by Tori H. and Sara M.
Part 1 - Andi’s Idea
Andrea
Prescott rolled over in her bed. She didn’t want to get up. She never wanted to
get up. Especially since it meant she had to chase her two year old little boy
around. Andi looked beside her at the empty messed up covers. Riley had left
already.
Andi
groaned. Mounds of house work awaited her. Oh
I guess I should get up…. At least Jared isn’t awake y- a loud wailing
broke her out of her thoughts. Okay, now
he is. She climbed out of bed and wrapped her housecoat around her. Andi
walked to Jared’s crying form lying in the cradle. She scooped him up and
cuddled him as she walked down the stairs. “Now how about some breakfast?”
Twenty
minutes later Andi set a plate of eggs in front of her and plopped Jared on her
lap. She scooped up some of the yellow blobs and gently handed them to Jared to
put in his mouth.
Andi
yawned. She glanced out the dirty windows, made a mental note to clean those
today, and looked at the Sierra mountains. Just beautiful. Suddenly, Andi
wanted to grab her little boy, saddle Shasta, and go for a fast, galloping
ride.
Excitement
rose in her chest. Jared whined for more. Andi, not paying attention, gave her
son what he was reaching for. She handed him her glass cup. He giggled and
threw it to the ground with a bang!
Andi
flew into the air with a shout, grasping Jared as he started to scream. Her
heart beat out of her chest. She took Jared to his room as she calmed herself
down.
Andi
set him down and gave him a kiss. He was just whimpering now but Andi didn’t
dare set him down on that glass covered floor. She knew he would be stuffing
his face with glass shards before she could even blink! She walked over to the
kitchen and drew out a rag from the drawer. She bent down and gently whipped up
the glass. Andi noticed the floors dark with dirt. She sat back on her heels
and groaned. Andi knew her conscience was telling her to stay home and clean.
clean. and clean.
But
what fun was that? Especially with Jared. Oh
I do love my little trouble maker son but, oh boy, you can't get anything done
chasing him around. She decided, I'll
just take Jared for a quick ride and be back in time to wash the windows and
fix supper.
Then
she got an idea. It wouldn't be quick, but boy would it be fun to see her
friend Rosa again! Yes! That's what she would do! Ride out to Rosa’s place so
Jared could play with her two year old son,
Tomas and her five month old baby boy, Miguel.
PART 2 - The Surprise
Andi
threw the rag in the sink and ran to Jared’s room and quickly replaced her
housecoat with a plaid shirt and split skirt. Scooped Jared up, went to the
door and ran out to the barn. One of the ranch hands met her half way with a
grin on his face. “Howdy, Ma’am, Goin’ for a ride?”
Andi
nodded.
“Want
me to saddle your horse for ya?” He questioned.
Andi
nodded again, “Thank you, Joey!”
Five
minutes later Joey led a chocolate palomino out from the barn, it was Shasta.
Andi shoved Jared in front of the saddle horn and swung up behind him.
She
felt a thrill shoot through her spine. Andi hadn’t seen Rosa in months, and she
missed her old friend dearly. As she kicked Shasta into an easy lope, she
remembered all the good, and the not so good, times she had with Rosa. Like the
first time they met, and when they found Andi’s brother-in-law lying in a creek,
and many more adventures. Yes, Rosa was always considered one of Andi’s best
friends. They had been through a lot together.
Jared
sat as still and quiet as a rock. As he always did while riding. Andi looked
around as they approached Rosa’s land an hour later. It looked weird. Almost
empty. Andi swung off the saddle and grabbed her son. He protested. She hushed
the crying baby as she tied Shasta to the hitching rail. Andi ran up the steps
but stopped abruptly when she noticed the door wide open. She ignored it and
tentatively stepped in.
Andi
looked around and gasped.
PART 3 - More Surprises
Andi
clutched her baby. She noticed gun holes in the walls. The house was completely
empty. Her head told her to leave before she got into trouble, but her heart
told her she had to see if Rosa was here and okay. As usual she ignored her head and stepped
further into the house.
“Hello,
there.”
Andi
jumped and screamed. Quickly she covered her mouth as she watched a man in the
shadows move closer to her. The light from the windows quickly uncovering his
looks. Andi backed closer to the wall. No.
