Abigail G.
“ANDI!”
The
angry shout tore Andi from her peaceful sleep. She sat up groggily.
“Andi
Rose Carter!”
Andi
then recognized the voice as Chad--her bossiest brother. She climbed out of bed
and went to the door. “What, Chad?”
Chad
appeared at her door, and gawked. “You’re supposed to be at school in twenty
minutes, and Justin is getting quite impatient.”
“Why
didn’t you wake me up?” Andi groaned.
“Your
chores were done; presumably by Mitch.” He frowned.
Andi
smiled at the thought of her youngest, not to mention nicest, brother sneaking
by Chad to do her chores.
“This
is not a laughing matter. You are supposed to learn responsibility by your chores,
not how to sweet-talk your brother! You had better get ready; however, when you
get back from school, we are going to have a long talk about where you were
last night! Do I make myself clear?”
Andi
winced at the tongue lashing. “Yes, Chad. Does Mother know about last night?”
Chad
shook his head. “Not yet. After our chat, I will decide if she needs to know.
Now get ready. Old Foster is gonna have a heyday as late as you are.”
Andi
ran a brush threw her hair one time, then braided it. She quickly pulled a
dress over her head, and ran out the door, down the stairs, and out the main
door. Justin, her oldest, most sensible brother, was indeed sitting in the
buggy looking quite impatient. She leaped into the buggy.
Justin
started Pal, the buggy horse, off at a fast trot. “You are going to make me
very late to work, young lady,” he said, breaking the silence.
“I
am sorry, Justin. I overslept.”
“I
see. And what, pray tell, was our most dearest brother so upset about this
morning?”
Andi
snorted her opinion of Justin’s description of Chad. “He just needed to talk to
me,” she muttered, looking down.
“About
. . .?” Justin pressed.
“I
would rather not say.”
“Alright,
I suppose I will find out at our little meeting when you get out of school.”
Andi’s
head snapped up. “You are gonna be there?”
“Chad
asked me to join you and he for a meeting after school. He said he may not keep
his cool. And by the way you are acting, I suspect he has a right to be angry.”
Andi
stared at her shoes. “You’ll find out then.” She felt sick.
Justin
merely nodded. They rode the rest of the way in silence.
Upon
arriving at school, Andi rushed into the schoolhouse and made her way to her
classroom. She dreaded every step as she climbed the stairs to where the older
children were taught. The schoolmaster, Mr. Foster, kept a tight rein on his
pupils, and allowed no rule to be broken without severe punishment.
Andi
entered the schoolroom slowly.
Mr.
Foster looked up, “Miss Carter, it was nice of you to join us.”
Andi
blushed furiously as the class tittered. “I apologize for being late, Sir. I--”
She stopped speaking, realizing she had no excuse except that she overslept.
She was not about to tell that to Mr. Foster. “It won’t happen again,” she
quickly babbled.
“Miss
Carter, you know I don’t allow anyone to disobey the rules without punishment.”
Mr. Foster frowned.
Andi
groaned inwardly, but nodded to her teacher. “Yes, Mr. Foster.”
“For
being late, you will stay after school and you will write, ‘I will not arrive
late to class’ 300 times in your copybook.”
Andi’s
head flew up. “Sir, I can’t stay after class. Chad needs to talk to me, and he
will be extremely--”
“You
can stay after class, and you will, Miss Carter.” Mr. Foster
interrupted.
“Sir,”
Andi tried again, “If Justin tells you I can’t, will you listen?” Andi knew her
voice sounded as if she were begging, but she couldn’t help it. She stared at
Mr. Foster; her eyes pleading. Andi held Mr. Foster’s stern gaze, and finally
saw his eyes soften.
“Miss
Carter, you are sorely trying my patience today; however, since you seem to be
genuinely concerned about your brother being upset if you stay after class, I
will allow it to be added to your homework. You must remember it is due tomorrow,
Miss Carter.”
“Oh
thank-you, Sir. I won’t forget!”
Mr.
Foster gave her a curt nod, and moved on with the day’s assignments.
Finally
recess came. Andi couldn’t wait to get outside. When they finally got outside,
Andi’s best friend, Cory Blake, came up to her. “Did Chad find out about last
night?” he questioned.
Andi’s
mind went back to the previous night. She and Cory had decided they were old
enough to go see what Fresno, the town nearest them, looked like at night.
