by Margaret Elmer
Andi Carter was lazily sitting on her porch steps on a very hot morning. Andi leaned back and closed her eyes.
Suddenly, she heard hoofbeats and a man’s voice call her older brother Chad.
She sat up straight and looked around. She saw her brother appear from behind
the barn. The ranch hand reigned in his horse beside Chad and started to talk
enthusiastically to him.
Chad
nodded his head and said something that Andi could not hear, before heading
into the barn. Andi wondered what he was doing, so she jumped up and walked
over to see. When she went in, Andi saw her brother saddling his
horse, Sky.
“What’s going on, Chad?” Andi asked.
“Wade said
he saw a horse that doesn’t belong to us. It’s in the meadow. If you want to
come along, hurry up and saddle Taffy.”
Andi
grinned and hurried toward her mare’s stall. Soon, Sky and Taffy were saddled
and Andi and Chad rode away.
A few
minutes later, Andi spied a pretty pinto mare in the meadow. She was golden
brown and white, with a creamy-white mane and tail.
“Wow,”
Andi breathed, “She’s beautiful.”
Chad
frowned. “She looks well taken care of. I wonder where she came from. Andi,
you’re good with horses. If you can get her to follow us then we can take her
home until we find who she belongs to. We should take care of her, because
there is a cougar that has been getting some of our calves. I set a trap in the
trees over there,” Chad waved his hand toward the forest. “He may try to attack
the mare.”
Andi
was thrilled with the complement her brother gave her, but was worried about
the cougar. She climbed out of the saddle and walked over to the horse. The
horse snorted and shied away as Andi approached, but after a few minutes of
gentle talking, she allowed Andi to rub her neck. Andi took an apple out of her
pocket and let the horse eat it. Then, she gave the horse a pat and climbed
back into her saddle. The little group started back. The mare stared as they
walked away. She took one hesitant step toward the riders. Soon she galloped
fast to catch up.
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Ben
Swiss headed out to do chores. He decided to first look at the horses in the
corral.
Ben walked over to the corral and counted the horses mentally.
Stal,
Chess, Windy, and… where is Candy?
Candy, Ben’s
sister’s pinto, was gone. Ben walked around the corral and found a mark in the
dirt that Candy jumped over the fence. Ben went to talk to his father.
“Pa?”
Ben looked into his fathers face. “Candy is missing. She jumped over the
fence.”
Mr.
Smith frowned. “That’s not good.”
Ben then
said, “Pa, may I go and look for her? I am fourteen, can shoot well, and you’ve
taught me to track animals. I could find Candy. Bell will be awfully worried
about her horse. If I start today, I may be able to bring Candy home in time
for Bell’s birthday in a couple days. That could be my present to her. May I?”
Mr.
Swiss was quiet a moment. “If your mother agrees, I think it would be fine.”
Mrs. Swiss
said that Ben could go. She made him sandwiches and filled a canteen.
“Bye,
Bell. I’ll try to get Candy back by your birthday.” Ben said to his younger
sister as he grabbed his hat and rifle before heading out the door.
Bell smiled
at him, “Thank you. Be safe.”
“Alright. Goodbye Ma.” Ben went to the corral to get his horse Chess, but his
father was already there and had the chestnut horse ready to go.
“Thanks Pa. See you later.” Ben pulled himself up on his horse. Mr. Swiss
grinned and replied, “Alright son. Remember to always ask the Lord for
guidance, and trust in Him.”
“Yes
sir.” Ben rode over to where he had seen the marks in the dirt and started
following Candy’s hoof prints.
Candy’s tracks led into the woods. When it was too dark to see the mare’s
tracks, Ben dismounted and unsaddled his horse. Then, he started to make a
fire. He soon had a rip-snort’n fire going. He spread his bedroll out on the
ground and ate some sandwiches before turning in.
When he
awoke, it was morning. The fire had died out. He ate a sandwich for breakfast,
rolled up his bedroll, and saddled his horse.
Ben
looked carefully around. He saw Candy’s tracks in front of him. He also saw a
large shiny trap at the base of a tree. Ben went over to investigate the
trap.
Ben
murmured, “Wow. It looks like a cougar trap.” As Ben looked closer at the trap,
he noticed that it had sprung, was bloody, and had a cougar foot in it.
Ben
felt tingles go from his head to his toes.
“O Lord,” he
prayed, “there is a wounded cougar around. Lord, a wounded cougar is a mad and
dangerous cougar. Help me not to be afraid, and please help me to find Candy
before the cat gets her- if it be Your will.