No. It can't be! No! She thought.
“Andrea
Carter! What a pleasure to see you again.” He chuckled.
Andi
gave him a death stare.
“Well-”
He looked at Jared. “Oh, wow! A baby? Wait- Who’s the lucky man?”
She
ignored his question.
His
expression grew dark. “Fine, be that way. Now, I'm sure you remember me as
Deputy Hugh Baker.”
Andi
rolled her eyes, “Not much of a deputy.” She mumbled.
Hugh
launched at her, stabbing his pistol onto her chest. “Now, listen here young
lady. I am sure you and your baby want to stay alive! So if you do,” He chuckled.
“Listening and respecting me would be the better option. Is that understood?”
Andi
nodded. Jared whimpered. Hugh looked at the baby and then shouted, “Jed!”
Then,
as if Andi couldn't get any more shocked, Jed Hatton walked through the doors.
PART 4 - The Prayer
Jed’s
eyes lit up when he saw Andi. “Well, Howdy, Little lady!”
Andi
tentatively smiled at the old outlaw. An
outlaw he may be, yet he did save my life, Andi thought. She hadn't seen
him since the day he shot Benita. So that she could escape. Even though Jed had
murdered and hurt some people, Andi believed he had a good, loving heart deep
down inside and he really didn’t want to be a bad guy. He just got caught up in
the wrong crowd.
Hugh
laughed, “So, I see you two have already met.”
Andi
didn’t know what to say so she said nothing.
“Nothing
now?” Hugh frowned, “Jed, have you met her before?”
Andi
held her breath, would Jed tell?
Jed
just shrugged his answer, it could have been a yes or no, Andi didn’t know.
Andi hugged Jared, “Be still.” she whispered in his ear when he wiggled a bit.
“What
are we gonna do with her? She always comes when we don’t want her.” Jed said
“Throw
her with the other, what, Mexican girl and her youngn’,” Hugh said, “It's gonna
have to do.”
When
she heard that, Andi was ready to fight. No way was she going somewhere with
Jed willingly! And not with her precious son.
“Come,
I won’t hurt you,” Jed hissed in her ear when he came near.
Andi
backed up not sure if she should, no could, trust him.
“Little
lady,” Jed warned
“Hurry
it up!” Hugh glared at them, “No time to spare, knowing how the girl’s brothers
always show up.”
Andi gulped, no choice here, Andi sighed and did as
Jed asked, he took her to the basement and locked the door behind her. The room
was dark as Andi looked around, there was a small beam of light coming under
the door crack so she could see just a bit but that was all.
She
heard a muffled noise in the corner. She swirled around, she heard it again,
what could it be? Rosa? Andi couldn’t help herself, she had to know if it was
Rosa. She advanced closer, holding Jared tightly. She saw a slight flash of a
light pink dress, Rosa! “Rosa?”
Again,
the muffled sound. Andi stepped closer, even though the light was very faint
she could still see Rosa lying there, tied up and with a gag in her mouth. Andi
gently pulled it out and threw it aside, “Rosa? Are you okay?” she asked.
Rosa
looked up surprised. “What are you doing here? And I think so,” Rosa’s voice
was raspy, “please untie me.”
Andi
nodded and set Jared on the cellar floor, keeping an eye on him she quickly
untied Rosa’s hands and feet. She pulled her friend to stand, and Rosa dashed
over to an old pile of clothes. “Rosa?” Andi was confused,
“My
son!” Rosa was terrified.
“Where
are they?”
“Not
they. Hector has Tomas, because he took him to town, and I had Miguel, but they
took Miguel and put him here.” Rosa kept digging through the mound of dirty clothes
and let out a cry when she found her son, fast asleep. She picked him up and
cuddled him. “Miguel, my baby.” she said repeatedly, he just stirred sleepy.
“Is
he okay?” Andi asked
“Yeah, I think so.” Rosa answered,
“Good.”
Andi said, “To answer your question, I just came to visit but then this
happened…” She looked away and said, “What do we do?”
As if
to answer, the door burst open and shut behind whoever it was. “Hello?” Andi
said, not really sure what else to say
“Hey,
little lady.” Said a voice. Andi winced. she knew that voice all too well.
“What
do you want, Jed?” her voice snapped at him.
