“Andi time to get up” Yelled Mitch.
12
year old Andrea Carter rolled over then sat up. Whats wrong with me ,
she wondered. She could only remember a few times this year that somebody had
to wake her up. She jumped out of bed and got dressed in record time. She was
down stairs in a minute. Wondering what time it was, she looked at the clock.
“7:00” she gasped ,why is the house so quiet, and
where is everybody ,she wondered. She wandered into the dining room
“HAPPY BIRTHDAY” Her whole family shouted.
“Thank you” She said ,as soon as everybody was done
singing the birthday song.
“Andi we made your favorite breakfast” Said her best
friend, Rosa. As Andi was sitting down to a very delicious meal, a thought
popped into her mind.
“Justin will you bring me on a picnic today?” asked Andi.
It had always been a tradition for Justin to bring Andi on a picnic on the day
of her birthday. And each year they went, they rode another mile.
“Of course, What would your birthday be without a picnic”
Justin said with a chuckle. And this year we get to go 13 miles . She
thought happily. Out loud she said,
“Justin will we go fishing?”
“Yep.”
“ Is there a creek 13 miles from here?” she inquired.
“Of course, and if there isn’t we can just dig until we
hit water” He joked.
The
whole family erupted in laughter.
“Justin do you think the whole family could come this
year?” Andi asked.
“Well I don't know, I think you should ask the rest of
the family first.”
“Sorry Andi, but I got some papers to look over in town,”
Mitch apologized. Mitch had been the sub
sheriff for a couple of weeks now, when
sheriff Tate was in San Francisco
visiting relatives.
“I’m sorry too Andi, but I got some work to do here at
the ranch, maybe Malinda and mother can go”.
“Sorry Andi but its Monday, and Mother and I have our
quilting-bee today. I’m really sorry
Andi” said Malinda apologetically.
“That’s alright it’ll be fun just to go with Justin
anyways”.
“Well, Andi I’ll get the fishing poles and horses and you
get the picnic basket and blanket. Then we’ll go on an early fishing trip, how
does that sound?”.
“Hmm, I guess it’ll work,” said Andi pretending to be in
deep thought.“ But what about my chores?, I have to do them too before we go.”
“Already done,” said Chad with a smile on his face. “I
did them when you were asleep” ,he paused, “I hope you don’t get spoiled.” He
said with a bit of pretend concern in his voice.
“Oh don’t worry, I won’t,” Andi said.
Within the next half hour Justin and Andi had gathered
all there supplies and rode out to find a fishing hole.
“Justin where are we going?” asked Andi after what seemed
like hours to her had passed.
“Out to an old fishing hole that Chad, Mitch and I used
to go to when we were younger, and if it hasn’t been used since we fished it,
it should be pretty good”.
15
minutes later they got to the fishing hole. It wasn’t until after they had
unpacked and gotten settled, that was when they noticed the horse. “Hey Andi
whose horse is that?” asked Justin.
“I don’t know, I’ve
never seen it before looks like its a Clydesdale to me” said Andi . It
didn’t take to long for them to find out who’s horse it was. ‘plunk’ ‘plunk’
‘punk’
“OUCH who’s doing that” said Andi as one more pine-cone
hit her head. Andi looked up and saw a man sitting on a tree branch above them.
“What are you doing up there” said Justin “come down and
join us”.
“Well sorry for the scare, but you see a rattlesnake
scared my horse and he threw me. Then another one almost bit me. Then I was
treed last night by wolves they wouldn’t leave so I had to sleep in the tree. I
was woke up in the middle of the night to almost falling out of the tree because
a bear got kind of angry. It seems like the whole world of wildlife is against
me” he grumbled while looking down from the tree.
Justin
laughed. “Well come down here and we’ll catch some fish for lunch”.
As
the man was descending from the tree Andi spoke to Justin. “Justin who is he”?.
“I don’t know for sure but when I’ve figured out I’ll
tell you” He whispered. About an hour later Justin said that he forgot
something In the saddlebags and motioned Andi to follow suit. When they where
finally out of earshot Andi was about to burst.
“Did you figure out who he is, is he a dangerous
criminal, who is he”?.
