By Emilie Miera, age 15
WINNER (ages 14-18) Writing Contest Winter/Spring 2024
Eighteen-year-old
William Bridger felt nostalgia squeeze his heart as he cantered into Lexington
town. He slowed his horse and smiled as he gazed over the town, remembering
happier times before the war broke out. How his life had changed in the past
two years!
The last rays of sunlight sinking
in the horizon reminded William of the passing time, and the foreboding reality
of why he was back in Lexington. His smile faded as he reached into his
coat and felt the papers securely hidden within. General Washington’s secret
dispatches were no safer here than they were when he had first received them
yesterday with orders to take them to General Greene.
Urging his horse on, he turned off
the main road and onto an overgrown forest trail. His family’s farm was just a
mile from town, and it was here that William hoped to spend the night.
William soon emerged from the
forest gloom and saw the familiar farmhouse looming ahead. He sighed in relief
as he reined to a stop in front of the doors and dismounted, anxious to see the
dear faces of his family once more.
The entrance hall was empty when
William opened the door, but he heard clinking dishes coming from behind the
dining room door. He walked across the room and grasped the doorknob before a
sound behind him made him turn.
The kitchen door opened, and a
young girl stepped into the room. Her startled brown eyes met his blue ones
blankly for a moment, then she gasped. “William?”
“Betsy!”
His younger sister flew across the
room and William wrapped her in a heartfelt embrace. “I have missed you so
much!”
He stepped back, smiling. “Where
are the . . .” His voice trailed off when he saw his sister’s expression. “Betsy?
What is wrong?”
The joy that had been in Betsy’s
eyes was replaced by a look of fear. “Oh, William! You should not be here! There
are three British officers in the dining room this very moment, and if they
find you here—”
William staggered backwards. “British soldiers?”
Betsy nodded fearfully. “Quickly,
follow me!”
She swiftly led the way to the
kitchen, and ushered William in.
He froze when he caught sight of
his mother at the far end of the room. “Mother!
“William, my son!” Hannah Bridger flew across
the room and embraced her son. “We’ve missed you so much,” she whispered, tears
in her eyes.
William returned her embrace. “I
have missed all of you as well. “ His smile disappeared. “What are British soldiers doing here? Where
is father?”
“Father left to get supplies from a
town several days away,” William’s mother said quietly. “This morning Betsy and
I were sitting down for breakfast when a troop of soldiers arrived. Their
commander informed us that his regiment would spend some time gathering
provisions and livestock and that our property would be their quarters until
further notice.” She sighed. “With Father away, what could we do? The officers
have taken up residence in the house and the soldiers are out in the barn.” She
looked at him anxiously. “But why are you here, William?”
“I was passing through Lexington on
a mission for General Washington and was hoping to spend the night here, but
now… I have put you all in danger by coming, and I apologize.”
“There was no way that you could
have known,” his mother said softly. “But you mustn’t stay any longer.” She
turned quickly to Betsy. “Elizabeth, quietly go find William’s horse and wait
behind the house near Father’s work shed.”
“Yes Mother.” Betsy silently
slipped out the door.
Mother turned back to William.
“Climb out the window and get your horse from Besty in the back. From there,
you can take the forest path that leads to the main road.”
William nodded. “Yes. Well … goodbye.”
He embraced his mother tightly. “Give father my love.”
“I shall, William.”
“Thank you.” William paused for a
moment on the windowsill and looked back. Keep them safe, Lord!
“Goodbye.”
He
quickly dropped to the ground. Giving a quick glance around the moonlit
property, William breathed a quick prayer and sprinted across the yard toward
the work shed. He did not stop until he reached his destination. He dashed
around the shed to the back and nearly stumbled into a pile of wooden crates
piled against the shed wall.
Betsy stood in the shadows, holding
the reins of his horse. “William? Is that you?”
“Yes,” William whispered
breathlessly, taking the reins from her hand. “I must be off, Betsy.”
Betsy threw her arms around him. “I
love you, brother.”
William wrapped his arms around
her. “I love you too, Betsy. I must hurry—”
A noise from the forest behind them
made William draw back and put a finger to his lips.
A distant sound of dry leaves
crunching beneath many pairs of boots, mingled with muffled voices, broke the
silence of the night.
“William?” Betsy’s voice echoed the
alarm in his heart. “Who is that?”
William peered between the trees
and saw lanternlight flickering down the forest path. A horse’s shrill whinny
resounded through the night.
William’s horse restlessly backed into the
pile of old crates.
Crash! Before
he could do anything, the crates tipped over and fell to the floor. His horse
gave a startled neigh.
“You there!” a commanding voice
with a sharp British accent called from among the trees. “Halt!”
William’s heart leapt into his
throat. He did not need to see them to know that a regiment of British soldiers
was coming down the trail. He reached into his coat and withdrew the secret
papers. There was only one thing he could do.