“Whoa,
little lady. Just delivering supper.”
“Fine,
you can go now.” Andi said firmly . She didn’t want to be in the awkwardness of
his presence.
“Haven't
lost your spunk, have you?” Jed chuckled.
Andi
glared even though Jed couldn’t see her. Andi knew deep down that she should be
nice to Jed for helping her. But, he also was the one that almost had her
killed shooting her in the head. So, what was the point? She sighed loudly.
“Alrighty
gals, but I gotta be going now.” He gave a wave and walked out the door. The
lock banged.
Rosa
looked up. “Oh Andi…” her eyes were concerned, “You came at the worst time.”
Andi
forced a laugh. “Yeah, I can see that.” Andi’s eyes dropped. “What happened?” Andi asked with
concern.
Rosa’s
eyes filled with tears. “It was horrible. Oh Andi! What are we going to do?”
She flung herself into Andi’s arms as she burst into tears.
“It’s
going to be okay, Rosa.” Andi hugged her friend “God will protect us. Want to
pray?”
Rosa
looked up. “Sure” she sniffled.
“Okay,”
Andi started, “ Dear, Jesus, we know that you have the plans all worked out for
us, Lord and please just help us to trust in you and put our faith into you,
Lord. And please, please keep us safe and our children. Amen.”
“Amen.”
Rosa echoed
PART 5 - A Tough Time
Andi
stood, “Rosa, let’s check around and see if there is any place we can get out.”
Rosa
just shook her head, “There are only some beans and maybe some apples.”
“Oh,
well, we will figure something out.” Andi said, she was determined to get out
of here. Jared started to cry so Andi
sat back down. She snuggled Jared until he was quiet again. “So, what really
did happen?” Andi asked her friend.
Rosa
looked down, “I was just washing dishes in the kitchen, when someone knocked on
the door, I opened it to see them two,” she shuddered, “they asked for a drink
since it’s a warm day. I was getting a glass of water for them when I was
grabbed from behind and spun around. They told me they were going to keep me
for ransom and kidnap my son and take him and sell him to the Chinese.”
Andi
gasped. she loved Jared so much and hearing that someone wanted to take her
friend’s child was devastating. How did Rosa stand hearing that?
Rosa
went on, “I fought back, and they shoved me down here and locked me and Miguel
in here. What are we going to do, Andi?” Rosa’s eyes were wide with fear, “I
can’t let them take my baby.”
“We
will try our best.” Andi finished speaking when the cellar door was flung open.
“Girl?”
Andi
frowned when she heard Hugh’s voice.
“Come
on, I know you are down there.” Hugh trampled down the steps and glared at them
with a grim smile, “Ready to hear our plans?”
Andi
didn’t answer.
Hugh’s
smile vanished, “So ya two are gonna be quiet? ‘Bout time, the Mexican girl was
just yipping the whole time.” Hugh’s voice got rougher, “So, we are gonna take
ya kids. Come on, give them to me.” Hugh said when Andi and Rosa clung their
children tighter,
“No.”
Andi said firmly, there was no way she was giving up Jared!
“I
didn’t ask, girl, I demanded.” Hugh took a step closer
Andi
backed away, Rosa did the same.
Hugh
glared at them and marched straight up to them and reached for Jared, “No!”
Andi shouted and dropped herself to the ground, still holding Jared tightly.
She glanced up to see Hugh step towards Rosa, her gaze flew to the door, it was
open! Andi quickly thought of a plan.
Hugh
swore and grabbed for Miguel. Rosa stepped aside. Hugh turned away from Andi
and Jared, “Girl, give me the kid!” Hugh’s voice was hard.
Andi
stood and backed to Rosa, The door.
She mouthed, run. Get out. She nodded
her head towards the door, hoping and praying Rosa would understand.
Rosa
gave the faintest of nod, Andi slipped towards the steps while Hugh’s attention
was on Rosa, Rosa yelled, and Andi dashed up the steps with Rosa right behind
her.
“Get
back here!” Hugh shouted after them, but he was too late. Rosa and Andi got
away, almost.
Andi
thrust Jared into Rosa’s arms and slammed the door and locked it. She slumped
against it, “Rosa.” was all she could say
“Well,
well. What’s this?”
