by Luca B.
Note from Mrs. M. I apologize for the lousy formatting. When fans send stories copied and pasted into their emails, it seems that no matter what I do, I cannot get the story to indent properly. The best way to send stories is via GOOGLE DOCS.
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This story takes place a couple weeks after where "Broken to be Mended" (The
Last Ride from Mitch's POV part 1) ends. Taffy has had to be put down by Mitch after
her and Andi's accident. Andi still refuses to forgive or speak to her brothers.
"Riley asked me if he could take Andi riding
tomorrow." Chad commented looking at Mitch, he studied the board then
moving one of his pieces, "I said I would think about it, what do you
think?" They sat in the library playing checkers one evening, everyone
else had already gone to bed.
"He seems responsible, and she seems to like
him, I even saw her laughing with him today. Plus a ride would do her good. But
isn't her surprise birthday party tomorrow?" Mitch said.
"Yes, Riley said he would make sure they
where back in time."
"Then I think it's a great idea." Mitch
grinned, taking his turn and placing a red checker. "Your move."
***
"Ok Riley you may take Andi riding."
Mitch overhead Chad tell Riley as he finished saddling Chase.
"Mitch."
He spun to see Melinda, "Yes?"
"Sorry I scared you. Mother wants know if you
can get sugar at Goodwins mercantile while your in town."
"Sure thing Sis." He said as he swung
into the saddle.
"Oh and Mitch be quick, mother needs that
before Andi's party at 3 o'clock."
"Don't worry." He replied galloping
away, he turned and called back to her. "I'll be back before you know it!"
***
Once Mitch had gotten the sugar he looked around
the store for the thing he had come to town to get. A box. The box would have
to be quite small for it was for Andi's birthday gift from him. Finally he
found the perfect one, it was wooden and small enough to fit in his palm, it
was smooth and simple just a plain box.
With something special inside. he thought. I just
hope she-
"Mr. Carter, will that that be all."
Mr Goodwin's words interrupted Mitch's thoughts.
I'm sorry, what did you say?"
"Will this be all, just the sugar and the
box?"
"Oh, Yes, thank you." He payed and
picked up his things, then glanced at the clock. "Oh no it's already 2
o'clock!" He hurried out of the shop. " I'll be late with the sugar!"
***
Mitch pushed Chase fast, as fast as possible. He
made it home in less that an hour. He gave his mother the sugar and ran into
where the party was to be held. A couple of the guests had arrived early and he
pushed past then to Melinda. "Is Andi here yet?"
"No and I'm starting to get annoyed, she
still has to change clothes. Chad's really mad."
"Where is he?" Mitch asked, glancing
around the room for him.
"Outside."
***
Mitch found Chad pacing grumbling, "I'll skin
him alive!"
Mitch began to think he would happily help Chad
with skinning Riley alive after 45 minutes later he and Andi still hadn't
arrived.
"He's gonna get fired! He has proven he is
not responsible, staying out so long when he knows-"
"Chad, look!" Mitch pointed to two
riders approaching.
"Finally! Mitch go tell everyone they're here
and to get ready." Chad ordered.
Mitch hurried into the house but as he went he
couldn't help but hear Chad roar, "Where in thunderation have you-"
Mitch began to feel a little sorry for Riley. It
was no fun being on the receiving end of Chad's yelling, even if the young
wrangler did deserve it.
***
"Everyone! Andi's here! Get ready!"
Mitch called over the chatter of the guests. Everyone went quiet.
When Andi walked in they all shouted, "happy
birthday!"
Andi was shocked she just stood there, unable to
move. Mitch hurried up the stairs with Justin at his heels. To their
astonishment she hugged them and whispered, "I'm so sorry."
Riley, your something else! Mitch thought. You
helped Andi forgive better than any of us ever could.
***
"Pack a bag." Mitch heard Justin say to
Andi as he passed by her door. He didn't mean to listen in on there
conversation but he couldn't help it. The party had been a great success and
all the the guests went home happy and full. And now Mitch still had to give
Andi her gift, he hadn't wanted to give during the party in front of everyone.
"But Justin where are we going?" Andi
was saying.
Mitch heard footsteps and Justin opened the door
and exited the room, then he called over his shoulder, "San
Francisco."
Once Justin was gone Mitch slipped into his sister's room.
Andi sat in bed with her arms crossed. "Mitch did hear that, Justin's
taking me to San Francisco! Why? He knows I hate the city!"
"Justin planned a very special trip, I think
it will be diffract than you think." Mitch sat on the edge of the
bed,"anyway here is my gift to you, happy 16th birthday sis." He
handed her the box. "Sorry it's not rapped."
She took the gift and open it. "Oh Mitch it's
gorgeous!" Silent tears ran down her face, "It's Taffy!" And
indeed it was, it was a hand carved wooden miniature likeness of Andi beloved
mare and amazingly Mitch had managed to find wood exactly the same color as the
golden palomino, it really was beautiful.
Andi flung her arms around Mitch neck, "I
love it so much! I'll keep it forever!" She placed it on her bedside table
next to a framed picture.
"What's that?" Mitch asked.
"It's from Riley, I gave it to him when he
left the ranch all those years ago. Well he kept it, and gave it back to me for
my birthday." Mitch looked at the photograph, it was of Andi, Taffy, Riley
and his black horse.
"What did Riley tell you to make you want to
forgive us?"
"He told me how his old horse midnight died,
it was way worse that Taffy, but he still learned to forgive.
I realized that by refusing to forgive I was just
hurting me and my family. And now by forgiving all of you, my heart has mended."
"And when you stand praying, if you hold
anything against anyone, forgive them,
so that your father in heaven may forgive you your
sins."
Mark 11:25
Amazing job!
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DeleteI love it! Great job!
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Deletewow! love this!
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DeleteGreat story, Luca! Loved reading it!
ReplyDeleteIf you ever want to write a fan fiction together, let me know! :D
~Sara Miller
Thanks Sara! I would love to write a story with you sometime!
ReplyDeleteAwesome!
DeleteJust let me know when, we can start whenever! :D
~Sara
I am free anytime whenever suits you! But I have never written a story with someone and am not sure how.
Deletehow do you write a story with someone?
DeleteI can whenever as well!
DeleteMrs M maybe could send each other our emails? Or feel free to contact me through my blog, and then we can get started that way as well!
Do you have google docs? I normally write on those. :D If not, we'll figure something out!
~Sara
Each of you will need to contact me through the blog and let me know you have permission to share emails. Then I will CC you both and pass along your emails to each other.
DeleteOk. 👍
DeleteAlso Google docs is fine to use, Sara.
DeleteThanks so much, Mrs M! :D
Delete~Sara
Love the sweet brother-sister relationship between Andi and Mitch!
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