by Ella M.
Ages 9-12 Runner Up
Fall 2023 Writing Contest
It was an early spring morning when
Andi was riding to her special spot and saw a brown lump on the hill. She could
not make it out until it mooed. She saw that it was a cow laying on its side. She must be giving birth, Andi thought.
The cow was laying in the middle of a
clump of scrub oaks. Andi tied Taffy to a tree and carefully crept around to
the other side of the clump, hoping the cow wouldn’t see or hear her. She did
not know if the cow could smell her, though. But even if the cow could smell,
she probably wouldn’t move because the calf’s head and front legs were sticking
out. Andi had seen other calves being born but nothing like this.
“That must be a record time for a calf
to stand up,” Andi whispered to herself. The mother stood up, too and started
licking her calf. After staggering around a little, he found his mother and
started nursing. Only then did Andi notice he had a little white patch on his
rump.
At
least I’ll be able to tell little…oh gee, what should I name him? she wondered. Andi decided it should
be Flash because he was so fast.
When Andi rode in for breakfast, Mitch
was mucking stalls.
“Hey Andi,” Mitch said. “What are you
doing up this early?”
Andi said, “I thought the fish might
bite better in the early morning, so I went out, but there was this weird brown
lump on the hill, so I…”
“Whoa, whoa, whoa; slow down,” Mitch
cut in. “Some brown what? And who told you fish were easier caught in the
morning?”
“Well, Justin did. How did you know?”
“Father took me early in the morning
and told me the same thing,” he answered.
“Breakfast!” Justin yelled from the
porch.
“You can tell me about this brown lump
inside Andi,” Mitch said.
A steaming bowl of oatmeal was waiting
for Andi at the table when she walked in.
“Well, you’re up early,” Chad said to
her.
“She was fishing ‘fore the fish were
even up,” Mitch winked at Justin. “She also saw a weird brown lump.”
“It was a cow!” Andi cut in. “She was giving
birth to a calf, who stood up in five seconds.”
“Really, Andi?” Justin asked.
“Yep. I saw it myself. And that’s why I
named him Flash,” Andi replied happily.
“Speaking of calves,” Chad started to
say, “I think we’ll have another rodeo this year.”
“Really? We will?” Andi asked
excitedly.
“Yep. And this year kids can compete
against each other too; that is, if mother will let you,” Chad replied.
“Oh, can I Mother, can I?” Andi begged.
“May I,” she corrected Andi. “And yes,
I’ll let you compete with the children.”
“Oh, thank you Mother!” Andi jumped up
and hugged her.
“And even though Flash is probably too
young for it, there will be calf roping for kids and adults, too,” Chad stated.
“Oh, this will be the best rodeo ever!”
Andi exclaimed.
“But this rodeo won’t even happen if
you don’t finish your oatmeal and do your chores,” Mother pointed out.
“Can we invite Sadie and her family to
come again?” Andi asked.
“Sure we can,” Chad replied.
“But what about what happened last
time?” Mother sounded concerned.
“I’ll just tell them the same thing I
did last time,” he said. “If you forget the Golden Rule, you many leave.”
After breakfast Andi went outside to do
her chores. When she was done, she decided to go to the creek and see if Flash
was still there. She might even ask if Sadie wanted to see Flash.
Andi rode up to the creek and found him
and his mama still there. Then Andi rode to Sadie’s and asked if she’d like to
see Flash.
“I will if you see the lambs,” Sadie
replied. She showed Andi a special black one.
“I had one like this once,” Andi
remembered. “Well, almost had.”
“I thought you raised cattle,” Sadie
said.
“We do, but I won little Inky at the
fair. My friend Riley actually gave Inky his name. He made up a whole nursery
rhyme and said ‘His fleece was black as ink’”.
They rode to Andi’s special spot and
saw Flash napping under the big tree.
“Aww, he’s so cute!” Sadie exclaimed.
When he heard them, quick as a cat he ran to his mama. “Wow, he is fast!”
“If he’s in a rodeo someday, I wouldn’t
want to be matched with him,” said Andi.
Andi was very excited about the rodeo.
She practiced with Taffy as much as she could and even more when school was
out. Sadie didn’t think coming to the rodeo was such a good idea, but Andi
convinced her Chad would take care of it.
A few days later, when Andi rode into
the ranch after being out for a ride, she saw Mitch, Chad and some of the
cowhands.
“Have you branded Flash yet?” she
asked.
“Si, Senorita. You must be talking
about that fast little calf that took five minutes to lasso and another five to
brand. Then he scurried back to his mama like a bear was chasing him. You were
right to call him Flash,” Diego chuckled.
“Sure hope he never gets out,” Chad
commented. “Be mighty annoying if we had to catch him.
The day before the rodeo seemed to drag
on. Andi could hardly wait for supper to be over.
“May I be excused now?” Andi asked.
“Well, someone’s eager to leave the
table,” Justin raised his eyebrows.
“About as eager as Flash was to not be
roped,” Chad grumbled. “I mean, this guy is lightning! And he’s nearly as
stubborn as he is quick. At least we won’t have to deal with him tomorrow.”
“So…may I be excused?” Andi asked
confused.
“Yes Andi, you may,” mother responded.
The day of the rodeo finally came. Andi
was glad that this year she didn’t have to wear company clothes. The Flanders
and the Jenkins were the first to arrive; then the Hollisters. Chad told them
he would talk to everyone and things would be okay. Soon more and more people
filed in. Andi and Sadie wandered around, looking at everything and smelling
the delicious aromas of food.
Soon the rodeo started off with team
roping. Mitch and Clay almost won, but two Triple L cowhands beat them. Bronc
busting was next. Firebrand was brought for the bronc busting because he was
tamer this time.
The bull riding was when everything
went wrong. Mr. Flanders had a bull who was even worse than Montana. Black Jack,
as they called him, let no one stay on him, not even Clay. Even after he threw
him off, he went crazy around the arena. As soon as the cowhands were about to
get him, he was gone. They chased him around until they got to the calf pen;
then he started bucking when they roped him. Crash! right into the fence.
“Oh, God please let them be okay!” Andi
prayed.
The calves went scrambling and one went
right through the fence.
“Oh no – Flash!” Andi gasped.
Chad saw him run, jumped up and
tripped. Andi knew he wouldn’t make it to Sky in time. Andi launched off the
bench and ran to Sky, who was already saddled. Andi jumped into the saddle and
pulled Sky after Flash. He was a little confused at first, but soon ran for the
calf. Andi twirled the lasso three times, tossed it, and missed. She tossed it again
and missed again.
“God, please help me catch him,” Andi
prayed. Andi tossed it one more time and…yank! The rope dollied and Sky planted
his feet.
Andi was leading Flash back when she
heard claps and cheers. A couple of cowhands took Flash into the pen and
started fixing the fence.
“Everybody, give it up for Andi Carter
and that amazing calf roping demo!” Chad shouted. Whoops and yells came from
the audience as Andi reined Sky over to Chad.
“What do you think you’re doing?” Andi
yelled in a whisper.
“Giving you the credit you deserve. Now
go out and take a bow!”
Andi reined Sky into the arena,
squeezed her legs, and launched him into a tremendous rear for the crowd.
Awesome job!!
ReplyDeleteYou did an AMAZING JOB!!! Definitely deserve runner up!
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