a 2014 contest entry
Part 1
Dick
walked confidently up the porch and knocked on the ranch door.
While
some may have called him arrogant, those who knew him called him anything but
that.
Life
had been hard on 21 year old Dick, who was the eldest of the three Leslie
children.
His
mother had died on the way to Oregon and his father had died 2 years later in
an accident in town, leaving him responsible for his two younger siblings. But
Dick never gave up. He had learned
ranching and traveled around with his two younger siblings working at different
ranches all throughout Oregon and California.
With
the money he earned he was able to provide for his siblings and, carefully
saving, he had scraped together enough money to send his younger brother,
Clarence, to college. His sister Abigail Grace stayed with him and went to
school for snatches here and there when Dick was able to find steady work for a
few months.
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He
was a handsome young man. With unruly, curly black hair, a quick and ready
smile, blue eyes that seemed to sparkle all the time except when he was upset,
when they turned as hard and cold as steel, broad shoulders, and a strongly
built frame.
Dick
also had the strength of character and faith in God's word, the Bible, that is
truly rare in young men his age. He had a confident and determined personality
that dared anyone to stand in his way.
It
was a beautiful, spring Saturday. Dick walked around the porch while waiting
for someone to come to the door. This ranch was nothing like the ranches he had
worked on before. The tall, two-story hacienda-style house was more grand then
anything he had seen before, The large wrap-around porch provided an excellent
view of the sunrises and sunsets, there was a large barn that stabled a large
number of well-groomed horses, and the fences went on for miles and miles,
while the hills within them boasted
numerous heads of well fed cattle.
Justin,
who was at home for the day, opened the door. “May I help you, sir?” he asked.
“Hi,
my name Dick. I'm looking for a job, and the sheriff in Fresno said this might
be a good place to get one.”
“Well,
I don't really handle the ranch matters. My brothers Chad and Mitch handle it
and they’re out on the range. Why don't you come inside and wait. They'll be home
in about a half an hour for lunch.”
Just
then, Andi bounded down the stairs. ”Are you ready for our ride to town yet,
Justi-- Oh, I'm sorry, I didn't realize anyone else was here.”
“Andi
, this is Dick. He's looking for a job so I thought he could stay for lunch and
talk to Chad then.”
“Nice
to meet you.” Dick tipped his hat toward her and smiled. “You remind me of my
sister, Abby Grace. She's always impatient to get going somewhere.”
Justin
laughed. “That's Andi alright! Why don't you come in the parlor and we can
talk. Mother and Melinda will be there as well. Andi , why don't we wait until
Chad and Mitch get here and then you and I can pack a picnic lunch and eat it
well we're riding to town?”
Andi
grinned. “That would be great! I'll go ask the cook to make us some sandwiches
then I'll go saddle Taffy and Thunderbolt so we'll be ready to go as soon as
they get here.”
“Andi
, you can go tell the cook but don't go
outside alone. I want you to wait till I
am ready to go with you before you go outside. There are rumors that Hugh Baker
escaped from jail and is back in this area so I don't want you to go outside
alone. Alright?”
Andi
sighed “Alright, Justin.” What would it
hurt to go outside? She wondered. The
ranch hands aren't so far away and the house is pretty close besides, as Justin
said, it's just a rumor.
Part
2
Andi
quickly went to the kitchen and asked the cook to make the sandwiches. That
being finished, she went and sat in the music room and stared out the window. It's too bad I can't go out alone. It's
such a beautiful day! She sighed.
Just
then, she saw Mitch ride up, tie his horse to the hitching post, and walk
toward the house. Andi ran to the door. “Mitch, what are you doing back?”
Mitch
grinned. “I came back for lunch. What did you think?”
“But
you’re early.”
“Only
about 15 minutes.”
“Well,
where's Chad?”
Mitch
laughed. “Aren't you happy to see me? I thought you'd rather see me then 'bossy
Chad' as you call him.”
“Well,
I'm happy to see you. I just wondered where Chad was.”
“He'll
be here in a little while,” Mitch replied.
“Say,
Mitch, since you got back early, can you come outside with me to saddle Taffy
and Thunderbolt? Justin said there are rumors that Hugh Baker has escaped from
jail and is in this area so he doesn’t want me to go outside alone.”
“Sure,
I can go out with you. Are you and Justin planning on going somewhere?” Mitch
asked.