Also,
please protect Chess and me, In Jesus name I pray, Amen.”
Ben got back
onto his horse as he whispered Psalm 56:3,
“What
time I am afraid, I will trust in Thee.”
Being very
aware of his surroundings, Ben clucked to Chess, and they continued to follow
Candy’s trail.
Several hours later, Ben came out of the woods and into a meadow.
The meadow
was surrounded by a forest on every side- except one. Ben stared at the
treeless side of the meadow and could just make out a ranch house and other
structures.
“Is
that people I see?” He asked Chess.
Ben spurred
Chess into a gallop toward the buildings.
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Andi was
sitting on the corral fence watching the pinto mare. Chad came up beside
her.
“I
asked around town yesterday. Nobody heard of a missing horse.”
Andi look at
Chad, “She has to belong to someone! I bet whoever it is, is very worried about
her.”
Chad sighed
and glanced over at Andi. “I know Andi. There’s just nothing we can do except
pray, and ask around.”
“You’re right, Chad.” Just then, Andi saw a horse and rider galloping toward
them.
“Chad!” She pointed. “Look! Who could that be?”
Chad shaded
his eyes with his hand.
“I’m
not sure.”
The
rider stopped when he reached them.
“Hi.
I’m Ben Swiss.” He said rapidly. “My sister lost her horse so Pa allowed me to
track it down. The horse is golden brown and white, with a cream colored mane
and tail. Have you seen her?”
Andi
felt so happy. She was going to speak to the boy, but Chad beat her to it.
“Hello
Ben. My sister and I found a horse just like you described. She’s right here,
in our corral.”
Ben’s gaze
flew to the corral. His face lit up and he leaped off his horse.
“That’s her! That’s Candy!” He excitedly clutched the top fence rail.
Andi was
delighted. She said, “What’s your sisters name?”
Ben looked
over at Andi. “Her name is Bell. She’s has a birthday tomorrow! Finding Candy
is one of my presents for her.”
Andi
thought hard. She excused herself and ran toward the house.
“Mother?”
She called as she opened the door.
Her mother
looked up from her sampler. She was sitting on a couch a little ways off. “Over
here Andrea. What is the matter?”
Andi
sat down next to her mother and told her about Ben. She also informed her
mother about Ben’s sister Bell, being the pinto mare, Candy’s, owner, and about
Bell’s birthday.
“So
Mother,” Andi continued, “may I please invite the Swiss family over for a
surprise party for Bell?”
Mother smiled. “Of course you may. Run and tell Ben before he goes back home!”
Andi kissed
her mother on the cheek and ran off.
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Ben
said he would talk to his parents about having a surprise party for Bell at the
Carter ranch.
“Alright
then, Ben.” Chad said. “I think my mother would like to meet you. Why don’t you
go up to the house while Andi and I saddle our horses? We’ll take you partway
home.”
Ben
strolled over to the ranch house and knocked.
“Come
in!” Mother said warmly when she opened the door.
“I am
Elizabeth Carter, Andi’s mother. You must be Ben. Would you like to come to the
kitchen and have some cookies with milk?”
In
reply to Ben’s nod, she led him to the kitchen. Mother motioned him to pull up
a stool nearby. As Ben dragged the stool over to the counter, Mother poured a
glass of milk. Then, she placed three cookies on a plate. She tugged a stool
next to Ben’s, and sat down.
“Now
then, Andi has told me about your adventure. Why don’t you tell me about your
family.”
When Ben came out of the house, Andi and Chad were
sitting on their horses waiting for him. They had Candy on a rope. Ben climbed
on Chess, so Andi gave him Candy’s rope, and they rode away.
After Ben got to his farm, he rode up to the house and saw
Bell run out to greet him.
“Ben. You
found her. Thank you so much.” Bell cried.
Ma and Pa
stepped out of the house. Ben walked Chess over to them.
“I’m back!”
He grinned. “The Carters at the Circle C ranch found Candy and had her in a
corral waiting for me!”
Pa
smiled, “They are good people.”
“Do
you and Ma mind coming to the barn?” Ben winked, so Ma and Pa raised their
eyebrows.
“I guess we don’t.”
Pa said, looking at his wife who nodded.
Ben glanced
at his sister who was petting her horse.
“Bell, Candy
might love it if you took her to the corral.”
