
“And I see you found Relámpago.” Her
father added.
“Yeah, he was over in the woods.”
Samantha told him.
“Andrea how did you come across
them?” Elizabeth asked Andi.
Together
the girls took turns telling them the whole story. Then Elizabeth insisted they
stay for dinner where the Eddleton’s told them about how they were traveling to
their relative’s home to start a hotel nearby.
After dinner Mr. Eddleton said
that they should probably leave to reach their destination sooner. After making
sure that Relámpago was securely tied to the back of the wagon Andi called to
Samantha, “I hope we meet again someday.”
“Me too!” Samantha shouted as they rode
farther away.
“So,
the mystery horse is gone,” Andi mused, “maybe we SHALL meet again someday.
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DeleteAndi is finally on time for dinner. Great story!
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Keep writing Elizah!!
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