by Heidi E. (ages 14-17)
Elizabeth Johnson watched as the stage took Mother, Aron, Rose, and Mark. She thought about when Mother had announced that she was going to leave.
“Elizabeth, now that I and the younger children have nothing
to do here, we are going to go back to Pittsburgh.” Mother said, glancing at
her daughter.
Elizabeth nodded and said, “Mother if you do,
could I stay here? I could open a shop here and make a living.”
Mother started to shake her head. “Absolutely
not! Imagine a young lady, staying here! Alone! It’s indecent and dangerous!”
Elizabeth stared at her mother and said,
“Mother! I am 21 years old! I can take care of myself!”
Her mother sighed and said, “Elizabeth, if you
think it best to stay here, then stay. I can’t stop you. You are old enough. I
want you to stay with Mrs. Finnick.”
Elizabeth nodded her agreement and hugged her
mother. “Thank you Mother!”
*****
“Hello Mrs. Kinndle.
Thank you, Pastor Kinndle, for the sermon. It was a moving one.” She said,
shaking his hand.
Pastor Kinndle smiled and said, “I am glad, Miss
johnson. I was hoping that it was good.”
She turned to leave, and gasped in fresh air. She
smiled when Mrs. Finnick came up and said, “Eizabeth, would you like to come
over to the Pastor’s house with me tonight? Mrs. Kinndle asked us over.”
Elizabeth nodded. “I would like that.”
“Miss Johnson, may I walk you home?”
Elizabeth turned. A man with broad shoulders was
standing with his hat in his hand, and he had a scruffy-like beard. She smiled
and said, “Tad. I missed you the other day in my shop. Where had you been?”
Tad grinned and said, “I was at my claim.”
She nodded and said, “That's nice.”
He shuffled nervously and looked at the ground.
“May I walk you home?”
Elizabeth smiled and said, “You may.” Tad
grinned and looped her arm in his. Then he started to talk.
“Elizabth, after we marry, I will make us the
best house in all of San Francisco, and you will live like a queen, with all
the money I will find....”
Elizabeth stopped in
front of Mrs. Finnicks boarding house and turned to Tad. “This is
where I stop. Goodbye.”
Tad grabbed onto her hand and exclaimed,
“Elizabeth! But I have not finished tellin-”
Elizabeth held up her hand and said, “Sir, I
like people who, I will say bluntly, do not immediately think that they are
going to marry the first girl he meets. I must stop here.” She pulled her hand
from his grasp and continued, “I do not think you will be escorting me home
anymore.”
Tad stared at her then placed his hand on her
cheek and said, “My dear, I think you are mist-”
She shook her head and stepped away from him. As
she turned to go, he opened his mouth to say something, but before he could,
Mrs. Finnick came up and wrapped her arm around her shoulders. “Dear, we are
going to leave for the Pastor's house in an hour.”
She nodded and went inside. She felt kind of
sorry for Tad, but at the same time, he could be a little……impertinent. She
hurried up the stairs and closed her bedroom door.
****
She turned the sign to Elizabeth’s Mercantile
from We’re Closed to We’re open, and then turned and glided to
behind the counter. She picked up the duster, and while she waited for her
first customer, she dusted and rearranged shelves.
The tiny store that she
owned had a counter for the cashier, and candy. Behind it was bolts of fabric
that she had set at eye level, which was arranged in an array of beautiful
vibrant colors. In front of the counter were big barrels of pickles and flour.
The walls were covered by shelves that were full of canned goods, shoes, pans,
ect.
She heard the bell ding, and she smiled and
turned around. “Hello Mrs.Yamin. How are you today?”
Mrs. Yamin smiled and said, “I am good, thank
you. I have come for a pair of boy's boots.”
She turned to the wall by
the right of the door, and Elizabeth smiled and headed over to help her,
knowing that she usually chose the wrong size of boots. Mrs.Yamin had moved in
front of the mens boots, and she reached out and took a piar.
She turned and said, “What about these ones?”
Elizabeth just smiled and answered, “Those ones
you probably won’t want. Would you maybe like this pair?” She picked up a pair
of boy’s boots that was made for a boy 8-9 years old. “I am sure Benny would
like these ones.”
Mrs. Yamin nodded and said, “I agree.”
She grabbed the pair that Elizabeth had and
placed the ones that she had originally back in the men’s section and turned
toward the counter. She set them on the counter and waited for Elizabeth.