“We're
going to town, but we're going to go on a picnic first!”
Mitch
opened the door. “Well, let's go! Why don't you saddle Taffy and I can saddle Thunderbolt?
We'll get it done faster that way.”
“Sure.”
Andi agreed, “By the way, there is Someone named Dick here. He wants to talk to
Chad and you about being hired as a ranch hand. Justin told him you would talk it
over lunch.”
“Well,
I'll be sure to tell you how it goes. Oh, have you heard that Johnny is coming
back from Military school?”
“No,
I haven't. When will he be back? I sure hope he stays away from me!”
Mitch
pulled her braid affectionately. “Don't worry. I'll make sure He stays away
from my Little Sis.”
Andi
grinned. “Don't tease me. That's Chad's privilege and he isn't here.”
Mitch
turned serious. “I mean it, Andi. I will
never put anything past him after he stole a kiss against your will.”
Andi
's face flushed. “Don't remind me! I was hoping to forget about the incident.”
“Something
like that you won't forget, Andi . Just try to forgive Johnny. Then don't let
it bother you anymore.”
Andi
nodded and started to talk then suddenly stiffened.
“What
is it?” Mitch asked. Concern evident in his voice.
“Mitch,
I think I just saw Hugh Baker!”
Part 3
Mitch's
eyes became alert searching every corner of the barn and the barn doorway.
“Are
you sure it was him, Andi? I don't see anyone.”
“Well,
I don't see him now. Maybe I imagined it because this whole thing about Hugh
Baker being back in town is giving me the creeps.”
“How
about we go back inside and see if cook has the sandwiches ready. Chad should
be back before long and you and Justin should be ready to go.”
“Sure.
You go ahead. I'll be in in a minute”
Mitch
smiled knowingly. “Going to talk to Taffy about your problems?” When Andi
nodded, he winked at her. “Alright. I'll see you in a little while.'
As
Mitch left, Andi began to talk to Taffy about Johnny returning and the rumors
that Hugh Baker was back in town. “And I really think I saw him just a minute
ago, Taffy.”
Taffy
snorted and stomped her hoof.
Just
then, she heard a footstep behind her. Whirling around, she looked into the face
of Hugh Baker and a colt 44. revolver.
“What
do you want?” Andi asked, praying her voice didn't shake.
Hugh
laughed a sickly sweet laugh. “Well, I decided I needed to have a little chat
with the people who got me put in jail. You and your brother especially.”
Andi
's temper flared. “You cared about no one other than yourself! You were going
to shoot Mitch and leave us all tied hostage!”
Hugh's
smile came off his face, replaced with a sneer. He reached out to grab her arm.
“Listen here, missy. I will get you and your brother one way or another. I
thought you’d both made it real easy on me when I saw you were out here
together and alone. But then that other brother of yours, the one you call Chad
rode up. So I hid and when I came back just you were here.”
Andi,
still struggling, exclaimed, “You leave my brother alone. Justin's coming out
soon and he'll take care of you!” The moment the words left her mouth Andi wished she had held her tongue. Now Hugh
was sure to do something quick before Justin came out.
“You
have way too many brothers,” Hugh muttered in disgust. “Listen, you just make
sure you're with your brother tomorrow when he checks the fence in the far
south-east pasture.”
Andi
gave him a startled look. “How do you know what my brother is doing tomorrow?
Besides, tomorrow's Sunday.”
Hugh
gave an evil chuckle. “Let's just say I've been in the area for a while and I’m
good at eavesdropping. It's just a little something I overheard Chad telling
Mitch to do tomorrow after lunch.”
“Let-Me—Go!”
Andi exclaimed, still struggling.
'I'll
let you go. Just don't forget about tomorrow and don't say a word to anyone or
you’ll be sorry.”
Just
then the door of the house slammed and Justin began walking toward the barn.”
“Just
remember.” Hugh said releasing her then he was gone.
'Ready
for our ride, Andi ? I've got the sandwiches.'
“Thanks,
Justin.”
“Andi
? What's wrong? Why is your arm red? Are you hurt?” Justin deposited the
sandwiches thunderheads saddle bags the walked over to Andi .
“Oh,
I'm fine, Justin.” Andi answered, quickly
mounting Taffy before Justin got a good look at her arm. “Let's go.”
“You
don't sound too good. We can take our ride another day. The work at my office
will wait.” Justin said, giving Andi a concerned look.
