by Luca B.
10-year-old Lottie
Prescott stepped out of the buggy after her brother and ran up the porch steps,
I'm so happy it's the weekend! No school. No Math, no spelling, nothing! She
thought as she burst though the door. "Mama we're home." Jared, her 13-year-old
brother called.
Mama was in the kitchen wearing her apron which
was covered with flour, "Hello darlings, how was school?"
Lottie slumped into a chair by the table.
"Ok, I guess." She eyed a tray of cookies that sat on the kitchen
counter to dry, "But history was so dull."
"No it wasn't." Lily said. Lottie
rolling her eyes, Lily liked boring stuff like history. Lottie just didn't
understand how they could be twins and still be so different.
Then 6-year-old James spoke up, "Guess what
mama? At school today I found a frog and I make a home for him in my desk!"
"Made, James, not make." Lily corrected.
Lottie walked over to her mother and hugged her,
"Love you mama. Just going to my room to do something." As Lily
hugged her mother she stretched her hand out to the side to grab two cookies
off the tray. As she turned to head to her room Jared came up behind her.
"Sneaky." He whispered.
Lottie sighed, Jared always saw through her
tricks, "Please dont tell mama."
"I won't if you give me one cookie."
Jared grinned.
"Fine."
***
Lottie watched her sister twirl in front of the
mirror, Oh Lily. That dress looks great, but why do we have to spend all
afternoon in Susie's room looking at her old dresses?
Lily's voice pulled Lottie out of her musing.
"Lottie, what do you think?"
"Looks good."
"I just love this one Susie!" Lily
exclaimed.
Susie smiled, "You can keep it if you like,
Lily."
'Really?"
Susie smiled, "Of course, it's too small for
me now anyway."
"Thanks!"
Just then Jared popped his head round the door,
"Twins! Mama said we need to go."
Thank goodness! Lottie thought, I don't think I
could stand to see another dress. She jumped up from her seat and raced to the
door.
When Lottie got downstairs she looked around.
Everyone was chatting and laughing together. Sundays where her second favorite
day of the week (after Saturdays) because after church the entire family came
to the Circle C ranch for lunch and often the afternoon too.
Then she spotted uncle Mitch. Mitch's wife Liberty
was talking to grandmother about babies (Liberty was expecting a baby in a
month or two.) Lottie walked over to her uncle, "Guess what uncle Mitch!"
He grinned, "What?"
"Spirit had her foal yesterday! And daddy's
gonna let me and Lily name her! He said if it was a boy he would let Jared and
James name him, but it was a girl so we are!"
"Nice, so what what are you going to name
her?" Uncle Mitch picked her up and tossed her in the air.
"We haven't decided yet."
Suddenly Mitch's son Henry ran up, "My turn
daddy!"
"No it's still my turn for uncle Mitch to
pick me up! And I'm older so I get a longer turn!" Lottie exclaimed.
"Your only 2 years older!"
"Settled down now, Lottie let's give give
Henry a chance, ok?"
"Ok." Lottie consented as uncle Mitch
put her down.
"Lottie!" Mama called. "We need to
leave before it gets dark."
"Coming Mama."
***
That night Lottie and Lily sat on the beds in the
room they shared, talking, " Susie asked me to go riding with her and
Gracie on Saturday," Lily was saying. "And I said yes but I don't
really feel like going."
"Why not?" Lottie asked. in her mind she
couldn't think of anything better than a day of riding.
"Are you kidding? It's summer. Do you know
how hot it is outside in the day? No way."
"Sounds fun I wish I could go!"
Lily sat up, "Why don't you?"
"What? But she invited you." Lottie was
confused.
"I know," Lily was getting really
excited. "But we're identical twins! We could switch!"
"I don't get it."
"I could pretend to be you and you could go
riding as me."
Lottie grinned, "Like a prank, Lets do it!"
***
Saturday came and there plan was set in motion.
Lottie put on one of Lily's riding skirts (way less dirty than her own) and
Lily got an every day dress of Lottie's.
James came into there room. He tugged on Lottie's
skirt, "Came on Lily, daddy said that he is riding with you to the Circle
C."
Lottie smiled, there plan was working! James
thought she was Lily! "Ok."
They walked into the kitchen where to table was
set for breakfast. Mama was still frying eggs And her older brother sat waiting
for the food.
Lottie took a seat, "Morning Mama, morning
Jared."
"Good morning, Lily. I made eggs and bacon
with toast, because I know it is your favorite." Mama smiled, as she set a
plate full in front of her.
Lottie groaned, Lily loved this breakfast, but
she, Lottie, hated eggs. How was she going to pretend to be Lily and not eat
her eggs?
Then Lily walked in. Her eyes grow wide when she
saw what was for breakfast. Father came in from outside apparently he had been
up early. "Good morning to my lovely family." He walked over and
kissed mama. He looked at Lottie, "We're leaving right after the meal, ok?"
"Sure daddy."
Jared looked at Lottie. "You sure where
hungry, you finished you eggs in five seconds."
Lottie grinned, glancing at her suddenly full
skirt pocket, "Yay, I guess." Everyone else's plates where still full.
Mama when to dish food for Father but he stopped
her, "It's ok darling, I'm not that hungry. Lily and I are leaving
now." He took Lottie's hand and they walked out the door.
***
After Lottie dumped her breakfast somewhere nobody
would find it, she sat on Lily's horse Amber and beside her, her father was on
his horse Dakota. "Nice day for a ride." He said. "Oh Lily, have
you and Lottie thought of a name for the new foal?"
"We each like different names. Lil- I mean, I
like Jewels and Lottie likes the name Sugar, so we can't agree."
"Well, a name needs to mean something."
"What do you mean?"
