Abbi G.
“No, Riley! Absolutely not!” Andi
Carter Prescott was determined that she would not be learning how to shoot in
the near future.
“Andi, stop being so stubborn! You’ve
got to learn at some point!”
“I’ve tried. I can’t. Chad tried to
teach me about a million times, and the lessons ended in yelling and tears. I
don’t want to learn.”
“Andi, that was a long time ago. We are
both much more mature. It won’t end like that. C’mon, what if you run into
something dangerous while alone on the range? You’ve got to be able to help
yourself.”
“Fine, Riley. Only a couple hours
though! I still don’t like the idea, however.” Riley's eyes softened.
“Andi, it’ll be alright. I promise.” He
held her gaze until she reluctantly nodded.
“Good. Then get yourself ready and get
out to the barn. I’ll saddle Shasta and be waitin’. Hurry up!” Andi laughed at
his impatience.
“Yes, sir. Please check Shasta’s front
right hoof. She’s seemed to be favoring it.” She turned to go up the stairs
when Riley’s voice stopped her dead in her tracks.
“Yes, ma’am. I’ll be happy to, ma’am.
Anything else, ma’am?” She turned and stuck out her tongue.
“Well, while you’re at it you could get
me a glass of lemonade and put some of the laundry out to dry.” She hid her
amusement at the disgust on his face.
“I think I’ll go get the horses and
guns ready.” He turned and practically ran out of the house.
****
Andi still wasn’t thrilled with the
idea as she rode alongside Riley.
“Are you sure
about this, Riley?” Riley reached for her hand.
“Yes, Andi. I love you, and I wouldn’t
want to do anything to hurt you.” Andi, reassured, nodded. They rode in silence
until they reached the makeshift range. Andi’s nervousness returned as she
watched Riley dismount and take the three guns he’d brought from his
saddlebags. He checked the chambers, then loaded one of the weapons, the
pistol. Riley turned to the target about twenty-five yards away, and raised the
gun.
“Okay, Andi. Notice how I’m standing
feet shoulder-width apart, both hands gripping the butt of the pistol, and no
fingers yet on the trigger. Now you look straight down the barrel, through the
sights. Do not shoot unless you can see the target clearly.” Riley turned his
attention back to the gun, and carried out the same instructions he’d just
given Andi. Andi jerked when the loud bang richochayed around her. Riley
lowered the slightly smoking pistol.
“Your turn, Andi. He offered the pistol
to her.” Andi didn’t make any motion to get down. Riley cocked an eyebrow.
“You just gonna sit there and watch?”
Andi heaved a sigh, and ever so slowly turned to dismount. She took the offered
pistol gingerly, and walked to the spot Riley was indicating. She bit her lip
and raised the gun. Riley stepped forward and corrected her grip. Andi looked
down the barrel, straining to see the target.
“Andi, widen your stance. If you stand
with your legs together, you have nothing to absorb the kick and, most likely,
you’ll stumble and throw your shot off.” Andi obeyed, and found the position to
also be more comfortable. She again looked through the sights. She focused on
the target and pulled to trigger. Her ears rang with the blast. She didn’t see
any evidence that she’d hit the target, and her shoulders slumped.
“I missed.”
“That’s okay. Your learning, your gonna
make mistakes. You looked pretty good. The problem was that you closed your
eyes when you pulled the trigger.” Andi bit back a grin.
“I guess that could change things.” She
went to try again. This time, she focused so much on keeping her eyes open that
she bit her lip with the kick. Riley rushed to her side.
“Andi, let’s go get some ice for that
lip. I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have suggested it!”
“No, Riley. I will do this. I’m gonna
learn to shoot if it kills me!” Riley groaned.
“I wish I could believe that was only a
metaphor. Andi, you might…” His voice trailed away as he realized there was no
changing her mind. Andi shot and missed several more times. Riley tried to
protest, but a look from Andi shut him down. He shrugged helplessly and
reloaded the pistol. Finally, Andi’s efforts paid off, and she hit the edge of
the target!
“Riley! I did it! I hit the target!”
Riley let out a joyous whoop.
“I knew you could do it, Andi! It just
takes practice!” Andi shot over and over, usually hitting around the edges of
the target. She became furious as she tried and tried and never got a good
shot. The angrier she became, the more she missed.
“Calm down, Andi. Just focus. You can
do it.”
“Riley, I have gone through rounds and rounds
of bullets and I still ain’t hittin worth beans! It ain’t fair! I can’t do it!”
Her voice was fierce. Riley bristled as he was only tryin’ to help.
“You don’t have to bite my head off.”
He growled Andi spun on him.
“You can’t talk! You ain’t the one
shootin’ a gun and missin’ every shot you take! You ain’t the one who’s gonna
be made fun of all your life cause you can’t hit the broadside of the barn! You
ain’t the one who’s gonna be in trouble if you ever do run into something
dangerous.”
“Just focus. Try harder!” Riley wasn’t
feeling especially forgiving after hearing her tirade. Andi almost dropped the
gun, then caught herself and set it gently on the ground. She stalked to Shasta
and quickly mounted.
“Riley, until you’re willing to speak
sense, I think we’ve got nothing to say to each other!” Riley’s usually
even-tempered voice was hot with anger.
“That’s fine with me! Come back when
you’ve got a better attitude!” Andi spun Shasta and galloped toward the reek.
Riley felt a knife stab his heart as he realized he and his precious Andi had
just fought.
“Anid! Please come back! I’m sorry. We
can work things out.” Andi didn’t hear him. Andi was fuming. How dare Riley act
as if she weren't trying! She had tried so hard her hands were hurting! As far
as she was concerned she and Riley wouldn’t be talking for a while. Let not
the sun go down on your wrath. Andi groaned. Why did the verses pop into
her head at the worst times? She tried not to think about it, but the thought
wouldn’t leave. She hung her head as the reality of what had just happened hit
her like a train. Oh, God, I’m so sorry. Please forgive me. Andi turned
Shasta back at the same speed.
“Riley! I’m so sorry! I was being
selfish and I wasn’t being very christian-like. We are married! We should be
able to work out our differences without raising our voice.” Riley smiled
softly.
“It’s alright, Andi. I wasn’t being
very understanding. Will you forgive me?”
“Of course, Riley! There is nothing to
forgive. How about we try this again tomorrow?”
“Sure thing.” Riley was quick to agree
as he put the guns away and mounted his horse. The two rode back to the ranch
hand in hand. Thrilled to have their anger behind them.
Ephesians 4:26-- Be ye angry, and sin not: let not the sun go down upon your wrath.
Great job Abbi! I really enjoyed both of them! Thanks so much for writing them!!!!!!
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Excellent stories Abbi! I really enjoyed reading them =)
ReplyDeleteAwesome job, Abbi!! These are great!! :)
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Thank you all so much! I really appreciate it!
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Thanks, Leah!
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ReplyDeleteEmily
Thank you, Emily!
DeleteGreat story! That is one of my favorite verses!
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