“No,
no. Let's still go today.”
Justin
mounted Thunderbolt and they galloped down the lane.
What should I do? wondered Andi.
Part 4
All
through the day with Justin, Andi
worried about what to do.
Justin
noticed the difference and hurried through his business in town so they could get
back to the ranch. After they had brushed down the horses and put the tack
away, Justin turned to Andi “Okay. I know something’s wrong. WHAT IS IT?”
Andi
fidgeted with her braids. “It's nothing, Justin. I'm fine.” Well not exactly lying, Andi thought. I
haven't been hurt and I AM still fine.
“Andi,
honey, I want to help you but I can' do anything if you don't tell me what's
wrong.”
Andi sighed. Justin knew all the tricks of
getting people to talk but they wouldn't work with her. “I'm fine. Just tired and
I don't feel well. I'm going inside.” She brushed past him and walked toward
the house.
Justin
sighed, closed the barn door, and followed her into the house.
As
she entered the ranch, Andi walked up to her room and sat on her bed. The day
had looked so beautiful a few hours ago. Now, Andi didn't even see the beauty. What would keep Mitch home tomorrow?
Andi wondered.
Everything
she thought of was unsatisfactory. Hugh would know she played a role in keeping
him away. Andi shuddered at the thought of what he might do to her if Mitch and
herself didn't show up the following day. As she walked out of her room and
down the stairs. Andi overheard the conversation in the parlor.
“I
don't know what's wrong with her and she won't talk to me.” Justin sounded
exasperated.
“She
was fine with me earlier today. But, come to think of it, she did think she saw
Hugh and that seemed to get her down.” Mitch said.
“I
bet Hugh blackmailed Andi into promising
not to tell us something. This is exactly how she acted when Taffy got taken
two years back,” Chad said his voice full of disgust. “I just don't get how
everything that happens has to happen to Andi .”
Andi
walked into the parlor. Justin, Chad and Mitch sat there, talking. “I heard
what you were discussing. I guess I really should tell you even though he told
me not to.” Starting at the beginning, Andi told them everything that had
happened since Mitch left her in the barn.
Chad's
face clouded over and Andi knew he was getting angry. “How dare he lay a hand
on you!” he exclaimed. “Let me see your arm, Andi .”
“No,
It'll be fine.”
“Andi
, let Chad see your arm.” Justin said in a quiet voice.
Andi
lifted her sleeve up and held out her arm. “Just please be careful.” She winced
as he touched it. “It hurts a lot.”
Chad's
face turned livid as he inspected her arm. “How dare any man do this to my
sister!” he exclaimed. “Well, by the time I'm through with him he'll wish he
never saw Andi!”
“No,
Chad. You can't let him know I told you or he'll do something dreadful to me,”
Andi whispered.
“So,
he threatened you also?” asked Mitch.
Andi
nodded.
“We
need to come up with a plan.” said Justin. “Something where nobody will get
hurt, but where we are able to catch Hugh unarmed. Or, at the very least, be
able to disarm him.”
At
the supper table they talked about it with Mother. They still hadn't reached a
decision when it was time for Andi to go to bed. "We'll tell you what
we've decided in the morning." Mitch told her. "Oh, and by the way,
we hired Dick as a ranch hand. He has a sister your age. You'll be able to meet
her at church tomorrow."
Andi
grinned. "That sounds fun! Goodnight."
As
Andi climbed in bed, she thought What will tomorrow hold?
Part
5
The
next day was another beautiful spring day. Andi hurriedly dressed and rushed
down the stairs, anxious to hear what her brothers had planned for Hugh after
church. As she got to the bottom of the stairs, the breakfast bell rang. She
entered the dining room and took her seat. Looking around the table, her mouth
watered. Eggs, bacon, flapjacks and orange Juice. One of her favorite
breakfasts.
As
she started eating, Justin turned to her. “So, do you want to hear what we came
up with last night?”
Andi
nodded.
“Well,
we decided to have you and Mitch go along like he wanted. It was hard coming up
with something because the south-east pasture has no trees and is one of the
only places on the ranch that has completely flat allowing someone to see for
miles around.“
“So,
What did you decide?” asked Andi impatiently.