Daddy smiled, "Like your name Lillian Joy,
Lillian is for the Lily flower and Joy means great happiness."
"Ok, thanks daddy." Lottie wanted to ask
what Charlotte meant but she did not what to give away her identity. So instead
she said, "Want to race to the ranch?"
"Sure."
***
When they got to the Circle C they where hot and
out of breath. Amber had won but Lottie was sure that her father had let her
win.
Susie and Gracie where outside waiting for Lottie.
Well, Lottie thought, I guess they're waiting for Lily and they think I'm her.
Lottie thought, she suddenly felt a little guilty for lying to her family.
Don't be silly, she told herself, it's just for a day, tomorrow she and and
Lily would switch back. Nobody would know and Lottie would have gotten a nice
ride.
"Hello Lily." Gracie said, Gracie always
was nice to the twins even though she was four year older.
Uncle Justin and uncle Chad stepped out of the
house, "Looks like you girls are set. Here's a picnic lunch that Nila
packed. That way you can stay out all day." Chad said as he tucked
something in to Susie's saddlebags.
"Thanks." Susie said, she turned to her
cousins. "Race you!" She started galloping. Lottie and Gracie laughed
and followed.
***
"Watch this!" Lottie told the others an
hour later. "Daddy showed me how to stand up on a horse." Ok, her
father had showed Lottie how in secret so mama would not know and she had learned
on her own mare, Diamond, but doing it on Amber couldn't be much harder.
"Are you sure Lily?" Gracie asked.
"Of courses!" Lottie said, standing on
Amber trying to balance, She did and stood tall.
Susie came over to Lottie on her horse, Honey,
" that's so amazing Lily!"
"Than-" before Lottie could get her
words out Amber who was unsettled at Lottie standing on her back, reared up on
her hind legs and Lottie fell from her back. Honey, startled by Amber through
Susie off and to the ground. Lottie suddenly landed sideways on Honey, she
fell. Then everything when black.
***
Lottie awoke to Gracie shaking her, "Thank
God you alive! Are you hurt?"
Lottie felt bruised from the fall but otherwise
not harmed. "No, is Susie alright?"
"Look." Gracie motioned for Lottie it
sit up and see. Lottie did and gave a sharp cry at the sight of her cousin.
Susie lay pale and motionless with blood seeping from a long cut on the right
side of her head. Her right arm bent under her at an awkward angle. Lottie
turned to Gracie, "What do we do?"
"Well, if your sure your ok, you ride to the
Circle C for help."
"I'm fine, I'll go right now." She slid
onto Amber.
"Ride fast Lily!" Gracie called as she
galloped away. Lottie felt a twinge of guilt for not telling the truth.
She pushed Amber hard, harder that she had ever
pushed a horse in her life. Lottie mentality kicked herself for switching with
Lily, if she had just asked to come along with her cousins instead of lying
about her identity, she would be on Diamond, and Diamond was a lot faster than
Amber.
"Sorry Lord," Lottie prayed, "I
should have never done such a thing. Forgive me."
***
By the time Lottie reached the Circle C both she
and the mare where sweating. One of the ranch hands came over to her.
"Miss Lily, back so soon? Where are your cousins?"
"Sorry, I have to go!" Lottie ran past
the hand. She hurry into the house and straight to where her father and uncles
sat. Uncle Justin cut mid sentence off by her entrance, looked confused. Lottie
rushed to her father, "Oh daddy, it was a terrible!" She cried.
"What happened darling? Why are you
alone?" Father held her.
"Susie-" Lottie was still out of breath
and couldn't continue.
Uncle Chad stood, "What happened to
Susie?" He demanded.
"Easy Chad, let Lily get her breath back."
Lottie told the entire story, ending with, "
And so I it was strange galloping a horse that belonged to Lily- Oops."
Father looked at her, "Charlotte Faith
Prescott."
"Yes."
"I knew it." Father said, " you
respected to Charlotte, your Lottie. Why did you lie?"
"I don't have time for this. we go get my
daughter!" Uncle Chad left the room, The rest followed.
***
Lottie rode with her father to give Amber a break.
Ones they arrived at the spot where Lottie had left her cousins, Uncle Chad
leaped from his saddle to crouch by his daughter.
Lottie ran over to Gracie, the girls hugged.
"Lottie, you ride honey ok?" Father said.
"Ok." She replied.
Gracie frowned, "Aren't you Lily?"
Lottie sighed, "It's a long story."
***
The twins where punished for lying and a couple
day later, Father, Lily and Lottie sat outside memory creek ranch house talking.
"So," Lily said, "how is Susie?"
"Better, her head and arm should be better in
a couple weeks." Father replied.
"That's good." Lottie said, looking up
into the sky. "Daddy, are stars all the same?"
"That's a random question, but no, look
closer and you'll see each is a little different from the other."
"Like people are all different." Lily
smiled, "Like Lottie and I are twins but not the same on the inside."
"Right."
Lottie jumped up, "I know, let's name the new
foal, Star!"
"I love it!" Lily agreed. The twins
hugged.
In the that moment the girls expressions looked
identical, But inside they were unique.
Awesome story!!
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-Sara M
Thank you so much! I definitely will keep writing!
DeleteAwesome job writing this! I love it!!
ReplyDelete~Micaiah
Thank you! I had so much fun writing it!
DeleteI love it! You should write another one about the twins!
ReplyDeleteAbigail H.💖💖💖💖💖🐎💞
I'll soooo glad you enjoyed it! I would like to write another story about them sometime!
Deleteaww I loved this! you did a great job!
ReplyDeleteThanks! I really appreciate it!
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing! Wonderful job!!!!!🤩🤩🥳🥳🥳. ~Hannah S.
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