by Holly K. (ages 14-17)
A sliver of the moon stood high in the ombre blue sky as the sun sank below jagged mountains. Cory Blake leaned against his father's livery. He stared off into the distance and sighed.
For
the last couple of months dread pounced on Cory the second he woke up and
stalked him throughout the day and into the night. The words of their last
conversation echoed in his ears. But Cory didn't regret one word of it, despite
Andi not loving him the way he had her.
The
sound of dirt crunching under buggy wheels tore Cory from his somber thoughts
and he looked up just in time to see Melinda step down from it.
Cory
pushed himself away from the wall and made his way toward her. "Howdy,
Miss Carter. What brings you into town today?"
Melinda
greeted him and responded, "We're collecting my dear friend Miss Lydia Jenkins. There's going to be a
welcoming party at the ranch tonight. Cory, please do come!"
Cory
nodded, “Sure, I'll be there."
Melinda
smiled and turned, but stopped and looked back, biting her lip. "Cory, I'm
sorry about what happened between you and Andi, but don't go chasing after
every girl that is like Andi," her brow furrowed as sorrow filled her
eyes, “what I'm trying to say is that don't find someone to replace Andi just
to replace her, find a girl you love because you love her, not because she's
like Andi.”
With
that Melinda turned and got back into the buggy, skirts swishing at her feet.
Her
words hit Cory hard and the more he thought the more he realized that Melinda
was right, but that didn't make the pain any better.
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A
glass of punch cooled Cory’s hand as he scanned the room of the party. The
sound of conversation rose in an unintelligible clamor. Suddenly, his eyes
caught sight of Andi standing by a bench. As he made his way toward her, Cory
noticed that Andi looked as uncomfortable as ever wearing a pastel blue dress
and a matching hair ribbon.
Andi’s
eyes lit up when she saw him. “You won’t believe the new trick Riley taught me
today.” She gushed.
“Your
mother must be thrilled.” Cory replied sarcastically with a smile.
“Well
she’s happy now that I’m stuck in an itchy dress for the night.”
They
talked a while longer before Elizabeth Carter strode over to the pair. “Good evening, Cory. I hope you’re having a
pleasant time.”
“I
am, thank you.” Cory replied.
She
shared a warm smile and turned to Andi, “Please come with me, my dear.”
Andi
looked at Cory with alarm, no doubt trying to remember if she had played any
tricks recently.
“No,
you’re not in trouble.” Relief flooded Andi’s eyes as Mrs. Carter continued.
“Excuse us, Cory.”
With
that the two walked away leaving Cory alone again. He made his way around the
room saying hi to friends, but eventually Cory found himself wandering
outside. The grass was soft under his
shoes and a gentle breeze cooled his face. Stars twinkled in the dark sky,
radiating calmness.
“Too
crowded in there?” A quiet voice behind Cory asked. He turned to see a girl
around his age walking toward him.
“Just
a little.” Cory responded.
“I’m
Anna.” She stated.
“Nice
to meet you. I’m Cory. How do you know the Carter’s?” He asked.
“I
met Melinda and Lydia Jenkins at school and the three of us have been friends
ever since.” She said with a smile as if remembering all the fun times they’d
enjoyed.
The
pair fell into silence as they took in the beautiful night around them.
Cory
was about to head back into the house when he felt something cold press up
against the back of his head. His breath caught in his throat. Cory silently
hoped that it was not what he thought it was.
A
low voice in his ear confirmed Cory’s suspicions. “Don’t make a sound or we’ll
shoot. And that goes for you, too.” Cory assumed the last part was directed at
Anna. “Calmly walk toward the barn.”
Cory
obeyed, heart pounding.
Suddenly
the night sky wasn’t calming but a dark, terrifying void. When they made it
behind the barn, Cory and Anna were stood up against the wall and the attackers
backed off. Both wore red bandanas over their noses. Cory could hear Anna’s
quickened breath as the gravity of their situation sunk in. “Andrea Carter.”
Cory
couldn’t tell if the man was asking a question or making a statement. His
thoughts raced. They thought Anna was Andi, but if they were corrected would
they let her go or hurt her? What if when they discovered who Anna was they
went after the real Andi?
“What
do you want?” Cory tried to make his voice strong, but nonthreatening. Instead
it came out sounding like a terrified little boy.
“Here’s
what’s going to happen. Miss Carter is going to find a way to get in the barn
and we’re going to take the four best horses in there. Next we’ll ride away, no
harm done. However if either of you try to interfere, I can’t promise things
won’t get messy. After we’re gone you are free to tell whoever you like and
they are free to try and catch us. But we’ll be long gone.”
Out
of the corner of his eye Cory saw Anna open her mouth to start to talk.
He
cut her off before she had the chance, “Andi doesn’t know where the emergency
key is. Lucky for you, I’m a ranch hand and do.”
He
hoped Anna would catch on and stay silent. Just then a loud voice rang through
the night. “Cory! Cory!” It was Mitch.
Cory
didn’t know if he felt relief or fear. Maybe Mitch could help, or maybe if
another person was brought into this the robbers would hurt them all.
Hurriedly, Cory bargained, “If you don’t hurt us, I’ll go tell him to leave.”
The
two men exchanged a quick glance before one of them gave a sharp nod. “But one
suspicious word and I won’t hesitate.” He pointed the gun at Anna.