“Well,
we are going to surround the pasture but be far enough away to be out of sight. Anything that happens will be visible to
Mitch, the ranch hands, and me. Chad and I will stay within shooting range so,
if he does anything desperate, you and Mitch won't be on your own. Mitch will wear his gun in his holster,
as usual but he will also wear one inside his shirt that no one will be able to
see.”
“That
sounds like it will work. I'm going to be so nervous until all this is over.”
Mitch
nodded. “Same here. But, It's time to go to church so we'd better all get into
the buggy.”
As
Andi left the dining room, Mother pulled
her aside and gave her a hug. “I don't like this at all, Andrea . I wish there
was another way. I'll be praying for you this afternoon.”
Andi
returned her mother's hug. “Thanks, Mother. I'm really nervous about this whole
thing as well.”
As
Andi and her family entered the church, Andi noticed that Dick, Chad's new
ranch hand, was there as well as a girl her age. She also noticed that Johnny
was back. When church was finished, Andi hurried over to were Dick and his
sister, Gail, were seated.
Dick
looked up as she walked over and grinned. “Hey, Andi . It's good to see you.
Again. Let me introduce you to my sister, Gail. Gail, this is Andi .”
“It's
good to meet you!” Andi exclaimed. “It'll be so fun to have someone close to my
age around.”
Gail
smiled shyly. “Hi, Andi . It's great to meet you. Dick says you remind him of
me.”
“That's
right. Andi and my little Abby Grace will at along well.” Dick smiled.
Gail
rolled her eyes. “He insists on calling me that because he knows I hate it. My
full name is Abigail Grace but it's too fancy for me.”
Andi
laughed. 'My full name is Andrea, but it's too fancy for me too!”
Just
then Johnny walked up. “Hey, Andi. It's good to see you again.”
Andi
regarded him with a stony stare. “It's nice to see you back. How was Military
school ?”
“Not
too great. It was alright. Well, I'll see you later today. Bye, Gail Bye,
Dick.”
Andi
stared after him, then turned to Dick and Gail. “ How do you know Johnny?”
“He's
been my only friend since we came to Fresno. And he’s been a lot of help to
Dick,” Gail explained.
“What?
Johnny?” You must be mistaken. Johnny
is a horrible bully!”
Gail
looked startled. “No, he's not. He's one of the kindest boys I know. And he's
going to help us move later today.”
Just
then Chad walked up. “It's time to go, Andi. Dick and Gail will come to the
ranch later on. Dick is going to help us later on.”
Andi
nodded. “Bye Gail and Dick, See you later.”
When
they got back to the ranch, they had a hurried lunch, then Andi and Mitch went
out to saddle the horses and get ready. Chad, Justin and the ranch hands had
already surrounded the pasture.
Gail
and Dick had already arrived. Sure enough, Johnny had been there helping them
move and he was able to talk his way into going with Dick to surround the
pasture.
Andi
muttered. “I can't believe Chad let him come along. I would never trust him
with my life. He's probably working with Hugh. I don't believe Johnny can
change as much as he has.”
Just
then, Mitch walked into the barn. “Well, everything's ready Andi. Let's go.”
Chapter
6
Andi
mounted Taffy while Mitch mounted Chase. It took only about a 20 minute gallop
until they got to the south-east pasture. Sure enough, there was Hugh waiting on
a horse Andi recognized as one from the livery in town.
Mitch
motioned to her to slow the horses as the rode up to him.
As
they ride up, Hugh pulled his gun from his holster, cocked it, and pointed it
at Mitch. “Well, Andi. Good to see you kept your part of the bargain. I've got
a little surprise planned for you and your brother.”
“Get
to the point, Hugh. What do you want?”
Hugh
glared at Mitch. “I want $100,00.”
Andi
gasped. “What would you do with that much money?”
“Well,
the first half of it would get me to Mexico and the other half I could live off
off comfortably for quite a while.”
Mitch
returned Hugh's glare. “What if I say, 'No'?”
Hugh
face turned sickly sweet. “Then perhaps you would let me wed your sister here.
How old is she? 16? plenty old enough to get married in my opinion.”
Andi
turned a horrified face to Mitch.
“No,
don't you dare touch my sister. I'll get
you the money.”
Hugh
laughed. “Good. That should at least repay me for all that money you took from
me up in the mountains that time.”
“That
was stolen money!” Andi exclaimed.
Hugh
laughed. “I like you, Andi. You've got
spunk and you’re not afraid to speak your mind.”
Andi
glared at him.