There had been fight after fight, plus swearing and drinking. The air had been
filled with the smells of horse manure, liquor, and tobacco. She and Cory had
almost gotten kidnapped. They would have been if three men hadn’t stepped in
and rescued them.
Andi
remembered one of the men’s words when the danger was over. “What in the world
are you kids doing in town at this time of night?” When he didn’t get an answer
he continued, “You sneaked out, didn’t ya?” Still receiving no answer he kept
on, “I can guarantee you did by your poker faces. Both of you ought to have
your hides tanned!”
The
man had continued scolding them until Andi’s ears burned with shame and
embarrassment. He had finally sent them home saying, “Now get on home, the both
of you, before I forget I ain’t your Pa and give you the thrashings you deserve!”
“Andi?”
Cory’s voice brought her out of her reminiscing.
“Yes,
he did.” She answered Cory’s question.
“How?”
“Remember those men who helped us?”
“How
could I forget?” Cory laughed.
“Well,
one was Sid, spending most of his recent pay check. He recognized me and went
right back and gave Chad an earful. Chad was so mad he waited until morning
before talking to me. The only thing that saved me then was that I overslept,
and I had to leave with the warning we were gonna have a long talk when I got
home from school. He was smoldering when we left. I won’t be surprised if he
tans my backside like he has threatened for so long!”
Cory’s
face drained of color, “S-S- Sid McCoy?”
“The
one and only.”
“Chad’s
foreman?”
“Yes,
Cory! What’s wrong?”
“Did
he recognize me?”
“I
have no idea. I guess I’ll find out after school. Don’t worry, Cory. If Chad
doesn’t know, I won’t rat you out.”
“Thank-you.”
Cory gasped, looking relieved. Then his look changed to one of concern, “If you
get in more trouble for being ‘alone’, tell Chad I was there. And whatever you
do, don’t lie to protect me. If Chad finds out you lied, there is not one doubt
in my mind he would whip you.”
“Thanks.
He might already whip me, though.” Andi shuddered at the thought.
“I
don’t know if Justin or your mother would allow Chad to tan you. But don’t
worry, I have had plenty whippings, and most of the sting goes away in an hour
or two!”
“Thanks
for the comfort.” Andi responded sarcastically.
“No
problem.” Cory grinned. “Let’s go play baseball, and get our minds off this
horrible topic.” Cory suggested with a grin.
“Sure.”
Andi gave her consent, and they ran off together.
The
rest of the school day passed uneventfully, and Justin came to pick her up.
Andi couldn’t meet Justin’s eyes on the way home.
“Andrea,
it would be easier if you would just tell me what you did, so I don’t have to
be surprised.” Justin’s voice was calm, but Andi knew he was near giving the
order to tell him, especially since he used her full name. Justin’s word was
law since Father had died eight years ago.
Andi
took a deep breath and poured all the details out to Justin.
Justin
didn’t say a word during Andi’s recital, nor for a while afterwards. He finally
spoke, “Andrea Carter, I am shocked and hurt that you would go behind my back
and do something like this, especially after the countless times I have told
you that Fresno is a dangerous place at night. You very nearly could have been
kidnapped last night, and the fact that you did it alone is even more appalling.”
Justin paused his scolding as he studied Andi.
Andi
studied the buggy floor, and didn’t look up.
“Andrea,
were you alone?” Justin questioned, staring intently at her.
Andi
sealed her lips and remained silent.
“Andrea
Rose Carter, answer the question this minute!” Justin snapped.
Andi
nearly burst into tears. Justin never spoke to her so sharply. “No, Sir.” She
whispered.
“I
thought as much. Who were you with?”
Andi
shook her head. He could yell at her all he wanted, but she wasn’t going to rat
Cory out.
Justin
thought for a minute. “Must have been Cory. No one else would be so dumb!”
“Cory
is not dumb, Justin Carter.” Andi
leapt to her friend’s defense.
“So
it was Cory.”
“I
never said that!” Andi protested.
“You
also never said it wasn’t him. Was it?” Justin prodded.
Andi
crossed her arms and refused to look at Justin. Pretty soon they pulled into
the yard. Andi jumped from the buggy before it quit rolling.
“It’s
about time you got here!” A voice exploded from behind her.
Andi
whirled to face Chad. Her anger boiled up. “In case you haven’t noticed,
neither Justin nor I control when school lets out,” she snapped.