William took his sister firmly by
the shoulders, meeting her fear-filled gaze steadily. “Betsy, listen to me
carefully.” He pressed the secret dispatches into her cold palm. “These papers
must get to General Greene. I do not care how you do it, but you must get them
there. Our country is depending on you.”
The crashing footsteps grew louder.
Betsy’s eyes widened in fear.
“William–”
“You need to trust me, Betsy. Hide
behind the crates and don’t make a noise. No matter what happens, stay hidden.
Do you understand?”
Betsy nodded, tears spilling down
her cheeks. She quickly slipped behind the pile of crates, instantly lost among
the shadows.
Through the trees, the moon’s glow
and a lantern’s light illuminated figures in crimson uniforms rounding a bend
in the path.
William turned and quickly mounted
his horse, his heart pounding in his ears. Please Lord, let this work.
He pressed his heels onto his horse’s flank, and his startled horse leapt into
a canter straight for the looming forest.
The rasp of swords against
scabbards and angry shouts from the soldiers told William that his escape had
not gone unnoticed. Someone shouted an order, and the figures broke from the
forest behind him, swords drawn.
“Halt
there!”
William
glanced over his shoulder and saw the dim outline of half a dozen soldiers
shoving ramrods into the barrels of their muskets. He gritted his teeth and
pressed deeper into the forest. The further he was able to draw them away from
Betsy the better, but he knew it was only a matter of time before—
A
deafening volley of musket-fire exploded behind him, accompanied by a sudden
numbness in his right side and a strange buzzing in his ears. Then a wave of
blinding pain and dizziness engulfed William, and he vaguely felt himself
slipping from the saddle.
“Lord,
please keep Betsy safe. I did all that I could!” was his last desperate
prayer before blackness enveloped him.
**********
Murmuring
voices gradually brought William back to his senses, and he slowly opened his
eyes. As he raised his head, his blurred vision made out a fire’s bright glow
several yards away, around which shadowy figures stood. Where am I?
A
throbbing pain suddenly coursed through his left side. William gritted his
teeth and tried to reach his right hand across to his left side to find the
source of pain, but couldn’t. He suddenly realized that his hands were bound
securely to a tree behind his back, preventing their movement. His heavy coat
was missing, and a shiver ran up his spine as the biting night air whipped
through his light cotton shirt.
William
let out a breath and closed his eyes, trying to remember what had happened. As
his senses sharpened, the murmur of voices from the figures at the fire became
clearer.
“Did
you find anything?”
“Nothing,
sir.”
“And
you are sure you searched him thoroughly?”
“Very
thoroughly, sir.”
The
memories clicked into place in William’s brain. The secret dispatches … the
British soldiers …
William’s
heart throbbed at a sudden thought. Did Betsy get away? He anxiously
studied the scene before him. The flickering fire revealed only the
crimson-coated soldiers around it before its light blended into the shadows of
the surrounding forest.
William’s thoughts were interrupted by the
approach of two soldiers. He shifted to a straighter position before the sharp
throb from where a bullet had grazed his side stopped him. He sucked in a few
breaths to ease the stabbing pain and warily watched as the soldiers
approached.
“What is your name, lad?” The
closest man asked when they had halted in front of him. A crimson sash around
his waist signified his rank of colonel.
William swallowed and met his gaze.
“My name is William, sir.”
The officer studied William
closely. “What is your full name?”
William returned his gaze unwaveringly. “I am
under no obligation to reveal my identity, sir.”
The colonel raised his eyebrows. “What were
you doing before my men found you?”
Relief washed over William at the
colonel’s question. They didn’t find Betsy! Thank God.
“Answer my question!” the angry
words reminded Wiliam that the colonel was waiting for an answer.
“I do not wish to disclose any information to
you, sir,” William said with quiet firmness.
The colonel regarded William
pensively. “Well then.” He turned to the soldier behind him, a young officer
with a single silver epaulette on his shoulder. “Lieutenant Sharpe, the men
found no messages when they searched him?”
“None, sir.”
“Seeing as he refuses to answer any
questions, it is obvious that he is a patriot spy.”
William’s head shot up. Spy?
The colonel was still speaking. “Lieutenant
Sharpe, stand guard over the prisoner tonight, and we shall deal with him tomorrow
morning.” He lowered his voice. “We are pressed for time and cannot hold a
formal trial.”
The colonel turned and walked back
to the camp, while the young lieutenant remained at attention several feet
away.
William’s mind whirled. They
think I’m a spy. His heart pounded in his ears. Spies are hung if
they’re caught. A momentary panic came over him, and he frantically yanked
at the ropes binding him, but to no avail. He slumped against the tree,
exhausted.
“The Lord is my Helper; I will not
fear. What can man do to me?”