Andi
jumped to her feet and faced Jed Hatton, I should
have known he was still here! Andi was upset she forgot about him.
Jed
frowned and put his ear to the cellar door. “How did you get him down there and
you out?” he glanced over at them and chuckled.
Andi
bit her lip, what should she say? Why was
Jed so good humored about this? She had to be careful what she said because
she saw Jed had a pistol. She eyed it wondering how to get it from him. Jed saw
her eyeing it and placed his hand on it.
“I
won’t ever hurt you or your youngn’ little lady.” he said
Rosa
suddenly spoke up, “Keep me here but let Andi go, she didn’t come to get mixed
up in this.”
“No,
Rosa. I won’t leave you now. Never. I am staying.” Andi said and faced Jed,
“I’m going to keep your word on that.” she stared at him
“Good.”
he went back to the kitchen.
“Um,”
Rosa said, “Now what?”
“We
go to the kitchen too. I need some information.”
Andi
spun and followed Jed to the kitchen, she couldn't stay by the cellar door and
wait for something to happen.
“What
do you want with us?” Andi demanded as soon as she got in Rosa’s kitchen,
Jed
looked surprised, “Nothing. It was the boss’s idea.”
Andi
had her doubts.
PART 6 - Hugh Again
Andi
frowned at Jed, “Then let us go.”
Jed
didn’t answer but went and got a cup of coffee. They watched has Jed poured a cup of coffee. Andi’s mouth was
watering for a nice warm drink of coffee. “Jed.” she said aloud, “You heard me.
Why can’t you let us go?”
“I
can’t, little lady. You know that. I’ll be in trouble.” Jed said
“Jed
Hatten, no.” Andi marched back to Rosa. “Rosa, we are going right now. Come.”
Rosa,
eyes hesitant, followed Andi into the living room. There was only one door to
get out and it was behind Jed Hatten. He had moved and was blocking the door
and standing in front of it, pistol in hand.
“I
know your plans,” he said in a low whisper
“Let
us go!” Andi said firmly, she marched up to Jed and said “We didn’t do
anything! Maybe you and ol’ Hugh there should mind your own business for once!”
She pushed past him, ignoring the pistol.
“Stop,
little lady. I will shoot.”
“No,
you won’t!” Rosa cried out and she ripped the pistol out of Jed’s hand and
faced it towards him. “You put those hands up Mr. Hatton!” Rosa sounded very
brave, but Andi could tell she was struggling to hold it up. She quickly moved
to stand next to her. Andi pulled Jared into her arms as she took the pistol
from Rosa’s shaking hands. Rosa scooped up Miguel and cuddled him. Andi faced
Jed.
Jed’s
face was a mixture of sadness and regret. “Go ahead.” Jed spoke softly.
Andi
looked at Rosa, puzzled. She turned back to Jed and asked, “What do you mean?”
Jed
smiled a sad smile as he looked away. “Oh little Lady. I have done some bad
stuff in my day. And now I’m running from the law. I live every day in fear
that I will be caught and hanged. I guess what I am tryin’ to say is…. It might
be better to be shot then hanged.”
Andi
let the pistol fall to her side as she processed what he had just said. “You
want me to shoot you?” She was horrified.
Jed
slowly nodded
“No!”
Andi nearly shouted. She couldn't shoot Jed, even though he had shot her before,
but he had helped her. “No,” Andi repeated, “I can’t shoot you, Jed Hatten. I’m
just going to go. Rosa with me. You, Jed, can just turn yourself in!”
“Why
are you calling me Jed Hatten and not just Jed? You did in the past.” Jed
Hatten changed the subject fast.
“I-I
didn’t know I was.” Andi stammered,
“You
are.” Jed smiled a little
“Okay,
Jed, how ‘bout you just turn yourself in?”
Jed
glanced out the dirty windows and said, “I’ve thought about that before but….”
he paused, “I just can’t bring myself to do that. Not yet.”
Andi
frowned but said nothing, “Well, bye.” Andi started to head out the door
carrying Jared.
Jed
suddenly grabbed her arm, “You won’t get the sheriff will you?” his eyes were
alarmed
Andi
thought for a few minutes and said, “I am.” she held up her hand to stop Jed
from talking, “I won’t tell them that you were here if you leave now. Rosa, we can keep it a secret,
right?” Andi waited till Rosa nodded “Jed?”