Ben handed
Bell the rope before trotting Chess over to the barn. He dismounted and was
taking the saddle off when his parents joined him. Ben eagerly told them that
the Carters had invited them to a surprise party for Bell.
“May
we go?” He asked eagerly.
Ma looked at
Pa. “If your pa agrees.”
Pa glanced at
his wife, and then at Ben. “We’ll go.”
Ben
climbed onto Chess. He rode out of the barn bareback.
“Bell! We are
going over to the Carters tomorrow! Better get Candy looking fine!” Ben
hollered to his sister. He raced down the path to tell Chad and Andi that the
Swiss family would come to the Circle C ranch the next day.
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The
next morning Andi woke early. She helped Mother bake and decorate a cake-
especially for Bell, and did her chores. Then, she saw four riders coming up
the road. Andi waved and ran to tell the others.
The
two families ate cake and gave Bell presents. Afterwards, Mother suggested that
Andi take Bell riding, and Chad should show Ben the barn and horses.
Andi fetched
Taffy while Bell got Candy, and the two girls rode out to the meadow.
Bell
suggested, “Why don’t we let our horses loose for a while, so we can walk?”
“Good
idea, Bell.” Andi and Bell got off their horses and began to mosey around the
meadow.
As
they walked, Andi felt that she had to ask Bell something.
“Bell, are
you a Christian?” Bell stopped walking and looked at Andi.
“Yes. I am.”
“How did you
realize that you needed to be saved?” Andi sat down in the lush, green grass.
Bell followed her example before answering.
“My mother
taught me how to be saved. She explained that everybody is a sinner- that we
have all done wrong. She pointed out that because God is holy and perfect, He
cannot allow any sin in Heaven. Since God can’t allow sin in Heaven, we have no
way to get to heaven. We cannot get to Heaven by doing good works, by praying,
by going to church, or by being baptized. Every single person is doomed to
eternal punishment for sin- going to Hell.
But, God
loves us so much that He does not want even one person to go to Hell. So, He
sent His Son, Jesus to earth. Jesus is God’s Son, so He is sinless- He did not
sin once, in His earthly life. Because Jesus is sinless, He did not have to die
for His own sins. Instead, He died for us, so that we don’t have to die for our
own sins.
Some of
Jesus’ friends buried Him in a grave after He died, but Jesus didn’t stay there
for long. After three days, Jesus rose from the dead- He lives!
Because Jesus paid the penalty for sin, we won’t go to Hell!
But, you have
to believe. Admit that you are a sinner, who will go to Hell
when you die. By faith, accept that Jesus died for your sins, was buried, and
came alive again so you wouldn’t have to go to Hell.
I realized
that I was a sinner, and could not get to Heaven by myself. I believed that
Jesus was God’s Son, that Jesus died for my sin, and that He was buried and
rose again. I was a new person from then on.
Of course I
still sin, but with God’s help I have become a better person.”
Bell
ended her very fervent speech a little abruptly, but Andi still felt the
meaning of every word.
A unexpected snarl behind them, made the girls whirl around. The horses were nowhere in sight. A cougar crouched in front of them. It had it’s front leg held up, and Andi could see that it’s paw was missing.
The
lion moved a few steps closer, it’s lips pulled back showing savage teeth. Bell
gave a little cry. “God, please protect us.”
“Bang.” Andi
suddenly realized that the cougar was lying in the grass- dead.
The girls
shakily got to their feet, and turned to look. There were two people riding
their horses toward them.
“Ben!
Chad!” Andi and Bell started running toward them. Ben dismounted when he
reached the girls while Chad rode over to the cougar before stopping.
Chad
kicked the lion with his foot to make sure it was dead. Then, he walked over to
the group.
“We
decided to come and see if you were alright. We saw your horses trot by, and so
we hurried just as fast as we could. Ben brought his rifle, and boy!” Chad
whistled. “He sure is a good shot.” Ben grinned and got on his horse. He helped
Bell up behind him, while Chad and Andi got on the other horse.
They turned their horses around and started for home.
I'm so sorry! I accidentally deleted the comments in this and about 14 other fan fiction stories. My bad.
ReplyDeleteCandy and Chess are good names for horses. Love the story!!😀
ReplyDelete-Brianna
Ben really cared for his sister! He was willing to face cougars to bring his sister’s horse back! Now that is the qualities all brothers should have! That’s what makes us sisters feel appreciated and loved 🥰!
ReplyDeleteThat was really good Meg!!! i especailly liked the ending with the cougar.
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