The scripture suddenly came to
William’s mind, and he leaned his head against the tree and exhaled. He
closed his eyes for a moment, and when he opened them, new resolve filled his
heart. Lord, whatever happens, help me to trust you and give me Your peace.
My life is in your hands.
**********
William jerked awake with a start.
He hadn’t meant to fall asleep, but the glowing embers where the soldier’s fire
had been told William that he had slept for more than a few minutes.
A muffled noise from behind made
William stiffen. Before he had time to think, a hand clapped over his mouth.
“Ask no questions,” a voice hissed in his ear. “Just do as I tell you.”
The hand was removed, and William,
with shock, felt the ropes binding his hands go slack. He scarcely had time to
shake feeling into his numb limbs before he was pulled to his feet.
“Follow me,” the man whispered,
stealthily leading the way towards the surrounding forest.
William followed silently, mind racing.
Where is this man leading me? He barely made out the man’s form in the
darkness as they crept deeper into the forest.
William stumbled and nearly crashed
into the stranger, who had suddenly paused.
“No need for silence now. Follow me
as quickly as you can.” The man led deeper into the trees nearly at a jog.
William followed as rapidly as his
injured side allowed. The farther from the enemy camp they got, the more
mystified he became. How did this man sneak into the British camp, and how
did the lieutenant not discover us?
As the weary minutes of dodging
branches and tripping over roots dragged on, William’s lungs began to ache, and
spasms of pain shot through his injured side. Just when he thought he couldn’t
go a step further, his guide halted. William gratefully leaned against a tree,
gasping air into his lungs.
“The forest ends here,” the man whispered
breathlessly. “Follow the main road, and you will reach General Green’s army by
sunrise.”
William stared into the darkness. “Who
are you?”
“That does not matter,” came the quiet
answer.
William turned to him. “Whover you
are, you saved my life, and I thank you.”
The
moon suddenly emerged from behind the clouds, allowing William to see more than
just his shadow. Silver light gleamed off the epaulets on the man’s crimson
uniform, and William locked eyes with the young British lieutenant.
William stumbled back in disbelief.
“What—”
“Don’t ask,” the lieutenant
interrupted. “You must leave now if you want to escape.”
“What about you?”
The lieutenant shook his head.
“Don’t worry about me.” He extended his hand. “Goodbye, William.”
William
stared at the British soldier before him. This man saved my life. He slowly
clasped the offered hand. “Goodbye. May I beg of you your name?”
The
young lieutenant smiled slightly. “Edward Sharpe.” He squeezed William’s hand.
“Godspeed, my friend.”
William
returned the clasp. “The same to you, Edward.”
A
moment later he turned and disappeared into the surrounding forest, and William
was left alone.
*********
Sunlight began to peek over the
trees as William stumbled into General Green’s camp, exhausted. I made it!
Thank You, Lord.
A sentry’s musket greeted him, but
William paid it no heed.
“Please,
sir,” he gasped. “Did my sister arrive? Is she safe?”
The
sentry looked at him suspiciously. “Who are you?”
“William!”
The
cry shot a thrill through his heart. “Betsy!”
Betsy
flew past the sentry and rushed into his arms. “You’re alive!” she cried, tears
of relief streaming down her cheeks.
William
held her close. “Praise the Lord,” was all he managed to whisper. He earnestly
searched her face, not daring to ask the question.
Betsy
read his expression and nodded. “The papers are safely delivered to General
Greene. I hid them in my dress and rode through the night.”
A great burden rolled off William’s
heart at his sister’s words. “Thank You, Lord, for helping us through,” he
whispered, overcome with gratefulness. He thought back the mysterious British
soldier who had freed him. Who was he?
William shook his head in wonder.
There was no way to know, but he would never forget Edward Sharp, even if their
paths never crossed again.
But perhaps they would…
Amazing!!!
ReplyDeleteWow so so good! Great job Emilie!
ReplyDeleteThank you!! 😊 To God be all the glory!
DeleteThank you! To God be all the glory!!
DeleteThis is an awesome story!
ReplyDeleteWay to go, Emilie! Congratulations!
ReplyDeleteThanks Galeya! 😀
DeleteWell done, Emilie! You created good plot with believable characters that made me want to keep reading. You show some real potential as a writer!
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness Emilie!! Simply amazing!!! I loved this! Great job!
ReplyDelete(although now I want a sequel XD)
Amazing! it was very descriptive. Well done!
ReplyDeleteEmilie, great story. I could not put it down till I finish it. Looking forward to more. You are an awesome writer.
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone for all the encouraging comments! I hope my story is a blessing and an encouragement to trust the Lord in whatever trials or difficulties come our way. To God be all the glory!! - Emilie M.
ReplyDeleteThis is good, Emilie! I really enjoyed reading it.
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