“Slow
down”, Justin said with a chuckle “yes I figured it out who he was. His name is
Gideon Monrove he’s not a dangerous criminal just known around these parts for
getting short term jobs on any big ranches. But just long enough to figure out
where their money is then robbing them. He’s got a BIG reward on his head
$100.” Justin answered calmly, (unlike Andi) who couldn’t figure out why he was
acting so calm.
“He also always goes by a different name. No sheriff has
ever been able to catch him”.
“So
what are we going to do?” Asked Andi sounding stressed.
“Simply offer him a job then Mitch and I will bring him
to jail in the morning, I’m sure he won’t know
where our money is for at least another week”.
“WOW” said Andi loudly.
“Shhhhh” said Justin “not so loud”.
Oops
did it again thought Andi.
When they got back to the house Andi jumped off Taffy,
and ran to the house. “Rosa, Rosa were are you”?
“Over here” a voice answered from a closet in the
kitchen.
“Rosa come to my bedroom” said Andi as soon as she was In
the kitchen. “Slow down” said Rosa calmly “your mother will not like you racing
through the house like a wild horse” she said wisely.
When they were finally in the bedroom Andi told Rosa
about everything that happened, in one breath. When she finally caught her
breath again she whispered to Rosa “I’ve got a plan, that is if you want to get
some money really fast”, She finished.
“What is it” said Rosa cautiously.
“Well you see, all we do is when the guy’s sleeping we
tie him up, put him on a horse and bring him to that old shack by the creek.
Thats the last place anybody would look if he went missing. Then we come back here
like nothing happened. Tomorrow we’ll bring him into town and get the reward
for ourselves.” Then, after a long pause, “well, are you with me or not, that
guys gonna be pretty heavy, And I won’t be able to pick him up all by myself”.
Andi said (in a voice that made it sound rrreeallyy easy).
“Alright” Rosa said with a sigh “only if you agree to one
condition and answer a question first. The condition is if we get in trouble
you’ll remember that this was your idea not mine, and I’m not getting in trouble.
And now the question, How will we get him out of the bunkhouse with all the
ranch hands in there?” asked Rosa.
“Well first of all I agree to the condition. Justin lent
him a tent because he didn’t want to stay with the other ranch hands in the
bunkhouse. We’ll get him at midnight
I’ll give you the owl call. Now I’ve got to take care of Taffy before she bakes
out there it’s already almost 100 degrees said Andi already running out the
bedroom door. That night Andi couldn’t wait for supper to be over even though
it was her favorite foods. As soon as she could be excused she ran outside and
into the barn. She ran into Taffy’s stall and grabbed the horse-brush.
“I’ll be done in a minute Taffy and then we’ll take a
short ride to pass the time, sound good?.” Taffy neighed her approval as Andi
brushed her down. After the ride Andi put Taffy in her stall and went to make
sure that Rosa had packed a grub sack.
“Now that that’s taken care of all we have to do is wait”
said Andi as she plodded up to her room. Then with a long sigh she sat on her
bed to relax, read a book, and wait. When Andi looked at her clock it was
11:54. Great Rosa should be ready. She
looked through her supplies one more time, then grabbed her saddlebags and
headed out the door.
Once outside she made a owl call and headed toward the
barn.
“What took you so long?” asked Rosa “I’ve been waiting
forever”.
“Sorry, but it wasn’t all me, what time did it say on
your clock?” asked Andi.
“1:00 why?”
“because your clock is wrong, I got out here around
12:00”.
“Oh I guess I’ll have to change the time”
“I guess so.”
Andi and Rosa saddled up their horses and headed toward
Gideons tent. As they were nearing the tent Gideon suddenly stepped out of it.
It hit them all at once.
“What are you doing out here” they all said together .
“What are you doing out here” they all said together .
“Well”
said Andi “that happens to be none of your beeswax but what matters more is the
question what are YOU doing here?” asked Andi.
“Well I think I know why you are here so I’ll answer your
question. I was going to rob you, as you might already know, but YOU TWO got in
the way. So I’ve just decide that instead of robbing your family I’m going to
kidnap both of you and bring you to an old shack I found a while back. Thats
probably the last place anyone would look,so it will give me enough time to get
a good head start.”
“You can’t do that” said Rosa “it’s against the law to
kidnap somebody.”
“Oh
and you think what you two were going to do wasn’t?” asked Gideon.