Right after Mrs. Yamin
paid for the boots, a man with an unshaven face, dirty patched clothes, and
ragged boots burst through the door and stalked up to the counter. Right behind
him came more miners, women, and nicely dressed men. The man who had stalked up
stared down at her through bushy eyebrows, and boomed, “Are you thes ownar of
this ‘ere shop?”
Elizabeth nodded and the man placed a nugget of
gold the size of his thumb on the counter. “I’a wan’ some oh that canned goods,
an’ I’a alsa want some-a that tobacco. I want’a flour, a pair oh boots, an
bacon.”
She nodded and gathered the things he wanted.
She placed the desired bag on the counter, and the man pushed his nugget toward
her and left. She grabbed it and placed it in her money box.
*****
Elizabeth sat down on a stool, and sighed. The
place had been hopping from customers till recently. The only people left was a
lady with a baby, a young boy looking at the candy, and a man looking at some
boots. After the people had left, she sat down to her lunch. She slowly ate her
food, then she stood up, ready for some more customers. The next person to walk
in was a man, who surprisingly, was clean, and had a shaven face, nice clothes,
and had his hat in his hand.
“Howdy ma'am. I was wondering if you could tell
me if you are carrying flour? And bacon?”
Elizabeth smiled at his kind manners, and then
nodded. “Yes sir. I carry those things. Anything else?”
The man ticked off the things he needed and then
paused. “That’s it I think.” She nodded her head and turned to get the items
that he wanted. The man continued on, “Are you the owner of this shop, or do
you work here?”
Elizabeth turned
and placed the bags on the counter. She went around the counter and scooped
some flour into a paper bag. “Yes, I am the owner. Here you are sir. That will
be 3 dollars.”
The man nodded his head and pushed the desired
amount of gold toward her. He turned to go and she said, “Good day sir.”
The man paused and said, without turning around.
“My name is James. James Carter.” Then he left.
Elizabeth slowly put the
gold in her money box. Then sat down on the stool to think. He has better
manners than any other man that has come in here. She smiled. Elizabeth!
Stop thinking and get to work!
She stood up with determination and put a smile
on her face. A lady walked in, and she greeted her. “Good day Mrs. Welling.”
***
Elizabeth glanced around in frustration, and
then sighed. It was no use. She was never going to find her glove in time. I
mean, I am going to take off the gloves at the store anyway. She smiled
and placed her hat firmly on her head. She took a deep breath, getting ready
for the criticism from all the old lady’s, and headed out onto the
sidewalk.
She turned toward her shop, and made haste, in
order to not come in contact with any of the lady’s who thought ‘it is not
proper’ for a woman not to wear gloves. She turned the corner and almost
smashed into a town resident, Mrs. Haben.
“Goodness gracious, child!
You should be careful!” She stepped back in astonishment, and studied
Elizabeth’s dress. Elizabeth tried to move around her, but she grabbed her arm
and said, “Elizabeth! You’re not wearing your gloves!”
Before she could say
more, and when Elizabeth thought that she was going to be stuck there for a
while, she heard a voice behind her.
“Miss Elizabeth, may I escort you to the shop?”
Elizabeth turned and found James Carter standing
behind her, hat in hand. She smiled and slipped her arm into his. She then
turned to Mrs. Haben and said sweetly, “I will definitely take care from now
on, Mrs. Haben.”
Mrs. Haben nodded and said, “See that you do.”
Then she turned and left.
Elizabeth sighed in relief, and James asked,
“What was that for?”
She giggled and said, “Let’s just say that some
people like to make sure that us ‘young generation’ needs to dress properly.”
He chuckled and they walked down the street. She smiled at people going by, but
when she got in front of her shop, she sighed with relief. No one else had
stopped her. She turned to thank him, and he bowed.
“It was my pleasure to escort you. May I do it
again soon?”
She blushed and
said, “Yes, you may.”
*****
Elizabeth smiled when she saw James outside, and
she thought, I like it when he comes each week. It’s q- She didn’t
finnish her thought before the bell rang, and she stood up. She smiled and
said, “Hello sir, may I help you?”
The scruffy man grinned, revealing rotten and
broken teeth. “Howdy, lady! I’a want some oh that’a there tobacco.”
She nodded, and when she
turned to get it, she heard the bell on the door jingle again. She turned and
placed the tobacco on the counter and nodded when the man handed over some
gold. She placed it in the money box, and when she turned around again, the man
was leaning over the counter.
She stepped back in surprise and said, “May I
help you in anything else?”
The man grinned again and then answered her question,
“We-ll lady, you sure are’a mighty perrty. An I jest wunt to ask, may I escort
yuh home?”
Elizabeth stepped backward in surprise
again, and then said, “I will have to decline sir.”