Jed
paced in the living room, “I don’t know, I supposed that will work. What about
Hugh?”
“He
will stay where he is till we get the sheriff.” Andi said
“Okay….”
Jed drew out the word, “I’ll get going. And Andrea, thank you.” he gave a small
smile and turned and he was gone.
Rosa
came alongside Andi as they watched them go. Jed was gone. Andi turned to Rosa
and gave her friend a hug. “Well, We’re free to go!” Rosa smiled and for the
first time all day she had color in her cheeks.
All
of a sudden a loud Bang! Erupted from
the backyard. Andi jumped as Rosa screamed. “W-what was that?” Rosa asked,
shaking.
Andi
shook her head as she walked towards the door. Jared and Miguel were sleeping
on the dirty couch, but Rosa scooped up both boys and plopped them on her hip.
Andi peeked out the door. Hugh jumped out and said, “Miss me, pretty lady?”
Andi
jumped back. How did he get out? Andi’s
thoughts were swirling,
“No
answer, pretty lady?” Hugh stepped closer. Andi slammed the living room door in
his face as he leaned closer. She ran across the room and hid the pistol under
the couch. “Rosa, Hugh is out!” she hissed in her friend’s ear.
Rosa
paled, “How-” she didn’t get a chance to finish.
Hugh
slammed the door open, he grinned slyly, “Well, looky here.”
“What
do you want with us?” Andi demanded.
Hugh’s
grin grew bigger. “You gals had a lot of guts to lock me up in there and now
you’re gonna pay.” He said it with such authority it sent shivers up and done
Andi’s spine.
PART 7 - What Now?
Andi
crouched over in the corner of the kitchen, Hugh had made them march over in
the corner and stay put. Andi glanced at Rosa, “Rosa,” Andi whispered
softly, “don’t say a word about the
pistol. I’ll have to get it sometime and shoot Hugh. You need to grab something
and get him down. Got it?” Andi hurriedly glanced at Hugh who was not paying
attention to them.
“Got
it.”
“Get
apart!” Hugh’s voice roared as he hurried over to them,
Andi
shot away from Rosa and Rosa’s eyes widened.
Don’t be afraid. Don’t be afraid. Andi
reminded herself. She stood and faced Hugh. “I don’t know how many times I have
to ask but, What do you want with us?”
Hugh
laughed a mean laugh, “Why, I’m going to take those youngn’ and take you two to
Mexico. Carter girl, you are so brown they will think you are just another
girl.”
“No!”
Rosa gasped, Andi knew what she was thinking, Hugh had almost taken Jared and
Miguel before and now he was going to try and take them again? Andi couldn’t
believe it and she knew Rosa couldn't either.
“I
didn’t ask you.” Hugh glowered
Andi
hunkered down clutching Jared, she had to come up with a plan. One to get away
and one to get Hugh captured.
“Where
is Jed?” Hugh demanded
“I
don’t know. He left a bit ago.” Andi didn’t know where he was so it was the
truth.
“Hmmm….”
Hugh glared at Andi no doubt thinking she was lying. Andi wasn’t about to tell.
Hugh
glared at Rosa, thinking she would speak up. It wasn’t happening.
“Fix
me some grub.” Hugh demanded
“What?”
“I
don’t know whatever is around this shack.” Andi glanced at Rosa, surely she
would know.
“There
are apples and beans in the cellar. I will fetch them.” Rosa slipped
downstairs, no doubt glad to get away from Hugh.
Andi
watched her go, She set Jared on the couch next to a fast asleep Miguel. She
slid her arms around them and whispered, “I will do everything I can to protect
you.”
Andi
bowed her head and said a silent prayer. God,
You are with us I know, I am asking you to protect us and keep us safe. Watch
over our Jared and Miguel, God. Amen. Andi lifted her head to see Rosa
coming through the door and carrying a bag of apples and a few cans of beans.
Andi
hurried over to her and took the apples, “Rosa, can you do the beans?”
Rosa
nodded once and got out a pot and started to warm the beans up,
“Hurry
it up, girls, we need to get going!” Hugh demanded.