His
glare darkened. “Get rid of your smart mouth. By the way, Sid mentioned you
weren’t alone. Who was with you?”
Andi
glared at Chad, “As if I would tell you!”
With that remark Andi turned on her heel and walked toward the house.
“Andrea
Carter, stop right there!” The cold sternness in Chad’s voice stopped her in
her tracks. She heard him coming toward her and turned, right as he got to her.
“You had better tell me right now who was with you.”
Andi
looked up at her brother, who stood well over six feet three inches. She
gulped. Chad was mad. He grabbed Andi by the arm. “Andrea, I control whether
you get your backside tanned or not, so I suggest telling me who you were with
and telling me quick.”
Andi
gulped again, and momentarily forgot the pain in her arm. “No.” She tried to
jerk her arm from his grip, but he held her fast.
“Andrea
Rose Carter, tell me right now.”
Several
ranch hands paused their work to watch. Chad’s grip tightened.
“Please,
Chad, let me go.”
“Chad,
what are you doing?” a new voice broke in.
Andi
whirled, and nearly crumpled in relief as she watched Mitch come closer. Soon
he was there. “Let her go,” Mitch ordered, alarmed.
“Not
until she answers me.” Chad spared his brother a brief glance.
“I
was with myself. You want to know who else?” Andi challenged.
“You
know I do.” Chad hissed between clenched teeth.
“I
was with me too!” Andi made herself give an unnatural cackle which quickly
turned to a moan as Chad tightened his grip.
“Not
funny, little sister.”
Mitch
gave Andi an odd look, “Uhhh…you okay, Sis?”
“Never
been better,” Andi said, her voice strained with pain. “Chad, do you mind loosening
the vice on my arm? We have been learning some stuff in school, and if I
remember right circulation is kind of important.”
“What
makes you think that I’m cutting off your circulation?”
“The
bluish tint to my skin is usually a good sign, as well as tingling and loss of
feeling. Want to know more?”
Chad
loosened his grip on her arm and Andi let out a sigh of relief. “I am sorry,
Andi. I just can’t stop thinking about what could have happened to you. I love
you more than you can imagine. How . . .?” He shook his head. “Really, Andi, it
makes me sick. Why in the world would you do something so dumb? It‘s like you
are asking for a licking.”
Andi
studied the ground.
“When?”
Mitch asked, looking confused.
“Last
night--”
“Do
we have to tell everybody?” Andi interrupted.
Chad
glanced at her, “Do you really not want me to tell Mitch?”
“I
guess I don’t care. So long as Mitch doesn’t tell anybody . . . like Mother.”
“I
won’t, Sis.” Mitch assured her.
Chad
repeated her story, omitting no details. He ended with, “I still don’t know who
she was with.”
“She
was with Cory Blake,” Justin said as he joined them. “Sorry it took me so long.
I went to Mr. Blake’s livery and asked him what he knew. Apparently Cory had
kept it all a secret. He called Cory in, and he admitted to every detail. Mr.
Blake assured me that Cory would be getting a good thrashing tonight, and that
he didn’t think Cory would ever do something so foolish again after tonight.”
Andi
shuddered at the thought of Cory getting a ‘good’ thrashing for being with her.
Sorry, Cory. I tried, she thought.
“That
is exactly what Father would have done to us, isn’t it Justin?” Chad laughed.
“Hey,
I got a few thrashings too, you know,” Mitch protested.
“Not
as many, though.” Chad replied.
“Chad,
I don’t think anyone could get as many as you.” Justin laughed.
Chad
tried to look offended, but in the end his laughter won out.
Justin’s
gaze flicked to Andi. “We have business to settle, brother,” he said, turning
toward the house.
“Right.”
Chad responded, instantly serious.
Justin
marched Andi through the house to the library. He led Andi to a small table and
he and Chad quickly took chairs on one side; leaving the other side to Andi.
“Whose
idea was it?” Chad asked.
“Both
of ours,” Andi responded instantly. Cory had suggested it, but she wasn’t about
to get him in more trouble by saying so.
Then
the scolding began.
Justin
started first, and he soon had Andi’s face beet red and her ears tingling from
the reprimand. Chad soon took his turn, and things only got worse. “Andrea,
look at me,” he commanded.
Andi
raised her tearful gaze to meet Chad’s stern one.
“I
was seriously considering giving you a tanning!”
Andi
stiffened.