“Well,
let's go into town and you can get me the money at the bank.”
Mitch
nodded.
“But,
first you need to take your gun off. Just throw it on the ground.”
Mitch
and Andi exchanged a knowing look. Mitch unbuckled the belt from around his
waist, and the holster and gun slipped to the ground.
“Wait,
it's Sunday. The bank won't be open.” Andi said.
Hugh
just laughed. A sound that made chills race up and down Andi 's spine. “We'll
figure out a way to get in, won't we?”
“You
don't need me to help you get money from the bank. Can't I stay here at the
ranch?”
“No.
You are my back-up plan, my 'hostage' in case Mitch tries anything stupid. Hand
me your reins.”
Andi
looked at Mitch. He nodded. Andi threw the reins to Hugh.
Hugh
wrapped them around his saddle horn. “Now you won't be getting away any time
soon.”
He
put his gun back in his holster and they took off at a gallop. As the began to
go through the trees, Hugh slowed the horses to a trot.
Just
then Andi heard a gun cock behind them. And a voice Andi recognized as Johnny's
said. “Don't move.”
Part 7
Andi sighed. Of all the people Chad
could have put to watch this area, it had to be Johnny. I said I didn't
trust Johnny with my life. Now that's exactly what I'm going to have to do, Andi
thought.
“Don't move a muscle, Hugh Baker. Or
I'll have a good mind to relocate this gunshot into you instead of the gun.”
Hugh was sitting ramrod straight on
his horse. One look at his face and Andi shuddered. His face was seething with
rage.
“Mitch, go find Chad and Dick. They
shouldn't be too far off.”
As Mitch rode off, there was a
crackling explosion in the bushes behind them as two deer leaped from the
brush. Startled, Johnny whirled around, giving Hugh the chance he needed.
Ramming his spurs in to his horse, Hugh galloped away. Taffy, whose reins were still
tied around Hugh's saddlehorn followed.
Johnny, seeing that Hugh was getting
away, mounted his horse and began to chase them. He was within shooting range.
If he could only be sure he wouldn't hit Andi when he shot. Just then, Chad,
Dick and Mitch appeared in front of Hugh and Andi . Hugh pulled the horses to a
stop. There was no way he could escape.
Later, after Hugh had been taken to
the town jail and everything had settled down, Andi walked out to the barn
where Her brothers, Johnny and Dick were.
'I'm sure glad that's over with!”
Andi exclaimed.
“Me too,” Mitch agreed. “it gave me a
real scare when I saw Hugh trying to run off with you.”
“Yeah, about that. Thanks Johnny. I
wouldn't have thought you would try to save me but you did. Thank you.”
Johnny shrugged. “It was nothing. I'm
sorry for how I treated you before. Can you ever forgive me?”
Andi shook a finger at him playfully.
“Hmmm taking into account all that you did let's see, you pulled my braids,
punched me in the stomach, teased me mercilessly, kidnapped me, not to mention
our little run-in behind the alley.” Andi 's face reddened at the thought. “Sure, Johnny. If Jesus was able to forgive me for all my
sins and love me limitlessly besides, I can forgive you. But it will be hard to
forget.”
Johnny nodded. “I know. That's about
all I can ask. Thanks, Andi.”
The rest of the day went quietly.
Andi and Gail spent a lot of time together rising and Johnny joined them.
As Andi watched her new friend and Johnny
together, something between them, the way they treated each other, startled
her. Later, she asked Gail about it.
Gaill blushed. “Dick has given him
permission to court me.”
“But, your only 17.”
“Oh, don't worry. I'm not allowed to
marry till I turn 20. And I'm glad Dick made that rule for me, Even though a
lot of people will think I'm an old maid by then.”
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Gail and Johnny were married 3 years
later. Andi was the maid of honor while Dick, of course was the best man.
After the wedding, Cory cornered Andi.
“Andi , I wanted you to be the first to know other than my parents. I'm going
to college. In San Francisco I'm going to become a doctor.”
Nice job!
ReplyDeletegreat job, Jess!! glad to see johnny being nice!!
ReplyDeleteWasn't Dick's sister's name Abby Grace, not Gail?
ReplyDeleteOh I didn't read the entire thing
ReplyDeleteI love the name Abigail Grace!! It's my name too,I always got called Abby but I've just loved the nickname Gail!
ReplyDeleteAbigail J.H.💖💖