Cory nodded in turn and made his way around
the barn. “Mitch!” The name came out with a tremble in it so Cory cleared his
voice and tried again, reminding himself that Anna’s life depended on him.
“Mitch!” With a strong tone this time Cory made his way to where Mitch stood.
“Where
have you been? Some people noticed that you were missing from the party.”
Cory tried his best to be nonchalant. “I just
needed a breather if that’s okay.”
Mitch
nodded. “Want some company?”
Panic
rose in Cory’s chest. “No, no, you go enjoy the party. I’ll be back before you
know it.” Cory kept his voice loud so that there was no doubt that he was
following orders, but he silently begged Mitch to not believe his lies.
Unsuccessfully
Mitch turned and walked back to the house.
As
Cory made his way back to where the others were he snatched the extra key where
it always was, under a pile of dusty blankets beside the barn. Everything in
Cory’s body begged him to turn and run screaming to the house, but he knew that
the first person punished for his actions would be Anna. Reluctantly Cory
handed over the keys.
“Once
we get in the barn you’ll be tied up,” the man motioned to Anna, “while you,”
this time he motioned to Cory, “will help us saddle up the horses. Fast.”
With
clear instructions the small group walked to the front of the barn. Cory’s hand
trembled as he slid the cold key into the lock. The sharp click of its
unlocking was sickening to Cory’s ears as he shamefully imagined the kindness
the Carters’ would show him once the situation blew over.
As
Cory lit the kerosine lamps, it illuminated the robbers. Scars lined both their
wrinkled foreheads, which sat above dark, dead and unsettling black eyes. They
towered above both Anna and Cory in menacing statures.
Cory’s thoughts raced with what he could do to
evade the men stealing prized horses while keeping himself and Anna alive. He
could try to rally up the animals so that the party goers would notice.
Attacking them was not an option due to their sheer size. But maybe if a tack
was placed under one of the saddles then it would cause a commotion and the men
would fall off. But even Cory knew that it was too dangerous and unpredictable.
No horses were worth the lives of men whether or not they were robbers.
One
of the men led Anna to a corner where he began to tie her up. She put on a
brave face, but her trembling hands gave away how she really felt. The other
robber surveyed the room, walking over to different stalls and eyeing the
horses in them. When Anna was tied securely both men met in the center of the
barn talking in hushed voices.
After
a couple of long minutes one of them pointed to a stall. “Start saddling that
one up.”
Cory
rushed to go get the supplies and as he hurried over to the stall his heart
fell. Shasta stood looking back at him. Cory swallowed the lump in his throat
and reminded himself that no horses were worth risking your life for.
Guilt
burned in his stomach as he knew Andi would disagree. Now he saddled the horse
as slowly as he could, begging for anyone to come through the barn doors. Out
of the corner of his eye, Cory could see Anna sitting on the floor, still tied
to the post scoot to face the wall like a pouting child.
Cory
didn’t think much of it as he finished up preparing Shasta. He couldn’t imagine
what must be going through her terrified head. Sighing, Cory clasped the last
buckle and silently apologized to Shasta. He turned around and to his surprise
saw Anna no longer tied to the post with a line of blood trailing up her arm.
In
his panic Cory tried to divert any possible attention toward him. “She’s all
saddled up and ready to go but if you don’t want to get caught you’re going to
need to…” he trailed off and his mind went blank. Cory urged himself to say
anything, but before he could a horrible clang sounded from where Anna stood.
In
her desperation to escape she’d knocked over a milk pan. She stood frozen and
horrified.
Cory
took advantage of the men’s shock and lunged toward the nearest one, ripping
the gun from his holster. Immediately Cory cocked it and shot straight up,
imploring everyone to come quick. Chaos ensued inside the barn as the animals
erupted and stamped their feet.
The
robber whose gun Cory took snapped around to face him. In a desperate attempt
to get away, Cory stumbled and fell face to the ground. The man strutted to
where Cory lay, face distorted in anger.
Cory
tossed the gun across the floor, but that wasn’t what the man was going for. He
stood over Cory for a second before grabbing Cory’s shirt, pulling him to eye
level and punching Cory square in the face. Warm blood poured out of Cory’s
nose and down his face as pain exploded though his body.
Before
the man could get another hit in, Mitch and Chad were pulling the enraged man
away from Cory. He looked up and saw Anna rushing toward him. She handed him a
rag that he put up to his burning nose.
“How’d
you do it?” He asked, barely intelligible. “There was a loose nail in the post.
I sat with my back to it as soon as I saw it.” She showed him her arm, where a
long jagged cut was. “When I broke through the last strand it cut me, but
that’s the price to pay for this outcome.” She remarked, smiling softly.
With
that they all were taken to the house where their minds caught up with the
perilous predicament that had transpired in the last few hours.
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Cory
stood by his father’s livery once again watching as the sun fell behind the
blue mountains. It had been two months since the party, though to Cory it felt
like years. He and Anna had begun courting and each day he liked her more.
She
wasn’t Andi, and for once Cory was okay with that because she was Anna. And he
loved her.
Love this!
ReplyDeleteSo glad Cory found someone, Anna seems perfect for him! :)
Keep writing. :D
~Sara M
Awesome job!
ReplyDelete~Micaiah
Very well written! I enjoyed the whole story!
ReplyDelete-Makenna C
you did a great job on this! I enjoyed seeing the different possibilities for Cory. :)
ReplyDeletekeep writing! your descriptions were spot on!