“I
think it might help cure you of rushing into things without thinking of the
consequences.” Try as she might, Andi couldn’t hold back her tears anymore.
They poured down her cheeks.
Chad
winced at her tears, but continued, “I’m sorry, Andi, but if Justin agrees, I
am going to have to spank you.”
At
this dire pronouncement, Andi buried her head in her arms. She heard Justin and
Chad whispering, but she didn’t look up.
“Andrea,
pay attention,” Justin ordered.
Andi
raised her head.
“Chad
and I have decided not to whip you. However, there will be a punishment.”
Relief
flooded Andi’s body. “Yes, Sir,” she whispered.
Chad
spoke next. “As part of your punishment, Taffy will be off limits for two
months.”
Andi
gasped and her eyes filled with tears again. The thought of not riding her
beautiful palomino for two months was too much! Andi basically lived and
breathed for Taffy, and every day spent at the least an hour with her. I’m
sorry I was so dumb, girl. I don’t know why I did it. Oh! I will miss you so
much! Andi’s mind filled with thoughts of her beloved mare.
Chad
wasn’t through, yet. “Furthermore, for one of those months, you will be allowed
nothing but school, chores, and sewing. I know it seems harsh, but look at what
you did. What if you and Cory had been kidnapped? Who knows what could have
happened. You have been told all your life not to go to town at night. Rules
are not just made to confine you, and make us think we have power over you. In
fact, you have shown us that we don’t. Rules are made for your protection. Do
you understand?”
Andi’s
tears came once again. How right Chad was! “Yes, Sir.”
Justin
spoke next, “We love you, honey. That is why we punish you. We want you to
learn from listening, but sometimes we have to learn the hard way. It is for
your own good. We want to keep you around a little while longer.” He smiled. “Do
you understand?”
“Yes,
Sir,” Andi whispered through her tears.
Andi’s
brothers stood and came to give her a hug. Andi didn’t ever want to let go. She
felt safe in her brothers’ arms. She felt horrible for hurting them.
“I’m
sorry.” Andi choked the words out through her silent sobs.
“I
know you are, honey,” Justin comforted.
“And
we forgive you, Andi. We love you,” Chad added.
“I
know. I love you too.” Andi squeezed tighter.
When
the group finally broke up. Andi was able to smile. “Well, I better get started
on those sentences Mr. Foster gave me if I don’t want more.”
Her
brothers smiled. “I believe we have work too,” Chad said. “And we had better
get it done if we want to eat tonight.”
Andi
laughed as she made her way to the barn to have a short visit with Taffy before
getting to work. “Hey, girl! You are gonna find out soon that I won’t be around
for a while, and I am sorry. I am going to obey from now on, Taffy.”
Taffy
snorted, and Andi laughed. “Well, I may stumble a few times, but I will try my
best.” She sighed. “Boy, it sure feels good to be forgiven. I better get to
work if I am going to finish. I won’t ever lose you again. I don’t know how I
am gonna handle being without you for so long. Well, bye Taffy. I sure will
miss you.”
With
that, Andi turned and headed to her bedroom. The next day at school, Cory
caught up to her at recess. “Hey, Andi! How are you?”
“I’m
not any worse for wear. How about yourself?”
“I’m
quite sore, and will be for several days. Maybe even months, or years.” Cory
rubbed his backside and groaned.
Andi
laughed. “I didn’t rat you out.”
“I
know. Justin made that clear after he interrogated me.”
Andi
laughed again, “Lawyers have a way of doing that.”
“Yep.
So you didn’t get punished?” he asked, incredulously.
“You
better believe I did.” Andi quickly poured out her punishments to Cory.
He
let out a low whistle. “I would say you got punished.”
“Really?
I was still debating that. I do have to say, however, that I am glad it is out.
I don’t know why, but I feel so much freer. Yesterday, I felt so horrible all
day. I don’t know how to explain it.”
“I
understand,” Cory said, nodding. “Same with me. I saw Justin pull up, and I
knew it would be out soon. I knew I would get a licking, but I felt kinda
relieved. I feel freer too, now that I’m forgiven. You know the song we sing in
church, “He Set Me Free”? I think that song could relate here, even though it
doesn’t exactly mean that.”
“Absolutely,”
Andi agreed.
Cory
smiled at her. “Enough of this seriousness. Baseball?”
“Of
course!” Andi grinned.
The
two friends ran off--free and forgiven!
THE
END
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