Andi
looked through the drawers until she found a knife and a spoon. She cut the
apple up into pieces while Rosa opened the can of beans and spilled it into the
pot. They carried it over to where Hugh sat watching them. Andi slammed the
plate of apples on the table in front of Hugh.
Hugh
jumped up and snatched Andi’s arm. “Oh you little….” He slammed her onto the
ground. Rosa let out a yell and Jared started to cry. Hugh spun around. “You!”
He pointed to Rosa, “Make that boy be quiet!”
Rosa
jumped and scooped up the little boys shakenly. Andi’s face was white as chalk
as Hugh turned back towards her. He pulled out a pistol.
Andi’s
eyes grew huge. “W-where did yo-” She started but Hugh interrupted her. “Haha!”
He let out a laugh. “You think I’m stupid?”
Yes I do. Andi
thought.
Hugh
continued, “When the Mexican girl went down to get food and you were looking
around I found your little hiding place and snatched it.”
Andi
shuddered. Oh no! Why didn’t I keep it on
me?
“So
now…” Hugh cocked his pistol.
PART 8 - The Rescue
Rosa
cried out, “NO! Please! Stop! Kill me first.” Her eyes were full of tears and
fear but still she was brave. “Andi has no right to be killed! She wasn’t even
here when you came.”
Andi’s
heart broke. Right there was the deepest love and care of one of her best
friends.
Hugh
stood there shocked. “Well…” He looked at Andi. “No. I-I want it to be her gone
first. You’re easier to handle.” He waved at Rosa. Rosa was loudly sobbing. “I
am gonna count to three.” Hugh said to Andi. “And then I will shoot.”
Andi closed
her eyes and prayed, God, thank you for
giving me a wonderful life and for my husband and my beautiful son. And my
family. And for Rosa. She heard Hugh start counting. “1….2…”
BANG!
Andi
cried out. She sat there for a moment and felt no pain. She opened one eye…
then another. She saw Hugh lying flat on the ground. “What?! B-but I am
supposed to be dead!”
Chad
stood there. “Not on my account, little sister.”
Andi
jumped up and leaped into his arms. “Oh Chad! H-how did you know we were here?”
Chad
let go of Andi and looked into her tear filled eyes. “It was Jed.” The look of
confusion on Andi’s face told Chad to continue. “He wrote a note and stuck it
on our door. As soon as Mother told me I raced out here.”
Andi
smiled and cried. Oh Jed, she thought,
I knew he was a true good man deep down.
“We didn’t have time to get Justin.” Chad admitted. “Well we will have to tell him some other time.”
“Where
is Riley?” Andi asked. At that moment Riley came slamming through the door with
Mitch at his heels.
“Andi!”
her husband shouted, he came running over to her, Andi smiled and yet again
another pile of tears pooled down her face, “I never thought I would see you
again, Andi. I was so scar-” he broke off, struggling to hold back his own
tears.
Andi
hugged Riley, “I am okay now. That’s what matters.” Jared crawled over to his
Dad, “Dadda!” Riley lifted him up and hugged him.
Andi
gave Rosa and Miguel a hug too. “Hey , everyone…” They looked at Andi. “I think
we should say a prayer and thank God.”
Mitch
smiled and said, “I will say it!” He began, “Dear God, thank You for protecting
Andi and Rosa and their children. We know it was only You who had saved them.
Thank you, God, for protecting them and being with them. Amen.”
“Amen.” everyone echoed
Love it Tori and Sara!!!! Keep writing together you're doing amazing!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Emma!!!
DeleteI ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS STORY! Great job!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Lily!! it means a lot!!
DeleteVery creative. I've always loved Rosa and you did a great job keeping her in character. Good job girls!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!!
DeleteLoved it, especially the last chapter!
ReplyDeleteAw! thank you!!
DeleteAwesome story Sara and Tori!
ReplyDeleteThank you Tanya!!
DeleteIt was great... Just a tip in the actual books there is at least some Spanish... Not being rude at ALL loved the story!!!
ReplyDeletethanks :) Not all Fan Fiction has to have Spanish though... though i have read all the books so i do understand that. Thank you for the suggestion tho!!
DeleteThis is really exciting. I couldn’t take my eyes off the screen! Well done!
ReplyDeleteI LOVED THIS SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI was actually scared for Andi. Amazing job 🥰