Rosa didn’t know
what to say so she didn’t say anything. Gideon told Rosa to tie up Andi, then
he tied up Rosa and helped them onto their horses. After a half hour of fast
riding they finally got to their destination … the old shack.
As they got off there horses and headed up the steps Andi
noticed a few changes since the last time she had come to this place. The steps
were still sturdy but a couple of nails had come out of the boards on the
porch, the next change was inside, somebody had moved the bed, table, and
chairs around, by the look on Gideons face she knew that he was real
comfortable in this place, and that he was probably the culprit. She then
figured that the story about being
almost bitten by a rattlesnake, chased by wolves, and shaken by a bear wasn't
true.
“Well make yourself at home were staying here for the
night. I’ll take the bunk you girls can use the chairs, and don’t try any funny
business I’m a light sleeper”. Gideon flopped onto the bed and in a minute was
snoring loudly.
“Andi what are we going to do, you know nobodies gonna
look here. This is just an old broken down cabin they’re going to think that
nobody in they’re right mind would hide somebody in here.” said Rosa in a
worried tone.
“Well,” said Andi, “the only thing that I can think of is
to pray, and wait for God to answer.”
The next morning Andi and Rosa watched as Gideon ate all
the food they had brought with them.
“Well your family’s have probably already got a search
party out, so I guess I’ll just have to be headin’ out.” Gideon said with his mouth
full.
“Don’t talk with your mouth full it’s not polite” said
Andi. With a look of disgust.
Gideon laughed “since when did you become my mother” he
asked with a grin.
“Since you captured us, and besides if my mother where
here right now she tell you to leave the table
because you talked with your mouth full” said Andi. “And I bet your
mother would do the same, wouldn’t she?”
asked Andi.
“It doesn’t matter
what mother would do she ain't here and YOU aren’t my mother” he said slamming
his plate on the table.
“Fine then eat however you want and when your doing that
I’ll make you a bet. If my brothers catch you before you take even one step of
that porch you will eat properly for as long as you can remember how. And if my
brothers don’t catch you I won’t tell my mother how you ate today, deal?” asked
Andi with a mischievous grin. Gideon started to chuckle then laugh.
“You really have that much faith in your brothers?”
“yep.”
“Well little lady you’ve got yourself a deal.”
“Great” Andi said with a smile, “why don’t you start
packing up so you can win?” a half hour later Gideon was packed and ready to
go. “Well” he said “I’m leaving have fun, hope your brothers find you soon” he
said with a chuckle. He started to head out the door when “SMACK” all of a sudden Gideon fell into the cabin.
After a few
seconds Andi started to laugh. “What happened?” asked Rosa.
When Andi was finally calmed down
enough to speak she explained to Rosa. There was a lose board on the porch.
When he stepped on one end of it the other end had come up and smacked him on
the head. “That knocked him out” she finished with laugh.
“So you see if we can get to his knife we can get
ourselves lose and tie him up. Then when you’re guarding him I’ll go get help
and I’ll win my bet” said Andi.
In a couple of hours Gideon was in jail, and everyone was
listening to Andi’s and Rosa’s story.
“And thats the end of it” said Andi. “Mitch, is Gideon
using better manners yet?” asked Andi.
“Surprisingly, yes, oh ya I almost forgot. Andi, Rosa
I’ve got something for you.” he said reaching into his pocket he came out
with two
envelopes. “I hope you two don’t become bounty hunters, but you did
catch him so, here you go” he said handing them the envelopes.
“What is it?” asked Rosa
“look for yourself” said Mitch. Andi opened hers first.
“It’s money” she gasped “$50 each, thanks Mitch” she said
after giving him a big hug.
“Well it just goes to show you” said Chad. “It never pays
to kidnap a Carter.”
Elly, I simply LOVED your story! It is so creative and I love that you through Rosa into a predicament with Andi. I also loved how you shaped your criminal, Gideon. Most Circle C Fan Fiction writers would go for a gruff bank robber, but I liked your witty house robber better, it was a nice twist. My favorite part was when the loose floor board smacked Gideon and the fact that you gave him a Clydesdale horse! Keep writing!
ReplyDeleteI agree! It was so good, Elly! I especially like Chad's line at the end of the story!
Delete~Grace Hammond
Nicely done Elly!
DeleteYa did a PPRREETTYY good job!
Keep writing!
thank you all!
Delete~Elly~