The man’s face crumpled
a little, and then he smiled again. “Wall,
I guess I an going ta have ta convince yuh a different day’a.”
“You guessed correctly. Miss johnson does
not want to do that right now. Goodbye sir.”
The man turned in astonishment and then hastily
went out the door. James Carter smiled and said, “Howdy, Miss Johnson. I came
for my regular supplies.”
Elizabeth smiled and then said, “I will get them
for you, Mr. Carter.”
James nodded his
head and said, “You can call me James.”
She set the stuff he wanted onto the counter,
then smiled and said, “I will as long as you agree to call me Elizabeth.” James
grinned, then turned and left. Elizabeth sat down on the stool behind the
counter, then started to write a letter to her mother.
I have been doing great, and I met this man named James Carter. He
has nice manners, and
****
Elizabeth sighed as she glanced into the mirror.
She brought her hands up to adjust her hair, then let her hands fall limply to
her sides. She turned and grabbed her gloves and hat, then sighed again. No one
had asked to take her to the dance at the Finny’s house.
She studded herself in the mirror again and
mumbled, “Elizabeth Johnson, stop fretting and go to that dance!” She slipped
the gloves on her hands, plopped her hat on her head, took a deep breath, and
headed out the door.
She turned to the left, heading away from her
shop, and stumbled into someone. She looked up and blushed. “James, I’m sorry,
I was not watching where I was going.”
James Carter grinned and said, “That’s okay
Elizabeth. I was just coming to ask you if I could escort you to the Finny’s
barn dance. May I?”
She nodded her head slowly, and croaked out,
“Yes.”
He smiled and linked his arm in hers, then
started to walk. They stayed silent for a while, and right before they got to
the Finny’s, James started to talk. “So, how is your family?”
Elizabeth gulped slightly and thought, Why am
I so nervous? Aloud she said, “They are quite well, thank you. And how are
your’s?”
He glanced down at her then back up. “I don’t
know. I haven't heard from them for a while.”
She nodded and then glanced up at him. They
walked into the Finny’s yard, and then headed for the barn, and then stopped
right outside. James bowed and then said, “It was my pleasure to escort you.
May I escort you back?”
Elizabeth blushed, and hoped that it was too
dark to see. “Yes, you may.” After a few months of coming to my shop, he
still is so nice. She turned and entered the barn, then looked around for
Patty, her friend. She spied her over to the right, and she headed over. The
barn was full of swirling couples. And the band was doing a lively tune. They
were doing the Virginia Reel, and Elizabeth scooted out of the way of a
couple.
“Hey Patty.” She grinned at her friend and gave
her a hug. Patty was a year younger than her, and she was already
married.
Patty smiled and said, “I am great, how about
you?”
Before she could answer, she heard someone go,
“Eh-hem.”
She turned and asked, “Yes?”
James Carter stood in front of her and grinned.
“May I have this next dance?”
She smiled and then said, “Yes, you may.”
****
Elizabeth sighed in delight. The barn dance had
gone extremely well. James had danced with her all night, and she had
loved every moment of it. James came up and smiled down at her. “Are you ready
to go?”
She nodded and James linked arms with hers, then
they went out into the clear night. The moon was full, and people were
streaming from the barn.
She let James lead her toward town, and sighed
again. James glanced down at her and asked, “What?”
She smiled and said, “This night was so lovely.”
He smiled then paused. He glanced around and
said, “Elizabeth, I was wondering if you would be willing to let me…court you?”
Elizabeth stared straight ahead, then started to
nod. “Yes.” She said it in a small voice, then she said it louder. “Yes.”
She heard him let out a big
breath, and she grinned. James grabbed her hand and said, “Thank you, Beth.”
****
A few months later, James asked Elizabeth if she
would marry him, and she said yes. James had bought a ranch, and they settled
down and had 6 children, Justin, Chad, Katherine, Mitch, Melinda, and Andrea.
16 years after marrying Elizabeth, James Carter died during a round up
accident, by being thrown from his horse.
Elizabeth handed over the job of the ranch to her three sons; Justin became a lawyer, and Chad and Mitch became ranchers. Katherine was married, Melinda was too small to do anything, and Andrea was still a toddler. Elizabeth was heartbroken, but she got through it all, by leaning on Christ.
This is an awesome story!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your story, Heidi! I've always been interested in the way James and Elizabeth met, and I think you did a great job with it. :-) Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this story, Heidi!
ReplyDeleteNice job Heidi!!! It was really interesting to learn how Elizabeth and James met!
ReplyDeletenice job Heidi! I loved this!
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