By, Toriana H.
Part 1
11 year old Andi Carter leans against an oak tree by the creek
at her special spot drifting off to sleep. All of a sudden a loud
“Howdy!” brings me out of my sleep and makes me jump.
“Oops, sorry for startling Ya” the girl says apologetically.
“That’s okay” I mumble as I’m looking the girl up and down, she
was wearing old overalls and she had bright green eyes with long dirty blond
hair in one sloppy braid running down her shoulder. I also noticed a really
pretty Sorrel horse tied up next to Taffy.
“I’m Caroline, Caroline Kent” She says “But, Ya can call me
Carrie, least whys all my friends back at home do” Carrie reached out her hand,
I took it with a grin “Howdy Carrie, I’m Andi Carter!” I say “where are you
from?”
“Well me an’ my folks just moved here from New York”
Wow, I thought, I remember Ms. Hall talking about a far away
place across the US called New York she always used to say ‘if anybody ever
comes here to California from there, well that’s a very LONG journey, Children’
“Wow” I say aloud “ that’s mighty far”
With a quick nod of her head Carrie changed the subjected “Do Ya
like horses?”
“Me? Are you kidding? My folks own a ranch a few miles that
way.” I say pointing towards my home
“Ya like racing?” My new friend asks
“I sure do” instantly liking this girl and then we raced to the horses, mounted and gallopen into the distance.
Part 2
Without warning while we were trotting along a few days later Carrie stood up on her horse in her saddle, which earlier she introduced her horse as Butter cup.
“Wow” I say as she does a little jump, still on her horse. I
glance at Buttercup who was completely unfazed. Show off I
think
“Me and my Folks are trick riders” Caroline says to my stunned
face and then she giggles “What’s the matter, you and your folks never seen
trick riders before?”
All I can do is nod my head that we had. A little shocked at
what a show off this girl was being.
“Wanna see some more tricks?” she asks and I slightly nod again.
“Alrighty then, just stay right there” Carrie tells her horse to Lope and then
just grabs her horse’s mane and then she spins round her saddle two times
before stopping abruptly
“what’s the matter?” I ask as Carrie dismounts and picks up her
horses hoof
“Buttercup threw a shoe” She answers “Pa’s gonna tan my hide, he
always says not to trick ride if we are not at home”
“Well Blakes livery stable, in town, can shoe her for you and
there are cheap, but they do a good job!” I say “Well I guess we are going to
town” she mumbles rudely
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That night I lay awake thinking about trick riding wouldn’t that be so cool to do that. I mean think about it! I mean Carrie was being a little bit of a show off, I thought. Then I fell asleep dreaming about trick riding.
Part 3
“Andi, we need to talk” says Chad sternly
uh oh I think when Chad says that that means I’m in
trouble. I think did I miss any chores the last few days…. Oh no!!
Chad had asked me to scrub out the water troughs yesterday and make sure I had
exercise one of the horses, Suger. And I forgot both, because I wanted to go
out and meet Carrie. Why did I want to meet that show off girl? I ask
myself
“Andi, this the second time this month you have forgo—“
“Chad” Mother broke in “could this wait till after breakfast?”
Chad glares at Andi, then turns back to Mother “Sure, Mother” He
says.
Then I turn back to my now cold flapjacks.
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After breakfast Chad brings me into the sitting room for a Chit chat. After the harsh scolding and reminder not to forget my chores again or else no riding for 3 days, I race to the barn. I rush through all of my chores and make sure I didn’t miss any before I saddle Taffy and ride towards Carrie’s new ranch, which she had showed me around the day before.
I tie Taffy up to the hitching post and then knock on the door.
“Oh Hello Andi” Mrs. Kent greets me “Come in and I’ll go get
Caroline”
I nod my thanks and step into their house.
A few minutes later, Carrie walks in frowning, I stand up.
“Hi” she mumbles and I wonder what’s wrong “My Pa found out Buttercup threw her shoe and
that I was trick ridin’ and he told me I can’t ride all week” she says as a
tears form in her eyes “I’m mighty sorry for being a show off” she says “I
reckon you don’t wanna be friends with a show off girl, ugh?” A tear
trickles down her face.
I immediately regret my hasty thoughts even if they were partly
true. The bible says to treat others the way you want to be treated (even in
thought) and I sure wouldn’t want anyone thinking of me as a show off.
“Oh Carrie” I start “I will admit I did think you were a little
bit of a show off, but I still wanna be friends!”
Carrie looks up with hopeful eyes “Ya do?” she asks
“coarse I do silly!” I say back “ and you sure are a mighty fine
trick rider”
“thanks!” she says beaming “I could show you a few of the basic
things, if you want?”
“Really? I would love that” I say happily “but….”
“what?” she asks “it’s not scary”
maybe he would let me do it?? I think. “No it’s not that I’m scared” I start “there’s just one hurdle…..My brother, Chad” I say sadly.
It's a nice, short, and fun story that had a good lesson at the end.
ReplyDelete~J
thank you, i had fun writing it :-)
Delete~Tori
It’s nice to see someone taking time out of their schedule to write about something that they care about. Way to go!
ReplyDelete~CJ
Thank you! -Tori
DeleteNice story, Tori!
ReplyDeleteWould love to read more from you in the future!
-Stephanie
Thank You Stephanie!!! T1hank you for reading!! :-) :-)
Deleteoh, and i love your name!
~Tori
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DeleteThat's alright, I really hope you write more! I would love to read more from you!!
DeleteThanks. :)
That's ok, love reading new fan fiction! :)
DeleteYour story is really good.
Thanks.
I really hope you write more!!
-Stephanie
yikes!! this is late! sorry! i want to write more fan fiction... i'm brainstorming ideas now!
Delete~Tori
Cool, it is hard to come up with ideas.
Delete-Stephanie
Yea, it is!
Delete~Toriana H
Great job writing this Tori!!! I really hope you write more. You're very good! :)
ReplyDelete-Christa
Thank you so much Christa for reading!!! that means a lot!!!
Delete~Tori
Thank you so much Christa!! I really enjoyed writing it! It means a lot for you to say you like it 🥰
Delete~Tori
Amazing job Tori!!I loved it please write more!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Grace!! That means a lot 😊❤️ I am planning on writing more in the near future!
Delete-Tori
Nice work, Tori!
ReplyDeleteGreat job,Toriana!
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